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Posted: 10/26/2009 3:42:46 PM | what ever you say it late
your fate has just been sealed
solidified, written in stone, no more debate
too late to tell how your really feel
Muster up anger, go ahead and cry
makes no difference to none of us if you die
you had you chance to speak, instead you choose to listen
next time do what I tell you and listen to your intuition | |
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Posted: 10/26/2009 5:02:26 PM | listen to your intuition
and good things will come to fruition
at least that's what the laymen say
and wouldn't have it another way
do the math is what I say
math won't lie then run away
intuition fine for picking out a song
too easy to forget all the times it was wrong | |
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Posted: 10/26/2009 7:46:57 PM | too easy to forget all the times it was wrong
as he merrily hogged Edward's bong
King Tut most certainly had the driest schlong
but Dear Prudence didn't come out to play along
math is for the fags we smoke
counting til the end of a bloke
not a pretty sight like a wrinkled toke
hospital will make you broke | |
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Posted: 10/26/2009 8:06:12 PM | hospital will make you broke
looking at the bill i almost choked
i thought i would have a massive stroke
i almost cried
the balance of life is way off center
into oblivion i have finally entered
where in the hell is my mentor
when i need him | |
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Posted: 10/26/2009 8:30:29 PM | when i need him
there is peace enough to share
and i find him there beside the river
waiting for the moon to bare
a silver bit of lullabye
a shimmer of my dreams
and watching him i find i need
less from him than it seems | |
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Posted: 10/26/2009 8:31:17 PM | when i need him
he's never there
and when I don't
he pretends to care
his threads are bare
his persona slim
and I'm not really sure
if he's really a him | |
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Posted: 10/26/2009 8:32:03 PM | when I need him comforted in share
battled ferocious understood care
mentor battled stood with still
stood with me blood red shrill
balance forgotten in centre
light snuffed in false scepture
stained in heart is small tattoo
coloured idealistic cherish skies blue
(Ooops....walked on everbody here, and I apologize.) | |
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Posted: 10/26/2009 8:35:30 PM | less from him than it seems (for those of us payin' attention. I am joking!)
if he's really a him
i'll take his steady streams
of coming and going on a whim
he was a wee willy wonka
played a big army bean man
never with a toy tonka
then shot people into the can | |
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Posted: 10/26/2009 8:38:47 PM | then shot people into the can
but i got rock salt in the can
for leaving the tonka in the garden
after stealing half a row
i wish that i had seen , though
the melon and the beans
it wasn't worth the 'maters
and silly brown potaters | |
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Posted: 10/26/2009 8:43:06 PM | and silly brown potaters
derelict shipped freighters
sailed in the failed sun
clouded in the beaches fun
silver lined with rust
in brown taters trust
always going on gone
merriment in relaxed fun | |
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Posted: 10/26/2009 8:43:28 PM | silly brown potaters
with ears as big as dumbo
and a nose all bumpy and yellow
like the little corn you find in gumbo
converse or keds on his feet
and a belly that would make good fries
and big horn rim glasses like groucho's
covering big button eyes | |
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Posted: 10/26/2009 8:54:18 PM | covering big button eyes
stuffed straw Sally implies
hallowed 'een an/ lil' feet
desired for a small treat
pumpkins rising, grow large
snoopy dogs left in charge
another adage held miss
lookin; for great pumpkin kiss..
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Posted: 10/26/2009 9:01:16 PM | merriment in relaxed fun
flying on the back of a dragon
soaring o'er sea and mountain
watch the setting of the sun
see the moon begin to rise
upon her back we soar the skies
her flight is fast yet soft we glide
sharing this beautiful night ride
ahhh....phone call while writing....oh well.... | |
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Posted: 10/26/2009 9:05:58 PM | sharing this beautiful night ride
distant heard are wolves cried
contented held in moonlit bay
hand each in held spirit stay
dancing silent in moonbeam
that quieted on surface seem
simple walk on moonlight beach
held gentle each soft the peach
(say...is that the phone I hear? No worries...just another telephone solicitation..)
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Posted: 10/26/2009 9:11:22 PM | held gentle each soft the peach
held within love's tender reach
caressing hearts with rhythmic beat
walking close to hold the heat
wind battering with ocean wave
finding shelter in a cave
velvet darkness all around
embracing hearts where love is found
giggling....hey T :) | |
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Posted: 10/26/2009 9:11:41 PM | held gentle each soft the peach
in his hand as he kissed her cheek
the moon danced with jupiter
he couldn't keep up with her
and set in the west
final kiss
and what do you think he missed?
a moon full of passion twice kissed.
too fast for me tonight. good sleep, all. | |
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Posted: 10/26/2009 10:25:42 PM | a moon full of passion twice kissed
trickles with a trenchant for swampy mist
where ghouls stir pools of bloody stews
on which gaseous massless souls subsist
a cross embossed with droopy moss
marks the place where a life was lost
a hand upthrust knobby and knurled
from an underworld where hate is hurled | |
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Posted: 10/26/2009 10:30:23 PM | from an underworld where hate is hurled,
there I stumble upon you, curled,
cowering in a corner,
just south of the border,
wondering what happened to my world? | |
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Posted: 10/26/2009 10:34:27 PM | a moon full of passion twice kissed
surely your soul will be missed
a trumphet I desire to hear
when the good lord calls me near
kissed, loved, not turned away
back to the other side he would say
scorned, forlorn, to hell no doubt
sin tried to get in, but was cast right out | |
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Posted: 10/26/2009 10:44:55 PM | OOPS! I didn't use eight lines.
Am I going to get kicked out of the poetry corner now? Can I at least be given a warning and time out?
sin tried to get in, but was cast right out
cast right out
with original sin
if sin was cast out
then was all of the hoopla about
and what would define
original...
sin? | |
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Posted: 10/26/2009 11:04:47 PM | sin, lets see what was it about
was it adam and eve,
that needed reprieve
for committing, not submitting
not able to follow instruction
surely the snake the lye in wait
had something to do with the destruction
if you know more please relate | |
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Posted: 10/27/2009 4:12:10 AM | if you know more please relate
results of the sin were great
Cain was of the evil one
his twin Abel, Adam's son
of the fruit did Eve partake
for satan was not a snake
serpent is just a title
hiding of the sin, vital | |
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Posted: 10/27/2009 6:35:53 AM | hiding of the sin, vital
if word gets out your effed
friends would fall like autumn leaves
if they ever learned of the theft
if you can come up with an original sin
then by all means commit it
but what you done with your smoking gun
ought to get you committed | |
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Posted: 10/27/2009 8:16:29 AM | ought to get you committed
you have been submitted
the prosecution has not rested
was Cain convicted, Eve restricted
woman on trial for killing her abuser
a sin to live or kill trying to, is loser
dead, or her instead on trial for his death
took his life to have hers all though story she wept
court tv now | |
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