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pawla
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Joined: 5/8/2007
Msg: 1477 | |
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Posted: 6/5/2007 10:15:21 AM | | hi.............i am about to give up on this whole "fishing" trip, but, thought maybe i'd bite the bullet and ask for a profile review before i give up. Could you please take a look at mine? Thanks | |
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Posted: 6/11/2007 12:22:45 PM | Pawla,
I would cut the following out...then you would be good to go.
have patience. Most people are nuts...it takes awhile to find someone sane and attractive.
good luck.
Oh, by the way.....I AM NOT TALL! Nor would i consider myself a BBW, more like a MBW?? They don't give you much options on your body type do they!! Yes, i am a horrible, rotten smoker -- shoot me. At least i am being honest, maybe one day, if i meet the right person, i may just have enough motivation to stop for that certain someone.........you never know. Try not to be so judgemental, there's an awlfully good person here behind that cigarette. And no, i dont do drugs, but if i did - would i admit it???? Goofy questions...  | |
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rs1360
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Joined: 6/5/2007
Msg: 1481 | |
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Posted: 6/11/2007 2:25:32 PM | | Could you offer opinions on my profile please? I got some recommendations to be more descriptive and persona;. So I did that and then got completely roasted my on_the_edge - but I'm guessing that is not unusual. So anyway, I changed it back to the original, which I liked better anyway. Thanks | |
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pawla
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Joined: 5/8/2007
Msg: 1483 | |
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Posted: 6/13/2007 2:24:00 PM |
if you girls have got this far then at least stop by and say hello .im the nice guy ya mum told ya to look for .
im well travelled .been round this wonderfull country 5 times now and would love to go round many more times.
i like to do plenty with the woman in my life ,but i also know that we all need our own time to be who we are.
im a single dad trying to do my best raising my daughter.my eldest has moved on in here life and im one very proud father.
ive been told so many times that ive got a great sence of humour that im thinking i might have to change jobs and start a life in comedy.
im an intelligent guy and love to chat about many subjects that will keep you interested for hours.i hope.
the biggest regret i have in life is i never took that lesson on how to type.
presently im studying to make life a little easier around here for my kids.
they mean the world to me.
unfortunatlly girls im a bloke and i do love my sport.
honesty they say never hurts.
so just ask anything.
dude,
1. punctuate.
2. paragraph.
after these - come back for some brilliant suggestions | |
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Posted: 6/13/2007 4:41:13 PM | Greetings again. I posted over a month ago- suspect I got missed for the overload of folks asking for reviews. I see yer slowin' down, mate. Pity, your stuff is often in-depth and fun to read... Hope you're not burning out on the concept.
Would you be willing to give mine a go? I've worked hard on it- rewrote it I don't know how many times, trying to find that right mix of creative and honest. I'm an earnest sort, occasionally literal and sometimes I have real trouble putting my feelings into words.
Check it out and please let me know if it needs tweaking, in your opinion.  | |
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Posted: 6/19/2007 1:10:26 AM | I'll see what I can do for you ^
I have been absent from writing lately because I have been in the middle of moving, and other things - time is very limited for this right now but getting the writing bug again...so...we will see
come back an a few days.
thanks for the kudos
I will say you are a very sexy goth. you pull that off well. | |
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Alfy82
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Joined: 5/20/2007
Msg: 1494 | |
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Posted: 6/19/2007 11:08:39 AM | Gothchilde
I do not often do this - but I have to. Your profile is perfect. Your pictures are sexy. You are a good looking woman and exude sexuality in your pictures.
thee only thing you may want to do is clean up your interests so they are symmetrical...yet ...that is not so goth thing to do.
keep it.
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Karen5
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Joined: 4/11/2007
Msg: 1497 | |
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Posted: 6/19/2007 5:56:03 PM | Aaawww, shucks, mate. Thank you. (hey, where can I find that cute little cat icon you have on your previous message? I have a wee kitty who is just like that, only grey where the black is. It's adorable)
Huh, 'exudes sexuality'? All I was doing was pretty much just standing there- no cheesy cleavage shots or anything like that. Never thought 'sexy' could be so effortless!  Heh, scary. Thanks for the complement on the bod- been working hard on it. Yahoo- I kick butt! 
Hmm, symmetrical, how? Change the order? I'll go take a look and see if I can figure out what you mean, there. As for it not being a Goth thing to do- what? That line has me mildly confuzzled. I did get told that my profile was too cute by another reviewer... I'll see what I can do.
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K_Dub1
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Joined: 4/23/2007
Msg: 1500 | |
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