| Brizo's poems Posted: 4/13/2007 6:10:30 PM | Brolga I wish I was in your class - we never got the moody blues for homework.
I second that om and brolga..... Wooby - that poem was spun from the heart. I think deep down we can all relate to that one. | |
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| Brizo's poems Posted: 4/13/2007 6:19:35 PM | Autumn-Yes! Can relate absolutely to Wooby's.Got the heart scars to prove it. I accidentally clicked on Delete instead of Reply, and got a question: "Why do you want to delete this?" I don't. Just being clumsy in my Friday fatigue. I hope I didn't damage the thread. | |
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| Brizo's poems Posted: 4/13/2007 6:33:29 PM | | You have Friday fatigue too? It must be contagious. | |
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| Brizo's poems Posted: 4/13/2007 9:01:58 PM | Wooby, I love your poem.....it made me wince for you... Autumn, you sound like you could use a bubble bath....I just got this stuff, caramel creme....smells divine in the tub..... Brolga, always nice to see you......I envy you your riding ability, all I do is bounce.... Om, did you enjoy your two birthdays?
in the say the answer is often deep and lies in the fray rhythm's in the hips and lies in the sway joy is in the child and lies in the play sass is in the mule and lies in the bray shape is in the mold and lies in the clay word is in the writer and lies in the say
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| Brizo's poems Posted: 4/13/2007 9:18:04 PM | - FIRST THE SHIP? THEN THE HORSE? -
It's one if by land, and two if by sea? You just hate travel!Now how can that be? Green in the water and sore in the saddle? You'll do as your told, lest you get the paddle
But since I'm a friend, to your needs I'm kind I'll put up the paddle and spare your behind You dont want to travel and party away? Okay just get naked, we'll start here today.
- Erik - HAHAHAHAHA!  | |
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| Brizo's poems Posted: 4/13/2007 9:24:30 PM | I'll travel by luxurious coach to rent it you can pawn a brooch lest the paddle be turned on thyself tread carefully, my horny elf my inner tiger's burning bright you might be dinner for the night....
I'll get you my pretty.......and your little dog, too...... | |
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| Brizo's poems Posted: 4/13/2007 9:32:57 PM | In my Cheesiest Horatio ( C.S.I. Miami ) voice:
" If I find out that you did this,... I will get you!"
Hahahaha Been dying to use that line!
The Tiger and Serpent both locked in battle The Tiger with promise of using a paddle? It sounds like a fortune cookie gone bad Beware the thick serpent who never get's mad
- Erik - Hehehehe,... next?  | |
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| Brizo's poems Posted: 4/13/2007 9:39:30 PM | Do we not suffer, all of us, the slings and arrows of outrageous fortune cookies? | |
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| Brizo's poems Posted: 4/13/2007 9:44:18 PM | The cookie falls not far from the tree of lightening bolts in mercy be hanging on by one single thread of sanity and serpents dread | |
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| Brizo's poems Posted: 4/13/2007 9:56:10 PM | Remember I grew up with boys and all their rough "affection" so I'll keep a wary eye on you and a chastity belt, for protection
Where's my magic cork when I need it?? I know I left it somewhere.....
Brolga, I had a friend from NY who would make us read our fortune cookies out loud and tack on "between the sheets" at the end....made for some good laughs..... | |
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| Brizo's poems Posted: 4/13/2007 9:59:10 PM | Hahaha,...Well put brolga,...
If we break them, do they not bleed ( paper )? Ah what a creature is cookie! How simple in form, how complex in crap, how cheap by the boxload, how cruchy and addictive, in colour how pale, in texture how smooth, in wise quotes of meaningless lucky numbers and expressions how like a GOD!
