| LAST LINE REPEATED STANZAS using 8 lines Posted: 11/2/2009 7:24:37 PM | together we could light up the darkest sky like the full moon glowing so bright tonight even behind clouds its light prevails as if floating behind a thousand veils imagine us flying on her lunar sails or we could be equally swimming in sea so free to be whatever we wish imagine us underwater now we are fish
oh dear...that last line suddenly brings to mind Seuss's 'One fish, two fish, red fish, blue fish'...and Pooh's 'Now we are Six'.....the very first book I remember having besides, 'Curious George', 'Are you my mother?' and 'The Little Red Engine that Could'....hmmm...seems all those books have played a significant role in my identity search all these years! (smile) | |
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| LAST LINE REPEATED STANZAS using 8 lines Posted: 11/2/2009 9:37:24 PM | imagine us underwater now we are fish and now up in the air on our favorite dish somehow i think that we just got your wish
somehow it just doesn't pay to give in to the red and the yellow and little blue fin that are swimming in vain in our book on a whim
yes you can, yes i may, and so cindy lou joins in with the last phrase and laughs with us too
we can do this WeAreOne....ha! (i really wanted to latinize and "grinchus " this one, LOL) | |
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| LAST LINE REPEATED STANZAS using 8 lines Posted: 11/3/2009 4:12:38 AM | Joins in with the last phrase and laughs with us too The elephant, the falcon and the kangaroo The hyena was on a dinner date contemplate What it ate! A little birdie told us 'date with fate' Then the hyena arrived literally spitting feathers The birdie fluttered in the stomach - no tethers! The animals watched as the bulge became animated With a hiccup the hyena burped and the birdie was free & elated! | |
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| LAST LINE REPEATED STANZAS using 8 lines Posted: 11/3/2009 4:22:25 AM | the birdie was free and elated and fortunately, not really gestated, but the hyena's appetite was not saturated.... eyeing the elephant, falcon and kangaroo they knew exactly what to do they took that hyena and sat her down to calm her body, heart and mind before she lost her grip with their friendship
actually, last year we had fun on a crazy thread a friend started called something like dr. seuss comes to oz....i'll see if i can find it.... | |
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| LAST LINE REPEATED STANZAS using 8 lines Posted: 11/3/2009 4:29:25 AM | Hope you find said thread!
Before she lost her grip with their friendship And wondered if it had all been a dream Like that song 'merrily and gently down...' Drifting on a metaphorical stream Lost in unconsciousness where shadows floated And said nothing at all - she lost her own voice Drifting on silent water in light which was boated No paddle; just light piercing the shadows - rejoice! | |
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| LAST LINE REPEATED STANZAS using 8 lines Posted: 11/3/2009 4:51:49 AM | just light piercing the shadows...rejoice! of course seeing it is always by choice for we can bask in sunshine even in the rain or be determined never to love any other again
light piercing the shadows....rejoice! can happen even with a silent voice quietly sitting or walking or being breathe and listen to your heart beating
took a little while, but found it.....no time to resurrect it now, but here's the name anyway....The Notplace Where Dr Seuss Lands In Oz | |
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| LAST LINE REPEATED STANZAS using 8 lines Posted: 11/3/2009 1:05:23 PM | breathe and listen to your heart beating enjoy the moment that can be so fleeting let it take you to the land of oz while skipping and singing your tra la la's
does the beat quicken or slow way down as peace within melts away the frown what do you see in your brief small respite light of the heavens or darkness of night | |
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| LAST LINE REPEATED STANZAS using 8 lines Posted: 11/3/2009 1:49:54 PM | Light of the Heavens or darkness of night? Forever you're Saved or Forever to Fight? The actions you take, the decisions you make "Freedom of Choice", a dangerous right
For good seldom used Most commonly abused Murdered Lovers, Childless Mothers When we will see how our choice affects others? | |
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| LAST LINE REPEATED STANZAS using 8 lines Posted: 11/3/2009 3:45:00 PM | When we will see how our choice affects others? probably when it comes home to roost which is a day late later than it not bothers left cognizant and less than full juiced
freedom of choice is a right folks deserve for there are born souls that are tossed away Ive been down that road and possess the nerve self righteousness is but a way to delay
(I cant give birth, but I am a motherless child, thank you, you can chill out now. i have seen alot of death that people lived through because of this belief on the street. ugly. short term ethics dont buy a life . they never have and never will.) | |
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| LAST LINE REPEATED STANZAS using 8 lines Posted: 11/3/2009 4:46:48 PM | self righteousness is but a way to delay mulling of a crowd with one minded goal to erase the freedoms of sacks race relay erasing the innocence of an infinite whole
bar the differences ban the unique fear foreign thinkers or foreign lands lends reasons to shun the oblique to tar and feather those you fear of colored bands | |
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| LAST LINE REPEATED STANZAS using 8 lines Posted: 11/3/2009 5:17:53 PM | to tar and feather those you fear of colored bands and yet just shed off the rest that demands I could give a shit, i am a man that just stands i will stare down your joke in the corner
