| LAST LINE BECOMES YOUR FIRST LINE OF AN 8 (EIGHT) LINE STANZA Posted: 6/5/2008 7:17:55 PM | Lilac blossoms fragrant appreciated fair barn swallows. synchronized swimmers in thin air new lambs frolic in my field joyfully gamboling everywhere
goats milk cheese , lemon balm tea, sorrel soup,onion pie, all for free chicken, ducks and geese agree springs bounty intoxicates me | |
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| LAST LINE BECOMES YOUR FIRST LINE OF AN 8 (EIGHT) LINE STANZA Posted: 6/5/2008 7:18:39 PM | Lilac blossoms fragrant appreciated fair who put them there in your hair they make your eyes gleam brightly you are the fairest of the fair
that's why you wore that lavender blouse leaving the house with your spouse you waltzed straight to the garden as if floating on the notes of Strauss | |
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| LAST LINE BECOMES YOUR FIRST LINE OF AN 8 (EIGHT) LINE STANZA Posted: 6/5/2008 7:41:17 PM | as if floating on the notes of Strauss waltzing heart beats spring draws essence musical delight anew droplets moist upon the dew
symphonies of strummed heart glowing buds a fresh impart music audio radiant envision awed assault on all senses given | |
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| LAST LINE BECOMES YOUR FIRST LINE OF AN 8 (EIGHT) LINE STANZA Posted: 6/6/2008 2:34:42 AM | Awed assault on all senses given spring's bounty intoxicates me heightened awareness, gift of heaven, lifts, lightens, invigorates me. Confetti blossom paves my way as bees attend to nuptials there tho' almost finished in one spring day renewal excitement fills the air | |
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| LAST LINE BECOMES YOUR FIRST LINE OF AN 8 (EIGHT) LINE STANZA Posted: 6/6/2008 12:43:19 PM | renewal excitement fills the air in that boom bang crash that's always there she walks alone without a care twirling fingers through bright pink hair a touch of gray is seen in back when not watching the caboose sway on the track he think she has the perfect pack to compliment his ole smoke stack | |
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| LAST LINE BECOMES YOUR FIRST LINE OF AN 8 (EIGHT) LINE STANZA Posted: 6/9/2008 4:44:05 AM | To compliment his ol' smoke stack steam releasing clouds of mist reversing the course of years past futile gas used to spew
All conditioned and cooling now eminent to not spoiling the natural habitat nuclear building, giving back To a sancutuary plow'd by ancestor's... | |
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| LAST LINE BECOMES YOUR FIRST LINE OF AN 8 (EIGHT) LINE STANZA Posted: 6/9/2008 7:13:06 PM | To a sancutuary plow'd by ancestor's... where pungent bone just festers Left by the clowns and the jesters Jostling for who bests the besters seeking the holy grail questers bowing and scraping knee gestures All seeking spiritual testers forgotten by baby boom empty nesters | |
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| LAST LINE BECOMES YOUR FIRST LINE OF AN 8 (EIGHT) LINE STANZA Posted: 6/10/2008 11:44:05 AM | forgotten by baby boom empty nesters and such i never thought i'd miss you so much i got used to the using, abusing mistakes that we all got together just to try to unbreak
the nest was forgotten at the top of the tree while i lay on the down-covered twigs feeling free you said you would be there at the end of the jaunt just another mistake made by an invisible haunt | |
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| LAST LINE BECOMES YOUR FIRST LINE OF AN 8 (EIGHT) LINE STANZA Posted: 6/10/2008 11:50:51 AM | Just another mistake made by an invisible haunt Ghosts from the past back to put down and taunt Casting the doubt and trying to shame passing dark shadows upon her good name It's all innuendo and lies and decite And just like the pheonix she'll rise from the heat all comes around and all comes to pass His meanness and cruelty show him for an ass | |
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| LAST LINE BECOMES YOUR FIRST LINE OF AN 8 (EIGHT) LINE STANZA Posted: 6/10/2008 12:17:31 PM | His meanness and cruelty show him for an ass while he's touting and spouting of all his good class his fine upbringing on the right side of town that this one and that one was bringing him down
he reigned all supreme til the day she flew to lay waste to the past and it's terrible truth there's no wonder to worry when the day's come to close it's just her in the hot seat, no one else here knows | |
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| LAST LINE BECOMES YOUR FIRST LINE OF AN 8 (EIGHT) LINE STANZA Posted: 6/10/2008 3:51:45 PM | it's just her in the hot seat, no one else here knows the tantrum she throws seeing wrong shoes on his feet damn straight dems the ones I hate you know and it blows to make us late for the date
all the while he's thinking how bad the traffic will be so hard to see and have to cut back on the drinking these quick comfortable boots an we can scoot shoot she caught me again, no use trying to pretend | |
