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Posted: 3/19/2007 5:09:53 AM | by the way
caps dont mean shouting its emphisis
on words you wish to be remembered!
HAVE YOU EVER HEARD OF PRINT MEDIA?? AND ADVERTISING??
one more thing get a better picture
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Posted: 3/19/2007 3:59:29 PM | OK Truffles6...Please give mine a gander and see what you think?
I was told a month or so ago to make it a little more longer....so I did.
Now I am curious again to see if I rambled on tooo much, lol.
Tell me what you think GF.
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Posted: 3/19/2007 4:14:26 PM | OK Jude
dont get the fishname thing (seahorse)
dont like it its confusing get rid of it
change your headline to
"Fishing Queen looking for fishing King"
or "Must love to fish"
and
whoever said write a long profile is crazy
make it short and to the point
save your life story for the meeting date..
look at mine read what I wrote to other people who asked
and you will be fine ...use a simple format lots of white space use some caps hit the hi points thats it...
but take a more flattering pic preferable one in a bright color top
I take most of mine with my cel phone and email to myself and post
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Posted: 3/19/2007 4:54:18 PM | Thank you for using your talents to help others! You are obviously a high quality person and I, for one, certainly appreciate it. Who on here could not use some help? Me - I have no idea where to start. I just try to be honest and forthcoming and end up getting way too wordy. You are right. Men are totally visual. Guess I need to post up more, better newer pics.
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Posted: 3/19/2007 6:08:01 PM | Real blond :
you seem to understand exactly
what i have been telling others..WE ARE ALL VISUAL
TILL WE GET TO KNOW YOU..SO ALWAYS POST THE BEST PIC YOU CAN TAKE
MAKE THAT PROFILE LEAN AND TO THE POINT
SAVE THE LIFE STORY FOR YOUR FIRST MEETING OR YOUR FIRST
TEL CONVERSATION..
KEEP IT SHORT TO THE POINT AND USE A GREAT HEADLINE!
SOME PERSONAL ADVICE
GET RID OF THE FISH NAME
ITS DUMB THIS WASNT POF'S BEST IDEA
AND THE PLACEMENT OF IT STINKS (they could have picked a better spot)
YOU NEED A NEW PIC
i CAN SEE YOU ARE A PRETTY VIRGO (ME TOO)
BUT YOU SAY THIN AND THE PIC MAKES YOU LOOK LIKE A FEW XTRA LBS
TRY "PRETTY CAR-NUT LOOKING 4 SAME"
MEN LOVE CARS..!!
AND LOOK AT MY PROFILE AND WHAT I ALREADY TOLD OTHERS FOLLOW WHEN IT COMES TO
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Posted: 3/19/2007 6:14:05 PM | ok Thoughtful
I like your profile
I like your headline
I would go out with you
how can you be having a hard time finding
your lady love.?.
Unless you pick unavailable women
your picture isnt the greatest
but you are not a bow-wow
have the kids take a better one!
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Posted: 3/19/2007 9:02:05 PM | Hey Thoughtful,
I also think your profile is a nice one,
you shouldn't have any trouble with the ladies....
Believe me you were noticed....lol
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Posted: 3/19/2007 9:10:32 PM | Thanks Truffles,
The Seahorse name I picked from the new thing they have on here...
What fish name is for you? So I picked Seahorse because I love horses.
I will try the Fishing Queen theroy it sounds fun, My Cell does not have a
camera thingy on it..so it will take a few days and then I will ask you to re-
veiw again. I wear a lot of black....so I will get something bright and redo it;
Thanks again for your advise.
Godspeed.
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Posted: 3/19/2007 9:29:21 PM | Thank you Truffles. I am working on it. Funny, I can usually write about most anything but when it comes to doing a dating profile I get writer's block! That's how it ends up being too wordy. Now I am down to 1 sentence "About Me".
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Posted: 3/20/2007 4:43:35 AM | HEY FLORIDA BABE
LOVE IT... GREAT PIC ..PROFILE SHORT AND SWEET
1 SUGGESTION TAKE ALL THE BLOCKS OFF
OR PIC 3 of the
most important
remember always lean & mean
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Posted: 3/20/2007 4:48:50 AM | Hey Jude (sounds like a songLOL)
thanks..just dont care for the fish name thing
or the placement of it..should be in the reg question and answers not in
headline..(so while I love seahorses I wont use it til he moves it
DONT FORGET THE PIX
THANKS FOR THE KIND WORDS
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Posted: 3/20/2007 5:04:02 AM | fLORIDIAN HERE GOES
DUMP THE SIDEWAYS PIX
TAKE NEW MAIN (HEADSHOT ASAP)
CHANGE HEADLINE (CREATIVE WOMAN SEEKS MUSE)
DROP ALL BLOCKS KEEP 3
NO SMOKE, NOT MARRIED, NO DRUGS
NO AGE LIMITS EITHER
delete all you wrote its awful
write this instead
Big hearted woman, looking for big hearted man
who is creative & loving
Kind & considerate
enjoys music and pets
fun & festivals
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Posted: 3/21/2007 5:27:25 AM | OK Gary
first..get a close up head shot
cant see you
2nd) take off all age blocks
(you could miss the girl of your dreams for just one year ..dumb dumb dumb)
heres your new profile
HEADLINE: " Lets make sparks together"
SMART, FUN, STABLE, HONEST, RELIABLE GUY
Looking for Miss Right
NOT miss right now!
Is it you??
I hope so.
Lets email-talk on the phone- and meet!!
SO WE BOTH CAN GET OFF OF HERE
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Posted: 3/21/2007 5:39:56 AM | LOYALATINA
hAVE YOU GONE MAD
NO ONE CAN WRITE YOU UNLESS THEY AR 36/37
TAKE OFF THE AGE BLOCKS !!!
please read what I wrote to others
it applies to you to
and dump most of those pix they are lousy
use#4 in the car as your main (u look mahvelous in it)
Keep #5 and #8
dump rest
You seem extremely smart to me (I would bet a big # in IQ dept)
remember lean and mean and easy to read
MEN ONLY LIKE TO READ THE SPORTS SCORES!
GET REAL
your gorgeous u will b fine!
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Posted: 3/21/2007 5:43:55 AM | ok Tsoup
who do you think your kidding
NO picture nothing on profile
your 54 just looking for a young stuff LOL
start by deleteing your profile
THIS IS A DATING SIGHT WITH NICE PEOPLE
LOOKING FOR LOVE NOT A SIGHT FOR
WAYWOOD HOOKERS!
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Posted: 3/21/2007 5:52:45 AM | you must post a picture
NO EXCUSES
YOU MUST TAKE OFF AGE BLOCKS
THERE ARE ONLY 3 BLOCKS ANYONE NEEDS
NO SMOKING (IF YOU DONT SMOKE)
no marrieds
NO DRUGS
the rest you delete or block yourself
clean up the spelling and typing errors and you will be ok
good luck
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