| 8 LINE STANZAS ....won't let it go go dance with bananas from Santa
Posted: 3/10/2007 8:06:48 AM | He said this cruel life he can no longer take
he has seen and felt the worst of a mistake..
yet stood tall once again in a life he leads to make....
in a heart so pure and a soul noone can fake....
He thought a while on leaving with no last goodbye...
yet he tried and failed with every attempt at suicide..
so he can do nothing but live and thru the sruggling tide....
for inside is where he keeps his hatefilled cry.... | |
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| 8 LINE STANZAS ....won't let it go go dance with bananas from Santa
Posted: 3/10/2007 2:07:32 PM | for inside is where he keeps his hatefilled cry....
He waits for the sun under a dark dismal sky
But torrents of rain come and drown out his hope
And discursive anger prevents him to cope
His mind cannot focus on what's to be done
And now wonders when he had loaded his gun
A moment of clarity shoots through his head
Perhaps maybe he wouldn't be better off dead | |
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pensky
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Joined: 12/19/2006
Msg: 1553 | |
| 8 LINE STANZAS ....won't let it go go dance with bananas from Santa
Posted: 3/10/2007 2:49:49 PM | Perhaps maybe he wouldn't be better off dead
Hunter of deer in self-doubting instant said
to himself, sighting the yummy thing with his gun
but I'm gonna eat'em...the deer into bushes did run
But a blast and a thud a journey had ended
Hunter was hit, his wound wouldn't be mended.
The stray bullet thing makes the game so exciting
I love to eat venison, but I'll stick to writing. | |
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| 8 LINE STANZAS ....won't let it go go dance with bananas from Santa
Posted: 3/10/2007 3:00:46 PM | I'll stick to writing until I feel better
this strange inclement weather has me under it
like complete and utter body destruction
every pore screaming for a reduction
no pleasures involved in this here pain
fever and weakness clouding my brain
I'm looking outside and a mild spring like day
but all I can do is shiver and pray. | |
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pensky
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Joined: 12/19/2006
Msg: 1555 | |
| 8 LINE STANZAS ....won't let it go go dance with bananas from Santa
Posted: 3/10/2007 3:14:47 PM | but all I can do is shiver and pray
my body and mind consumed today
automatic pilot must guide my way
into the clear, so I can have sway
over where I go and what I do
the living of life that now seems through
Fluids and aspirin, Dear God, your will
please be that I rise from this chill.
Dear Thorb. Hope you're not really sick,...but prayin for ya all the same. | |
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pensky
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Joined: 12/19/2006
Msg: 1556 | |
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| 8 LINE STANZAS ....won't let it go go dance with bananas from Santa
Posted: 3/10/2007 5:33:00 PM | Oops , I knew it... you wanted to swim right through it
Posting them letters and such.... in such a rush only to have
them sent back .....it comes one day when even in your dreams
there is no such address....no such Zone....when will the Fone Ring for Me
in the Right Tone.....and the Right Zoneo.. Ohneo... Oh neo babaY....
cuh cuh my babaY... cuh cuh I say...babaY my babaY Oh neo Zone don't leave me
this way.... you know the way to my home when your in the Zone.. Do I have to
paint my numbers with a big phat fireweed brush? BabaY...comeon....
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| 8 LINE STANZAS ....won't let it go go dance with bananas from Santa
Posted: 3/10/2007 7:58:05 PM | i'm happy that your mine do you even know how that feels
to fly with the good guy
and dance with you ? I am on cloud mine
That's right cloud mine
and it is so different than cloud nine
and all about it is a letter.....N....that's right
me mi cloud
Mine...cloud mine. | |
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| 8 LINE STANZAS ....won't let it go go dance with bananas from Santa
Posted: 3/10/2007 9:00:32 PM | To appreciate we ALL share, cloud nine!
Maybe we can make a deal....
like how the he** do the educated and elite get more?
Why can't education start at the point of potential... instead of some bought
Crap! I say I'd like to see education FLY... into the laps of EVERY child..
and bring home the Einsteins...We don't have enough men behind us in this cause
let's educate anyone... it shouldn't be about fu*kin profit... ASS. holes
I want education... of the world to stand up and be accounted for! | |
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| 8 LINE STANZAS ....won't let it go go dance with bananas from Santa
Posted: 3/10/2007 9:22:22 PM | I want education..of the world to stand up and be accounted for!
To see poverty hunger ghetto strife no more
Dream of all equality, truth of honour all work be
Those that slave to other's gain at pretense of that free
Education knowledge true, apreciation of all work true
Not for those alone born 'Royally', but also to me and You
Accept do we things we can changest not
Happiness inner joy can simply not be bought! | |
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| 8 LINE STANZAS ....won't let it go go dance with bananas from Santa
Posted: 3/10/2007 11:15:42 PM | Happiness inner joy can simply not be bought!
