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Posted: 1/6/2008 10:07:33 AM | Dizzyfied: I'm going to keep yours short
Title: "Just looking" - No. Make this a statement about yourself.
Pictures: Not the best but not the worst. You need to make a face shot be your primary picture not a far away one.
Interests: You need to fill this out, it makes you searchable and consequently easier to find.
Profession: Fill this out
About me: You basically wrote out your entire life story and even about how you met your ex wife. This is far too long and needs to be cut down by at least 80%. This is a dating site not a biography site. | |
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Posted: 1/6/2008 10:12:04 AM | PointLomaPassion
Title: "Hiking Partner?" - A little bland, make this a statement about yourself that is interesting, maybe a little off the wall.
Pictures: Not enough. Add at least 2 more, 1 needs to be from far away.
Interests:
Change "good wines" to "wine"
About me:
This is what I see
1. Repeat of your interests section
2. A textual physical description (Paging 1998, 1998 please come to room 204)
"If this interests you, drop me a note." - and more retro slang. Yes, 'dropping' things is retro now. Delete this whole line and don't replace it.
We need to know what you are looking for and more about your personality not just your hobbies. | |
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