| Abstract Rhythms Posted: 7/15/2007 2:27:55 AM | Lost in the Bermuda in triangles of your love whispering warm winds of your words unveiling the cloak of my sanity striving to find heavenly Atlantis
Irresistible falling into the deepest oceans of devotion drowning in insanities I fear to go over the edge into your world Spirited you are; as you enter mine | |
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| Abstract Rhythms Posted: 7/16/2007 1:32:22 PM | | AA, this poem is beautiful and artistic. I've reread it several times. I truly enjoyed it. | |
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| Abstract Rhythms Posted: 7/16/2007 1:32:53 PM | Too drift...
Even unto the Elysian birds Doth man sing in silence Glare’n into the crystal-diamonds Of unwept muses through veins unheard
As mellifluous signs abruptly settle Melodramatic chants walk the sands Midsummer with sol infuses the lands While palatial skies sound thru cellos
The nomic ways of daisy-chains In the twinkle of a lost faith Returns from escape as risen wraiths Renew Dionysian passions aflame
How dulcet to ears the claim of amour Soothing which once was left whet The heart of one atwitter, nay, unkept Now angst from suffer’n dolor no more | |
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| Abstract Rhythms Posted: 7/16/2007 2:03:21 PM | | Dear Joshua...I think I recognize some of me in "Too Drift". | |
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| Abstract Rhythms Posted: 7/16/2007 2:32:52 PM | True.....yoko....me and you both!
Drifting out unto the sea like millions of plank.....set free Only to find at the end of the flow Missing so much encouragment is shown I wonder when or where this shall end Maybe in depths I cannot understand Could be within the sand on the shore Living like crabs........ always wishing for more!
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| Abstract Rhythms Posted: 7/16/2007 3:11:30 PM | Yoko, Jules: artistic, keen, wise and true; women of great understanding. I wish I could explain this particular poem, especially its origin; but I’m still trying to figure it out in detail myself. ---------------------------------- I love the voice I here in your poem, Jules. I truly do. | |
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| Abstract Rhythms Posted: 7/16/2007 3:12:05 PM | What was David’s Emblem-secret?
into his souls garth wended the winds/ whereupon his mind fell majestic jinns/ but in the umbrage is a bier of tenet-diamonds/ stalking this man, even unto his glasshouse island/
that made alive was soon haunted by auguries/ predictions that benighted the sun’s dowries/ he sits in the reticent lough of his mind unclear/ meditating upon whispers’, tenet souvenirs/
would to God he echoes in chant/ attic-wisdom from deep his Ba echoes back/ “‘find the halcyon brae, find, and ye feel free to pray’”/
he grabs his lyre and thereby panics allayed/ but a tinge of dolor, patiently cringes in the grey. | |
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| Abstract Rhythms Posted: 7/17/2007 9:00:02 PM | An eventful 3 hours….
Mother new refuge, and took such in a secret. Father new invisibility, and became the invisible man.
I walked to the corner and conversed with the fenced up wolf. He’s an old fort; and thus, he just stared at me. I walked away into the blank distance. I can see that God is in a good mood today, for the man who lives in a box is eating a decent meal; and guess what, he offered to share. I told him I couldn’t, and continued my aimless journey to that place where wisdom can offend you.
Once upon her haven, I could sense that the thoughts had hit harder than usual. I could see that everything must turn out perfect. Thus, I kept hostage my curve balls. But even I can grow weary of playing dumb. Nevertheless, there’s a lady who hangs out near the alley, I slow down just to watch her. She has this strange look in her eyes, and she keeps chanting: “today is the day.”
There’s a Best Buy six blocks to the right. I stop in. Channel 40 is on. I figure, why not a quick dose of guilt. The preacher comes on; and he says: “your faith is only as large as your donation, hows about a thousand dollar gift for Jesus.” Now isn’t this amazing: here we are living in the last days, depressed and waiting; and Jesus has asked you to put together a collection for him. | |
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| Abstract Rhythms Posted: 7/18/2007 3:59:44 PM | An eventful labyrinth…
From atop the Church Temple Through the attic-dungeon To the back door of ancient’s glasshouse We take leisure to the wilderness of forever
Through the crevices of this wild jungle We stir our tread contrary the path of Foxgloves But the Siamese cats weren’t as fortuitous They nibbled upon the Deadly-nightshade
There’s an Angel’s-Trumpet waxing nigh We change our course and settle while Conversing ‘twixt eating our bitter gourd An impala sits 4 fathoms yon agazed in trance
We continue out trek to stumble upon an armadillo Funny looking rat with a shell, it just kept gnaw’n At the dirt pay’n us no mind content wit being seen While 2 fathoms left stalked a dragon like a chameleon
We just smiled at the pronghorn antelopes Waved as they stared at us strange looking creatures, then In the heart of distraction one became a cheetah’s meal Cheetahs move with stealth, celerity, and aesthetic viciousness
Thought it in our best interest to get back atop the Church temple, so we exited our leisure of the wilderness of forever Into the back door of ancient’s glasshouse Through the attic-dungeon, back atop where ferrets had taken over | |
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| Abstract Rhythms Posted: 7/18/2007 5:04:01 PM | *Charismatic Refraction*
Albino Rainbows, flushed and colorless, pour into an empty pot and leprechauns are waving wand-less hands through thickened air as my demands dissolve and lucky stars are snuffed like candles on a clouded night when incandescent bulbs are burning ever bright. Four leaf clovers loose a leaf and wilt like all my wishes do when sunshine seeps through my opaque shattered glass existence. | |
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| Abstract Rhythms Posted: 7/18/2007 7:16:05 PM | What's going on Tim? I hope that all is well with you. This poem is deep!