Nor life’s education assigned to just naught
To be written and answered before semesters out
And the best of the numbers all wait to find out
Who will be the one at the top of the list
Who’ll get the scholarship that dozens insist
Should be theirs for the earning if luck had it’s way
But days spent nose buried seemed a much wiser play. | |
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| 8 LINE STANZAS ....won't let it go go dance with bananas from Santa
Posted: 3/11/2007 12:49:59 AM | But days spent nose buried seemed a much wiser play
When one can only thirst for knowlege and understanding in every way
Wisdom bringers that have their on certain madness were only seen as delusional fools
But give me Kant and Quinne,pure reason......and more than one window to find my truth
Plato, Jesus, Gandhi..time tested wisdom of the authentic sages
that still speaks it's truths all through the ages
I don't care about the merits that come in a grade
Give me more than just one window and that would make my day | |
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| 8 LINE STANZAS ....won't let it go go dance with bananas from Santa
Posted: 3/11/2007 6:02:59 AM | Give me more than just one window and that would make my day
Give me more than just one door of opportunities to come my way
Give me inner peace and love to share among us all
Give me a great circle of friends to catch me should I fall
Give me hope and give me faith to continue reaching high
Give me charity and compassion to help the passers by
Give me lots of inspiration and motivation too
Give me truth, leave me thankful, in everything I do | |
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| 8 LINE STANZAS ....won't let it go go dance with bananas from Santa
Posted: 3/11/2007 7:46:40 AM | leave me thankful in everything I do
leave me proud of knowing you
leave me justice for the world to see
leave me honour and chivilry
leave me hope for a brighter day to come
leave me peace and take away the guns
leave me a chance to feel a bit free
leave me alone and then i can be | |
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pensky
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Joined: 12/19/2006
Msg: 1568 | |
| 8 LINE STANZAS ....won't let it go go dance with bananas from Santa
Posted: 3/11/2007 7:59:22 AM | leave me alone and then I can be
one with the love you told me I should see
in your presence, tho absence speaks volumes to me
of indecision and your own struggle to be free.
Nonetheless, leave me alone so I can find
my only necessity, my peace of mind
references of wanting you left far behind
in keeping with a theory of love of the chaos kind. | |
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| 8 LINE STANZAS ....won't let it go go dance with bananas from Santa
Posted: 3/11/2007 9:40:50 AM | Peel the stickers off instead take some o that glue -be -gone stuff..... and lose it all
clearly it will become a nother day a new way....
wow how it feels so good to just fly...with a mended wing
and sing with a voice after the bags of baggage disappear for another day
.... just waitin for the sermon...(need my guilt fix)........... Mom where are you?
You always know when I've been bad ....call me when I need you
today would be good.....but wer'e one hour ahead so
you may not catch me in time.... I may be in church before you today | |
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| 8 LINE STANZAS ....won't let it go go dance with bananas from Santa
Posted: 3/11/2007 3:08:50 PM | Be in church before you today?
I doubt that, it's just not my way
But it's great for the ones who do
I'm sure it's just what they're needing too.
Different opinions make this world go around
Working together should be our common ground
Nonjudgemental is a good way to be
Acceptance in all that you see. | |
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| 8 LINE STANZAS ....won't let it go go dance with bananas from Santa
Posted: 3/11/2007 6:14:23 PM | Acceptance in all that you see.
For that's the way it has to be
But do you really have a choice
And what opinions would you voice?
Would it sound like "Life's not fair"
I don't think that life would care
For life hears this all the time
Especially in written rhyme | |
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| 8 LINE STANZAS ....won't let it go go dance with bananas from Santa
Posted: 3/11/2007 6:33:20 PM | Especially in written rhyme
We say what we will each time
We put pen to heart
And suck the life blood in to start
The final phrase, the bar to hold
The final stance, I will not fold
No game playing or pretendings
We all want to justify our endings | |
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| 8 LINE STANZAS ....won't let it go go dance with bananas from Santa
Posted: 3/11/2007 9:49:39 PM | to justify our endings in the we all way
crafting of phrases to snag or sway
metaphors careening off sling-shot puns
innuendoes comfortably soothing the bums
where it may flow and how it shall feel
oscillates and reverberates in synchronic zeal
the beginning being set into place
doesn't have to dictate direction or pace
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| 8 LINE STANZAS ....won't let it go go dance with bananas from Santa
Posted: 3/12/2007 1:29:28 AM | Doesn't have to dictate direction or pace
But it must entail a certain quality of grace
I wish the world also had this special kind of charm
Cleverness and wits about surely couldn't harm
Imagining amuses me for I can create
Anything I wanna see; or I'll contemplate
Going back nostalgically to see the things I miss
Like the time love gave to me its unforgotten kiss | |
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