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Posted: 6/26/2007 12:20:34 PM | As for the Description "Who You Are" & Who Your Looking For, That's Two Trillion Dollar Questions that I don't think I've got the anwser to.
Are you saying Women are Shallow because they Look at Pix & Height First ??? 
As for the illiterate part, I certainly can write but I hate Reading I'd rather give climbing Mt. Everest a try, {I would give a VERY good "TRY"} 
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Posted: 6/26/2007 7:29:17 PM | I can sure use some help. I can write an instuction manual on how to rebuild a transmission or hop-up the Pontiac Tripower. But that creative crafty personal stuff is too hard for me. I do great in convesations as my personality kicks in and keep a gal smiling..
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Posted: 6/26/2007 7:51:07 PM | rapstaractor
what I am saying
is think of your profile as a billboard not a book
make it easy for a person to see what you are about
and what you are looking for
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Posted: 6/26/2007 8:01:21 PM | Manpirate
perhaps a little less negativity would help
stop talking about what you dont want
and start talking about what you have to offer..
remember shorter men have a more difficult time
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Posted: 7/8/2007 6:52:35 AM | I have run away (with a younger man )
(no I didnt meet him on here)
for the summer..so I will not be available to
help you re-write your profile..
I am sure you are doing ok without me
HAVE A WONDERFUL SUMMER
SEE YOU IN THE FALL!
TRUFFLES6
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Posted: 8/8/2007 10:02:39 AM | Here goes Whitewolf
first dump every picture of you EXCEPT THE ONE IN BLUE!..
the rest are just plain awful period..
change your headline...forget Helen Keller..too..
"Let the good times Roll"
then say...
it really is difficult putting your whole life
and desires into a small paragraph..
so I wont try
lets just email a bit get to know each other..ask me anything..
then we can talk on the phone
arrange a date and take it from there..
dont be shy..
lets get together..
and thats it nothing else ..make it short and sweet..worry about the first date later..
good Luck
truffles6
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Posted: 8/8/2007 4:48:00 PM | Ok Amicable
please understand I mean well but I must be honest
heres what you need to do..
first change your name to SLENDERELLA (IF THE NAME IS TAKEN PUT YOUR LUCKY #BEHIND IT)
( men love skinny women)
then change the headline to " looking for Prince Charming"
then drop the dog pix and the snow pic and put the headshot first..
then throw all the cancer crap out its a downer men dont like it'
STOP SOUNDING LIKE A DESPERATE VICTIM..
JUST DUMP EVERY WORD YOU WROTE NO ONE REAds it!!!!
just keep it short just write this
sweet and pretty slender woman looking for just one great guy..
we both know we have lots to talk about when we finally meet so
ask me anything you need to know by email
then we can chat on the phone..and then lets meet..
I will do the same..just be sure you have a picture posted OK??
lets save all the rest for our meeting date
lets meet over coffee or a drink and take it from there no pressure
no big expense..
Truffles6
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Posted: 8/10/2007 9:28:59 AM | the bald/fade whatever you call it look
does nothing for you..you need to balance a large neck with hair on your head not some ball cap or the bald/shaved look...
seem to have nice blue eyes open them up wide let the hair grow hold the camera/celphone above your head and shoot..
I have worked in show biz and with models its a trick they all use
just do it..a good pic will help more than anything else..
Truffles6
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Posted: 8/10/2007 10:02:15 AM | | hmm been using it for a year but ok. too much hair bugs the crap outta me for some reason. used to have below the neck hair but pain to manage lol.what do you mean umm hold camera above my head? just show a shot of my hair? | |
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Posted: 8/10/2007 3:06:57 PM | No just hold your arm out in front of you and
a little higher then your head/face..tilt it foward and click
take a whole bunch of pix pick a good one and post..
or sit down look up have someone standing in front of you and snap
that way you stretch your neck and its more flattering..
stop laughing i am being serious here.. 
truffles6
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Posted: 8/11/2007 11:54:08 AM | ok..here goes..
first of all I just dont get your headline..
and If I dont get it nobody will..so change it ..
how about.."Laidback and Loving"
and take out (hang out ) and put in Dating
women dont respond well to hang out even if thats what
most men want to do any way no matter what they say in the profile..
keep the first and 2nd paragraph
in the main profile STOP AT THE WORD SAD (2nd paragraph)
AND ELIMINATE THE REST.
the rest just isnt necessary and too much to read..
says zip
good luck
Truffles6
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Posted: 8/12/2007 3:12:12 PM | Hey truffles - I like what you're doing here. Everyone needs a little critiquing. I tried to mail you but since I smoke socially, I couldn't :(, so even though I think mine is ok, I'd still like your input - I try to keep all my pics current, if they're not, I say they're not.
Whatcha think? BTW, there's not many singles in Pensacola, well at least not worth taking 2nd looks at. I do NOT do the bars around here, usually karaoke ones, so perhaps, that's the reason why I'm not finding them, but personally, I don't want to meet somebody in a bar.
Hope to hear from u.
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Posted: 8/13/2007 8:39:46 AM | Hi Redd....
ok first the good things ...
love your headline ....its great ..
and your main picture is fabulous ...however the rest stink..
dump them ..men rarely post more then 1 pic and then its 20 yrs old..LOL.
ok I know I sound like a broken record but you must be brief..
who wants to read all that garbage..
use the same kind of format I am writing this in ..its EASY TO READ!!!
NOBODY WANTS TO READ YOU LIFE STORY OR EXTRA CRAPPOLA..
men dont know Dolce from Gabana..
think billboard not a book..
And just as a side note..with all those flyboys from the Naval airstation
you should be very busy..I use to live in the panhandle and my best friend lives in
Pensacola..you have to be hanging out in the wrong places..
I always get mail from men in your area..so I know they are there..
more so then here where everyone is a senior citizen ...
SERIOUSLY just cut it down to 6 or 7 lines easy to read
and it will make a big difference..
Truffles6
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Posted: 8/14/2007 8:31:27 AM | Well perhaps the reason I'm not "very busy" is because I'm not just looking for a "fly by" LOL and I don't go to the clubs. Now, if I knew exactly which ones or where to go, then perhaps, I might change my tune a bit. E-mail me and let me in on your secret, won'tcha?
I'll shorten my profile and lose the other pics. TY Truffles6 | |
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Posted: 8/14/2007 9:32:19 AM | My best friends daughter who is now married 2 yrs.. (& just had the first child)
met a nice officer by going to the clubs nearest the Navel air station there in Pensacola ..I said Fly Boy not fly by yes nobody wants a fly by hahahaha.
you need to make friends with somebody who is at the NAS and get invited to the OFFICERS CLUB...ITS TOUGH MEETING ANYONE NEW..thats worth a darn..especially if you have kids..good luck
Truffles6
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Posted: 8/16/2007 9:11:23 PM | Ooooooo Officers Club - I've only HEARD about that *giggle*. Now to find somebody that's "worth a darn" and get in there. LOL Maybe my girlfriend has "people" LOL
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Posted: 8/18/2007 5:15:24 AM | Hi straight shooter..
there is absolutely NOTHING wrong with your profile
its fine! short and sweet with interesting pictures,
you sound like a great guy !
Dont tell me the girls arent all running after you, they are arent they?
If you were here in pinellas and a little older I would be running after you
Truffles6
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