| Abstract Rhythms...in Witty's House Posted: 5/10/2007 2:32:34 AM | The real world
Feigned piety Lightless generation Farfetched conceptualizers Angry Grimacing hearts Smiling While plotting My demise I can see And what I see Causes me anguish Strife And a blank stare | |
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| Abstract Rhythms, OUR HOUSE Posted: 5/10/2007 2:57:36 AM | Blankly lit We sit Awaiting the great sight Saintly lit
We sit
I wish to understand The great jealousy The great hate
But why tackle The deranged mind When truth hath forsook him
Ah! He perceived What he didn’t receive. Ah! The testimony… Ah! The great vision! Ah! I refuse to submit To the self proclaimed King With a mouth full of trash!
Now hateful abstractions Are upon his tongue
Grow beyond Thy conception of light Operate not n The great duplicity
Do you see? Do you see? Do you truly see! Is it reality/ That That you see? | |
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| Abstract Rhythms, OUR HOUSE Posted: 5/10/2007 6:32:15 AM | Joshua I see, but you mellowed me, I wonder if I can ever get angry again (ok ok ok flying off the handle, but I am a great shot with the frying pan)
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A glance to be deranged eternity began when and ends? words in echoes linger like an embrace
During the feast of senses glances hidden behind black rims claws bound by weight body shivers betraying voices of the mind
Captivated in a voice sighs held inside no sorrow in cross dressed pain empathy and admiration blended
Invisible ties of life bounded sighs screaming the whore and the nun in limbo desiring to become one I grieve for that trust as my dream remains  | |
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| Abstract Rhythms Posted: 5/10/2007 5:31:26 PM | Let me catch the withered windmill surf the sails that never spin catch the sunset in the morning from the dream I never win churning chaff attacks the breeze in a raging storm yet still discarded husks by million do they drink the bitter pill
Rejected wings that lay alone pointed tips, see their askew beside shattered millstone lie to drown in the flour filled dew the broken windmill stands now on a summers winter night primed to grind a mournful swansong beneath a sky for never bright
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| Abstract Rhythms Posted: 5/10/2007 5:47:18 PM | A friend is someone who gives you total freedom to be yourself. Jim Morrison | |
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| Abstract Rhythms Posted: 5/10/2007 5:54:37 PM | A gentle soul has many enemies They may try to plot your demise But they will not succeed For you go deeper than the surface Paying attention to the small details of life Trying to understand yourself Without a knife Or angry cry They know not who you are Nor try to understand the person inside That is their Achilles heel For you dear gentle soul Have feelings no one will ever know It’s in your blood and from your birth You shoulder the wrongs of this earth Sensitive people draw unto themselves The human side of life What is real It’s ok to feel For through this aperture Truth is reborn. | |
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| Abstract Rhythms Posted: 5/10/2007 6:35:49 PM | bright lights cast is shadow haze of golden darkness splieled in phrase lest works of anger tide be shorn tis early light of rebirth morn
shadowriter | |
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| Abstract Rhythms Posted: 5/10/2007 7:23:55 PM | Wonder Why.....
He sees through eyes not like mine Childlike innocence tender and kind He laughs at things no one will know People think his mind is slow Although is mind is moving fast An accident has mind aghast Stealing the life he once knew Leaving his mind scattered and unglued I now wonder how he sees the world And all the things his mind has squirreled Does he see the same as I Or just sit there and wonder why
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| Abstract Rhythms Posted: 5/10/2007 7:55:06 PM | writing is loud on my scribbled tablet versed with curse perversed with scorn moment collapsing literal habit capture the moment of my discern naive my soul to be. reborn to the shadows relearning my lesson from previous spurn micro techs are healing me fast and my tablet is back with lesson earned mj | |
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| Abstract Rhythms Posted: 5/10/2007 8:08:23 PM | Tis early light of rebirth morn A sweet child of love was born Innocent of a mother’s tears A journey of so many years To gaze upon the slate blue eyes Curious but not afraid.
Next to her heart the babe was laid As a September moon did rise The cornfield rustled in the wind The soft browns with pony tail Blew in the window of the child.
Wishes and dreams were plied Out of a mother’s prayer The child is deep within her world Forever book of tiny curl Kept safely as a memory to mark The birth of motherhood. | |
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| Abstract Rhythms Posted: 5/11/2007 6:38:00 PM | Within darkness Ones find light, writhing Those who seek and Ones who roam meandering down pathways Sniffing, coruscating those smells forming that rivulet of sweat running down flesh small sounds the scratchings of claws These fingers glomming in the Darkness that light fascinating Endings are just like new beginnings Take them whence they erupt smooth the troubled brow patinas of sweat lining the skin harsh breaths, leather kissed cheeks Make of it, what One will she knows what she sees, feels Take again, be sated
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***Namaste Joshua...tis wonderful to experience your words flowing on the screen, once again.  | |
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| Abstract Rhythms Posted: 5/11/2007 7:30:37 PM | Naive...does this fit here?
