| Abstract Rhythms Posted: 4/17/2007 10:01:19 PM | in blackness garden be found my world be cast upside down cherubs speared by daffodil flowers hearts bleeding more by the hour butterfly wings with inferno blaze dripping wax on golden maze morning doves drowning in tar filled ponds bronze lillies chocking midnight swans hour glass flowing upward bound meadow lark song now deathly sound leaves of blue in fairy tale books statues gaze with fightened looks crocus blooms washed in blood vines chocked silent by trodden hoof paths of liquid acrid trails morning glories cry and wail fountains flow with petal cries blackeyed susies with bloodshot eyes a midnight walk through eden lost one simple taste but at what cost
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| Abstract Rhythms Posted: 4/17/2007 11:30:42 PM | Jules, I thank you for the reassurance.
Fromme~toyou…you are a keen and alert soul!
Uzilicious…this poem was very perceptive and cleverly written, I thank you.
Shadowriter…tremendous writes…truly touched by the spirit.
SwETRoXRocker, a warmth from above…I thank you for the beauty that you bestow upon us all.
During the last three days…from time to time, I found myself lost in these poems…truly searching through them…I thank you all for composing such compelling pieces of art. | |
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| Directly Abstract.............. Posted: 4/17/2007 11:51:18 PM | ……………Tired eyed Dreary ……………Hell-bound And prideful…
…F*** SATAN!!!
Now let the lamb’s blood Cleanse the rising Ephod!
Shall I retreat? …From Jehovah’s war? The Father of all madness! …How many times can the spirit die/ Driven and rived towards perdition?
Hear the melodious shrills! …Purgatory born! Sentenced to the Karnac Woods... …Drinking from the underworld Lethe…
But still I remember
The Laodiceans carving tunnels through my vision!
…Find you something to die for! Amble with me upon this travel …This Kon Tiki Expedition… Where even the Hyenas are preyed upon!
Awoke in Hyrcania I did Where wild beast converse calmly Negotiating the removal of thy soul… ……..Whence appeareth Jacob’s ladder!
I climb!
……………Tired eyed Dreary ……………Hell-bound And prideful…
…F*** SATAN!!! | |
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| Directly Abstract.............. Posted: 4/18/2007 10:13:19 AM | Tribulations come upon our door had we not answered, would we stay as before? Doubting this, for in life tis enevitable as breathing....... they come may they enlighten bring courage forth bear them patiently for all to see This storm that has risen up dark, callous , glooming shall quickly subside finding us bathed in sunlight Souls are soothed refurbished by the returning grace Again finding peace tranquility of mind  | |
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| Directly Abstract.............. Posted: 4/18/2007 10:29:14 AM | Dark abstract, Blood stains, Running fast, Flooded corridors, Screaming classrooms, Writhing bodies, Motionless, Images of, the horror, The evil, that stalked, within, A college, now over, let the healing , begin! | |
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| Directly Abstract.............. Posted: 4/18/2007 10:36:20 AM | Jules…in truth…you are a precious soul…a natural comforter.
Mandrake48…I’ve been thinking on this since it happened. I have no idea of how to feel. I couldn’t imagine how parents connected to this are now feeling.
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Tragedy Death Pains that sting the soul As if a scorpion from hell has awoken
Innocence snatched Mysteries linger Intelligent-Design Do comfort the living | |
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| Directly Abstract.............. Posted: 4/18/2007 10:48:24 AM | Another tradgedy strikes........Prayers to all , within its path
One lost soul harbouring hate, within loss of so many innocent lives , we grieve! Stonger now, also believe this Soul now at peace but leaving a message Sent to many ungracious as it is Listen closely lost souls do beg for help, or love Listening is so simple another slipped through our fingers May we all be more aware for lost souls in need of our prayers! | |
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| Directly Abstract.............. Posted: 4/19/2007 6:31:16 PM | streched flat bridging the blades of fresh cut grass that gently cushions my form watching in awe as the sky above dances in her graceful ballet colours flowing like liquid paint dancing ever changing they mesmirize my soul I am lost here as I slip into this world of blue and orange nightsky delight sun setting fast the world slowly drifting above the colours of the sky making sweet passionate love in the clouds all mixing as one with myself
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| Directly Abstract.............. Posted: 4/19/2007 7:09:40 PM | We used to know this: every opening is a door for ghosts. Even a yawn's not innocent. A wound breaks the body's gates open. What enters? Weather wisdom. Phantom voices. Sadness. Gentleness. The smell of apples.
