| | The hall of poetic dialoguePage 23 of 35 (1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, 14, 15, 16, 17, 18, 19, 20, 21, 22, 23, 24, 25, 26, 27, 28, 29, 30, 31, 32, 33, 34, 35) | You see Tim how your metal is strong
and maybe too heavy for it to work
an this is no pun
but keep singing that loud song
For I know Pockets is right
about those whispers and wonders
so I'm going to ask her about that,
while dance with her tonight
So Tim keep the volume loud
for my whispers are for her
ears only, so your noices
are here allowed! | |
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Posted: 10/29/2006 7:15:05 PM | Haha, i actually cherish my quiet quite fiercely
as much as i guard close my sleep
loud music is fine as long as its tasteful not piercing
but my own decibles tend to remain weak
Still music has much to do with a 'life' or 'real job'
so your neighbors might just need to relax
turn down your amps and keep playing your tunes
I'm sure you've much flair, if no tact... (hehehehe)
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Posted: 10/29/2006 7:22:53 PM | Hmmm. Poetfriend, whisper away
but my company's not exculsive
Tim 'serenades' with whatever he plays
but its good friends that make me effusive
Besides,it's well known, i can't dance very well
another of those 'charms' that i hold en-mass
but i think both guitar and whispers are swell
so don't worry, a smile is all that i ask! | |
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Posted: 10/29/2006 7:31:27 PM | So dear Pockets, I didn't ask for exclusivity
but just for a moment to dance
if whispers are too much activity
then I'll give you just my smile
and yet I will steal you a kiss
even if after I have to run away a mile  | |
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TiMwM
| | Joined: 10/3/2006
Msg: 555 | |
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Posted: 10/29/2006 7:32:55 PM | poet, I know your a friend
but I challenge you to a duel
i'll pary and slash without end
send you back to fencing school
to fight for the fair maidens honor
i'd gather one hundred men
and storm your fortress with snow balls
then you'll be sorry my friend
Just kidding man...nice to see you here again
gotta hit the sack soon...good night everyone | |
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Posted: 10/29/2006 7:36:20 PM | 
Is a 'kiss-and-run' similar to a 'hit-and-run'?
and who says you can outrun me?
still, whispers are nice, and smiles are fun
here's a peck on the cheek if you're lonely!
ooo! ooo! I wanna storm a fortress with snowballs!
of course, that first requires some snow to fall
you know, my hand feels quit uncomfortably intrigued
to be fought over by men of your league
so to save all the parrying and poking you're going through
i've got TWO hands, one for each of you boys to hold onto
g'night Tim my friend | |
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Posted: 10/29/2006 7:47:30 PM | Tim now you think I'm the evil one
but at the end of the battle
the princess I will have won
And I'm afraid the snow won't be grand
it will melt before reaching my fortress
for I dwell in very warm land
Nice to see you too Tim :)
Pockets, I accept the peck lonely or not
rhyming or not! :)))))) | |
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TiMwM
| | Joined: 10/3/2006
Msg: 559 | |
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Posted: 10/29/2006 7:55:31 PM | I give up
I give in
I know I can't win
I lay me to rest now it seems
remembering her in my dreams | |
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Posted: 10/29/2006 8:21:52 PM | There is nothing here to win
that you've not already won my friend
for there is nothing here to gain
you have my friendship
There is nothing here to lose
that i would take from you my friend
for once i've made that choice
i never ditch it...
now no fighting!  | |
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Posted: 10/29/2006 8:30:53 PM | The lady's word is law
fighting is no more
when it all ended in a draw
Having all friends gathered here is a delight
but for now I wave you good night! | |
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Posted: 10/30/2006 10:54:58 PM | Tim--- I have enjoyed reading your thread. I have gotten a few laughs and smiles out of the content.