- Erik - Okay so I filked the quote a bit,... hehehehe,...  | |
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| Brizo's poems Posted: 4/14/2007 9:48:06 PM | love and marriage 2/11/07
the marriage or the divorce which one cost the most a horse is a horse of course but broke is nothing to toast
I often wonder at a wedding why they go to all that expense in debt from the very beginning and unable to make recompense
no sooner does that debt fall off then they are in trouble again of marriage they've had quite enough and they both want let out of the pen
so folks if you're milking the cow keep trying to get it for free make it legal and you can say wow as you're paying the price to be free | |
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| Brizo's poems Posted: 4/14/2007 9:59:32 PM | Marriage is the number one leading cause of divorce you know Brizo!
Here's to the fling and taudry cheap sex You just need some lust and a friend or drunk ex Here's to the savings vested on you When you lick the food but do not chew!
- Erik - hehehehe,...  | |
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| Brizo's poems Posted: 4/14/2007 11:37:45 PM | Just because I've always loved these lyrics.......
Wichita Lineman (Jimmy Webb)
I am a lineman for the county and I drive the main road Searchin' in the sun for another overload I hear you singin' in the wire, I can hear you through the whine And the Wichita Lineman is still on the line
I know I need a small vacation but it don't look like rain And if it snows that stretch down south won't ever stand the strain And I need you more than want you, and I want you for all time And the Wichita Lineman is still on the line
And I need you more than want you, and I want you for all time And the Wichita Lineman is still on the line | |
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| Brizo's poems Posted: 4/15/2007 3:37:47 AM | Brizo:^^^^Just the song I was needing to hear all night.....wistful and wishful.
And I need you more than want you Is the feel that is true I want you, yes And the need's there too Mental and physical allows me to be free To love you in all ways, for you, for me
Good grief....pretty damn cheezy I'd say, but what do you expect from a sleepless in the South, properly raised GRITS???
Loving the fun and games and serious times too...enjoy landing here every day or two Thanks again Brizo...you're a gracious hostess! | |
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| Brizo's poems Posted: 4/15/2007 9:14:17 PM | Thank you Lucid, your words were just what I was needing as well, amid the little "nips" in the pond.......I felt my flowy fins being chewed ragged........(sorry to be so cheesily metaphorical)
Circus Day
I went and had a circus day Big cats languid and well fed posed for us gawkers to wrestle and cuff each other's head returning to their naps and bed
I went and had a circus day the lovely women dangled high with flexibility and grace their sleekness so it made you sigh and wish that you were half so spry
I went and had a circus day with poodles, terriers and jacks who jumped through hoops and stood and danced for doggie snacks and leaped over each other's backs
I went and had a circus day a beautiful horse and beautiful girl sidestepped, and trotted and picked their way with tail in furl a swishing circle all awhirl
I went and had a circus day the giant lumbering elephants displaying inborn dignity performed a very careful dance with all their stately elegance
I went and had a circus day I watched the jugglers wrestle fire and catch the rings upon their neck and daggers that were circling higher tightened the pull of tension's wire
I went and had a circus day and watched two camels boogie I swear the one was singing keeping time with heads bobbed spunky made them look like they were funky
I went and had a circus day my cramped heart stretched to it's expanse while boys flipped on the trampoline and silly clowns made smiles dance when bouncing up they lost their pants
I went and had a circus day I held my grandkids on my lap and watched them ride an elephant and in that atmosphere madcap love came and closed my lonely gap
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| Brizo's poems Posted: 4/15/2007 9:32:23 PM | | Every year we would go to Ft. Lauderdale to visit my Mom who had a condo there. At the Circle M flee market they had a circus that we always went to see. We rode the elephants and watched the lightness of the trapeeze dazzle us. We sat there eating cotton candy and feeling like we had all run away to join the circus. Do you know they actually had an organ grinder with his monkey doing tricks for money just like out of a movie. These are memories on which dreams are made and I have to admit I have been getting mushy over babies lately. Everyone has grandkids but me - I still have the kids. When a baby comes into my work I take my break for cuddle time. I have a six month old boyfriend who visits every friday and he flirts outragiously. Kids just do that to me Brizo. | |
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| Brizo's poems Posted: 4/15/2007 9:44:00 PM | Soon Autumn, soon......it will be your time, and I know you'll make a wonderful grandmom. We celebrated Easter today, as last weekend the kids were with their fathers....so the circus, and Easter dinner, and some candy I brought over and coloring books.....my littlest guy has a mohawk now, at first I was a little taken aback, but it rather suits him, he's very quirky....