Why do they say a leg is lost? We know what happened.
A ship burial: the splash, the kiss of salt, the pale light going slowly out, the weighted canvas blossoming open, amputated legs and hands rocking free —
soft green lights in the deep and changing sea. | |
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| Directly Abstract.............. Posted: 4/19/2007 7:11:51 PM | The beauty of the world is a moon's beauty: shifting, breathless, mirrored, a beauty of contradiction. Listen: we are tender because the light is spilling out of October, a low sweep across the cut and ragged fields, the bales. Death is a great planet. Tidal, we turn our faces to it. | |
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| Directly Abstract.............. Posted: 4/19/2007 7:12:41 PM | a still noon frost hung in banners and bells
that step and fade down each level crossing
crow-calls of rails in the switch yard clank and moan
and the long shudder of cars coming together -- a train building itself
and me, walking home with my hat off just to listen | |
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| Directly Abstract.............. Posted: 4/19/2007 7:14:33 PM | Lord, you wither me
My body scorched like August grass My mind less
even than that -- like a shadow on the hills like one cloud passing
And where can I turn
Endless Lord, you wear the ocean as a scarf the wind as a ribbon in your hair
The earth wears out and you change it like an apron like a quilt you shake the patchwork stars
Endless, my days are short -- Do not cut them
My God of silks and scraps of ticking and velvet let me lean at your knees as you hum over piecework
My God of the ragbag with a needle in your mouth -- | |
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| Directly Abstract.............. Posted: 4/19/2007 7:44:14 PM | Cradle.
I learned darkness by the pages turned... I knew of treason and the ..ever.. slide by the movement of Cain... Slow walk; all of time and a cry spilled to Heaven's gate.. Released by the Thunder of a final glimpse....
Fall.
Eden is nevermore than a slip of reason... There if only seek upon it's fruit... There if gathered strength outweighs thy hunger.... Stomp the fire and learn to dance of it's tune........
Enoch whisper and a cold realization.. The mountains speak of hold by Mortal clench.... Fingers splay the verses and are caught of the web... Belittle thy hope yet kindle forth thy Eternal flame.........
Join upon thy guild and know thee of a placid dream... By fear there is nothing but the cold and blank jaws of an endless sleep.... Give unto thine Mother... That you be one by the encompassing single Spirit... Great and known upon those that possess thy Eyes...
Gift is thy smell begone of thy beaten path.. Know thee of thy Rose... For therein.... Is your single glimpse...
Of Perfection.
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| Directly Abstract.............. Posted: 4/19/2007 8:03:42 PM | piety betrialed in twisted petal essence seas of pink and rosen hue budding tips of necter glory reaching for the hand of God futility in mere passing
guilded sunlight washing sweet caress moistened my lightbirth dew coalessing in diamond droplets mirrored facet on envious page of forest green delicate balance of light and life
first morning rose of spring perfumed whore of garden glory in love with narcissen beauty painted in seduction lure guarded by your thorny fury
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| Directly Abstract.............. Posted: 4/19/2007 8:23:21 PM | Strip off the layers of forgiveness One by one they fall In a disheveled heap And you step out into the light Naked Pure Love Without words Dying stars Resurrection And then You look into the eyes Of a very old man Sitting on the sidewalk Head bowed Humble His eyes glazed over By so much truth You wonder Has he witnessed the birth of stars In his own soul? | |
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| Directly Abstract.............. Posted: 4/19/2007 8:41:27 PM | Gainer900, you are most correct. I’m in total awe when I read the many post herein. Every artist here is amazing. I’ve said it in the past, and I’ll say it again, I love this experience…. It’s a tremendous pleasure.
Shadowriter, you have an innate aesthetic rhythm in you that paints the canvas picture perfect. That is truly a most artistic poem. I love the many hues and images therein.
Melvaughn, dear God! The spiritual force operating in these poems are enormous! You have connected with so many frequencies. The whispers beckon you. There are many allusions in thy poems. I love it! I welcome you here to Abstracts…where all is spirit. Feel at home!
TruthIsee, your poems are at once compelling. Your style is that of no other. there’s always a message besprinkled therein. I thank you for complimenting with thy graces the many spirits herein.