The last couplet is a fantastic ending. It's good to see you posting again. | |
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| Abstract Rhythms Posted: 7/18/2007 7:16:32 PM | Séance…
I search’d out for melancholy… but was given peace. From the mind of dolor’s abeyance… I was incarnated balance. I drained the wineberry… mixed it with the cloudberry… Fermented Sophia’s elixir… and consumed my fool’s paradise.
Within the soul’s forest… I climb’d the old world sycamore tree. This power is exhilarating… this feeling is addictive. The secrets unlock to me. The whispers become flesh for me. I am spirit here in me. Who can but express this awakening? Who can but embrace this living? | |
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| Abstract Rhythms Posted: 7/18/2007 8:23:41 PM | Un Riddle the Universe!
Simpatico to that first breath, is the birth of the Pneuma in the mind’s soul. Who can but articulate The Truth? The unadulterated passion of spirit. There’s a large presence in this man’s soul. Let us but surmise about this other. This Kafkaesque manifest surging throughout this Universe. Let us cultivate this touch. This, if we Must confess it, Noumenon. Polyglot tongues rage Forth exploding within the veins of the cosmos. And Divinities junoesque treasure, Wisdom; desperately Thirsts to besprinkle the spirit’s of living belief; to Besprinkle us with the great Thought. She, I, He, all But labeled as fantast. Should we retreat! Should we Forsake the living in hope for the dead! O this ethereal Flame. Burn Flame…Burn! | |
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| Abstract Rhythms Posted: 7/18/2007 8:54:28 PM | Non Compos Mentis (“Not of Sound Mind”)
Aside a Jaguar the sun awoke. Man was filled with mania. Quickly into the Black-Forest we sought refuge. We entered The caves. Daresay I that we were fearful. As if to say, We were all pulled into the great Black-Mass. Taboo fruits Engulfed this surrealism. Blackly lit and quavering, we all Ambulated towards the Black-Mountains hidden in-depth The back this abyss, only to be taunted by the Black-magic. Suddenly the Black-damp ensued abrasive. Devilish Vibrations waged war on our senses. We were all bereft Of self-control. Megrims overtook our hearts. Peccant Prayers ushered from out our minds. We met the thought Of our spirits. From phlegmatic to feverishly insane we chanted. We were entranced by the Febrile Mania. The emptiness opened To us. Daymares attacked our person. We were hagridden. In the Back trenches we could hear the fall of the maniacal guffaw. The Walls begin to speak in tongues. Thinking it all merely phrenic, We jumped out of our brains. Then the crestfallen angst disappeared. Abed, we all awoke, with permanent scars upon our imaginations. | |
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| Abstract Rhythms Posted: 7/19/2007 8:47:44 PM | Limpid….
In heart a holy chant Your face appears to me I apologize for adding to The uncertainty
Never was my intention To cause vagueness, in Truth, you are a beautiful Woman, but destiny placed Us on different journeys
I wish unto you a blessed Existence, I wish upon you Peace of mind I saw something grieving in You, and I’m sorry for What I’ve seen
I feel as if I have trespassed Encroached upon your silence | |
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| Abstract Rhythms Posted: 7/19/2007 9:07:42 PM | War with Dolor….
In that exact silence i sit athirst for Truth --- For an essence that is Larger than the pain i See --- but shall i heal The soul’s megrims --- Shall i become --- shall i escape this daymare!
Dolor has haunted many. Dolor has made many famous. Some that perished in fame. And Others… merely exploited her.
I give dolor back to indecision. I now doubt dolor’s power… Dolor’s conviction… I take Dolor to war now… I send dolor To hell! | |
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| Abstract Rhythms Posted: 7/19/2007 9:13:21 PM | In morals I dwell and pride I sit Biting on tongues of guilt Holding back tears of sadness and pain A downpour of empathetic rain And when the wind blows my heart swells And when the sun sets glory and beauty fall into me and in my heart joy does dwell Love and light, day and night, wrong or right? Crucifix hanging on the wall, reminding me of ancient songs and stories told, I should heed, pacify my selfish quests and cease to fight And you my shadow, Living in a land where God no longer reigns Not knowing the human cry of sorrow For the other that lays in pain Nonetheless, your dance is beautiful It is steady, without all the bumps of joyful, sorrowful, guilt-ridden, and regretful You inflict pain, yet are calm just the same How are you not divine? Aren't we the same? Are you more divine than I for releasing what I claim? | |
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| Abstract Rhythms Posted: 7/20/2007 3:08:51 AM | I've stayed and sat awhile over this way/ powerful writes everyone....Indeed,it makes one pause
This deep embodiment is but a vessel garbed with humility and with only faith as the rudder to guide to ponder through these rough seas suffering beyond the jagged winds loving past the pain and still yet futher beyond to the other side of pain... one will find something much greater
A place where his wisdom awaits and heaven's melodies restore this vital breath, this vital core...
