joro
| | Joined: 12/2/2007
Msg: 7701 | |
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all though story she wept
as i grunted whatever
rolled over and slept
there aint all that much
thats left new to see
as my friend John Prine once sang
'if hardaches were commercials, we'd all be on TV' | |
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Thorb
| | Joined: 7/15/2005
Msg: 7702 | |
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Posted: 10/27/2009 4:57:17 PM | 'if hardaches were commercials, we'd all be on TV'
came bouncing across the airwaves to me
Johnny kept singing in that bluegrass drawl
while I watched my baby put on her shawl
Off to the rodeo we were going to go now
though with little droplets falling like milk from a cow
I put on my rain gear looking like a canary
at least that beats being cold, wet and hairy | |
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joro
| | Joined: 12/2/2007
Msg: 7703 | |
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Posted: 10/27/2009 5:49:31 PM | at least that beats being cold, wet and hairy
i dont blink on circumstance and refuse to be wary
i may die in hell and that couldbe quite scary
but theres nuthin im awake of that i care bout
i grin to the left wondering bout the shrills i new
and still look death in the eye and for what i did screw
that i am still sucking air is still up for doubts
you can shut up or pay up we are here for the routes | |
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Posted: 10/27/2009 6:00:40 PM | you can shut up or pay up we are here for the routes
deriding derailing delving deeper delighteed
can't walk away increasing cerebral pleasures
soul singing softly whether another will ever realize
funny the way it was, is, will be
oceans deepening mysteries of blue
mermen watching silently over the keep
gently softly mermaids balance | |
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Posted: 10/27/2009 6:27:04 PM | gently soft mermaids balance
ocean creatures held in trance
rythyms ocean in blue depth swim
netted never spirit free again begin
ocean soothing sounds on shore
mermaids soft subtle admire more
magical mysterious heard and seen
sleek of line in oceans depth keen | |
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Posted: 10/27/2009 6:35:49 PM | at least that beats being cold wet and hairy
likewise, fat, dumb and crazy?better yet how bout lazy
rather be smart, cute, kind and honest, with a heart
compared to a big stupid can of lard, how far can we take it
to truly make it diet, excercise, confident with a lot of parts
can you handle being soft yet hard, truthful, not deceitful, and fit
cowboys to rodeos, drunks to bars, women on venus, men on mars
Candle to the wind, life is such a sin, ever wish you could go out and come back again
Guess I'm a little late sorry | |
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Posted: 10/27/2009 6:45:35 PM | (No concern Ms sinlove, no worries....)
Guess I'm a little late sorry
Dollar short an' day late story
Never late just early expected
Rythyms in own time respected
Candle light in window bright
Welcome beacon in the night
Fit to stand in tempest storms
Candle light in life warms
(Hugs) | |
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Posted: 10/27/2009 6:46:30 PM | 
Meh!!! Can't keep up with you quick ppls! ;)
sleek of line in oceans depth keen
watching waters ebb and flow
rising majestic, tender goddess
shining in moon's depth
porpoises nearby dance lightly
guarding thier angel while others will sleep
dolphins sing sweet lullabies
meeting adonis in eternity's throes | |
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joro
| | Joined: 12/2/2007
Msg: 7709 | |
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Posted: 10/27/2009 7:06:17 PM | meeting adonis in eternity's throes
my toenails in their city grows
i wont bail for my city knows
that i aint quite down on it this time
adonis does kill and gives me the creeps
you can do what u want but it may give ne the creeps
i can bail tomorrow yet run from wheeps
i can die and still know that i can rhyme | |
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joro
| | Joined: 12/2/2007
Msg: 7710 | |
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Posted: 10/27/2009 8:26:29 PM | i can die and still know that i can rhyme
the question is will i be on time
or shall i weep cause the rhythm I can't keep
thank you for warm candle I thought neat
crossing lines, good sign, still being lost in the beat
thorb I miss you warm embrace van still rockin
cops still knockn yet I want more, put your feet
up, you know the score. Luri you, Luri you | |
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Posted: 10/28/2009 3:21:43 AM | now my head hurts and I can't go to sleep
keep hearing the clock go beep, beep, beep
I hear the bell tolling, its tolling for me
but I can not go back to sleep
so I get up and the coffee I'll put on
wish someone was hear, we could right a song
