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Posted: 3/5/2005 3:59:06 AM | Bbates024
More pics/interests?
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As of right now I do lots of tequilia shots.
-- will attract hard core partiers
-- might turn off a lot of other people
What kind of fun do you want to have and where do you want to hang out?
I only picked dating from the options above becuase there are not any better options.
-- what would be a better option to you??
Can you give an example of the silly stuff you do? | |
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Posted: 3/5/2005 6:24:48 AM | | assertive= leads conversations and encourages others to participate, aggresive = dominates conversation, this definition follows your example as to fixing my profile. | |
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Posted: 3/5/2005 10:02:13 AM | Thanks for the good advice danceinpants
It's well taken and acted on. A little negative space in the text box for the eyes and the mind and I'm now doing my best to keep my dark creepy humour away from new acquaintences and others that don't know me well.
impressive job reviewing all those profiles and thanks for taking the time to review mine
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Posted: 3/5/2005 12:58:33 PM | mspicky
You know what...that's so weird.
I remember typing out the review for you and everything.
This is what happens when you do stuff in the middle of the night.
the subject line gave a bit of a negative vibe with the who cares comment
Other than that it was a really great profile.
Hit enter a few times so that it's not a jumble of words. Can let stuff sink in. | |
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Posted: 3/5/2005 1:05:41 PM | kciredor
Warning: This man is undateable -- Admin
-- are you REALLY undateable? cause people might be less likely to 'be bold" and make first move if you are
Other things:
-- other things you couldn't care less about or what?
I usually don't like long lists of words and commas --- but what you've said is unique enough for me to dig what you're saying. | |
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Posted: 3/5/2005 1:20:18 PM | | I think mabe my profile is a bit to selective as far as the women I'm looking for and might sound kinda snobish .If youd be kind enough to give it a look and then give me some feed back I would really thank you . | |
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Posted: 3/5/2005 1:23:09 PM | Mizbehavin
Hi I hate writing personal ads, but find myself doing it again.
-- this sort of comment gives off a negative vibe- like this is just all a big hassle
--- you want to tap into the fun side of things
Why am I on another site yet again?,
-- this sort of comment hints at bad luck in the past, trying too hard/over and over etc...
Good pictures
have some fun with
-- might be a good idea to say what kind of fun you want to have
I'd like to see more about the type of guy you're looking for. Good to come across as a teeny bit picky in a personal ad.
Running yet?...
So if you haven't ran away yet
-- these comments set you up for failure or make it seem like you're expecting failure.
I try to make an effort to respond to all sent....
- I follow the school of thought that if you aren't interested...don't reply---otherwise you waste people's time.
- The people who DO get responses from you should feel like there's something about them/what they said that sparked your interest. Not like you reply to everyone just cause you're a nice girl.
-- Or that you GUARANTEE a response cause they were so very very nice for writing you first.
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Posted: 3/5/2005 1:33:01 PM | fireman1971
add more pics and interests...both are good ways to let people know important info about you
I've got soft hands and give a good massage.
-- To me...this says that the first thing you want to do is get your hands all over me.
You're already trying to seduce and you haven't even met me.
If this sentence was part of a really beefy profile I don't think it would have the 'get hands on me' effect.
But your profile is sparse and says to me: I look like this and I want to get these on you.
If you add some more longer comments about other stuff you like/do then you'll be better able to get away with this comment.
I am 5ft 10incs tall, fair hair and an athelic build and fairly good looking
-- a bit redundant as they can see your pictures and info already in your profile
-- I'd rather hear more about the stuff you haven't filled out.
--- What your interests are... How you are loving, caring etc...
Everyone wants someone who is caring, loving etc and goodish looking.
-- Be a bit more picky. Say something you want in a partner that's a little more unique. Do you like girly girls? world travellers? city girls? what? What kind of people do you get a long with the best? Saying more specifically what partner you want will say more about you. | |
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Posted: 3/5/2005 1:34:56 PM | merickk
good changes!
when you take a picture in the mirror you defeat the purpose by covering your face with the camera...hehe
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Posted: 3/5/2005 1:41:44 PM | hmm and here I was under the impression that was the whole idea of a picture..
I think the typos could of been on purpose now..yea thats it. I meant to say that. Actually the typos probally just a part of me as the rest as I can't spell to save my life heh. | |
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Posted: 3/5/2005 1:43:08 PM | EvanBaran
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hit enter a few times between thoughts so people can let info sink in
you don't need to describe what you look like because there are pictures
I also spell feneticlly with is something I'm working on:)
--- you can find web site where you can do a spell check
Good info on what you're all about and what you are looking for.
I've been working on improving myself for the last 5 or 6 years alone and think that I've come to the point where I can offer someone else a lot.
-- This comment makes me think that you're really trying to sell yourself. Let them figure out on their own that you do have a lot to offer. Maybe instead describe what you have to offer.
Girls might not feel comfortable going out in the woods with a complete stranger. | |
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Posted: 3/5/2005 1:49:03 PM | jimi77
I bet you're good looking--- hard to tell from photos.
Need more pics of you and less of the dog cause they won't be dating the dog.
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my pictures realy don't capture me.
-- get more, you will find ones that do
I liked how you described the woman you want.
I would like to see you describe yourself in a similar way. You seem to spend a lot of time talking about your looks etc.... when they can just figure out all that info by looking at some more photos.
Maybe talk about your faith. I'm assuming that it's pretty important to you. I've read a lot of profiles and I can't remember seeing anyone write 'faith' before. That says that your faith may be something significant that other people might be interested in knowing about. | |
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Posted: 3/5/2005 1:50:25 PM | merickk
spell checks are essential!
try take a pic of yourself again.... but take lots and lots so you don't get the serious deer in headlights pictures that weird people out | |
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Posted: 3/5/2005 1:57:56 PM | skip1701
I must be an old mutt....
ack... don't insult yourself right off the bat
get more pics and interests
lol
-- get rid of these = online equivalent of nervous laughter
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I must be freaking ugly, cuz I get nuttin...lol
-- bad bad bad to insult yourself
-- I bet you could get pictures that flatter yourself more
-- If you really don't like how you look then go get a hair cut or smile more or something
-- I've seen worse looking people who don't insult themselves and end up being more attractive because of it
Heaven forbid someone actually responds and wants to go out...
-- set yourself up for failure why don't you
dunno...dunno...
-- be decisive, make a decision. You can always change your mind later but it's good to have a direction to head towards.
(I don't know why I'm having the urge to tell you this but I think you might get a lot out of reading the book How to Win Friends and Influence People) | |
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