Eternal Dreams
I watched a butterfly take flight drifting on the wind to where ever alive, with purpose... adored and that night... I dreamed I was that butterfly and you.... you were the wind beneath my wings the one who lifted me higher than I have EVER been before and I felt no fear only a warmth that I had never felt before and there were tears in my eyes and the colors in my wings swam together and became ........... a picture of you............
the wind lifted me higher placing me among the stars so I may shine for you always and you... the night sky.... the galaxies caressed my cheek and gave me hope for whatever life had to bring I knew... I would never face it alone
and together........... we breathed......... eternally | |
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| Abstract Rhythms Posted: 5/11/2007 11:40:39 PM | Alwaysdreaming: my friend…you indeed make my heart smile. I truly love reading your poems. You know exactly what to say…and how to say it….
SwETRoXRocker: I read with joy ever line again and again, both poems! I’m forever drawn into your works. You are the gift!
Scotsman1978: I thank you for the words of wisdom. Welcome to abstracts.
AutumnFantasy: I was truly forced to slow down. My eyes became misty. You are keen in your observation. I thank you! Both poems are poetically enthralling!
Shadowriter: my metaphoric inspiration. You keep me searching and thinking.
Triplebp: I am truly wondering! But I think I did understand. Either/or, awesome poem.
Smileygrill: fantastic poem! Tremendous in truth!
Whyspr: this is a most beautifully painted poem. Of course it fits. And any poem that you place here in this thread shall always fit. I truly appreciate your works. | |
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| Abstract Rhythms Posted: 5/12/2007 6:45:29 AM | released from sancity virgin thought of hearts pleasure caught for naught these glimpses to the soul do find the truest measure of my mind
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| Abstract Rhythms Posted: 5/12/2007 6:55:56 AM | golden haze of sunrise falls hard upon the blackend heart of lovers scorned sour twisted painfull light that burns at eyes so long blinded by passions failing bodies dimly lit by the golden warmth expose the brutal passage of genocidal pain the bodies laying out as rotten corpses in sacrifical form on the alter of lust these were the fragile hearts that could not bare the pain of betrayal the waters of time sweeping them to the blackend inkish depths of memories realm forever forgotten by all except the sunrise golden haze
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| Abstract Rhythms Posted: 5/12/2007 3:52:14 PM | Their massed voices, howling Like the distant wind Heard from the swirling Deep darkness, within Heard before their first charge To my minds surface Battering crubmling guards Spewing the the many cracks Expending inner strength Keeping them at bay By hailing down, Spiritual spears Into the sea to stop the invaders They keep advancing anyway Horrified by what I hear, see, smell Close range, what kind of fighting to expect Afraid to face the inevitable mental drain As the mental defense erected come crashing down While gaining dominance under the unbearable strain.
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| Abstract Rhythms Posted: 5/12/2007 4:27:01 PM | Shadowriter…that space of poetic flow, gentle, moving through the portals of time, everso powerfully exploding in our thoughts. The mark of genius is in you! I thank you for motivating me!
