| 8 LINE STANZAS ..can't forget to edit
Posted: 3/2/2007 11:32:09 AM | Our trip to the woods, turned into hell:
Poison ivy, rain will wash off, I can tell;
And when rain stops, resume the pleasure;
Continueing on, with each other to treasure.
Rain has thus ended, we'll look to the skies;
Then in depth, into each others eyes;
Then we can wait, watch the sun set;
And at darkness watch moon, even better yet! | |
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| 8 LINE STANZAS ..can't forget to edit
Posted: 3/2/2007 12:27:32 PM | even better yet with all that itchin and swellin
we can put it to use for more lust to be sellin
feeling the pleasures of scratching that itch
rolling around in this fern filled ditch
careful now don't be bruisin your real
hey now look we're attracting some deer
I wonder what the heck they are smellin
maybe they just want to watch the swellin.
=======ah ... the rules ... hehehehehe ========
[I state long ago ... if I see a comma ...
that in poetry entails a new line.]
[and , but , yet , then , now , etc.
can all be ignored or eliminated from a last line]
===== oh and rules are only guidelines =========
though now I see lyriclover can delete any post
so bring it on ... lol ... let's piss off our host.
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| 8 LINE STANZAS ..can't forget to edit
Posted: 3/2/2007 1:02:08 PM | your not following the rules.......but love it Thorb
maybe they just want to watch the swellin.
Really is an awful lot to absorb
How they’ll take it there’s no telling
Don’t know how it came to this
Ragged patching crazy batch
But I’ll tell you calamine lotions' bliss
And just remember not to scratch | |
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| 8 LINE STANZAS ..can't forget to edit
Posted: 3/2/2007 1:18:13 PM | just remember not to scratch with your nails
round about the area in question its pale
easy for you to just drop all the sales
no obsessive desires for feathers of quale
no reactionary disturbances from eating snails
just feeling romantic as the sky drops hail
burning more candles from the blubber of whale
If I can stop is itching it will make a good tale | |
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| 8 LINE STANZAS ..can't forget to edit
Posted: 3/2/2007 1:21:14 PM | And just remember not to scratch
while playin in the ivy patch
Latex is recomended when rollin around in love
Much bigger the condem be, wear a body glove
guess I blew that one......sorry | |
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| 8 LINE STANZAS ..can't forget to edit
Posted: 3/2/2007 1:55:49 PM | Guess I blew that one ...sorry:
Been there my friend not have worry:
Like the prose here and the wit;
Can't seem to get enough of it!
Carry on deer are watching:
New clothes I'll make from swatching:
Write on mine friends for all shall pass;
Even this the heart of glass. | |
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| 8 LINE STANZAS ..can't forget to edit
Posted: 3/2/2007 2:11:44 PM | Even this the heart of glass
no sorrys needed my friend of class
the eagle has a humor thats often crude
dont mind me i can be rude
A poet i am not that is for sure
Its how I was raised there no cure
To old to retrain my father is to blame
My ex tryed unsuccessfully to tame | |
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| 8 LINE STANZAS ..can't forget to edit
Posted: 3/2/2007 2:31:43 PM | My ex tried unsuccessfully to tame
This feral creature so beautiful by name
Any other she truly is so sweet
A rose of finest tastiest treat
Who would want to tame an eagle free?
tether those wings that soar so magnificently
No dear friend you need a wild man
Who can tumble dizzy heights and survey the land. | |
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| 8 LINE STANZAS ..can't forget to edit
Posted: 3/2/2007 2:36:20 PM | My ex tried unsucessfully to tame;
Yours too? Oh how lame!
Pretense to place others on a shelf;
When they can't even control their self!
Glad to see it, that You're free!
Its how creatures are meant to be!
Fly on Eagle, observe from thy nest!
People like You, are simply best!
Sorry Ravin: I jumped in too late. | |
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| 8 LINE STANZAS ..can't forget to edit
Posted: 3/2/2007 2:44:25 PM | Who can tumble dizzy and survey the land
I thought that I had one, let go of his hand
A boy not a man sadly was he
now liven the single life wild and free
these wings are not ready to be bound, not yet
someday perhaps another i will be found, dont fret
with heart of a lion and courage as well
One will become two, one can never tell
Timing is everything....hehehe | |
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| 8 LINE STANZAS ..can't forget to edit
Posted: 3/2/2007 3:34:21 PM | Timing is everything....hehehe;
To any comic true......hehehe;
Sorry Eagle, hard to follow that line through!
