| Don't hesitate to RECREATE DEVIATE APPRECIATE EIGHT LINE STANZAS
Posted: 2/4/2007 11:27:40 AM | to have this awareness, takes away the feeling of blue,
men floating down onto this stage of our lives
with polished bald heads that no crew
cut could be air brushed onto. No expressive jives
do they say, just warble away as if they knew
that their very existence gives me heeby jeeby hives!
There’s something very strange I think, I do.
when altered consciousness survives
and the weirdness of being indigo blue
doesn’t go away but thrives
stark naked in public view.
Concerts sold out in upscale dives,
the unexpected success is true Blue. | |
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| Don't hesitate to RECREATE DEVIATE APPRECIATE EIGHT LINE STANZAS
Posted: 2/4/2007 1:08:38 PM | The unexpected success is true Blue
feel the extent of the bliss from the mountain top view
where splendor reigns as we sit in the tall grass
no words can touch us , no matter how crass
we've fought to get to this place in time
nothing shall falter, the power is devine
walking ahead through flowers in bloom
making our way home, for it's noon | |
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| Appologize for I did DEVIATE EIGHT LINE STANZAS
Posted: 2/4/2007 1:32:45 PM | making our way home, for it's noon
OH mY GOD! I posted too soon!
I forgot to mention
I wasn’t paying attention
I thought I was in the 1st line forerunner
Really was for me a stunner
To realize I posted wrong
Past eight lines, I rambled too long! | |
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| Appologize for I did DEVIATE EIGHT LINE STANZAS
Posted: 2/4/2007 1:48:08 PM | Past eight lines you rambled too long
Put your poetry spoke out in song
It's refreshing to come here to read
the story you planted by seed
You truly do speak from the heart
of matters well written and smart
ideas you reach out to share
and give thanks that you really do care | |
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| Appologize for I did DEVIATE EIGHT LINE STANZAS
Posted: 2/4/2007 2:04:04 PM | And give thanks that you really do care
For through your words, we become aware
Of a mind that is deep and poetic in rhyme
Your quick witted, fluent of thought and mind
No line shall we not miss
Especially when you speak of love's first kiss
Share with us all you know
Then take the time and head out to the show | |
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| Appologize for I did DEVIATE EIGHT LINE STANZAS
Posted: 2/4/2007 2:23:08 PM | Then take the time and head out to the show
where new experiences await you, and so
you can pay the entrance fee, and be happy you see
that the rhythm remains steady and slow.
For it's here that you're lesson will start
and you'll feel free to just listen, or dart
out the door if you choose, you have nothing to lose
Stack your lessons up high on your cart | |
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| Appologize for I did DEVIATE EIGHT LINE STANZAS
Posted: 2/4/2007 2:41:37 PM | Stack your lessons up high on your cart
learning this poetic rhyming is certainly an art
I am watching and learning as I go
Soon it's possible I will have the right flow
For now I smile as I read
Others who poetically take the lead
Inspired to learn all that we can
Made possible by our dear lyricman! | |
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| Got Straight EIGHT LINE STANZAS
Posted: 2/4/2007 3:28:09 PM | Made possible by our dear lyricman
Who’s patience phenomenally can
Put up with our flaunting the rules
With too many lines, we fools
Who only want to play understand
And hone our wee skills with the man
And with each other, sister and brother
We’re glad we can post here and still be a bother. | |
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| Made U Wait for the EIGHT LINE STANZAS
Posted: 2/4/2007 3:37:31 PM | We’re glad we can post here and still be a bother
extending the hand that won't touch the other
refueling our passion for life and the lines
that we beg to see, just one more time
waiting, impatiently, for time to withdraw
as we sit back and relax our jaws
to get them ready for that big wordy bite
waxing poetic through blue-hazy nights | |
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| ALIENATE YOUR FAVORATE EIGHT LINE STANZAS
Posted: 2/4/2007 4:12:42 PM | waxing poetic through blue-hazy night
lounging languidly in the wood stoves light
amusingly ashamed that you all feel that way
no one is exempt we all make mistakes
I would rather read between too many lines
than wade alone in my own wobbly rhymes
I love all of you girls and that is a fact
even the ones who can't add or subtract | |
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| Placate YOUR FAVORATE EIGHT LINE STANZAS
Posted: 2/4/2007 4:27:37 PM | even the ones who can't add or subtract
You mean I’m forgiven? In the abstract
reality we all keep spinning here
funny it is that it’s feeling so dear
that instead of going out with real people to date
I’d rather play here with my favorites of late
exchanging rhyme and some playful design
leaves me happier and feeling just fine | |
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| ALIENATE YOUR FAVORATE EIGHT LINE STANZAS
Posted: 2/4/2007 4:28:45 PM | happier and feeling just fine
wanting the moment to last and last
knowing it won't, and that's just my line
when life's going by me too fast
we bi*ch and we moan, we spill a few lines
we all go around this planet the same
waiting and wanting something better than lies
trying to win at our own morbid game | |
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| PLAIN EIGHT LINE STANZAS
Posted: 2/4/2007 5:17:01 PM | trying to win at our own morbid game
honesty only appearing written on a page
I state here what I announce no where else
without regard to inaccuracies imagined or apparently felt
this is just a dart board ,a collector of fleeting blind rhymes
its natural that things begin escaping that have lately been on your mind
so take a deep breath ,poise your quill to relate a thought
edit it endlessly til everyone can see that its always been our art | |
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| PLAIN EIGHT LINE STANZAS
Posted: 2/4/2007 5:40:12 PM | edit it endlessly til everyone can see that its always been our art
our words we shall mix and mingle, here to be read and never part
to let the words take you to a place in our minds
where we find old memories, some hurtful some kind
letting them flow from our fingers
to type here so that they silently linger
gives one a feeling of peace
as we watch above at a flock of fast flying geese | |
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| PLAIN EIGHT LINE STANZAS
Posted: 2/4/2007 7:11:49 PM | a flock of fast flying geese
soaring above me as i poise my poisoned pen
never a word said in release
that point to the inexplicable end
hardly an utter of edible words
that make me say what i do
only a wish, sincere and divine
to make the wishing well lilac and blue | |
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| PLAIN EIGHT LINE STANZAS
Posted: 2/4/2007 8:14:04 PM | Make the wishing well lilac and blue
Paint the house, car and swimming pool too.