a lid for every pot
When I was little (they say) I spent hours staring at flowers and bugs my grandma did claim there was a lid to every pot she forgot to hide the head shake she gave to me or to fake her doubting of reality
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| Brizo's poems Posted: 4/15/2007 11:58:12 PM | | "Circus Day" was highly enjoyable, brizo. It inadvertently inspired a "first line, last line" from me | |
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| Brizo's poems Posted: 4/16/2007 12:51:04 AM | - TINY ANTS -
Underneath a peice of wood The aliens are in your yard With microscopic colonies And workers working oh so hard
Their queen lies hidden deep within And chemicals they mind The pheromones and scents of life They never get behind
Little aliens so strong But hidden well from naked view I bet you if they spoke to us We could learn a thing or two
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| Brizo's poems Posted: 4/16/2007 12:56:54 AM | you are so right, Erik, though they do have wars.....I saw it on National Geographic. Can't remember what they were fighting over, but it was grisly.....when two with big horns try to overturn each other like a jousting match and both walk away, that's pretty cool....
New dawn here I come into the new dawn.. shortly after the darkest hour rosy glow of forgiving light the night wiped clean by sparkling dew all things made fresh anew just over the horizon hold faith till the infusion
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| Brizo's poems Posted: 4/16/2007 1:09:19 AM | Well so too does man when it comes to wars. Hahahaha,... But insects are fascinating little savages.
- JUMP FOR JOY ( or at least for viewing pleasure ) -
Hop in happiness
Then hop yet again
Jump for joy and for pleasure
I will just watch you
As you bounce around
Without a bra on for good measure!
- Erik - It did not "feel" right not throwing in a little something perverted. hahahahaha,... Jiggle away! Hahahahaha,....
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| Brizo's poems Posted: 4/16/2007 11:16:12 AM | ....will you be using a magnifying glass, sir?...... There's not much to bounce, though when I was lactating I found out how the other half lives.....I couldn't even take out my garbage without a come-on. Ha, made me want to squirt milk at them, wouldn't that have been a sight? Just for the look on their faces it would have been worth the jail time for public indecency.....
Bobby
heart on his sleeve he missed and grieved his wife a beauty who he lost everything to his child, his pride he took the little left inside he tried, we tried and after several months went by we spent the weekend naked each time was better than before
and then the music played and laid me bare and once seen he could not unsee he wasn't everything to me and I wept naked, naked tears once seen I could not unsee he wasn't everything to me and he would never be the memory when I was with another naked crying for a former lover
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| Brizo's poems Posted: 4/16/2007 12:45:14 PM | Beautiful, beautiful poem, Brizo. Amazing really. Damn, you are *so* good!!
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| Brizo's poems Posted: 4/16/2007 1:32:53 PM | *gulp* Thank you Wooby, in all sincerity......we are a mutual admiration society, beause I think the same of you.....
And oops, I forgot to thank you Rory, as well. I hope you're aware how much I treasure your friendship, cyber though it be....
I wish somehow I could find work in which writing was involved........
"he wants his home and security he wants to live like a sailor at sea" - Bob Seger - Beautiful Loser
stage
I am not an audience star struck applauding your one man show or the critic opportunistic crafting my best verbal bullet I refuse to audition no sales pitch I cannot cause you to leap above your own life or fall below it
I stand amid the whirlwind of expectations waiting for you to see me and find yourself and the line that defines us
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