Autumn Fantasy, a forceful passion…an urge of currents that depict such beautiful manifestations inscribed in wordings that usher forth. Your poetry has always brought to me peace….You are serenity! ---
Mysteries of the spirit…………
The spirit of many souls Whelmed in the motions of Jehovah…There Mentally retrogressing through the horrid memories Of the many purgatories that mourn… …the whispers…they compel motion …as deer warn by standing agaze Gasping for air gripping while pawing at that invisible me… ………………..We are afforest with visions …ambling through the heart’s jungle of webs Dangling therein struggling to gain foot… Moonish forms and variegated twinges force us into the black thought. …The gravel dight with imagery whereupon I perish alive… Ironically supplying the “Balm in Gilead…” …The comforts of Gethsemane before the trod of Judas… ……..aporia it is…. ………..wafting me gently to war… ……………………..Spiritual armageddon …where I witness in vision us all present… Seagirt in the most rewarding battle…the battle of the gods. | |
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| Directly Abstract......of life's intent........ Posted: 4/20/2007 9:34:27 PM | In the dark the faces distend Emerging unlit monochrome Shaped with darkness they transpire Accumulated in profound ambiance Are they apparitions of spirits lost Indian guides or celestial beings Angel sentries sheltering us from transience Or are they just imaginary consequence From a minds diluted judgment In the wake of profound deliberation Questions buried within the soul Turmoil as the mind unfolds Mysteries of the universe Within intelligent astonishment Pondering all of life’s intent
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| Directly Abstract......of life's intent........ Posted: 4/20/2007 10:18:25 PM | Abstract/thoughts out loud
This bitter cup, wrath and woe... Master cross bearer gone before me....
"With fear".... reverence awe respect, I take this cross ....his footsteps to follow
"With trembling".... anxiety....inspiration. To contemplate to consider, and I ponder, "the heavens are higher than the earth".....
So to know his will, he says "wait on me." This strengthens my heart and when I pray, his thoughts his will, to learn to listen..... | |
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| Abstract Rhythms Posted: 4/20/2007 10:39:14 PM | If Eden were indeed so easy found as open heart and truthful word expressed then paradise would echo with mine tread and words as yours would whisper to lost hearts and bend the staunchest branches of stout trees and bring them weeping to their knees in gentle gratitude.. blessed
But Eden as lost paradise denied to we mere mortals left to roam the arid deserts of blind sight words without sound and lips that move but utter nothingness ...and roses, though resplendent seen devoid of all dimensions made them lovely smelling instead of the plastic they wrapped them in
these things define our every day realities
How sweet the pen that guides us to such places where the scent of what is real still lies within our grasp
as Edens gate swings wide and poets enter and breathing the fragile loveliness still offered there... eyes light once more with images of wonder sorely missed
(c) champrins | |
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| Abstract Rhythms Posted: 4/20/2007 11:14:36 PM | Casheyesblond, I know he hears you. The humility in you is powerfully depicted in this poem. I thank you for placing it here.
*Champrins*… artistically beautiful. The entire poem forces the mind to sit still. The second stanza is alarmingly moving. I thank you for placing this poem here. | |
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| Abstract Rhythms Posted: 4/21/2007 11:30:15 PM | Free verse….
Ah! I A priestly man Desecrated the church I shattered the images The apostles mourned I set aflame the isles of holiness Michael and I warred ravishingly I disgusted Gabriel And forced Enoch to assault me Isaiah has forsook me Mosses has broken the 10 commandments over my skeleton While Levi incessantly besprinkles me with the Lamb’s Holy Blood I am Job full blown but physical The spirit labyrinth has consumed me Miriam is my torture Forcing me outside the camp Saul That demonic force Even he condemns me But Samuel Everso merciful Carrying the hand of God Touches my anguish Refurbishing in me St. Paul Elijah my friend What hath I committed/ To the flames? | |
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| Abstract Rhythms Posted: 4/21/2007 11:39:20 PM | Borderline 5…. Before the yonder light The plight is heavy The Chevy is full of smoke The lady has become the hoax Yet she is not smiling Carousing with old Nicholas Traveling through the twilight zone Talking to the whole congregation Receiving answers while alone | |
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| Directly Abstract.............. Posted: 4/22/2007 9:31:35 AM |
Endless Lord, you wear the ocean as a scarf the wind as a ribbon in your hair
mel.....
these words captivated my heart -------------------------------------------------------------
wind and ribbons stillness and understanding frequency of melody, captured in memory the distant painted heart the rendered vibration, down the line the one the clothes hung
dread full of locks the locked down harmony the left right somatic indifference to cultures, yielding planetary results worthy, unspeakable to the intoned the brothers, the sisters the sisters, the brothers dread full of locks all about locked down harmony no melody, no melody
just wind and ribbons baboons play just wind and ribbons
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