| LAST LINE BECOMES YOUR FIRST LINE OF AN 8 (EIGHT) LINE STANZA Posted: 10/15/2008 4:47:02 AM | to see love radiating through every pore brilliance shines throughout thrilling me to the core want to scream and shout
'love is the answer, love is the key unlocking all the questions allowing us to be free allowing me to be me' | |
|
| LAST LINE BECOMES YOUR FIRST LINE OF AN 8 (EIGHT) LINE STANZA Posted: 10/15/2008 10:51:07 AM | allowing me to be me who else could I hope to be as Ronnie Van Zant's "Freebird" was free that's my goal in life to some extent
woke up radio on to my favourite band dreamed that I was lucky but woke up cold in hand cracked open a Guinness, steak that is canned obla dee, obla dah, life goes on | |
|
| LAST LINE BECOMES YOUR FIRST LINE OF AN 8 (EIGHT) LINE STANZA Posted: 10/15/2008 1:10:53 PM | obla dee, obla dah, life goes on you think that I'll sit back and wait for the con? I come from New Jersey, I do know the Don I will drink now and start work next Monday
Ronnies best song- "Was I Right or Wrong" It owns pain and sufferage and is a good song I will have a Martini, but I pass on the bong And dance in the sun, come what may. | |
|
| LAST LINE BECOMES YOUR FIRST LINE OF AN 8 (EIGHT) LINE STANZA Posted: 10/15/2008 1:27:31 PM | And dance in the sun, come what may.... holding my hand in the mid-summers day... upon the sands we frolic and play... just you and me hand in hand with but love to portray...
dance with me in the moonlit sky.... kiss me gently above each eye..... love me sweetly and never make me cry... hold my hand and forever we will fly... | |
|
| LAST LINE BECOMES YOUR FIRST LINE OF AN 8 (EIGHT) LINE STANZA Posted: 10/15/2008 1:49:18 PM | hold my hand and forever we will fly... hold my hand so that i can cry hold my hand as I fry I am a dead man walking
you are mean but can be beat you wont lose but claim defeat you are right but it is deceit dont be caught the guy talking | |
|
| LAST LINE BECOMES YOUR FIRST LINE OF AN 8 (EIGHT) LINE STANZA Posted: 10/15/2008 4:01:28 PM | dont be caught the guy talking unless you are in the know don't be that batter balking or back to the bench you'll go
struck out again without a swing the average drops into a hole while the picture's fans shout and sing you get the lump of coal | |
|
| |
| |
| |
| LAST LINE BECOMES YOUR FIRST LINE OF AN 8 (EIGHT) LINE STANZA Posted: 10/16/2008 7:16:24 AM | lets wade in the mud and just have fun splash around then slide on your bum dance like nobody can see or hear sing what you like and drink more beer
don't pay no never mind to the stage just bounce around like its a naked rave everyone is laughing at the moment right now let your brain go empty like a grazing cow | |
|
| LAST LINE BECOMES YOUR FIRST LINE OF AN 8 (EIGHT) LINE STANZA Posted: 10/16/2008 7:23:51 AM | let your brain go empty like a grazing cow this comparison just doesn't sit well with me, somehow a cow has eight stomachs....and eats all the time and to start counting cowpies would be a neverending rhyme
so are you sayin' our thoughts, yours included, are like piles of shit? are you saying that no matter what we let out, there's always more of it? what exactly are you saying, do you even know? just grab some glow sticks....and off to the rave we will go :).
