| LATE..8..EIGHT LINE STANZAS Posted: 2/1/2007 6:47:34 PM | Only when words are in play Can I think of something to say. Sometimes they're intense or make no sense Yet each word is it's own As I write another poem and hope that this time I wrote another rhyme.
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| LATE..8..EIGHT LINE STANZAS Posted: 2/1/2007 6:53:51 PM | I wrote another ryhme, Cause I am feeling oh so fine.... My words,,,,,make sense,,,, this is my defense,,,, So when they dont....just flash,,, you can be sure,,,,,,I am having a blast... I will maybe be back tommorrow. ALL depends,,,,,on the sorrow... | |
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| LATE..8..EIGHT LINE STANZAS Posted: 2/1/2007 7:00:44 PM | All depends on the sorrow of another rainy day whether I am home and can come out to play.
If the sun is shining you can be certain I will be outside dancing under the rainbow curtain. | |
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| LATE..8..EIGHT LINE STANZAS Posted: 2/1/2007 9:06:26 PM | under the rainbow curtain. lurks a carefully colored shade iridescence to be certain shimmering in the summers haze
is that what you mean by direct straight to the point ,no interrupt ? what if that's just my point and even real is all made up | |
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| CREE ATE..8..EIGHT LINE STANZAS Posted: 2/1/2007 10:39:12 PM | and even real is all made up well of course it is you silly pup that’s the point of it you get to make it fit
for all you see in colours fine started out in someone’s mind until the dare to manifest nothing happens, just a test. | |
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| CREE ATE..8..EIGHT LINE STANZAS Posted: 2/1/2007 11:03:32 PM | Nothing happens, just a test to see if your the one I love best. Give me some sugar, let me taste those lips Your sweet nectar won't go to my hips.
Your so delicious, so tantalizing and yummy I can feel the butterflies dancin' in my tummy. Your such an addiction I can't get enough Passions arising, gentle and tough. | |
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| CREE ATE..8..EIGHT LINE STANZAS Posted: 2/2/2007 10:40:50 AM | Passions arising, gentle and tough never will you hear I've had enough
take me to the moon and the stars even backseats of cars
rest my head on a blanket under the sky oh sweet baby make me sigh
show me what you have to give be my lover as long as we live | |
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| CREATE..GREAT..EIGHT LINE STANZAS ONLY 8 Posted: 2/2/2007 1:00:33 PM | be my lover as long as we live forget there's nothing to forgive kiss my fingers and make me love you dream its a dream for only us two as for the blanket I'll go bare without adornments just my spiky hair you wrapped in rapture wishing we were already there | |
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| CREATE..GREAT..EIGHT LINE STANZAS ONLY 8 Posted: 2/2/2007 2:23:32 PM | Wishing we were already there watching you play with my cascading hair
music playing that leads to a seductive dance my fingers in your hair, which leads to your pants
buttons shall pop , zippers shall descend sweet bliss, let it not end
the scent of your body sets me on fire tonight you will fill my desire | |
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| CREATE..GREAT..EIGHT LINE STANZAS ONLY 8 Posted: 2/2/2007 3:01:19 PM | tonight you will fill my desire to the point just beyond the wire you will rule my emotions and be consoled by my utmost devotion
but be aware my wicked one more than words move this tongue I have other plans ,admit I must to drown you in a sea of lust | |
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| CREATE..GREAT..EIGHT LINE STANZAS ONLY 8 Posted: 2/2/2007 3:24:41 PM | To drown you in a sea of lust first I must prepair and take that tiny magic pill that'll take the curl right out your hair My reputation stood strong and firm when I was a younger man Now thanks to modern chemistry I know that it still can
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| CREATE..GREAT..EIGHT LINE STANZAS ONLY 8 Posted: 2/2/2007 4:29:25 PM | I know that it still can for it grows when in your hand
the desire you bring shall take me to places where I shall see no faces
only light, passion, and fire I will become lost by my own desire
the feeling takes me to a all time high no time for me to ask why | |
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| CREATE..GREAT..EIGHT LINE STANZAS ONLY 8 Posted: 2/2/2007 5:01:17 PM | no time for me to ask why we spread these countervailing lies tripping daisies with rose colored thorns superimposing our faces on the stars of porn to disguise ourselves with dreams of the great performers and deviants pretending a grace in state when they all really know its just a survival game because way down deep inside we are all the same | |
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| CO-CREATE..GREAT..EIGHT LINE STANZAS ONLY 8 Posted: 2/2/2007 5:17:30 PM | because way down deep inside we are all the same We breathe the same air no matter the name You call yourself by this lifetime alone And we all will find our way back home Regardless of our belief in who we think we are We might all return to some distant star So while we’re here, lets have some fun Ready or not, here I come. | |
