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Posted: 6/13/2007 2:41:23 AM | Sup4man
RE THE NEW PROFILE
I love it! ..If you were older and nearer I would
run after you myself
just one complaint whats with the main pic??
duh! dump it
you are cute and sexy
and you are never going to be everybodys type,
get over it, dont hide who you are -celebrate it.
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Posted: 6/14/2007 11:03:12 AM | HI AK2FL
what can I say whats wrong with your profile??
nothing I can see..Your nice looking its short and sweet,
which I love..and so are you..are you contacting all of the shorter girls?
and ones in your age group? say40 to 55 ?
cause thats where you will find women who arent as hung up on height
and a lot of the younger women want guys 6 ft tall period.
and dont look beyond that.
You seem like an OK guy to me DONT CHANGE A THING!
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Posted: 6/14/2007 5:10:15 PM |
say40 to 55 ?
cause thats where you will find women who arent as hung up on height
and a lot of the younger women want guys 6 ft tall period.
An astute, and pretty accurate observation. Good advice once again.
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Posted: 6/14/2007 11:18:45 PM | Truffles is like the secret love child of Miss Manners and dear Abby, only for Fish!!
Any assistance you can offer a "newbie" would be greatly appreciated!!
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Posted: 6/15/2007 6:06:21 AM | Hi AverageDad..
loved your analogy of this forum and me..
AND I COMPLETELY AGREE WITH YOU
    
now about your profile..its obvious to me
you are smart, educated and a nice guy who's mended some wild ways
and the only thing I would do is
REMOVE THE FIRST PARAGRAPH COMPLETELY
just dont go there.
the rest is just fine ...hope you find someone soon 
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Posted: 6/16/2007 4:59:55 AM | here goes BARMYLENNONLVR
It is obvious you are a Beatles fan, though I really dont get your entire name
and its way too long..SO LETS START THERE
change it to BEATLES FAN (if someone already has this name add a number with it)
HEADLINE: Beatles fan- looking for yellow brick road or HEY JUDE WHERE ARE YOU??
then just tell every one what you are looking for..
perhaps looking for a sweet guy to walk down yellow brick road with me
and kind of relate each thing to a Beatles song..
KEEP IT SHORT AND IN AN EASY TO READ FORMAT
perhaps a couple of new pictures the one standing isnt all that good..
hope this helps
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Posted: 6/16/2007 9:05:57 AM | Truffles,
Thanks for asking about our get togethers...We always have something going on in the Port Charlotte area!!
I personally just got back from the Cherokee Indian Reservation in NC. We meet with family there to scatter my Grand Parents ashes-it was long over due. We made it a 5-day family visit. It was beautiful to be up in the Mountains.
I'm writing to let you know... I just finished posting on another Forum and suggested the Author, have her Ex, look at your Forum. Her forum is called " Would it be really creepy to recommend the Ex"/Author: KimberlyKarma.
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Posted: 6/17/2007 1:16:48 AM | Thanks for the advice. I changed a little bit and added some more pictures. Will you look at it again and let me know what you think.
Thanks,
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Posted: 6/17/2007 3:28:00 AM | | Kimmie...I used to live in NC. If I ever moved, that would probably be where I would go! The Blue Ridge Mtns...spectacular! I went to Cherokee once..a good memory actually. I was living in SC, and my dad we sending me to live with my mom, so he took me out of school for the day, and just me and him went to Cherokee. Anyway, glad you enjoyed it! It really does have the most beautiful scenery! | |
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Posted: 6/17/2007 5:04:07 AM | Hi Kimmie
wish I was In NC now its getting too darn hot here
I have spent a lot of time up in that area..(worked In Atla,SC,NC)
the smokies are lovely..
I am anxious to look at your forum..
stay well and happy..
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Posted: 6/18/2007 10:33:07 AM | Truffles, I just checked KimberlyKarms's Forum(Is it creepy to recommend the ex?). She hasn't responded to our comments, yet it was the weekend.
The heat in Fla kills me too. I moved back here to be with family, yet if not for them I would Not have moved back(nor met Jerry). 60's to 80's is my kind of weather. After NC, we went up to Va/West Va. boarder, to visit some of his family. I'd never been to that area, and was very impressed. The air actually smelled sweet from wildflowers!!
Now I'm back to AC and scented candles!!
If you want to check out my post it is called:
THINGS TO DO IN PORT CHARLOTTE/PUNTA GORDA and surrounding areas.
I give the "local POF group" a way to get together with other members thru-out the week without it always having to be a "happy hour-at a Bar". Most like to Drink and Dance, yet there is more to life than that. So anyone who knows about something going on can write in and post activities, I just keep it "pumped up".
Truffles, hope to meet you face-to-face, some day.. til them Keep Posting!!! Kimmie | |
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Posted: 6/24/2007 8:16:26 PM | Hi Rapstaractor
actually your profile though a little too wordy is easy to read so its ok
but your pix are terrible take another really good one in bright light
so we can se what you look like..
and the top of thr mornin to ya
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Posted: 6/26/2007 3:29:20 AM | Morning RapstarActor
I would dump paragraphs 2 -3 -4
TMI (to much info)
keep all that for a meeting date
best limit yourself to 1 or 2 great clear pics
and a brief description of who you are
and who you are looking for..
thats it..no one wants to read that much
women look at the pix..see how tall you are..
see if they fit what you are looking for
and get a feel in your paragraph if you can put a sentence together
or if you are a total nutjob or illiterate
the best of luck
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