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Posted: 8/8/2006 6:58:22 PM | Hey Soph,
looks good to me short and sweet (it's not like they read the whole profile anyway so grab them with the first sentence) yours comes across heartfelt and real..I had fun with your pictures you were dancing. Maybe add some more???
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Posted: 8/9/2006 10:32:12 AM | Hi WhiteFlames!
Your profile comes across as very straight forward ...I'm a tuff girl I can take care of myself ..with tongue!
I like it personally but you might want to soften it up just a bit for those PWP's
(People with Penises) Some men get upset when a woman kicks their butt at PS2...Ha!
They might be thinking you can out drink them with that "Tokillya" too Double Ha!
Your main pic shows your sense of humor! But pic seven is lovely that's the one I would use.
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Posted: 8/9/2006 10:03:21 PM | I would love if you can fix me  well maybe help me fix my profile it is rather lacking and yours is such a hoot  your an 
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Posted: 8/10/2006 8:51:18 AM | Hi Artsy !
Your profile is kinda discabobbleheaded It starts to get good at about here:
I really like a girl that isn't afraid to wear a dress. I've never met a girl who doesn't look better in one. They can really bring out a girls femininity, which I think is attractive. Jeans and stuff look good too, don't get me wrong, but its the difference between looking HOT and looking BEAUTIFUL. Sometimes girls should go for beautiful. A pretty girl in tight jeans makes me growl, but a pretty girl in a dress makes me blush.
Your main pic needs to be a headshot looking at the camera maybe a devilish smile
you can do devil right???... Although the pic you have up is better than the one where you are laying on the motel bed posing in your wacky shirt!
Your first date is hohum *yawn* sorry. Make up something fun!
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Posted: 8/10/2006 9:03:34 AM | Hey Gundarak,Are you a REAL Wizard?
I would ditch this line
I can get bored rather quickly when theres nothing to do or no one to hang out with.
Toy cars?? What??
take care of my toy cars, hey that's a REAL car unless... well you did say you were a magician !
Your profile is good I like how you sell yourself you let your personality out to play.
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| Hi Indi
Posted: 8/10/2006 9:18:12 AM | Hello lookn4u!
Sorry not a good salesman when it comes to selling me ....Hey maybe that's why I'm single still.... Don't put yourself down.Get rid of that!
no game players, I have met my share already and would rather you find someone innocent, I'm not and will see right through you. grrr my pet peeve that just draws the game players straight to you! Not many innocents still running around either.
I am a romantic who is overly generous, Yikes how many money grubbers are going to zero in on that line? Just be romantic k??
little people watching. who are these little people ...leprechauns?
Your pics are nice your smiling I like that.
Chris you are a nice man I hope you catch a nice fishy!
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| Hi Indi
Posted: 8/10/2006 9:38:16 AM | | seems like this is the place for help :0 review mine pls any suggestion wud b appreciated :D | |
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| Hi Indi
Posted: 8/10/2006 10:02:10 AM | Bastian ..aww love your name!....Your profile not so much.
I am an honest,caring, genuine, loving, faithful guy. I enjoy most things in life a would like to see if there really is love after love. This part is good.
I have 3 great kids who live with me full time n deserve a happier life from there previous one. I am who I am u may try to change me but u will fail.
Way too negative...the only thing I would keep out of that paragragh is the kids
Try to be more upbeat ...what are your interests? What makes you laugh? What are you looking for in a woman? Add some humor.
I would also leave profession blank.
Hey I hope things get better for you real soon!
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| Hi Indi
Posted: 8/10/2006 10:09:45 AM | ty , done a bit or re-work on it hope its alot better now :) | |
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Posted: 8/10/2006 4:56:32 PM | Thanks Indigo,
Let me know what you think -- I made the changes you suggested. I did my best at "devil" but I'm not so sure it comes across. I really appreciate the feedback. Thanks again.
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| Hi Indi
Posted: 8/10/2006 10:08:55 PM | Thanks Indi your a real sweaty and I love your directness just what I was hoping for.
I now have to find time to rework and then as I know you're such a sweaty i will ask you to look again then get your address so I can send you flowers 
Thanks again.
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Posted: 8/11/2006 7:15:44 AM | Thanks.
I can't help being straight forward though. I tried the pretentious stuff at one point in my life and found myself having to petend everyday. Hated it. I'd rather just be able to be myself.
And I probably CAN kick their butts on PS2. Drinking them under the table,,,,,,maybe not. But....maybe .....I could. I'm don't try that though. I just don't get the concept why women have to hide their true selves for the sake of mens egos. My sentiment is that real men wouldn't feel threatened and should enjoy a woman who can hold her own. Whether it be PS2 or tequila! (smile)
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Posted: 8/11/2006 8:46:28 AM | Indigo Rose,
I have tweaked somewhat and am looking for help, you can be brutally honest....I think I need help, either the men in my area just dont like me.....OR......I need serious Extreme Makeover Profile Edition !
Help me
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Posted: 8/11/2006 9:48:15 AM | Hello Soulvivor,
Your profile is nice but kinda bland nothing really stands out which makes it forgetable.
Spice it up get creative ...add a little humor !
Oh and lighten up! your pic's are too dark (not so dark that I can't see your handsomeness )
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Posted: 8/11/2006 10:00:33 AM | Hi Shyguy!
Did you use the "whole" two minutes to write that?
Put some thought into it big boy.Even shy guys have personality ...let it shine!
I would start off with a snappy headline ...then what is it about shyguy that makes you unique?
Have some fun with it...
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Posted: 8/11/2006 10:14:38 AM | Hey Chick!
I don't get your headline...?
I have an adventurous spirit, and am fun loving with a great sense of humour. Looking for a man who also has a great sense of humour,. I love to make people laugh, and I am known for my offbeat sense of humour, and it would be great if you could make me laugh as well.
so your looking for a man with a good sense of humor ? you know most of them claim to have one!
Your profile is okay nothing to write home about though. I am sensing some spunkiness in you girl ..I would like to see you show that side off more.
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Posted: 8/11/2006 10:19:33 AM | Ahhh Indigo Rose, the Headline is from Monty Python of course ! Sorry, I know a lot of people don't get it( monty Python) but I love the stuff ! I am sitting here and trying to figure out how to improve my profile.
Will see if I can get some ispiration, and tweak it us some more. I am usually pretty darn good and writing and I don't know why I seem to be having so much trouble ! I will see what I can do, and you are right I have been told before I am quite spunky !
thanks for the feedback !
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