Mr45
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Posted: 8/21/2007 4:57:57 AM | for Gettinoff:...
first change your name its awful & insulting
in fact your wholeprofile is terrible
I know you are young but get a grip !!!
change your picture you look like you weigh 400lbs
take a picture with clothes on (not in your bedroom with the closet door open.)
it may be a stretch but act nice..say pleasant things
EXAMPLE:::
new name: BigSuperguy
Headline: Looking for Miss Super Girl
Profile..hoping to find a really nice girl to hang with
and and have fun with
I am a big movie fan hope you are too
I like women in all shapes and sizes
I am a big guy with a big heart..and I cant wait to meet you..
Truffles6
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Posted: 8/21/2007 9:15:06 AM | This whole thread has made me giggle so much I feel like I should ask for truffles opinion on my profile too...
*kneels to the profile oracle*
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JakeMM
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Joined: 6/2/2007
Msg: 305 | |
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Posted: 8/21/2007 7:00:05 PM | hI Jason....
dont change a thing...very tongue in cheek..
now all you need to do is to find someone who knows what you are
talking about!
 good luck..
truffles6
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Posted: 8/21/2007 7:11:00 PM | Jake I dont get your headline.....
Moment what?? what does mori mean.?
are you only looking for Hispanic women?
New Headline example: Reliable man Looking...
if not then please say it in English
Also put your newest pictures first..
2 or 3 is plenty..and delete the rest
other then that It looks fine to me..
Truffles6
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Posted: 8/22/2007 3:51:26 AM | OK Shipoker..
first I would get rid of the picture with you and the Rat..
women dont like rats..either the 2 or the 4 legged kind
Also either you smoke or you dont..forget the prefer not to say..
no one asked you what you smoked
the rest is ok..
personally you could loosen it up a bit ad make it easy to ready..
like I do here ..remember its a billboaed not a book.
good luck
truffles6
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JakeMM
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Joined: 6/2/2007
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Posted: 8/24/2007 5:07:18 AM | To Aussie
thank you for the kind words..
after reading your profile and how much you dislike women
it is doubly appreciated as I am sure you dont say too many nice
things too or about the girls..
But I am curious..do you really expect to find any woman
who want to love you after all of that hate you spew against women.?
Or are you on here to just peek our interest with a captivating picture and
then give us a good dressing down..??    
Truffles6
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Posted: 8/24/2007 5:55:39 AM | I am what I am - nothing more and certainly nothing less
why i do what i do - well those with insight /a sense of fair play and objectivity will see it
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Posted: 8/24/2007 12:28:53 PM | Hi tryme!
You are in the UK and I am going to tell you this
from an American prospective,
but things may be different in the uk..
Personally it looks like you have a job
and a nice picture posted and your profile is short and sweet
just the way I like it.
but I have noticed short men are as overlooked as BBW's in
my country (I dont know about in yours)
Every man is looking for his slender model here
and every woman is looking for her 6ft lover.
DO YOU EMAIL ALL THE SHORT GIRLS??
do it..its your best bet..women like to be shorter then their man..
and that is the bottom line..
Height and body type is something we cant do much about, but just remember
tall skinny and nasty is nothing to brag about either..
good luck to you..
truffles6
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Posted: 8/24/2007 3:35:43 PM | Well Aussie..
love the new profile..
seriously I know you didnt ask for my advice..
but I am sure you have plenty of men who
are laughing their*******off (and me too)
Truffles6
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Posted: 8/25/2007 4:17:19 AM | Redd..
dont let him get to you..
look how lonely he is..his post are sooooo long
they must take hours to write,
and between that and all that weight lifting,
and sleeping..he simply hasnt the time to have any fun..
so thats what makes him so mean.. LOL
Truffles6
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Posted: 9/7/2007 1:34:24 PM | speaking of re-writing profiles I just did my own...
It was time for me to change my picture and update my profile..
depending on your life experiences things change
from time to time..
so its good to keep things current!
truffles6
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Posted: 9/8/2007 6:07:40 PM | Bon Jour jean Marc...
First i would take out the fish name ..Its dumb..
I have no idea why the admin thinks its cute..
then I would change the HEADLINE TO:
"new age guy looking for new age gal"
then I would eliminate paragraph 2 completely and stick with one and 3
Also I know you live in Canada and the sun doesnt shine like here in Florida,
but i would make an effort to get some color in your face..some fake tan or a tanning salon..or bronzers..you look very pale and just 2 or 3 pics are enough.
save every thing else for a first meeting.
Hope it helps
Truffles6
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Posted: 9/9/2007 1:51:01 PM | Thank you Truffles, very good suggestions. I'll factor that in as I re-write it.
I don't consider myself a new-ager but I'll think of something.
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Posted: 9/18/2007 4:52:20 AM | Hi everybody
this morning I received a nice thank you from a man
who wrote me personally to ask for help (lots do)
and when he took my suggestions he received lots of replies
so dont be bashful..another pair of eyes cant hurt.
keep on fishing!
truffles6
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Posted: 9/20/2007 6:44:58 AM | Ok msviv!!!
from your headline and your pix
it looks like you already are having way TOO MUCH FUN!!
You appear to be the quintessential party animal..
and I am not dissing you for it if thats all you want,
you go girl...but..if you are serious about
some kind of serious lasting relationship with a reliable kind of guy,
you are going to have post a more serious kind of picture,,
one where you arent drinking and dancing.
dont forget you reap what you sow..
Truffles6
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