| Progress Posted: 3/20/2007 2:00:33 PM | Last week I wrote sixty-nine words . Two days ago, forty-six. Today I’m writing these twenty-three. With any luck, tomorrow I’ll write none!
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| Inspired Posted: 3/20/2007 3:16:46 PM | May I? *smile*
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i love the end of a thunderstorm
i slip out the side door my bare feet scatter the gathering puddles leaving wet prints that mark my passage
i welcome the sunbeams that pierce the retreating clouds
i stand in the wet grass toes firmly planted in the soil face lifted to the sky arms outstretched, palms upturned collecting those last few drops that haven’t yet realized that the storm is over
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| Tuesday Posted: 3/20/2007 3:48:35 PM | *
Tuesday One in the afternoon The corner of Aldwych and Kingsway
A relentless flow of people Clutching their umbrellas and briefcases, Collars up against the cold, Heads down, Eyes averted.
I pause....stop.... To think a moment about The choices offered here.... I could go north to the Museum, south to walk along the Thames, east to the Library ..........(no, I don't wish to work anymore today), or west to my favourite cafe.
The surge of the crowd is forced to separate and go around me. A man wearing a black trenchcoat, A piercing stare, An angry mouth, A sullen expression, Glares as he steps around me, Frustrated that I've made him look up and take two extra ..........(and completely unnecessary!) steps.
Don't I know that he's late? Don't I realize that his prime concerns are the size of his bankbook and the timing of his next appointment?
I'm trapped in a nightmare of neoliberal madness... in a city whose future is stuck on fast-forward.
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| Some call it love Posted: 3/27/2007 7:43:08 AM | Some call it love but it comes across as persecution. Some heave and toss compliments but they land like bricks. Some have never learned the tricks of truly loving which is first of all to let their would-be loved one fall or rise according to her own need. Some call it love but it’s just a form of greed.
Cdnreader: Loved your 178! Thanks. | |
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| Some call it love Posted: 3/29/2007 7:39:41 AM | puzzled
find the piece that matches
a little red at the corner a star part of a cloud
not the track nor wheel weed
where in fits out out, in angle, curve
among zillions
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| Some call it love Posted: 3/29/2007 8:47:28 AM | Ah, Wooby, have you too been reading about that "dark energy," the mysterious 74% of what there is, which is neither dark, exactly nor, as far as is known, energy, the nature of which might never be known?
mistake cancel reverse hard-wired Ralph Berg Ralph Berg Ralph Berg? In grade 4 or 5, Ralph, who lived up the street from me, beat me up one day. I don’t remember why, but I do remember I felt helpless to fight back effectively. For the remainder of that school year and some time into the next, sitting a few seats behind him and a few rows to the left, I focussed my hate-filled stare at the back of his head until one day I knew I was ready. At recess time I went up to him and said “I’ll be waiting for you after school.”
He didn’t show up. He must have taken some other route home. And after that he did his best to avoid me and if our paths crossed he never looked me in the eye. cancel reverse hard-wired go back... | |
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| Some call it love Posted: 3/29/2007 10:07:57 AM | . Some call it love when a heart beats madly out of control like a drum solo on speed.
Some call it love when the spirit sings with mischief and delight, when the world shines more brilliantly, when you'd rather skip than walk.
I call it love when hands touch (whilst reaching for the salt).... you reading the New York Times, me with a pencil and a folded-up page, only the crossword puzzle showing.... Eyes meet, silent smiles appear, and linger. . | |
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| Some call it love Posted: 3/29/2007 10:28:57 AM | Some call it love ..yet know not of what they speak... the feelings throw... mass quanities of unnormalty thru veins thick with blood... yet they know not of what is felt... knowing of what some call as love.. the horrifying glimpse into love filled hate.... yet feeling decades later the truth behind the secrecy of the word.. only to plummet it into a dark nights abyss... thru a storm that will not hence to stop the suffocation.. of a lost souls fornitude.... a heartless wanderers aim on tranquility is lost... love? or what some call it.... a touch... a tear... a kiss..... a winds breath upon naked flesh... to know of it is to speak of it... yet to have it is to sacrifice everything to keep it... even when it falls in a sultury fire .... burnt sulfur of a match left stained upon a soul... knowing not of what to do... but sit silently and wait for love to return.... from the darkened hole i left it at..... thru my very own calculous ways of reigning terror.. i sought... i found.. i felt... i lost.... yet ... .......I loved....
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| Some call it love Posted: 3/30/2007 10:53:13 AM | Some call it love and get lost in the vastness of that syllable as unknowable as life which we cannot, truly know except by its opposite and by then of course it's too late.
Some call it love but better, perhaps, to call him or her Henry or George or Judith or Miriam and to focus on the mystery of his or her name.... | |
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| and some? Posted: 3/30/2007 12:09:44 PM | Having dinner with Ravincause tonight to see what kind of mischief we can get into it should be fun to release our poetic minds over dinner maybe a little wine some laughter and you never know what great ideas we can come up with to wreck havoc on the pond. | |
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| and some? Posted: 4/2/2007 1:32:46 PM | Oh, Autumn, report to us please on that dinner you two had! The menu, some of the items of conversation!