“Complaining neighbors”
Heavy metal thundering
The neighbors filled with ire
Wondering if we will ever quit
If we’ll ever tire
Black Sabbath is a favorite band
Iron Man was our song
It is now played in commercials
Back then it was so wrong
I was playing the guitar
Amp turned up too loud
The drums were echoing unmercifully
Gathering up a crowd
The neighborhood was thumping
The neighbors mean and bold
The police came with a noise ordinance warning
So we did as we were told | |
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TiMwM
| | Joined: 10/3/2006
Msg: 563 | |
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Posted: 10/31/2006 1:45:28 PM | I know what you mean...Different
radio stations playing tunes they'd never play back then
metallica, even magadeth I hear now, and again
seems a generation gap has changed things for the good
what was tabboo, is now the in thing, was misunderstood | |
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Posted: 10/31/2006 5:36:09 PM | I think there's a generation gap
I still hear the tamborines
Guitars playing softly
Laughter as the wine was spilled
But the cops were still called
for around the camp
neighbours thought our chants were raving mad | |
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TiMwM
| | Joined: 10/3/2006
Msg: 565 | |
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Posted: 10/31/2006 6:27:34 PM | a tear is welling in my eye
I hate it when I cry
I don't need answers
just need time
to let bygones be by
left with peace
and understanding
knowing all is planned
and all is well
inside my shell
inside gods' outstreached hand | |
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Posted: 10/31/2006 6:35:13 PM | i don't need answers, just need time
but dang, some answers would be nice
and i hate it more when i don't cry
in the face of so much avarice
bygones will be bygones, yes
though we are still shaped by what is past
peace and understanding, horray!
but shell-dwellers get nowhere fast!
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TiMwM
| | Joined: 10/3/2006
Msg: 568 | |
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Posted: 10/31/2006 7:34:33 PM | feeling so much better now
for friend I held so dear
everything is drawn out now
respectfully made clear
peace and inner solitude
are things so hard to find
when all this drama
escalates
there is no peace of mind
what is needed
has been done
and I am not the only one
who'll miss her loving heart
but don't be selfish
respect her wishes
so the healing can start | |
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Posted: 10/31/2006 7:49:31 PM | Though one is absent from this place
many others hold her place
in their hearts and sing her song
she is not lost, just moving on
so smile my dear, its halloween!
there is much laughter to be seen
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Posted: 10/31/2006 8:01:19 PM | Tim, what's new tonight my electric friend?
Don't tell me you are sad
when with happyness you should be clad.
Wear the costume of fun
and set a new trend! | |
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TiMwM
| | Joined: 10/3/2006
Msg: 571 | |
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Posted: 11/2/2006 4:29:22 PM | where the hell is everyone
i'm gettin kinda bored here
did I fart or something
sorry,that was the beer
rye actually
matter o factually
but that don't rhyme with here
come on, take advantage of me or something
I'm half in the liquor bag
i'm pretty easy game
but you'd better have a dear tag
hunt me down
go in for the kill
i'll put up a fight
really.........I will
whoa...that was pretty desparate
i'd better watch my self
or i'll scare off all the ladies
that i've put there on that shelf....
.......definitly the liquor talking | |
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Posted: 11/2/2006 4:34:58 PM | What can i say about this heart
Among men Tim you're set apart
I hope for you
All desires come true
If i have blessings mounted high
I truly hope they reach the sky
I'd wrap them all up and give them to you
My gift, my thanks and friendship true...... | |
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Posted: 11/2/2006 6:00:50 PM | Hey Tim don't be bored,
today was the day to visit burial ground
and to get food for the ghosts around! | |
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Posted: 11/2/2006 6:20:54 PM | Boozed and bored already Tim?
I know i'm a few hours late here
but since you're so desperate i thought i'd chime in
with a smile or some such, my dear
Advantage to take, hmmm i'll have to think
i'm wired on too much caffine
i've been painting all day every day this past week
and was burnt-out, if you know what i mean
But the murals near done now
not many more paint fumes to breathe
so i'm back up for games or whatever transpires
you say you'll fight back? Must be seen to believe... | |
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TiMwM
| | Joined: 10/3/2006
Msg: 575 | |
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Posted: 11/3/2006 3:03:08 PM | wow...your painting a mural
what is it, I wanna see
will you take a picture of it
when it's done so I can see
if your half as talented a painter
as writer I know you are
It must be very beautiful
like you my shining star | |
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