And maybe to a secular world... I am but just a dreamer building preparing air castles out of nothing at all
But I know of this temporary place touching moving me from a distance And at this place...no more darkness casting it's shadows upon the soul... a place and time"she" needs no sleep
And yes, to many I am still but just a dreamer..... | |
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| Abstract Rhythms Posted: 7/20/2007 5:01:03 PM | Jesyka…. This poem is awesome. And it’s always a pleasure to read you work.
Casheyesblond…. Awesome poem as well! I always see a great deal in everyone’s poetry, but it’s not my place to say too much. Just know that I see!
I thank you both for dropping by. | |
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| Abstract Rhythms Posted: 7/20/2007 5:51:54 PM | Life becomes
A friend of the drained sky she is Looking deep into the blue river But there we see no holy grail, just is Just thoughts of tremendous doubt
Grandmother alluded excessively much Sat straight up, spoke clearly to the wall And gave suspicion a home to dwell in Where cloudberries became great friends, sincerely
Up the street There’s a lady who’s dying, a woman of great beauty But she can’t see with eyes of logic So I ignore her karma Because death is in her spirit, she adores the Death | |
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| Abstract Rhythms Posted: 7/20/2007 6:41:00 PM | Aqua sheets that fold and furl imperfectly. Dishes always set clean to dry on their rack. The corners where the floor meets the kitchen wall need cleaning, Each day a new knot clenches along the spine of her back.
Floral dresses that crease and fall provocatively between tired legs, it's fabric tightening across and between thickening thighs, Dry, craked heels split deeper and wider with each laborous sigh.
Every day she's dying, every day she cracks a little more. Her hair is frizzing at the hairline, it's not as smoothe and kept as years before. Her hands are cracked from dishsoap and javel And her belly just aint the same around her navel
But like those old thick trees, she gets stronger as she goes There's something raw about that power Chills to the bone But she keeps it as a gift for those passing thru her home. | |
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| Abstract Rhythms Posted: 7/20/2007 6:42:20 PM | | Thanks for all the inspiring writes! They're a pleasure to read and think about ... | |
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| Abstract Rhythms Posted: 7/20/2007 9:22:36 PM | Lovely writes....J.......just want you to know...love your writes! As all the others here...words just flow..like the rain....and a tear! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Memories Never Melt!~~~~~~~~~~~
Remember those words you never said to me! Kinda like a tear........and a memory! The things you never said.....before you left The words you couldn't say......... Too damn bereft.........
Why do these words in me a memory waken? Like the strength of a thunderbolt....... Like a tree that is shaken'? A feeling....I cannot express with words......... Just a goodbye.....without the sword? Vanishing love......leaves me and then.......... I pursue something......... I cannot forget!
Never did know...or heard of the reason.......... Damn...baby.....was I just your out of season? Sorry...that my heart could not forget.... A love so real..........didn't want to part! What is wrong with this haunting dream? It brought so many tears... my soul was so strained!
Hidden pain....and I hid it good! Seems it hasn't even come until now! As I clutch my heart.........and gasp in pain Always now knowing will be more rain........ I know you destroyed...what I felt in my heart~! Another lost soul..........on a ghost ship....departed!
I cannot forget.....but I do ...now forgive! My life is my own...and I do try to live The ghost is uncaptured....and yet....... unrevealed........... though deep in my heart .......... I cannot forgive! The song it has ended.... I fall into the lull of another lullabuy............. but there is no more bull!
Just know every time I feel the tear start to fall............ I empty my ashtray.......... Full moon does call............ What is my saddest....lonliest memory? It would be me and you............ Almost a tear..........almost a memory!  | |
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| Abstract Rhythms Posted: 7/20/2007 11:59:24 PM | Thanx for the "air" over here everyone/ And jesyka....nice tag at the end of your write
But like those old thick trees, she gets stronger as she goes There's something raw about that power Chills to the bone But she keeps it as a gift for those passing thru her home ....kewl!
Fallen leaves may sometimes get tossed into a medicated damper sleep walking their way through life never seeking more or beyond a temporary situation And with branches forever bending from trying to fit in along the way will eventually break and wither to a nothingness while conforming into it's mainstream shape....
But the testament of power is truly in the root of the tree....
Indeed,"the root" lives on.... | |
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| Abstract Rhythms Posted: 7/21/2007 5:30:30 PM | | These poems are so touching. I've reread them several times. I truly appreciate every read. I thank you all for posting here. | |
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