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| CO-CREATE..GREAT..EIGHT LINE STANZAS ONLY 8 Posted: 2/2/2007 5:31:59 PM | Ready or not, here I come I have the strength, shall I share some
No need to do it alone, take my hand together we shall conquer this land
with destruction all around we cover this beast filled ground
our eyes in search of a place for cover my eyes slowly hover | |
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| CO-CREATE..GREAT..EIGHT LINE STANZAS ONLY 8 Posted: 2/2/2007 7:12:08 PM | my eyes slowly hover the horizon taking their time to scan the perfect outcropping for bison to be hunted by the greed of the man I noticed the placement lay perfectly In the rise of the new sun that morn As I rode off towards my destany My two horned friend I forewarn | |
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| CO-CREATE..GREAT..EIGHT LINE STANZAS ONLY 8 Posted: 2/2/2007 7:22:03 PM | My two horned friend I forewarn If I should strike your flesh shall be torn
Sharp are my weapons upon my head many have tried and they were left for dead
Try as you will to put up a fight I'll crush you with all of my might
A fight to the death is how it shall be tell me mister , will you mess with me | |
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| CO-CREATE..GREAT..EIGHT LINE STANZAS ONLY 8 Posted: 2/2/2007 7:46:12 PM | tell me mister , will you mess with me? I’ve pots of every colour they come Plenty of empty wall space lies free Vacantly waiting to become Their fullest potential of expression With brush stokes of genius true If you would honour my intention To paint all my landscapes with you. | |
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| CO-CREATE..GREAT..EIGHT LINE STANZAS ONLY 8 Posted: 2/2/2007 8:56:38 PM | ^^^^^^^^may I say "ravincause" that I absolutely love your poetry and style, makes me feel mediocre coming behind it, but I am just a novice learning the ropes from the greats! Peace
To paint all my landscapes with you as we sit beneath the golden oak tree under such beautiful skies of blue Watching the birds in flight passing through a star gazing night To watch your brush with it's majestic strokes sets my sights off of all other blokes | |
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| RECREATE PAINT EIGHT LINE STANZAS Posted: 2/2/2007 9:04:14 PM | sets my sights off of all other blokes for those of you who get the joke its either me and her and no other I only hug boys if they be my brother you might think its being funny to lick my ear and call me honey but mind your thoughts or board the bus to ME .SHE will always be the other one of us
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| RECREATE PAINT EIGHT LINE STANZAS Posted: 2/2/2007 9:31:02 PM | to ME .SHE will always be the other one of us nice to read your voice, hey Lyric! What’s the fuss? And hey wicked that was so sweet,…. but decidedly untrue. Some of the very nicest writes I’ve seen have come from you. We all inspire where we desire and see ourselves to be And all join hands to raise the fans of POF poetry Having fun inspiring each others muse tonight Must be silver slipstream rhythms drumming the moonlight | |
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| RECREATE PAINT EIGHT LINE STANZAS Posted: 2/2/2007 9:49:11 PM | silver slipstream rhythms drumming the moonlight or just a one out a million stars putting up a fight it don't matter ,I gots no problems my friend I miss you I just stutter ,I mean no one no harm to mend or kiss better I like these people they have lives of their own they don't think the whole world rests in their home they see that others just share an articular instance not an all out attack between every line of a post ,however distance | |
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| RECREATE PAINT EIGHT LINE STANZAS Posted: 2/2/2007 10:15:41 PM | not an all out attack between every line of a post ,however distance I must start with this line at Mr. Lyric’s insistence. I wonder if he’s truly firing on all pistons What kind of words will rhyme well with distance?
But he makes it fun here our Dear Host because He so graciously tidies up if anyone does Break the simple rules about eight rhymes this time He herds us right back if we step out of line | |
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| RECREATE PAINT EIGHT LINE STANZAS Posted: 2/2/2007 10:30:04 PM | he herds us right back if we step out of line enticing us, perhaps, with the lure of fine wine equally, tho’, the cadence of the rhyme scheme sends us off, each to one’s own dream there, to resolve our worries of the day to day whether we recall upon awakening, who can say things work themselves out, this much is true whether you will or you won’t, they always do | |
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| RECREATE PAINT EIGHT LINE STANZAS Posted: 2/3/2007 12:10:15 AM | whether you will or you won’t, they always do they don't let the words swallow up their shoes oh no not these high stepping phrase fanatics they taste that line then dig in and attack it its fun to run at the gums with silly little puns misspoke anecdotes about a blokes choked throat and you do too I see through to the real true you can't fool me with your quotes from Neseemoo | |
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