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Joined: 12/19/2006
Msg: 1176 | |
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Posted: 2/11/2007 1:04:25 PM | Some protein and fruit
for lean, mean, serious passion
taking place in the fith dimension
exalted use of birthday suit
carnal and mineral infinity
giving/taking primordial hum
one over one is one and then some
no first or last, just in between. | |
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Posted: 2/11/2007 2:08:30 PM | No first or last, just in between
Said the King to his beautiful Queen
Not the future nor the past, as nothing does last
Just between not where to, what has been
So they danced in style and grace
stared into the eyes of each others face
In that moment they were, as the world was a blur
as they flowed in a comforting pace | |
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Posted: 2/11/2007 3:33:11 PM | as they flowed in a comforting pace
the everglades drifting by, his face
peaceful in sleep from his inner tube throne
feet trailing v waves in the current atone
for the ruckus he had caused earlier on
almost capsizing her tube, yes gone
were the high spirits of an hour ago
till she craftily dunked his dreaming ego. | |
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Posted: 2/11/2007 3:50:46 PM | Till she craftily dunked his dreaming ego
to a tale written so long ago
If it's true let it be, as the wise men can see
it in colours of blue indigo
On the rainbow of truth it will glow
Fly on high all the eagle and crow
for your wings you will glide, as we witness the ride
and the tale on and on it will go | |
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pensky
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Joined: 12/19/2006
Msg: 1181 | |
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Posted: 2/11/2007 7:13:34 PM | and the tale on and on it will go.
the prince and princes don't grow old.
they ride out each day on white horse
to begin "happily ever after" of course.
and the tale on and on it will go.
the adventurer wil always be bold.
He will rise up each day a new dragon to slay,
have mutton, and ale and a blushing young maid. | |
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Posted: 2/11/2007 7:19:10 PM | Have mutton, and ale and a blushing young maid
Are the foundations the prince so has laid
With a gal by his side, and his ego and pride
All his worries I'm sure will be stayed
What a life in it's grandeur and charm
to feel safe from all evil and harm
and be so deep in love, must be sent from above
just for you, with no worries, no alarm | |
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Posted: 2/11/2007 7:36:30 PM | just for you, with no worries, no alarm
don't get upset, i mean no harm
i've only come for a peek or two
at what it is that real lovers do
i hadn't any idea til i saw you there
laughing aloud while all the people stared
sharing a joke just between yourselves
something simple, private-meant for no one else | |
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Posted: 2/11/2007 8:21:46 PM | something simple, private-meant for no one else
not even that funny little rainbow glow elf
casually placed juxtaposed to some sassy young thing in rose
flashes of breast from manacured dress I suppose
behind the bear there are fishnet hose
stilletto heals and pointed toes
now don't be turning up yer nose
unless its to scent directions chose | |
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Posted: 2/11/2007 8:24:32 PM | its to scent directions chose their way
they got lost at the end of the day
their smelly ways didn't help them any
when they were so few, and we, so many
we sniffed up the glue that broke their bones
and sent them off crying, running for home
screaming for mommy at the end of the lane
but we were already there and drove her insane | |
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Posted: 2/11/2007 8:53:56 PM | we were already there and drove her insane
creating a time space beyond normal play
savouring moments or stranded in shock
lost to the feeling and hormone's you've got
panic and joy mixed amongst primal lust
really unsure that yourself you can trust
the moment then's gone as fast as it came
now as you watch you wonder about pain
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Posted: 2/11/2007 11:54:38 PM | Now as you watch you wonder about pain
And how it continues to exist
As you admire distant ships on horizon
Or dream of the first lips youve kissed
pain has its place in every life
In every heart and mind
In the sweetest life joy and hope prevail
Its then sadness is harder to find | |
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Posted: 2/12/2007 10:43:39 AM | Its then sadness is harder to find
as you leave your address behind
and you pray ,its all they say
the starshine brightening the day
giving sight to the wicked and blind
regardless of race ,belief or kind
we all get to stay and join the fray
living our parts in eternity's play | |
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Posted: 2/12/2007 10:54:07 AM | My diet is to expire, help me to expire
to laugh with the sun and cry with the rain
and to ride above the clouds and to see the shores of the dance again
the dancer is all make some music in the dreams of the flutes and larks
where the play is unfolding life today
thank you I say this is what I say
thank you for the expiration to allow me to inspire
is that a gift yes while you expire ah ha ah ah ah ha | |
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Posted: 2/12/2007 11:04:12 AM | Is that a gift yes, while you expire, ah ha ah ah ah ha!!!