(Thorb, you crack me up) | |
|
| LAST LINE BECOMES YOUR FIRST LINE OF AN 8 (EIGHT) LINE STANZA Posted: 10/16/2008 2:22:37 PM | just grab some glow sticks....and off to the rave we will go :) and on the way perhaps we'll pick up some more people and maybe we can stop in the city to see the latest art collection by then we might be hungry so something to eat would be a treat and as it's a beautiful night perhaps take a walk to see the city's light oh wait, a rave did you say? let's play there another day! :) | |
|
| |
| LAST LINE BECOMES YOUR FIRST LINE OF AN 8 (EIGHT) LINE STANZA Posted: 10/17/2008 2:23:26 PM | my self to you I bequeth and today it feels I beseech you to let it go....let me go my mind must stop this pain in my heart it's up to me to make a fresh start and release myself or else...... the pain could go on endlessly | |
|
| LAST LINE BECOMES YOUR FIRST LINE OF AN 8 (EIGHT) LINE STANZA Posted: 10/17/2008 3:02:20 PM | the pain could go on endlessly if you lived to infinity elsewise it will eventually stop until then maybe you should just hop
you could soak that stub in some epsin salts or drop some pills to make it halt either way you're knocked out of the game replaced in a blink, since we're all the same | |
|
| LAST LINE BECOMES YOUR FIRST LINE OF AN 8 (EIGHT) LINE STANZA Posted: 10/17/2008 3:10:46 PM | replaced in a blink, since we're all the same my ego won't let me play that game I got bluer eyes and nicer hair and as for my sexual prowess, well I won't go there if all are my equal it's hard to see why everyone's not as pretty as me I may not be the very best but I'm much better than you (surely I jest) | |
|
| LAST LINE BECOMES YOUR FIRST LINE OF AN 8 (EIGHT) LINE STANZA Posted: 10/17/2008 6:55:43 PM | But I'm much better than you I am the epitome of perfection every eye as I walk by Turns in my direction
People weep when I arrive They feel so lucky to be alive To live on the same earth as I I'll bet this gets a reply
This is so not true:) | |
|
| LAST LINE BECOMES YOUR FIRST LINE OF AN 8 (EIGHT) LINE STANZA Posted: 10/17/2008 7:45:55 PM | I'll bet this gets a reply It will, i start to cry I baked you dinner, I hope you fry You never came home for dinner
I lost my day sweeping floors, doing laundry, pressing shirts You said your at the office, in truth you were but chasing skirts I care not about your conquests nor about your daily flirts Just burn in Hell you sinner | |
|
| LAST LINE BECOMES YOUR FIRST LINE OF AN 8 (EIGHT) LINE STANZA Posted: 10/17/2008 7:51:38 PM | Just burn in Hell you sinner came drifting down the hall we must continue dinner before we chase that ball
Lost like a puppy out in the rain those neighbours sure need help let another do it if its all the same I'd rather be eating kelp | |
|
| LAST LINE BECOMES YOUR FIRST LINE OF AN 8 (EIGHT) LINE STANZA Posted: 10/17/2008 8:01:26 PM | I'd rather be eating kelp then scream and ask for help a drowning dog does yelp but I aint no dog a-drowning
I know the things I hate as you throw scraps from your plate you can love me or berate just walk off and take the pounding | |
|
| LAST LINE BECOMES YOUR FIRST LINE OF AN 8 (EIGHT) LINE STANZA Posted: 10/17/2008 9:27:35 PM | just walk off and take the pounding of your heart as something astounding for the duration of its beating in the larger picture, is fleeting so enjoy it while it lasts as a link between the past and the future of those who follow makes your chest sound not so hollow | |
|
| LAST LINE BECOMES YOUR FIRST LINE OF AN 8 (EIGHT) LINE STANZA Posted: 10/18/2008 4:42:25 AM | ^^
makes your chest sound not so hollow especially when it's filled with sorrow which can tend to take over sometimes carrying into tomorrow
one can choose to hold on to this pain, or sometimes the best course of action is to let go and follow your heart again into the arms of a new attraction | |
|
| LAST LINE BECOMES YOUR FIRST LINE OF AN 8 (EIGHT) LINE STANZA Posted: 10/18/2008 7:05:42 AM | Into the arms of new attraction Self seeking satisfaction Hateful words without retraction And I am left to cry
Have I suffered from delusion That your love was an illusion With it pain in it's conclusion That leaves me asking why | |
|
| LAST LINE BECOMES YOUR FIRST LINE OF AN 8 (EIGHT) LINE STANZA Posted: 10/18/2008 8:20:16 AM | That leaves me asking why you left without a single goodbye...... left me staring at the nights sky... wishing upon the stars with a silent sigh....
That leaves me asking why.... all alone with the tears i cry... the pain instilled as heartache flies... inside is silent as my heart begins to die.... | |
|
| LAST LINE BECOMES YOUR FIRST LINE OF AN 8 (EIGHT) LINE STANZA Posted: 10/18/2008 8:52:36 AM | inside is silent as my heart begins to die.... cries from peripheral parts engulf with a... why me was so lonely then came the us without a fuss this dissolves in lost trust
moulding some pain-filled seasonal brain-kill I wander these waters in my silent shouts charities keep calling but nobody's home to pay the bill so those lights that were on ... go out. | |
|