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Posted: 9/20/2007 4:43:10 PM | Hi
I haven't had much luck so maybe you could give me a couple of lines. i have been on line for almost a year and only got to meet 3 people. do help pleaseLove & blessings Ellen        | |
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Posted: 9/21/2007 8:21:02 AM | Ok likeable
first change the headline to:
"MOTORCYLE MAMA LOOKING FOR MOTORCYCLE PAPA"
then start your bio with "lets ride off into the sunset together.."
Also I dont want to be mean but you have got to do something
about those clothes u r wearing in those pix you posted..
talk about stuck in the 60's wow
give it a rest already!!..
try wearing some nice solid color jeans some boots and a black t-shirt ,
throw those yucky prints away ..you look like you shot a couch..I bet you have a nice figure under there, but who can tell??
a little lipstick on maybe some blush and you will take 10 yrs off your age..
come join us in the yr 2007 and you will be fine!
good luck
truffles6
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Posted: 10/11/2007 5:50:44 PM | Hey truffles
I haven't read all the pages of this post yet but it looks like you've helped an awful lot of people with their profiles.
I'd love for some help with mine.....
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Posted: 10/16/2007 7:35:54 AM | | Hey Truffles. I have been married for the last 25 years and am just starting out again on the dating circuit and I am lost. I would appreciate any help you can give me. Thanks for taking the time to help other people. I'm sure there's a special place in heaven for people like you. Hope to hear from you soon. Have a wonderful day......Ruthie | |
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Posted: 10/16/2007 10:20:00 AM | Hello Everyone, This is Kimmie,
I have become an "on-line" friend to Truffles.
Truffles is taking a break at this time, and isn't able to check mail and respond daily.
So, if you write in at this time, it may be awhile before you'll get an answer.
When I was last in contact with her, she read the post from GYPSY_DANCER, and sends you this reply:
TRUFFLES SEZ:
GYPSY_DANCER,
You have a nice profile-short and to the point
AND you have posted a couple of pix,
as far as I am concerned you are way ahead of the game..
Just keep in mind neither one of us is skinny an in her
20's anymore...so our well of available men are pretty limited...
Most men keep looking for younger women no matter what they look like..
don't get discouraged..Date younger men when they ask..
and you will be fine..
(ALSO A NEW CLEAR CLOSEUP WOULD BE GOOD)
TRUFFLES(Sent to Kimmie)
Truffles will be back with us when she can, in the meantime, everyone, her advice to NOT GIVE UP, is great advice. I am engaged to be married in November and met my fiance' on-line a year ago. We now set up partys in Punta Gorda, Florida, for other POF'ers. They tell us "you two are an example that ON LINE DATING REALLY WORKS".
GOOD LUCK, EVERYONE!! Huggs, Kimmie | |
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Posted: 10/19/2007 8:04:59 PM | Kimmie or Truffles...
I'm fairly new to POF, but I'm sure a little feedback/help wouldn't hurt. Any advice would be appreciated...
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Posted: 10/28/2007 5:45:38 AM | Hi,
Thanks for being such a help to everyone and I hope that you can help me too. I'm not getting any responses. I have a lot of people add my to their favs but they don't send any messages. Please help.
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Posted: 10/31/2007 1:38:07 PM | | Ok do your stuff Ican take it. Getting plenty of dates but they have not lead anywhere All great woman well most anyway. So I look forward for your advice Thanks Jeff | |
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Posted: 11/2/2007 3:21:21 AM | Hey everyone,
It's been over two weeks since I've been in contact with Truffles, I'll try to get ahold of her and see when we can expect her to respond to those of you who have written in to her since then.
Don't give up...I'm getting married in two weeks!!! Met my fiance' on-line. This process can work, and until you meet Mr. or Ms. Right, you are sure to meet some great people who will entertain you, and become friends while your on this adventure!!
Blessings to you all, Kimmie | |
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Posted: 11/4/2007 9:24:10 AM | Hello again, everyone, this is Kimmie,
I recieved an E-mail from Truffles. She is still sick, and simply isn't up to being creative. She said for me to "Go ahead and help them out if you want to, I just can't do it right now". I should say not...She's been sick for over a month!! So let's all send her our best wishes.
In the meantime, if you'd like to hear what pops into my mind, when reading your profiles I'll do what I can. I'm more"wordy" than Truffles, she believes in "Keeping it short", I'm more discriptive, so find yourself a balance that suits your style.
Secondly, my pet peeve, for profiles, is the ones that say" If your a lier, game player ...Blah, Blah, Blah....don't contact me." To this logic I say,"Why are you projecting negative thoughts such as this on your profile. Do you actually think that people see themselves as liers, and Game players-if they are or not(in your opinion) do you expect them to see themselves that way?" I suggest ANYONE who has this type of posting on their omit it. It adds nothing to how you come across to others.
I've gone thru 5 of the 8 of you asking for help, I'll have to check the others at another time. Here are my notes, I hope they help:
GREATCATCH-#1)Add more pics of you doing some of the things you like to do.
#2)Interest"Too numerous to mention" Mention some anyways, that you would like to do with a Man you might date. Start with the Deep Sea Fishing, and Harley riding, add Board Games/Horticulture/animals. Leave the things you do alone, or mostly with other women -reading/crafts under "about Me", as it shows more of your personal caracter.#3)"A man who likes all kinds of people...ADD, "as I do." #4)"I'll update First date later" Do it ASAP, you can always change it later.
SPANDY314-#1 Add more pics, the one you have is cute and friendly, yet loose the glasses, us Ladies like to see your eyes. #2) Add more to interests, listing things you would want to do with a women...#3)....move Sailing/listen to live music to "Interest " catagory. #4 and comment, "I'm seeking....." to "About Me" catagory.
LUVTRAKKER- Has closed his Account, Hope He's doing Ok!!
SEEKING UNIQUE- I looked up M_yD_y, and it a beautiful Blonde from California, Our Truffles6, is a beautiful Blonde from Florida!!!
SEXYCHICA85-#1) Try adding pics with real people instead od cardboard cut outs, they're cute, yet real people show that you do have real friends, or some of you doing some of your favorite things #2)Under "Interest", writing poerty/reading/hanging out with friends,are not catagories of things you would be looking for a guy to do with you. I think the intentions of "Interests" is to be things you would be interested in doing "With' someone(this is only my opinion!!) Watching movies and going to the beach at night are good, now add more...be creative-show more of yourself in what you list.
Ok, everyone, It's Sunday afternoon, and it's a beautiful day!! I'll work on the others that have written in at a later, I'm no match for Truffles who is short and to the point, yet I'm willing to help. I hope I have....Huggs to you all, Kimmie | |
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Posted: 11/4/2007 9:26:48 AM | THAT'S FUNNY....I AM USING MY FIANCE'S COMPUTER...AND IT POPPED UP WITH HIS PIC!!
WE ARE GETTING MARRIED IN TWO WEEKS....WE MET ON-LINE....SO ON-LINE DATING DOES WORK...
KIMMIE (AKA-THE FUTURE MRS. JERRY-N-KIM) | |
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Posted: 11/25/2007 3:13:32 AM | | hi. well send my regards as well. she cleaned my profile up about 4 monhts ago or something. only thing i changed was a head shot and my headline but i havent had a date from this thing since june. so I still wonder what is up. | |
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