i aint gonna blink, the past is long done i can dance in the street while you think that its fun all it takes to blow days a madman with a gun though i could live in a place a tad warmer | |
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| LAST LINE REPEATED STANZAS using 8 lines Posted: 11/3/2009 8:24:08 PM | though i could live in a place a tad warmer i love the deep chill in my bones yeah, i'm a bit of a performer but you know there is no place like home
the warmth of my soup is cooking i love the silence of the night i long ago stopped looking knowing everything is going to be alright | |
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| LAST LINE REPEATED STANZAS using 8 lines Posted: 11/3/2009 10:47:22 PM | knowing everything is going to be alright the feeling of kissing my children goodnight my bills and mortgage i'm able to pay everything in my home im thankful for that i pray
tomorrow is not guaranteed why today i provide everything my family may need why once the day is through i tell everyone in my home....i love you | |
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| LAST LINE REPEATED STANZAS using 8 lines Posted: 11/3/2009 11:45:10 PM | i tell everyone in my home....i love you two bunnies a snake and a bucket of worms oh and in there i think there's a manchild, dude! (always in search of a homey zoo?) and they all tell me they love me especially when it is night dinner time or breakfast or lunch or snack just because they're hungry and i am the mommy... | |
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| LAST LINE REPEATED STANZAS using 8 lines Posted: 11/4/2009 3:23:04 AM | They're hungry and I am the mommy... I provide for the offspring When the little 'un's bored I will sing Then we'll go and feed the ducks As they dive for bread and give us looks And walk amongst the autumn leaves Kicking them in glee as spider weaves A web glistening amongst branches of trees | |
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| LAST LINE REPEATED STANZAS using 8 lines Posted: 11/4/2009 5:25:34 AM | A web glistening amongst branches of trees I'm caught in the magic they weave jewels line the street in the shape of leaves trees blown bare no covering it needs sap running down safely to the ground knowing winter's white coat will weigh it down twist and turns of branches we see eye catches the one holding the swing for me | |
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| LAST LINE REPEATED STANZAS using 8 lines Posted: 11/4/2009 5:30:31 AM | a web glistening amongst branches of trees catching the morning dew entwined within the autumn leaves of red and golden hue....
the winds of autumn rose and grew sending leaves into a tail spin now the trees are looking wintry such beauty found in autumn....
ahh....sun...love your poem! synchronicity strikes again...just skip me please...
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| LAST LINE REPEATED STANZAS using 8 lines Posted: 11/4/2009 6:46:38 AM | Eye catches the one holding the swing for me Such beauty found in autumn.... encrust A rainbow of colours and synchronicity The swing's frame the colour of rust Blending in with the leaves of gold, copper and red The one pushing the child on the swing dressed in pastels The child in mittens giggling in glee - a pink hat on her head As she clings to the swing's chains and is lost in autumn's spells | |
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| LAST LINE REPEATED STANZAS using 8 lines Posted: 11/4/2009 10:47:12 AM | As she clings to the swing's chains and is lost in autumn's spells she breathes deeply feeling the newness touch her lungs swinging just for fun ... higher and higher stretch her back, laying nearly flat hair dragging the ground dreams floating around in her head silly to think they'd come true of life, she didn't have a clue | |
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| LAST LINE REPEATED STANZAS using 8 lines Posted: 11/4/2009 2:03:18 PM | of life she didn't have a clue her life is so so blue all her smiles turned into frowns shes lost her crown she fears tomorrow , with an aching sorrow never hoping for a new day love she sought has blown away | |
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| LAST LINE REPEATED STANZAS using 8 lines Posted: 11/4/2009 2:48:31 PM | love she sought has blown away insergent's voice make others pray swayed by righteous misinterpretation prone to masterminding indignation if hell exists they won't need an invitation you'll find them with little investigation now she needs a new home and plan she also needs a new good man | |
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| LAST LINE REPEATED STANZAS using 8 lines Posted: 11/4/2009 3:29:31 PM | she also needs a new good man give her something to believe in hold her tight while dancing in the kitchen turning on one fire while turning off the other supper is forgotten on the stove | |
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| LAST LINE REPEATED STANZAS using 8 lines Posted: 11/4/2009 3:56:07 PM | on the stove where women belong is where i drove her interior with my tong we gyrated to some tunes she melted into my arm never knew she read my runes that had her within my charm | |
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| LAST LINE REPEATED STANZAS using 8 lines Posted: 11/4/2009 4:18:50 PM | that had her within my charm that screams as an alarm scrare off more than it attracts to each his own we all have our ways of throwing stones making sure they don't come back | |
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| LAST LINE REPEATED STANZAS using 8 lines Posted: 11/4/2009 8:20:09 PM | making sure they don't come back the fears the years and that old cat the one in the song remember that? but i'll take the return of the seals the osprey, spring, your sparkling eyes like effervescent bubbles in my glass.... | |
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