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Posted: 8/21/2008 1:54:31 PM | at home, the streets, my life
has caused more than one nightmare.
for i ran away from home one day
and live without a care
but thats not all true to tell the truth
cuz each day was ruled by fear
we were but feral animals
where survivals all thats clear | |
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Posted: 8/21/2008 2:58:49 PM | where survival's all that's clear
fearful feral animals....
humans have so much fear
it travels with us everywhere
would carry into eternity
if we didn't learn how to tame
our animal nature and
take more care or go insane | |
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Posted: 8/21/2008 3:22:01 PM | take more care or go insane
get a grip forget 'bout blame
the only thing there is to tame
is our own emotions
it is a world that wants to usurp us
the sole solution is a will to purpose
the world can shrug and claim lack of locus
to all but life's devotion | |
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Posted: 8/21/2008 3:24:31 PM | take more care or go insane
they can take a lot of things
but they can't have that
tried to take it but I bought it back
like a firecracker
the fuse is getting smaller
keep away from fires ... or
the whole thing will blow
(((oops!! ))) | |
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Posted: 8/21/2008 3:40:52 PM | let's start dieing
leave it to the robots
the ones who have no hearts
the world she's a changing
new cancer places they know
Love is the way to go
true caring and not pretend
the heart has to have in order to mend ........... | |
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Posted: 8/21/2008 3:46:14 PM | the heart has to have in order to mend....
ahhh, yes, love enters again
for love is what brings fear to an end
real love that asks for nothing in return
we seem to have become so distorted
in all our views of life
it saddens me to see so many giving up
thinking there is no tomorrow | |
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Posted: 8/21/2008 3:51:38 PM | the heart has to have in order to mend
cuz theres to deep a message we gotta all send
start loving our brother as friend
or else shake hands and start shooting
when that happens, the masses will loot
flat screen tv's and a pin stipped suit
please dont hang back and just act cute
the world doesnt need more looting
whoops
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Posted: 8/21/2008 3:57:39 PM | thinking there is no tomorrow
i will charge straight into our fate
for knowing tomorrow is gunno blow
theres just no time to grow
lets settle it all, forget 'bout belief
it is all crap anyhow
72 virgins just aint worth the grief (bad poem, i know)
despite this major row | |
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Posted: 8/21/2008 4:00:22 PM | (no whoops...your message is powerful)
the world doesn't need more looting
no it doesn't
and the world doesn't need more shooting
no it doesn't
'fraid out of all the seriousness, a song erupts -
"what the world needs now is love, sweet love......"
but will it really save the incredible distortions?
seems things are really in crisis now | |
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Posted: 8/21/2008 5:22:07 PM | seems things are really in crisis now
what the world needs now is love sweet love
u know how dumb that sounds?!
i have a shot student who left and i found
he came back cuz he was terrorized
not from beind shot but from
cleaning toilets in a donought shops
whatever u learn from is good. | |
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Posted: 8/21/2008 6:23:35 PM | whatever you learn from is good
of course it sounds totally foolish
it is a song from a time long ago
when the climate was changing
and wishful thinking was rife
and yet it's not really so dumb
because without love is there life?
or are we here just to kill everyone? | |
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Posted: 8/21/2008 6:36:07 PM | Whatever u learn from is good (because) learning is good, mmkay?
Then boredom most vulgar, too, if you finally do something one day.
Learning is the way, you see, take it from me and Sesame Street.
Sour fifty years, then too, if you finally investigate sweet.
Whatever u learn from is good--oh if only that were enuf
If we could learn to dispose of such tools once we know to advance the stuff
Not dispose of advancement itself out of nostalgia for ignorance' mire
Prosperity gnawed and gnarled; the excuse accepted--we got tired. | |
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Posted: 8/21/2008 6:42:56 PM | Hi we are one. Sorry. I'm gonna try your last line now. B y the way, I like your posts.
Or are we just here to kill everyone
like deadly aspects of the sun
like hearts that bleed not run
like water for drowning not fun
We are just here to kill our own
like alley cats never to be known
like cannibal feasts, familiar bone
our senses not inclined to atone | |
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Posted: 8/21/2008 7:40:44 PM | our senses not inclined to atone
but atone we must
for killing is not our purpose
no matter how much they say it is just
justified for what?
to take the land or the oil and take it by force?
what about when one is in agony physically and wishes to die?
that is when justice looses all reason and says, 'no, you must stay alive' | |
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Posted: 8/21/2008 7:47:58 PM | loses all reason and say,
'no, you must stay alive'
for some of us if we wake up breathing
its a good day and we continue to strive
who makes the cold decision
that the living has been done
its up to each day breathing in
the battle can be won | |
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Posted: 8/21/2008 7:51:13 PM | the battle can be won
we live until we're dead
and each day counts we have in hand
so plan the day instead
how many times those 'in the know'
had given up on me
twice dead and yet still here I am
gods bless the will to simply live and live as a woman free..... | |
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Posted: 8/21/2008 8:15:45 PM | Gods bless the will to simply live and live as a woman free..
set forth for human beings irrespective of gendour decree
seen the sunset and sunrise, enamoured false battle cries
gentle thoughts, squelched to subservient thought lies
manly strength quieted to silent protestations at length
offspring garnered in ernest search of games false strength
mentored 'pon their souls such experience brings an epotaph
carnival of revolving ferris wheel, false heard children's laugh. | |
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Posted: 8/21/2008 8:23:33 PM | Gods bless the will to simply live and live as a woman free
I really should have thought this though it can't apply to me
But I will soldier on I guess inspite of manly gender
And write here something apprapo I hope I can be tender
The world will likely kick us off I think that is our fate
I'm sorry if I rock this boat and think that's not so great
My only solitary hope that upon my llife depends
Is that the world ends on a monday I've planned a big weekend
I'm sorry people, I mean it was right there. Cmon;). | |
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Posted: 8/21/2008 10:11:07 PM | rock on shamrock dude. i can only cry in my beer for so long!!!!!
the world ends on a monday I've planned a big week end
so i wrote some letters for tuesday which i intend never to send
did half the work, got drunk, passed out, oh wednesday will it end?
well in 2 days its friday, what do you want to blend?
shots of tequila and cold beers and lime, right now, if u please
its all right there, straight up in front, you'll see it if you ease
whats with crushed ice mixed in my drink, it does my make my brain so freeze
its sunday now, where have you been, you want this all to cease? | |
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Posted: 8/21/2008 10:21:32 PM | it's sunday now, where have you been, you want this all to cease?
and if it's the end
what about having other good times
other than drinking alone or with friends?
what about sharing some passion with all those you'd hoped to but kept gettin' a bashin'?
now they tell you they love you, so there's no time to lose
for before you know it will be all over the news
so grab your sweethearts, it's time to choose | |
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Posted: 8/22/2008 12:40:25 AM | so grab your sweethearts, it's time to choose
do the twist right now theres no time to loose
i can laugh with guys and drink too much booze
but no one i have loved yelled stop it!
there was once one who gave it a shot
we were quite a total dofferent lot
she completely freaked when i got shot
i didnt run, i yelled drop it | |
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