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| LAST LINE BECOMES YOUR FIRST LINE OF AN 8 (EIGHT) LINE STANZA Posted: 6/11/2008 12:19:12 AM | Shoot!! He caught me again, no use trying to pretend..........(he in place of she..lol) that I really missed him that much!! Spiked shoes, roll'n bladed greens, divoting comfortable in the knowing, time is up
Comfortable in the skin of the boots??!! wear them, its part of you shoe leather'd, sole worn down, tathered Somersault performing in souls desire.... | |
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| LAST LINE BECOMES YOUR FIRST LINE OF AN 8 (EIGHT) LINE STANZA Posted: 6/11/2008 12:49:34 AM | Somersault performing in soul's desire Tricky manouvres on the high wire Juggling emotions, afraid to stop Knowing the consequences if one should drop Trying to find whatever's been missed Feeling for footholds that don't exist Between past and future the present is yet Caught in the tangles of a safety net | |
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| LAST LINE BECOMES YOUR FIRST LINE OF AN 8 (EIGHT) LINE STANZA Posted: 6/11/2008 4:46:59 AM | Caught in the tangles of a safety net stagnating seemed a sure bet but now you're debating missing the zing even the bling he gifts you won't silence the ding of your inner alarm the charm is missing the spectacular kissing and you're neatly purchased your heart just lurches you're tethered by the opinions of the tar and feather crowd if you should leave so grieve and sew your shroud still your wild heart's bleating for it's only love you're cheating | |
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| LAST LINE BECOMES YOUR FIRST LINE OF AN 8 (EIGHT) LINE STANZA Posted: 6/11/2008 5:20:01 AM | for its only love you're cheating as you encase your heart shrinking back in protection..... witholding life's beating
Yet lonliness stirs there if nothing else allowed and deep desires wanting to pierce squelched by blinding fear. | |
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| LAST LINE BECOMES YOUR FIRST LINE OF AN 8 (EIGHT) LINE STANZA Posted: 6/11/2008 6:42:08 AM | thanx mthuckleberry....................lol
squelched by blinding fear. to move forward,to allow faith this takes trust,nothing to buy it's day after day,time after time
it's hard to get past the pain and that FEAR that fouls my soul but once on the other side my world opens before me | |
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| LAST LINE BECOMES YOUR FIRST LINE OF AN 8 (EIGHT) LINE STANZA Posted: 6/11/2008 8:45:10 AM | My world opens before me chapters turned seasons’ filigree like a book rendering its pages calligraphy of life born stages passages in brass in silver in gold in stories read and stories told like a rose deep in thoughts of dew essential oils of what I knew | |
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| LAST LINE BECOMES YOUR FIRST LINE OF AN 8 (EIGHT) LINE STANZA Posted: 6/11/2008 5:30:59 PM | like a rose deep in thoughts of dew essential oils of what I knew bow down before me to lay their waste as i run for the exit, in all my haste forgetting the memories of you and i no time for wondering, asking you why off i wander, the lust forgotten and only time will tell if the fruit's gone rotten | |
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| LAST LINE BECOMES YOUR FIRST LINE OF AN 8 (EIGHT) LINE STANZA Posted: 6/11/2008 5:53:16 PM | and only time will tell if the fruit's gone rotten or if it has found it's way to fertile soil sending out soft shooting tendrils pushing their way to sunlight , the passion of its earthly flesh forgotten knowing only of life's new quest | |
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| LAST LINE BECOMES YOUR FIRST LINE OF AN 8 (EIGHT) LINE STANZA Posted: 6/11/2008 6:39:39 PM | growth now undoubted a heart beats that is no longer crowded bitterness and fear released and gone space for love and a brand new song
Vulnerability allowed to rest within a heart not sealed in a chest Trust unveiled as new steps walked O'er a new horizon, beauty unlocked. | |
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| LAST LINE BECOMES YOUR FIRST LINE OF AN 8 (EIGHT) LINE STANZA Posted: 6/11/2008 8:32:59 PM | o'er a new horizon, beauty unlocked dip low into the valley, icy rivers shock beyond the blue vista secrets unbound winds head skyward to see what can be found
as the moon comes up and gently sweeps greeting dusktime with her smile so sweet slowly the calm of evening comes to sing a melody of nightshade until sleep begins | |
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| LAST LINE BECOMES YOUR FIRST LINE OF AN 8 (EIGHT) LINE STANZA Posted: 6/12/2008 12:47:33 PM | there in her beauty, sweet poison does lay for with her pen will the admonishments say Sir Lyric hath laid out the rules quite clear An eight line stanza, is required here
Think of it as a ditty, think of it as a rhyme We all make mistakes, I myself time to time but make it eight lines, a stanza no doubt and you'll never again, get this chewing out | |
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