Karen5
| Joined: 4/11/2007 Msg: 1501 | |
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| review me pls Posted: 6/23/2007 8:54:01 AM | Hey Bill I appreciate your time to review my profile. Thanks in advance bro. Brad | |
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| I'll review your profile and offer helpful suggestions Posted: 6/23/2007 11:51:04 AM | | I haven't had much luck. Maybe it's the first pic? Maybe it's the fact that I emphasize friendship? Sorry, that's a must for me. Anyway, I think the kind of women I'm interested in would read my profile and say, "wow, cool." Unfortunately I haven't had any of those. Even when I take the initiative I don't get many responses and when I do they are short and shallow. | |
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| Ok, have at it Posted: 6/23/2007 12:29:43 PM | I get lots of comments on pics but I am not taken seriously when I say long term. Most are out for some action. I, on the other hand, am old fashioned and want to build a relationship based on the usual: honor, respect, integrity, etc. The goods come when the friendship is formed and emotions from the heart bloom. Have I conveyed that in my profile? What can I do to spruce things up?
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| I could use a review Posted: 6/24/2007 6:33:45 PM | It wouldn't kill me to get my profile reviewed. Regards, | |
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| I'll review your profile and offer helpful suggestions Posted: 6/26/2007 6:33:18 PM | Hi, Its nice of you to offer.. Can you look at mine? I know its a little short, I am fairly new here and haven't added a ton. Please let me know if there's anything else I can improve on. I'm not getting many interested guys.
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| I'll review your profile and offer helpful suggestions Posted: 6/28/2007 10:48:05 PM | Hey Bill.... Please, Please, Please review my profile set up... Third time asking so if its as they say 3 strikes and ur out?? or 3rd time lucky? ... I need help. My line has lost its worm and is just floating down stream aimlessly.. .. Tks Kindly Netasha | |
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Karen5
| Joined: 4/11/2007 Msg: 1516 | |
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Karen5
| Joined: 4/11/2007 Msg: 1517 | |
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| Profile review. Posted: 7/8/2007 11:17:39 AM | | Hi billbutler8. I would appreciate any feedback on my profile. Thanks. | |
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| Profile review. Posted: 7/8/2007 11:54:38 AM | | could some one plz review my profile | |
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| Profile review. Posted: 7/8/2007 12:42:43 PM | If you get a few moments, could you please review my profile? I would like as many opinions as I can get.
Shawn | |
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| Profile review. Posted: 7/11/2007 5:52:08 PM | OK - Karen5 is next.
By the way , I do not do private reviews, however if I did, my standard reply is this should you email me:
the going rate for a private session is $1257.22/hr. plus ...6.785 pounds red m&ms - no more no less...and a case of ..Beaulieu Vineyard Cabernet Sauvignon, George de Latour Private Reserve, 1992 - good luck finding it in that qty. - if you do I do promise a profile that will get results. If you manage to find a single bottle of the 1968 vintage...I will be yours forever*
*within reason. I do have standards, ya know.
Karen- for now I must say- you have a lovely smile and a pretty disposition. You are currently ranking very high on my convoluted scale. I can improve your profile.
gimmie a few hours and I'll have something for you by daybreak. | |
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Karen5
| Joined: 4/11/2007 Msg: 1522 | |
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| Profile review. Posted: 7/11/2007 7:34:33 PM | I am multi tasking, darlin... remember - it is not always all about you...but sometimes it is... | |
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| I'll review your profile and offer helpful suggestions Posted: 7/16/2007 11:56:01 AM | Karen, You are a true blue person of considerable integrity, intelligence and someone who is on your level will recognize this by the words on your profile.
This is why your profile works.
You pull your reader in and once they send you a note I imagine the effect is the same as I experienced when I first discovered your profile in the forums.
Your willingness to be transparent is an asset for you.
I would like to one day put together a more detailed review - and I will - right now I am very busy with a coupe other freelance writing gigs and my participation is greatly scaled down. | |
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