SwETRoXRocker….you move with the frequency everso masterfully! We have here a magical connection. I truly believe that energies are in flight, touching our psyches, ever urging us into deeper realms of artistic manifest. | |
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| Abstract Rhythms Posted: 5/12/2007 9:37:04 PM | rising early with the rythems of Stevie Ray still pounding defly in my still druken skull body numb expcept for the vomiting that calls me soon oh sunrise you come early to me this day that bottle long emptied of its sorrows and tears still calling in its endless plea numb me my friend numb this anger bleed from my eyes as do the tears each night
I remember the casting spell that bewhiched me long ago your eyes a trap that snarred my hearts longing your body that unleashed pleasures in mine sweet love where have you gone why have you taken all with you that once was me sweet juniper berry numb me deeply cast your own spell and take this shell that remains and kill it deeply
an ode to my broken heart and the bottle that remained
of fallen light cast the hells fury bellow my mind wandering now to the past I long to know again in my hands wandering distilled dreams of your lustfull mouth exploring my body truely a moment again to be felt and enjoyed but merely a passing fancy of a drunken hand and a torched pain of rememberence how I long to feel you on me once more
Idylic butterfly of passions fleeting joy cast in drunken vomit filled fanticies stubbling hard into my past falling face first into my hellish nightmares of you my sweet butterfly lady and your parsnip play filled glee please tell me you remember me your loved once cast high upon those tear filled eyes as your body rose in flight on butterfly wings pulsing play
wonderful blue eyes where I once swan deeply promises made only to fade in passions dying flower now a darken night cold empty and intoxicated fancy where have you laid yourself this night and in whose arms do you now fly a penny for your thought and a fifth for mine you left for a another no you left for yourself for the other was another step another heart to ride upon in fleeting migration of the broken flight of butterflies
Fear not for I for I am long dead this night merely a moth headed for the flame in search of the lost fire of passion delight a bottle and a broken heart shall always find each other as do a coffin and the corpse good day my dear I know you cannot love him you promised your heart to only I and promises are like broken hearts they last forever when swimming in a gin filled sea
shadowriter dedicated to the love of my early 20's | |
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| Abstract Rhythms Posted: 5/12/2007 10:28:10 PM | Iron collar 2 You remind me of pain Shame And Grief, Those burns I wish to escape Those nicks In the bones of my spirit That ache and chide my Father’s heart
You are another iron collar Strangling my breath Hurling me over The angriest black mountain Where I sit In darksome moments Scared to utter God’s prayer | |
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| Abstract Rhythms Posted: 5/12/2007 10:29:53 PM | | Wow! Shadowriter…to the love of thy early twenties…. That is a deep love! And I’m certain a most precious one. | |
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| Abstract Rhythms Posted: 5/12/2007 11:55:49 PM | i was burned in my 20's i thought about it and it came out this way
latent heat of the promisings, store the bonded energies collecting they are covered with the retroactive mundane obstructed by the crushed foil headgear gadgets granting the small greeds, the leisure’s ignorance patched weldings, twisting the framework escapes overlooked by the prideful wills of inexperience higher tiers swaying, and creaking with neglect thrusting thine own dagger of feelings two egos clenching. preventing the ambush of passion unclaimed becomes those experiences as the masters of contortion separate and betray the portion of existence is lost, resetting thy continuance | |
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| Abstract Rhythms Posted: 5/13/2007 5:53:18 PM | ~~~Twenty Something~~~
What matters meaning? I look through a hole In the sky or in my heart Poke my finger through Or at least pretend to... Eyesockets empty Waiting for glass orbs Shattered by thunder
Tremble in the yellow dew While the heat argues for me Inside my head Every finger poking sockets here
Sockets in the sky
Thunder in the dew
Sockets in the wall
White light blue lips
These are the things I think When I feel you here
Logic not followed Meaning erased from brain cells Reality, spatiotemporal, phemonena Objective, subjective, empiricist Existentialist...
Heavy clouds secrete With visitation of May mist Voluptous trees, sway from left to right My sight, smell, touch, taste, sounds Wrapped trapped in analytical meanings All just as useless as what I just wrote
But when formidable sensations Wake me at twilight Do you think I care? I don't I still want you
Logic not followed No meaning, reasoning Just aching hope From some other part Of my mind
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| Abstract Rhythms Posted: 5/13/2007 9:58:24 PM | Smileygrill: very thought provoking…I was walking with the voice therein…it’s very clear a loudly heard.
SwETRoXRocker: I was tumbling downhill! Thy poem is one quick surge of forceful consumption. Ever line echoed in my inner mind. Truly heaven sent! | |
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| Abstract Rhythms Posted: 5/13/2007 10:01:11 PM | Mirage 2
Tongues of fire amble Gently through the ambrosia Where rushes of cataclysmic zephyrs Usher seraphim voices into my imprisoned priest
There for a moment the phoenix Therein my barred & barbed-wired shut soul Resurrects anew, garroted to the hearth Of that Gadarene furnace
There-again I become the Robben Island Translated in spirit exiled Sat before the Rivers of Babylon Mourning for this elusive Promised Land
Romantic about my God I reread my faith there Carved in the sandstones Of the churches marbled tablets
Notwithstanding Inveiglements become limpid Where I rise in this desert temple Excommunicated from myself Suffering from this soulfelt tenebrous splinter
Mind-numbed split in half I sit in this spiritual burg Grasping at my marcescent faith Wrestling with this Old Man of the Sea | |
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| Abstract Rhythms Posted: 5/13/2007 10:20:35 PM | Seraphim, my maiden name to which I layed all the blame then change things up, I thought would do. Pull this string, let light through and sought the magnificance of shadows in the night through wounds there grew wings and virtuous flight with light heart and step and gentle touch there are no more jagged edges to teeter tear or cut | |
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