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Posted: 10/30/2009 5:15:15 AM | i quit that so you gotta keep sweeping
while my tea in hot water is still steeping
those times in my life are slowly seeping
into the past where memories are fleeting
'cept my dearest ex at parties down on all fours
crawling through rooms lost in his dark corridor
caught in a vision within his own drunken prison
my heart would bleed for the love he could not receive | |
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Posted: 10/30/2009 10:39:28 AM | my heart would bleed for the love he could not receive
his cave littered with castings what carrion would
flap silent wings for....and brains spilt on the floor;
remote control tucked into a cushion also long
fogotten as the world he denied for its cruelty
and self-absorbed autistic mind clutched
all of them against only me...lost in clawing greed,
naught seeing smeared of crimson, any love that be. | |
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Posted: 10/30/2009 11:21:36 AM | i quit that so you gotta keep sweeping
it's what women do the best
moreso than weeping
i'd give you the test
but i'm as sure as i can be
without my mum
i'd not be me
glad i'm not a tum
(Good job Joro!) | |
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Posted: 10/30/2009 8:27:36 PM | some days are better than others....
i stepped on the wrong thread line. carry on
the wayward wordward meanderings
into my glass of scotch. pray tell,
what line would ring or what line to use
between tin cans? let's make this work!
the maze we weave can be unwove just ask
Ariadne for a spool devine, untwine and lead
His Wandership back to the beach..it's a reach.... | |
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Posted: 10/30/2009 9:42:16 PM | His Wandership back to the beach..it's a reach....
the sitcom qualities of it leave me without speach
I am glad I concluded a Sneech is a Sneech
Sylvester McMonkey McBean can sell his machine elsewhere
I stepped on the thread and now Fred is dead
and I cant nail down the next line to be said which is why i said this line instead
he bled and he's dead, but what im worried 'bout is my standing cred
without my cred i shall faint in despair without care
(i know ive picked a fight or two in my day, but in Last Line, cant we all get along?) | |
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Posted: 10/30/2009 10:02:38 PM | (thanks Luri and Wear1)
without my cred i shall faint in despair without a care
but won't stop me from trying to get a new icebox
the purser won't loan me a dime not even on a dare
so i'll trick him by cutting off his dreadlocks
living on the lam or on a shoestring
never stopped my need for more
step into my world of flyin' on a wing
it's a candy shop delighter's galore | |
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Posted: 10/30/2009 10:21:29 PM | it's a candy shop delighter's galore
on the street at night we're all a whore
all i can think of is that i need more
of anything that parts me from me
last call has been called and my liver's shot
brandy betrayed me as i head for the cot
staring at the ceiling counting battles lost fought
who knew surrendering would set us free | |
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Posted: 10/30/2009 10:33:55 PM | who knew surrendering would set us free
cried the indians when the spaniards landed
all throughout history we took time for tea
as restrictions morays and kings commanded
those from any free or loving place
to squander bow and vilify their creed
there is no land of the free without a trace
history shows the hypocrits of pursed breed | |
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Posted: 10/30/2009 11:55:56 PM | history shows the hypocrits of pursed breed
sadly in power when many were thieves
too often coming from a place of greed
selling out...especially our trees.....
thirty years ago the news was lined
with dangers chopping down our forests of rain
so what happened in the meantime?
nothing changed and no one refrained.... | |
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Posted: 10/31/2009 4:36:09 AM | nothing changed and no one refrained
will our earth ever be healthy again
take the focus off the greed
put it on responsibility
what a wonderful word
standing a part from the herd
integrity is part of the solution too
i know together we can see it through | |
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Posted: 10/31/2009 4:43:35 AM | I know together
we can see it through
if greed we surrender
and return to honour
our beautiful earth mother
for she is straining under our weight
freedom to change might be too late
please help me stop our destructive state | |
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Posted: 10/31/2009 7:12:41 AM | please help me stop our destructive state
well now you opened a debate
our fun and frolic put to stop
like axe to wood you ve chopped
so love passes on singing her song
christ it has been so long since halloween
will i trick or will i treat bet this will cause steam
goons and goblins a face with a knob on it
see what scary stories we can knit  | |
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Posted: 10/31/2009 7:52:42 AM | See what scary stories we can knit
In these dark and uncertain times
Some of the lurkers in shadows are full of 'it'
And some of us are full of rhymes!
