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Posted: 2/9/2007 8:07:45 AM | To remind us to believe in the goodness of yore
is an entrance level through a new opened door
for the ones who are called by a greatness so high
on a pedestal built by the folk by and by
For the task it is said is not meant for us all
as the order is somewhat much deeper and tall
for the workers who are willing to lend it a hand
but meant for some only who now understand. | |
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Posted: 2/9/2007 8:08:49 AM | who now understand us to remind us to believe in the goodness of yore
or to leave the bore its proper size so as to not underscore the tries
squash the lies and alibies that slither under yer door
saying you need more for the proper score on thighs
in the judges eyes or some other guy's rapour
lately the feeling of low torque to horsepower ratio has got you down
that clown at the second round entry stand looked like a man
then planned the explain just as the band started playing. | |
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Posted: 2/9/2007 9:34:51 AM | then planned the explain just as the band started playing.
So no one knew who’s name he was naming
All we could hear was feedback and squeals
We never heard what were the real deals
And the bill got passed as he claimed he outlined
And the tickets went out and people got fined
He swore we showed support by the applause that we made
Never admitting the mistake that we played | |
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Posted: 2/9/2007 10:50:51 AM | Admitting the mistake that we played
correcting the lens with brand new displays
bending the note for the halftime solo
showing off eighty eight fingers at the sold out show
there's drifters and groupies Homer and Snoopy
all silently requesting and bitterly digesting
all the tunes that where hits for so long
while I forget the chords and get the words all wrong | |
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Posted: 2/9/2007 11:04:08 AM | While I forget the chords and get the words all wrong
I merrily go about writing my song
for the whole world to ponder as the words fly around
it's hard enough getting it up off the ground
Without a worry, and nary a care
I continue to write it the best that I dare
Perhaps I'll be the only one who
enjoys it, who knows, maybe you do | |
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Posted: 2/9/2007 12:11:23 PM | enjoys it, who knows, maybe you do
guess there’s nothing better to do with you
than paste poems on blue screens that flap
like flags in the wind, a creative mind trap
that has of late, been ceaselessly ensnaring
arbitrarily it has been suggestively daring
to play the damned game and open to find
a similar creature with an astonishing mind. | |
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Posted: 2/9/2007 12:56:34 PM | a similar creature with an astonishing mind
swims in warm soothing salt waters
no need for blotters, pens or cannon fodder
free you will find as the currents from changing earth trends
a wake more often yet never at a wake
uncyphered communications continue to flow
take the dampening effects that are lost down below
with smiles and laughter about what they can shake | |
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Posted: 2/9/2007 12:56:53 PM | (yikes,,,my attempt at a recovery as we both posted at the same time,,lol. TTIF)
With smiles and laughter about what they can shake
sometimes puts some people at stake
with most people I find,
though their hearts are so kind
It would take an inquisitive soul
to look deeper inside of the bowl
as we search past the noodle, and the slices of strudel
for the truth, it's the ultimate goal
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Posted: 2/9/2007 1:04:40 PM | Your place or mine, [yikes .... put yours back ^^^^]
it's the ultimate goal
the big one at last
never feeling too old
head of the class companions get lost
taggers along will just be tossed
we'll take turns feeling so strong
keepin it hidden in old rock and roll songs | |
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Posted: 2/9/2007 1:12:12 PM | keepin it hidden in old rock and roll songs,
but, I’ll show up again and undo the wrongs
Of a story scrambled roll in the lines
Mix them up and mess them up but they turn out just fine
You know it all just goes to show
The love of rock and Roll
To balance so many meanings that way
Of a mixed up muddled up shook up say | |
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Posted: 2/9/2007 1:16:46 PM | Of a mixed up muddled up shook up say
we'll shake and rattle in different ways
then wash it all off in a shower spray
so as to feel clean on the next waking day
Life in the muddle of pretty word ponds
leaving some food out for the fawns
since deer mother is glued to the screen
the ribs in the fridge are turning green. | |
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Posted: 2/9/2007 1:23:40 PM | the ribs in the fridge are turning green
as her mind is reeling from things unseen
and then the urge strikes
as she pulls out the keyboard and hikes
across the surface to say
Hello all; today
again the house work will wait
while the masses debate | |
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Posted: 2/9/2007 1:25:25 PM | Again the housework will wait
WHile the masses debate
I'm tired of scrounging for a measly crumb
I should have listened and not married the bum
At the time my heart told me it's right
as we laugh so much and rarely do fight
So I suppose it's ok to be poor
For it's you that I truly adore | |
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Posted: 2/9/2007 1:26:51 PM | For it's you that I truly adore
and have been waiting here for
I know you are prerfect for me
Even if I did find a flea
Your long grey wiskers so fine
move across this face of mine
It truly is a great pity
that this song is about my kitty. | |
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Posted: 2/9/2007 1:36:28 PM | That this song is about my kitty
Shouldn't leave you with any pity
for me, as my allergies you see
Have no effect on my ability to be witty
Although I long for a cat
It's simply a matter that
my eyes go all red, and the dander is spread
up my nose, and this is a fact | |
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Posted: 2/9/2007 2:08:07 PM | up my nose, and this is a fact
I once stuck a glass bead intact
And once in my eye, I did stick a bee
Who I flew into synchronisticaly
And once in my ear I put a small rose
Tatooed by a dear friend I suppose
But my favorite line is about the time
I put you in my heart just to rhyme. | |
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Posted: 2/9/2007 3:54:32 PM | I put you in my heart just to rhyme
Even in my sleep now I'm keeping time
with the man who writes his love
on my mind and in the sky above
So I can live to the poem we create
As we step together to the gate
where entering we pass as two-
become one upon moving through. | |
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Posted: 2/9/2007 7:52:54 PM | Become one upon moving through
the matrix of time and in you
there will be a deep feeling of awe
as your conscience will cease but most of all
you will sense a new vibration within
the deepest realms of yourself and in sin
you will laugh at the world and you'll find
things are not always pleasant and kind | |
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Posted: 2/9/2007 8:21:22 PM | Things are not always pleasant and kind
to us,
but from us, they can be ,
if we can find a way
to tune the trumpet blasts of anger and sharp pain
to the harp sounds
that play the song of
"Yes, I understand; I hear it now. Let's start again." | |
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Posted: 2/9/2007 10:18:26 PM | "Yes, I understand; I hear it now. Let's start again."
Perhaps this time I will remember you are my friend
And not get caught by insecurities sway
But treat you with respect till you see it my way.
But I will be wanting to travel around
And sit by your side and find common ground
To see the view from your perspective
If I’m going to take, well then I want to give. | |
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Posted: 2/10/2007 7:38:42 AM | our goodbye wave looked pretty funny
you, me and the kids all wiggling
unscrewing that imaginary lightbulb
me thinks that shot would be worth some money
we could make into next year's cards
maybe post it on some nerd watch site
take it to school to prove your a dummy
or carry it to break up fights with a laugh | |
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