May your heart be content, and your day well worth spent
Splashing colours on old things and new.
May the rainbow of life serve you well
and a story or two you may tell
to a stranger or friend, because in the end
it's the concept of giving you'll sell. | |
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| Commiserate Straight 8 LINE COSTANZAS
Posted: 2/4/2007 8:35:05 PM | it's the concept of giving you'll sell
though not for sale this tale you tell
is equivalent to the alternative
"to ignore is to dispel"
I will not be the pea to this game of the shell
I'll pave my own detours
with soundtracks and smells
everyones got their seats on this carousel to hell | |
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| Contemplate Straight 8 LINE Bonanza STANZAS
Posted: 2/4/2007 11:45:37 PM | everyones got their seats on this carousel to hell
some seat the dark horse on the end quite well
some chose to wander all around the carousel
never finding the right ride that they could ride and tell
some will choose a chariot and wildly ring the bell
some will choose to ride a steed that bounces over dell
some will rock the wild horse and loudly scream and yell
but very few will dare get off afraid of “if they fell.” | |
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| Contemplate Straight 8 LINE Bonanza STANZAS
Posted: 2/5/2007 12:30:28 AM | "if they fell" and there was no one there to blame
would they still continue to complain
kick and whine themselves in shame
could you pretend that you wouldn't do the same
I don't know that's for bigger brains to detain
I would rather stop inevitability in its tracks
charge it with Murphy's law and possession of crack
point out my reason and stab the monkey fuzzer in the back | |
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| Contemplate Straight 8 LINE Bonanza STANZAS
Posted: 2/5/2007 1:23:17 AM | stab the monkey fuzzer in the back
take out my knife and sing ma rap
yo brother! dig that carousel
and let me grab that ride to hell
coz I bin there and found my way
back here and I aint in decay
so move yo horse and dig this vibe
dat carousel's no virgin bride | |
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| Contemplate Straight 8 LINE Bonanza STANZAS
Posted: 2/5/2007 6:33:44 AM | dat carousel's no virgin bride
an dat horse aint no easy ride.
an ya betta watch yo slide
cuz she'll drain ya if ya cum inside
give up all yo change to that ho
no mo' rollin wit da flo
aint no where's left fo' ya ta go
cuz now she's got ya by tha balls, bro' | |
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| Contemplate Straight 8 LINE Bonanza STANZAS
Posted: 2/5/2007 7:25:44 AM | cuz now she's got ya by tha balls, bro'
taken ya in hand so ya cannot go
givin' ya short and curlies a painful twist
jest one important thing ya hope she missed
oh boy she's taken the bit between her teeth
racin' away with ya pinned underneath
have'ta wait until she stops for a breath
or sure as ya live there'll be nothing left | |
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| Contemplate Straight 8 LINE Bonanza STANZAS
Posted: 2/5/2007 12:46:29 PM | sure as ya live there'll be nothing left
all right of center were caught in the theft
then as ya die and wonder why nobody sighed ... oh my
if only ya tried a bit harder
cleaned the ground connection to the starter
pluged in that block heater to save wear on yer beater
ya might a been able to meet er ... before dark
then that bullet may have not hit your heart. | |
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| Contemplate Straight 8 LINE Bonanza STANZAS
Posted: 2/5/2007 12:58:14 PM | that bullet may have not hit your heart
but still took a little bit of your confidence
just when you thought you were immortal
life came along with an other set of plans
now we are here with old friends and cheer
discarding our discord and welcoming back Thorb
he'll put things straight and never deviate from that eight
welcome back my friends to the potty that never ends | |
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| Contemplate Straight 8 LINE Bonanza STANZAS
Posted: 2/5/2007 8:56:17 PM | Welcome back my friends to the potty that never ends
Tis the king of kings, the ultimate toilet my friends.
Glad to see Thorb is back stirring up the kettle calling it black
Least you were missed.....you must be better well-known
No one welcomed me back, yet I still call the poetry forum my home.
Maybe someday Lyriclover will see
that my stanzas in here are always eight lines, poetic and free
Nevertheless, I will keep on keeping on cuz that it just me! | |
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