Red herrings and Dover soul
Something fishy on the starboard
Hook, line and sinker is their goal
But they didn't bank on the good Lord!  | |
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Posted: 10/31/2009 8:07:32 AM | But they didn't bank on the good Lord!
nor those of us with good hearts
they only chose what they chose to see
couldnt realize it wasn't me
wasn't me in that dark custume
spreading hate and spreading dome
well well it's not to late, pray lord you'll open gate
open gate to my heart so all can see and relate | |
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Posted: 10/31/2009 8:18:22 AM | Open gate to my heart so all can see and relate
And realise intervention - pre-planned fate
Ours is not to reason why
As long as truth we don't deny
Our hearts hold songs so dear and so clear
Ringing out loud - holding no unknown fear | |
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Posted: 10/31/2009 9:29:16 AM | holding no unknown fear
i put my courage into gear
and step upon the tightrope high
hoping for balance so near the sky
now from way up here the air is clear
watching sun then moon appear
for in the darkness of this night
vision comes through candlelight | |
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Posted: 10/31/2009 9:59:02 AM | Dang you all are good
vision comes through candlelight
not just by plane sight
sometimes it's a feeling, my heart sent reelin'
no good deed undone
is just pun for those of us on the run
Stop today, with words I say
and even more with heart
love unconditional from the start | |
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Posted: 10/31/2009 10:00:01 AM | vision comes through candlelight
threads of heat wind ethereal
through cold air of our making;
i see you on the other side-
afraid of flames that lick but
never burn ...you'll never know;
wrapped and rapt in heat of
her grace you wax regretful . | |
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Posted: 10/31/2009 11:04:56 AM | her grace you wax regretful
not knowing what her soul is
a candle lit to burn,
or feel what others yearn
to invite in darkness lit
or burn the one you spit
yes a candle or torch it seems
to invite hope or torch dreams | |
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Posted: 10/31/2009 7:10:35 PM | love, unconditional from the start,
invites hope and a torch of dreams,
what flare like red through boughs
of autumn's fire unleashed.
each season loves its past and future,
beckons one follow its own flames;
a love begins, endures, and passes
without thought for what it is.
sinluv, patched the pieces into the first two lines...thanks for running with it :) | |
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Posted: 10/31/2009 10:09:23 PM | without thought for what it is
A hive of countless swarming bees
I am out of reason to remain this
Come with us and sail the seas of cheese | |
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Posted: 11/1/2009 2:45:54 AM | sail the seas of cheese
tag along this flight of geese
for we are venturing southbound
where warmth of air is to be found
before this year's winter frost appears
cooling fingers, toes and lobes of ears
before the arrival of heavy snow and ice
come with us where the warmth is nice | |
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Posted: 11/1/2009 4:29:53 AM | come with us were the warth is nice
out were there is no ice, no cold, no rain,
there is a kindred spirit here,
takes up all of the atomosphere
to be so warm and so kind.
I could almost call you a friend of mine
wounldn't it be nicee and wouldn't it be funny
to look up and see sinlov where its sunny
Hope halloween was Great for eveyone! | |
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Posted: 11/1/2009 7:37:51 AM | no one up yet I'll continue. Hope freddie didn't get you'll.
to look up and see sinlov where its sunny
on the beach in swimming gear,
while folks back home shovel, would be cunning
in another place with no fear,
a lovely plan to get away, I sincerely hope you enjoy your stay
meanwhile the homefront, i'll be here
have safe harbour, this I pray, on the beach on which you lay
have fun in the sun see you next year | |
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