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Posted: 12/6/2006 10:25:32 PM | across the ages love silently weeps
for little children to hungry to sleep
empathic wave thoughts flow outside of time
entwining the vortex surrounding the mind
open to offers from existential desires
flight moves fast forward into a quagmire
irony and pathos are fighting the plot
while cameo appearances bring big shots | |
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Posted: 12/7/2006 7:45:31 AM | cameo appearances bring big shots
at the end of the day reason has lost
it's place on the throne & irony the cost
the collective masses have paid for
conflict is the entree, anguish the sauce
and love's once tender leaves
now a bitter salad tossed
to the banquet of life to all it comes across. | |
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Posted: 12/7/2006 8:15:26 AM | to the banquet of life to all
it comes across with a call
Hey you.. over there
you say you really care
then stand around with out a sound
while others break the chairs
I think its time you left this hall
jumped the fence and retrieved the ball. | |
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Joined: 10/22/2006
Msg: 479 | |
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Posted: 12/7/2006 10:32:29 AM | jumped the fence and retrieved the ball
was all i could do for the end of fall
winters shutters open wide
why does this happen
and where did it hide
the ball has bounced through grass and lane
i wanted so to see the swooshing mane
of horses wild in true disdain
kicking up thier heels for feighn
to truly feel the winds insane
letters flying from some distant shore
that hold the power of more than tore
than i can see where the flowers poke
outside like snowdrops for a joke
adventures horse is burgundy
sprawled like some wild jimson weed
to find the breeze between the sky
where fools believe and there's no lie
(keep breaking the intent of this thread...thinking it is last line first line...slow learner here) | |
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Posted: 12/7/2006 12:15:49 PM | pardon the interuption MiTurn,
I believe it is last line first
just pick up & continue the verse
carry the last first and wax sublime
any ole way,any 8 lines.
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MiTURN
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Joined: 10/22/2006
Msg: 481 | |
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Posted: 12/7/2006 12:22:32 PM | 1) any ole way
2)make it thru
3)bite a flea
4)door the shut
5)handsome mut
6)stick the wick
7)thanks fore tellin
8)open the gate | |
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Posted: 12/7/2006 6:10:06 PM | if once you could open the gate....
rage and pain could very well escape...
leading to love and passion as fate....
making eyes see once again..happiness beginning to inflate...
if just once you could kiss only me...
vengence and sorrow could very well flee...
leading to wonder and whatifs to be....
if in my eyes you could only see.... | |
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Posted: 12/7/2006 6:43:28 PM | if in my eyes you could only see....
the serenity of a deep blue sea
with only time and care to give
with us together we both could finally live
A kiss so pure, never needing another
pain and torment fade while you and me asunder
lie with me and look at my eyes
they look straight into you and know your cries | |
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Posted: 12/7/2006 7:55:57 PM | they look straight into you and know
your cries are just yearnings to show
a heart always hopeful despite
it's spark too dull now to ignite
yet 1 memory can make it beat fast
one single moment from it's past
his smell, his touch, his lips
the very 1st time they kissed | |
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Posted: 12/7/2006 10:35:08 PM | the very 1st time they kissed in the dark
then again each opportunity for a lark
feigning love with hearts on fire alert
not yet ready for more than some flirt
She and he and they couldn't stop the growth
with all of their will directed by both
whenever alone together they'd start
flirting with passion in eachother heart | |
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Posted: 12/7/2006 10:40:14 PM | flirting with passion in each other heart
the surgeons took turns with the knife.
Each understood each others part
And they weren’t really playing with a life.
Just practice surgery here at the school
Through video internet relay.
So a student in Yellowknife learns to assist
A medical team from Brazil. | |
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Posted: 12/7/2006 11:32:13 PM | A medical team from Brazil were called in to assist
the delicate operation thats giving Dr Kevorkian fits
the mourning nurse is hiding behind transparent screens
giving shots to orderlies and the rest of the soccer team
everyone was counted and all present and accounted for
the single subject absent was the all important corpse
a wink of the eye and the Dr provides a handy stand in
in all the confusion you thank God it isn't you instead of him | |
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Posted: 12/7/2006 11:39:05 PM | In all the confusion you thank God it isn't you instead of him
Knowing that deep inside this thought is surreal
Couldn’t be real, I no longer feel human thus to feel
In all the confusion you thank God it isn’t you instead of him still! | |
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Joined: 10/22/2006
Msg: 489 | |
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Posted: 12/8/2006 5:02:13 AM | in all the confusion you thank God it isn't you instead of him still
going thru the mustard over and over but what the Hill
life is a legend thats old as the Hell
some like it hot some like it cold
some just like to get into the fold
some will try frilling the the basket to hold
any old lemon make a fortune when sold
although when the time comes
aren't there cause "they wern't told"
that's how we're taught to fit into the mold
to be some sniper with weapons of old
when do you think this days going to fold?