Assured be to poets, mine enjoyment is but true! | |
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| 8 LINE STANZAS ..can't forget to edit
Posted: 3/2/2007 4:18:35 PM | Assured be to poets, mine enjoyment is but true
These lines that you leave me are making me blue
You challenge this woman with only grade 8
Im slow to read and dont spell so great
But fun I do have with all of you in this forum
I can garentee that I wont die of bordom
So lets get to the writing that keeps us all here
It either that or we all go for a beer | |
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| 8 LINE STANZAS ..can't forget to edit
Posted: 3/2/2007 4:57:19 PM | It either that or we all go for a beer;
Challenge I not anyone here!
Wisdom of Eagles, of whom can rate?
Grades are but numbers, shelves to create!
Fun that we have, much is encouraged!
Much wisdom have all, I look to be nourished!
Not from the physical satisfaction of lust;
From depth of poet writing, compassion and trust! | |
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| 8 LINE STANZAS ..can't forget to edit
Posted: 3/2/2007 5:10:19 PM | From depth of poet writing, compassion and trust
Good sense of whom you are is definitly a must
So many that write here are connected to heart
The expression of emotion you all take part
Quick of wit and sharp of mind
True friendships are formed of lasting kind
A pleasure to roam here that I will say
I wish you all blessings on this blustery day | |
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| 8 LINE STANZAS OR WHATEVER
Posted: 3/2/2007 7:23:03 PM | I wish you all blessings on this blustery day
to disrespect the spirit and have your own way
if this is what you want ,to change the rule of play
you'll have to do it yourself ,thats all I have to say | |
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| 8 LINE STANZAS OR WHATEVER
Posted: 3/2/2007 7:56:04 PM | You'll have to do it yourself, thats all I have to say;
That can not be done, to my apolegetic dismay;
The rules here meant not to breach;
Ignorance, I look to learn from , I beseach.
Read I have, instructions herein;
Have not intentioned to commit sin:
The game I'm learning, rules of play;
Look forward to learning, in game stay! | |
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| 8 LINE STANZAS OR WHATEVER
Posted: 3/2/2007 9:35:13 PM | Look forward to learning, in game stay!
Look backwards and steaming in a tame play
Look up eyes burning in a blame sway
Look sideways keep beaming in a strange way
Look over there for yearning in a wide ranged array
Look underneath for dreaming on an arranged day
Look everywhere for discerning faint whispered say
Look deep within for streaming quaint parody | |
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| 8 LINE STANZAS OR WHATEVER
Posted: 3/2/2007 11:19:20 PM | Look deep within for streaming quaint parody
took sheep myth win for screaming paint rarity
then pocketed the extra for lunch tomorrow
when rocket Ed Texstada's poor bunch borrows
I guess you will have to cosign
putting it on the line one more time
with a smile
you've got style | |
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| 8 LINE STANZAS OR WHATEVER
Posted: 3/2/2007 11:24:53 PM | You've got style:
No doubt;
I smile.
Bankers Government;
Taking much:
Our money lent.
Mistake, rules bent. | |
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| 8 LINE STANZAS OR WHATEVER
Posted: 3/2/2007 11:25:54 PM | You've got style:
No doubt;
I smile.
Bankers Government;
Taking much;
Money lent.
Its all spent. | |
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| 8 LINE STANZAS OR WHATEVER
Posted: 3/3/2007 6:54:46 AM | Taking much, money lent, it's all spent
on a cause that's yesterdays news
on a thought that had you hell-bent
to succeed in the opinions and views
of what other people have chose
as significant in the world and yet
you still think that it's all about those
but it's all about you, don't forget. | |
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| 8 LINE STANZAS OR WHATEVER
Posted: 3/3/2007 7:04:40 AM | It's all about you, dont forget
Of times gone by theres no regret
Just look to the future with hopeful eyes
There in you will see those cloudless skys
The world is your oyster of that I am sure
There is hope for the masses and with luck a cure
For all our lonely hearts and painful past
Just use the right bait and make that cast | |
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| 8 LINE STANZAS OR WHATEVER
Posted: 3/3/2007 7:58:06 AM | Just use the right bait and make that cast
with good thought and intent it just may
manifest to things that are meant to last
bringing insight to your glorius day
Toss it freely about without any care
carry on with your usual chores
what happens next is not really rare
as it tends to open new doors. | |
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| 8 LINE STANZAS OR WHATEVER
Posted: 3/3/2007 8:04:11 AM | as it tends to open new doors
the beginning of an affair
with life
and all satient beginnings
of bliss and loss
for me to atone this
is the
new the true
itself for me
love and all of that
is all | |
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