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| I'll review your profile...you won't regret it, part 2
Posted: 2/20/2007 4:07:08 PM | kellstro,
Apologies for the cold brush-off earlier, you appear to have put more effort into it this time around. Much better. There is actually content.
It appears that you've solicited a buncha opinions already, which may explain why it's so different from what I first read. I'm generally not a huge fan of questionnaire-type profiles, but they're usually quick and easy to read. But, I tend to see them as a little, well, cut and paste. Given the lack of spelling errors, it is indicative of some level of writing skill, which I'd prefer to see.
More specific, though...I think you meant "complement" (as in go well together, like beer and pizza) as opposed to "compliment" (as in say nice things about someone).
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| I'll review your profile...you won't regret it, part 2
Posted: 2/20/2007 4:13:32 PM | snowowl46,
You may actually be able to revise your body type...just based on your photo, you do not appear to be BBW.
Spelling and grammar needs a bit of a revision (please copy and paste into MS Word), which would make this a bit easier to read.
Generally, "Have been alone for a long time" can run you into some opposition, so please be aware of that.
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| I'll review your profile...you won't regret it, part 2
Posted: 3/9/2007 9:49:58 PM | I've been working on my profile and I ended up making two (just in case). My primary profile is the one I'm using, the other one is this http://www.plentyoffish.com/member3132372.htm
I'm so eager to hear your review. I hope you could help me out! Thanks! | |
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| I'll review your profile...you won't regret it, part 2
Posted: 3/12/2007 10:56:06 AM | I agree with your "alphabet code" it's a great start.
I've had quite a few positive comments on my profile so let me know what you think. In order for someone to become interested in you , you have to tell them something. I tried to be honest and give information too.
However, I refuse to take out the fact that I'm intelligent. I am and I'm proud of that. I also don't believe that it's necessary to post a photo. I have no problem sending one along with a message, but not for everyone to gawk at.
Good grammar/ spelling says a lot about a person. I take pride in what I write. I'm not saying that it's perfect, because you may find some mistakes, but you'll be able to read and understand it without squinting.
Finally, I don't know what white dot means. Sorry, I'm blond and that's the excuse that I'm using!
If you can find the time in your busy schedule, feel free to edit my profile. I'll take your opinion under advisement.
Thanks and keep smiling! | |
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| I'll review your profile...you won't regret it, part 2
Posted: 4/5/2007 3:52:18 PM | | I would like you to review my profile and give me some pointers, I don't get any emails and when I send them out to people they read them , then delete them I don't know what the problem is. Thanks | |
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| I'll review your profile...you won't regret it, part 2
Posted: 4/5/2007 4:25:44 PM | | Please HELP! i have changed my profile so many times, i don't even know who I am anymore! The only time I had a lot of hits is when I had a rather risque photo posted. I removed it and now nothing. I don't think I'm unattractive so I must be saying it wrong. Thanks, much appreciated | |
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si-man
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Joined: 3/27/2007
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GregP
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Joined: 12/29/2005
Msg: 570 | |
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