when plots are all thickened by masters of lies
sheilds on their hearts and even their eyes
life so cuckold and the trucks lost its turnips
maybe it's you next where innocence burn ups
but we will just walk over that man on the street
that was trying to break up the fight over meat
isn't no place to take a holiday in Paris
the Hiltons they are popular
their wealth it contributes
to the ignorant media
so stay back from this reality
tho you live in it
it kills me this banality
not literally
it's so old tho
i'd like some discovery | |
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Posted: 12/8/2006 8:32:03 AM | i'd like some discovery channel this year
to influence the legislature we hold so dear
into decisions that help the big picture
giving grandkids clean hopes of pure
working on what they like to call green
correcting the browns that all us have seen
we have to filter the air and water we drink
build infastructure take us back from the brink | |
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Posted: 12/8/2006 6:27:31 PM | take us back from the brink
some of us got lost with the kitchen sink
hope to be around lots more...
sending yall's big hugs with a wink.
life gets crazy during the holiday season
but still its not a great reason
to just disappear off the face of the earth
missed yall, & I ain't teasing.
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Posted: 12/8/2006 7:37:34 PM | I ain't teasing, i'm so for real
i'm fed up with the supermarket deal
stealing kisses when i should be devoured
waiting patiently for the hour
to come on here and wax my lines
steal some inspiration from poets divine
i come to read and fall face down
all i need is my rodeo clown | |
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Posted: 12/8/2006 7:38:44 PM | I missed, y'all & I ain't teasin fate
dropped the ball & I got there late
emotions stalled fell into a river
to all soul-takers "I'm just not a giver"
mid stream crossing I surrended my heart
took a chance took the plunge took a fatal dart
sinking to the bottom I vowed to remember
never trust in love that demands 'surrender'! | |
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Posted: 12/8/2006 7:50:55 PM | never trust in love that demands 'surrender'
there's no enemies in bliss
take me to the edge of forever
only surrendering your kiss
no wedding rings, no sacred vows
to tie us two together
just the simple act of wanting
to be near you forever | |
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Posted: 12/8/2006 8:17:09 PM | to be near you forever
tied in dyed fancy leather
its you and I in nasty weather
shut the light I like it better
hey baby blue what be the matter
I might delight in peels of laughter
I can't demand a never ever after
all I can do is want what you do | |
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Posted: 12/8/2006 8:26:55 PM | all I can do is want what you do
feeling the ceiling peeking on through
climbing the walls of the halls i built
no time for my mind to insist upon guilt
fleeting the moments are meeting in time
forging the tapestry mapped out in my mind
driving through rains and desperate refrains
stealing that feeling of euphoric drain | |
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Posted: 12/9/2006 9:17:02 AM | stealing that feeling of euphoric drain-O
watching for miricles to whip that stain so
each little moment that passes us bye
will suck up those tears to help your eyes dry
I know that the sun will drive you to sneeze
winds of winter can put you on your knees
rains will erode your garden of delights
and snow can trap you for more than one night. | |
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Posted: 12/9/2006 9:48:53 AM | snow can trap for more than one night
pile on the door bar the windows
keep you in a house of yearning
unable to hear even the slightest moving
It only happens once a season
maybe even less then that
and I know that I do adore the white
It's all about my Canadian pride.
So throw me a strom!
take the power and steal the warmth
Winter mistress has a pack with I
After its done, the cold dark days
The ones that seemed to control the light
and bang restless on your windows at night
will fall away
a flaking of the seasons skin
to show to the city
a bright, new lesson. | |
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Posted: 12/9/2006 9:54:45 AM | a bright new lesson
a Jack Frost confession
with a loose leaf connection
to monocular reactions
or a Thursday morning theory
when views are not so blurry
we'll explain another way
once we discover it's really Saturday | |
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Posted: 12/9/2006 1:26:06 PM | once we discover it's really Saturday
the covers are pulled back up and we close our eyes
with no need to rush off in some rabid way
its snuggle cuddle time as my leg spreds your thighs
feeling the heat left over from last night
that taste of sweet sweat dried eyelids encrusted
brings willing pulsations back into sight
with smile and kiss love flows back where its trusted. | |
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