8 lines to read clear the venom…
Not a hysterical storm, just your winter?
For you to claim cheer, I bless you dear!
A poet is expression scene, not veneer!
Of mankind’s lesson I attest…
Your pride is the beginning
Awhirl the lost beginning, HA, you’re a mess! | |
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Posted: 2/12/2007 11:11:07 AM | Awhirl the lost beginning, HA, you're a mess!
no less
if I was to not see
the way physics works
but it takes an end for a beginning
and for that is everything in between
and this is my journey
I love to inspire..my journey..my vision of you... is You're Not a Mess! | |
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Posted: 2/12/2007 11:16:44 AM | I love to inspire…my journey...my vision of you... is You’re Not a Mess!
Now we undress the dressed in slurs…
Words and verbs easily off-root the nerves…
That was clear…despite veneer…
This is your season, but not my year…
I feel no glee…
Just wait you see…
The jackals with you, art laughing at me! | |
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Posted: 2/12/2007 11:35:53 AM | The jackals with you, art laughing at me!
As they clean up the mess of our history
Decaying bloodshed left in the mists
Of time honoured tradition of wars that insists
On their right to might, the right to fight
Living on time borrowed from the short sight
Of the sleepwalking drudgery of daily comfort
Just turn on the tube and watch more bloodsport. | |
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Posted: 2/12/2007 11:57:37 AM | Just turn on the tube and watch more bloodsport
When I think of the violence my face does contort
Our hope for the future lyes tight in the hands
Of the leaders I fear who control all the lands
Rise up all ye fellows, wake up we must see
That our freedoms before us, a choice.....set us free
Our chilldren, the future, our fate lyes in all
Teach them and love them....they must carry the ball | |
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Posted: 2/12/2007 12:12:07 PM | Teach them and love them....they must carry the ball
She’s hot when she’s mad, but she won’t let you fall
“She’ll be there when you hit the ground”
so hey fly like an eagle, just stick around!
Glad to see you join the fray
Of the eight line stanza good word play
Use the edit and make a new first line
Till you get the hang, we’ll patchwork, make it all fine | |
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Posted: 2/12/2007 1:03:10 PM | Till she gets the hang, you’ll patchwork, make it all fine,
you avian lasses who are used to flyin'
high, you soar in search of some vantage point
from which to survey a wider scene. Appoint
yourselves queens of all you survey
and be kind to your subjects for they
are still blundering below, over field and bog,
longing for clarity, but lost in the fog. | |
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Posted: 2/12/2007 1:09:00 PM | longing for clarity, but lost in the fog.
The avian lasses have perched on a log
And it’s from there that they make the switch
To a more familiar form of a witch!
And it’s true if we’re pissed off bad
We can steam and heat and get really mad
But with our wings we could just fly away
And enjoy the sun and the thermals that day. | |
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Posted: 2/12/2007 1:16:14 PM | And enjoy the sun and the thermals that day…
This I love a sun to shine…
A masterpiece inclined, to construct the times…
Once rescued me…now I see…
The ravin is magic…despite the sight of what’s tragic…
And I am merely a mystic addicted to controversial habits…
But I clear understood, bobby the good…
And though I’m out of pocket, that jackal belong in the woods! | |
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