When the Words in Our Mouth
When the words in our mouth have turned to dust And we still wish to sing, because we must, Of what shall we sing then?
I have told of my longing for love, I have wept over love that failed. But you have your tales of the same: Of love that was coming, was promised --and yet never came!
Before there was sound, there was silence. And when the last of our race will die There will be silence again. But the last word The last of us utters will be, perhaps, a sigh Or the sound of a broken-hearted lover Crying softly, Good-bye, good-bye ...
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| and some? Posted: 4/2/2007 9:31:36 PM | In a small cafe called the rude native we dined in a village atmosphere like old Montreal or Yorkville a window seat overlooking the coblestones and as the sun set upon us a little candle burned we talked and we laughed and we shared life experiences, philosophy poetic licence motherhood, sisterhood nature were your ears burning Jer? a nice full red wine an attentive waiter I'm not even sure if I noticed anyone in the room it was a lovely night that we both wished we could have shared with many poets special people whose words ignite our souls and facinate our minds and make us swoon girl stuff. | |
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| you just did Posted: 4/3/2007 11:57:54 AM | it was a lovely night that we both wished we could have shared with many poets
you just did babe you just did
btw this is great jer-----
Last week I wrote sixty-nine words . Two days ago, forty-six. Today I’m writing these twenty-three. With any luck, tomorrow I’ll write none!
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| and some? Posted: 4/4/2007 9:44:15 AM | "Girl stuff," you say, but sometimes, you know, we men wonder...
In a few minutes he had reached the edge of a lake. Not far from the shore three or four young women were bathing, naked, splashing water at each other and laughing uproariously. They did not notice him at first and he watched them play and laugh and call teasingly to each other. In their voices was the happy sound that he associated with being in love, when the world seems wonderful. They touched each other and then turned and struck off into the water as if to avoid being touched in return; but they never went too far or too fast, and sooner or later each toucher was touched back. Was this the way they really were when they were alone with each other, he wondered, when there were no men around? Were they happier, more innocent, more childlike, more alive?
from a short story I wrote... | |
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| and some? Posted: 4/4/2007 3:14:38 PM | from a short story I wrote...
A wise man. . . . No. Not always. But often enough.
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| The difference Posted: 4/4/2007 4:01:14 PM | Your story sounds like water nymphs playing tag as children In reality the openness is there certainly No pretentiousness or competition As men comparing themselves And strutting about like peacocks Territorial instinctively ingrained Without men in the scenario Women lay down their guard Talk as equals understanding feelings and universal concepts Sharing more of the essence of who they are We are more open I think than men are We nod and say “yes” Baring our souls freely Not trying to impress Just reach out No validation needed The frolicking in the pond of which you speak Seems more like a mating dance That evolves between male and female The playfulness is a dance It’s the attraction The curiosity between sexes I don’t think as the observer on the edge Looking in you can truly comprehend That women free themselves from their bodies And relate through mind Perhaps you will never know Not being a woman. | |
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| The difference Posted: 4/5/2007 5:13:19 AM | Not being a woman, of course, is different from not being a tree or a koala bear but I might hope to understand something of each of these by being patient and observant.
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| The difference Posted: 4/5/2007 6:30:45 AM | Bear with me for a koala isn't. He has a limited diet, seldom drinks, motorbike growls when threatened, exposes claws to be avoided, frog hops up a tree, spit spot, disappears in the canopy. Patient and observant I wonder, if not being one of these a man is so different anyway. | |
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| Not by wishing will magic be achieved, Posted: 4/22/2007 10:36:29 AM | Not by wishing will magic be achieved, Nor what we give will equal that which we’ve received. We travel on crooked paths, in hazy light, Convinced that we’re on highways, bright And straight. By losing our way, We finally get home. We say The meanest things at times instead Of the love we mean to say. That word Is difficult for us. But love is not what’s said, But what’s both said and heard.
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| Will you miss me in the summer? Posted: 5/4/2007 6:23:45 AM | Will you miss me in the summer when the lake is so inviting; When the fields are filled with zinnia, phlox and love in bloom?
Will you miss me?
Will you miss me at twilight when the last of the day laps softly at the shore of night, falls back and ebbs away?
Will you miss me? Will you miss me?
Will you miss me in bed, in our ark against the buffeting of the harsh and often loveless world?
Will you miss me? Will you miss me?
J. Newman April 22, 2007 © 2007 | |
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| Will you miss me in the summer? Posted: 5/4/2007 6:30:52 AM | ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Jerry that took my breath away....how lovely to be so loved | |
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| Will you miss me in the summer? Posted: 5/4/2007 7:24:20 AM | Will you miss me in the summer? And, in answer to all the other words of this lovely piece (except for the bed part ya know)...Yes, of course.
What a beautiful poem. Heartfelt, touching emotional, reached the senses. Loved it. That lucky, lucky woman!
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| Will you miss me in the summer? Posted: 5/6/2007 9:40:30 AM | Summer, spring, winter, fall are not all the seasons the heart can recall, for the heart has reasons
that neither reason nor the calendar can measure. The heart knows more than grief or pleasure.
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