I'm finish now I'll stop, I'm all done for the day
won't someone please come out and play? | |
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Posted: 10/28/2009 3:33:53 AM | won't someone please come out and play
we can walk in the rain this cool autumn day
and talk of the times when we were young
before we had children and we'd dance in the sun
then stay up all night watching the ocean
hearing the waves under the stars
imagining taking a spaceship to mars
mind running free in our new love journey | |
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Posted: 10/28/2009 10:30:46 AM | mind running free in our new love journey
as wildness of jungles beasts invades a thought
scratching through the barriers of daily muck
so bleeds new life from wounds in which we're caught
the journey stops and starts in strangest ways
the twist of mountain railways in its track
toss free hearts' imprisoned longings
when the brain feels out of whack | |
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Posted: 10/28/2009 12:27:14 PM | when the brain feels out of whack
a blown fuse
a hacker's hack
every thought under attack
mental abuse
a sacker's sack
all interests seems to lack
colors might as well be black | |
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Posted: 10/28/2009 1:28:17 PM | ha hah hah ha
colors might as well be black
or colorful as your prose
anyway the meds i took today
have me coming right back to say
all brand new and smiling pretty
just hope for something witty
so you can smile
just for a little while
heres to whatever makes your day! | |
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Posted: 10/28/2009 2:21:25 PM | just for a little while
I thought I knew you
but what did I know
perhaps just a reflection
or misconception
of someone long ago
who reached in under my skin
and gently touched my soul | |
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Posted: 10/28/2009 3:48:22 PM | and gently touched my soul
as rain from mountain mists
and sea sprays' wanton kiss
and gently filled my mind
as air from arid dessert storms
and dry skies' stellar forms
and gently tore my skin
as ether through a solid mass
and inklings of reminders past
and from it all may all feel whole | |
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Posted: 10/28/2009 4:54:02 PM | from it all may all feel whole
set right down and pipe a bowl
let the whole drift into parts
to reassemble lacking darts
before they're thrown at innocents
have you smoked your penitence
now exhale and follow the trail
from whence it came behind love's veil | |
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Posted: 10/28/2009 6:18:02 PM | from whence it came behind love's veil
covered, smothered struggling for light
distance looming with each close step
mayhap to close distance would lesson the variable
patience simmering over cold and hot
pots ne'er boil with eyes trained there
watching foolish games unravel into
darkness abysmal..yes | |
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Posted: 10/28/2009 6:19:02 PM | from whence it came behind love's veil
you know I thought something smelled
the words were sour, tasteless and nasty
actually I thought she get her a$$ kicked
acting innocent, fresh, airy and free
yet her words stung like a bee
where is that girl who welcomed me on
I haven't seen her in so long even post gone?
Hello, hugs to you too  | |
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Posted: 10/28/2009 6:32:55 PM | Hello, hugs to you too
happy trails until you're through
sliding through time on a whim and a rhyme
is there anything better to do?
digging words from out of the dirt
dusting them off with the cuff of your shirt
string them together like beads on a tether
and make sure that no one gets hurt | |
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Posted: 10/28/2009 6:52:08 PM | (back to juju)
darkness abysmal, yes
and in the tunnel of pitch
deep below the surface
hope flips a switch
eerieness flattens, yes
a beam of light to shadows
then the walls we built
fade to glass- who knows... | |
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Posted: 10/28/2009 7:46:21 PM | then the walls we built fade to glass
who knows what will really come to pass
when a fortress we create around us
when all can see us falling fast....
learning to fall is one of life's paths
like Alice in Wonderland fell through the cracks
where a magical adventure awaited her flight
in the end she returned with altered sight | |
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Posted: 10/28/2009 9:00:17 PM | in the end she returned with altered sight
and visions of sugarplums, oh, dear....
wrong story but rose glasses are smudged
and lead poisoning sucks, i fear.
through the looking glass perspective
changes regardless the spit shine
and my reflection sticks its tongue out
much resigned to mirror mine | |
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