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Posted: 9/24/2008 4:07:37 PM | Piper, I really do dislike you
Yet I know I can't live
unless I'm willing to give
all that you demand
I really can't understand
how the forces that be
think we have all this money
to keep paying out more and more endlessly | |
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Posted: 9/25/2008 5:01:08 AM | to keep paying out more and more endlessly
but not the culprits, that makes no sense to me
the fat cats get fatter, the poor get madder
and the situation itself gets sadder and sadder
it seems that hope is all we've got
it's time for the responsible to get caught
change begins with me..for that i truly see
i ain't giving up, oh no i'm not | |
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Posted: 9/25/2008 5:51:25 AM | BASTERDS !!!
Or just plain terds
Now i finally looked at the title of this thread
damn, need more coffee dizzy in the head
so forgive me for not following the rules
please don't ban me for being a fool
just what is a stanza,
I don't really know
Mornin Perfect... you are... :) and tanks....oh shoot Perfect, I edited after you posted...Sorry again...damn coffee ain't workin. | |
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Posted: 9/25/2008 6:00:57 AM | please don't ban me for being a fool
never River, you're not foolish
the fools are all in office and
playing with all the zeros
It's time for America to wake up
and give them a good smack down
we voted 'em in, we can vote 'em out
the foxes are in the hen house | |
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Posted: 9/25/2008 6:19:12 AM | the foxes are in the hen house
dirty dogs are playing cat and mouse
the bank is owned by a mutant louse
can you hear the blood he's sucking?
he smiles at me and takes my home
put me in a pit, bury me with loam
guess I'll pack a bag and start to roam
I am sick of all this ducking | |
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Posted: 9/25/2008 6:56:37 AM | (gawdamn it joro...love the write up there!)
i am sick of all this ducking
they're fvcking up my brain
which they'd leave me alone
before i go insane
nothing makes sense
to me anymore
yep, i'll pack up my bag
head out that ol' door... | |
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Posted: 9/25/2008 7:41:32 AM | (thnx rose- maybe cuz its sort of where i am really at)
head out that ol' door...
straight up to the hills
Hold my head high
for i still have my will
When everythings broken
i wanna sit there and cry
It takes will to have hope and
to forge a desire to try | |
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Posted: 9/25/2008 10:26:04 AM | [floating .... we can't ban you but we can pan you for not doing the first line last line]
[ just looking at the posts you should notice everyone pretty much posts only 8 lines]
now back to where we should be .... with a patch
i ain't giving up, oh no i'm not, to forge a desire, to try
not being abrupt, or way too hot, I'll forage, oh my
what if the end was at the beginning
the deeds we did were always sinning
the time was stopped before it struck one
what if pleasure was never any fun
the tax man shook in an uncontrolable fit
for now no deadline could pay for it | |
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Posted: 9/25/2008 12:35:44 PM | for now no deadline could pay for it
we cant stop the bleeding with a first aid kit
we can sit in pity in a bottemless pit
or say f-ck it and go climb a mountain
worry is one thing and I cant find my mother
i can scream and throw tantrums, yet still help my brother
its a dog eat dog world which isnt my druther
i am finished kind sir, may i please have another | |
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Posted: 9/25/2008 1:55:39 PM | i am finished kind sir, may i please have another
or maybe just take me and let me not return
for it's getting harder and harder here
no matter how much I learn
and yet, just as I wonder should I really give up
something switches again in me
and for a flicker of a second, I think I can see
we're starting to feel this thing called unity | |
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Posted: 9/25/2008 2:17:20 PM | We're starting to feel this thing called unity
Despite our resistance with extreme impunity
Harken to the call of our beloved community
Live and yet still die for the cause
Amidst raucous jeers or thundering applause
Gamble all that you have on the love of the others
Despite all your fear that lingers and smothers
In the end it is clear we are all sisters and brothers | |
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Posted: 9/25/2008 3:32:42 PM | In the end it is clear we are all sisters and brothers
so why do we all get into such a big fuss
we can lie on the beach or hide neath the covers
your ears wont fall off, should i happen to cuss
but we must take a stand to save our land
so i will stand in front of this bus
in my coffin I lie, my home's a pig stie
at least i went without rust | |
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Posted: 9/25/2008 5:40:45 PM | at least i went without rust
but i also think i gave up on trust
to stick around long enough
and live for something beyond lust
and yet lust is also essential
and maybe it is more plentiful
but i think it can co-exist with love
for they say of it all, as below, so above | |
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Posted: 9/25/2008 6:56:53 PM | for they say of it all, as below, so above
trust not the serpent and live like the dove
forget the past, live soley for \love
is easy to do without danger
but lives live life and are at risk
i shot straight but i missed
i looked up but was dissed
who cares there is always tomorrow
for the future is always right in our face
so long as we're willing to face our disgrace
fight with me now, i will spray you with mace
this is the era of full out survival | |
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Posted: 9/26/2008 4:25:52 AM | (joro...you're smokin'!..good stuff there my man...good stuff)
this is the era of full out survival
time to take care of one's own needs
if we don't we might be libel
not to hear the calling heed
how did it ever get so bad
with deceit running so rapidly
how did it ever get so sad
can you please just comfort me | |
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Posted: 9/26/2008 4:30:12 AM | can you please just comfort me
and tell me you love me
just the way I am
and I mean it sincerely
for I know that is what you wish from me
and it's really gonna take this
for us to love and forgive humanity....
so sorry to sound so preachy! | |
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Posted: 9/26/2008 7:02:54 AM | so sorry to sound so preachy
History shows each generation evolves
A diamond ring can be made to fit in all sizes
Cure for catering is called a dishwasher
I don’t need to turn on channel No.5
Could be deadly off course, IF he looked as
good as me
Wearing ONE strand of pearls… | |
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Posted: 9/26/2008 7:13:19 AM | Wearing ONE, strand of pearls
lay'd perfectly upon the clavical
freshwater'd opalescent hues
strung together in brillance to shine
notted between the unperfect spheres
majestically gathered in gold
clasping the heart and soul of beauty
A picture perfect setting... | |
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Posted: 9/26/2008 4:54:19 PM | A picture perfect setting isn't quite what your getting
with a walk in the park before it gets dark
those screams from play reverberate in a way
like nails on the calk board or seeing something abhored
But exercise is needed the doctor once pleaded
take time for your health to ensure your wealth
what good is a stash when covered in a rash
that has no cure so your life's now a blur | |
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Posted: 9/26/2008 6:39:06 PM | that has no cure so your life's now a blur
reflection of what has been
begins to bend again
everything thing that was now is not
You thought you knew a lot
to find, you know nothing
everything have been flipped
new rules to making sin | |
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Posted: 9/26/2008 7:11:38 PM | New rules to making sin she asked?
he manouvered her to the divan
handing over a hearty glass
of his best chilled chablis
her senses were on high alert
head swimming with the heady
fragrance coming from the------
fresh baked devil's food cake | |
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Posted: 9/27/2008 6:27:43 AM | under the new morning sun
of course we are one
and no one is any better
or worse than anyone
the line about gay
was simply because
it was a poem of 'sin'
between a man and woman
rosie, i changed it and put it back, hoping someone would not think what it seems you have, but it was meant to be funny, really  | |
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