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Posted: 3/22/2007 7:45:11 AM | Flaguy
you spelled right wrong (rite) in headline
use some comas in the about me section or dashes or something to separate thoughts just so its easier to read...
I am not the spelling police ------just want to make every one stop -look- read-and not get bored doing it!
your doing fine
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Posted: 3/22/2007 8:30:36 AM | I beg to differ with your comment: "if she makes more then 2 excuses
when you give her a firm day and time drop her and move on, she's into headgames or married."
Some guys rush to meet and if she's not comfortable with meeting him just yet doesn't mean she's playing games or married. I think the best advice is let her tell you when she's ready..... now if you've been chatting for 6mos via email and phone, then yeah chances are she's a gamer. But I've had a guy ask me to meet after the initial "hello" and again before the end of our conversation, should he have walked away??? He didn't have to , I did(more like ran)!!! Too egar = creepy or looking for 1night stand!!!
My only problem with you saying something like this is that other women are gonna read this and think "well hells bells if I don't say yes to meeting him when he ask I could really miss out,so even though I'm not comfortable meeting him I'd better do it anyways" Or that guys are gonna try to use this as a way to "weed out" gamers and they will miss out!!
Everyones comfort levels are not the same..... go at your own pace and trust your gut! is the best advice!!!!! Just my thoughts thanks for listening
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Posted: 3/22/2007 10:04:18 AM | | Yes I know Im not uglt and I really am happy with myself and who I am in life, but this profile must need some kind of help because I get mail from no-one. | |
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Posted: 3/22/2007 11:15:03 AM | Hellooo Anwat
since we come from a different generation
I guess we think differently on the subject of meeting
I AM INTERESTED IN MEETING ASAP
AS SOON AS I KNOW THIS PERSON APPEALS TO ME
maybe its because I have no interest in Marriage , blah blah blah
just a nice guy to have fun with for a while
I AM NOT LOOKING FOR A LIFETIME !
yet I like your profile very much, you are a little wordy but you are a STRAIGHT SHOOTER AND I RESPECT THAT ..
so I respect your opinion..and wont try and change it
I hope you find what you are looking for here
all the best
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Posted: 3/22/2007 11:19:27 AM | southern boy
write first and only smokers
usually non smokers block smokers
also I never write first
unless its something unusual I have to ask of another member
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Posted: 3/22/2007 3:00:02 PM | Dark pony
YOUR A **** CAT
A VERY SWEET INTELLIGENT GUY
WITH VERY TOUGH LOOKING PIX POSTED
dump the cig pix pick a good head shot for main and
a full body shot and thats it...
your profile is ok short and to the point..
just remember what i told other smokers either quit or go after girls who smoke
Its just not cool to smoke ...smart girls know that and we block smokers ..so we never get your mail anyway..
why shoot yourself in the foot..keep all your options open
take off the age blocks...theres a lot of competion out there
Good luck
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Posted: 3/23/2007 5:05:48 AM | Yuletide
first thing post the pix of u in the goatee and the one by the piano
dump the rest...
change ad to read
headline: roller coaster guy looking
aboutme: for rollercoaster girl
we may have our ups and downs , but it wont be boring!
Seriously, I am a great guy looking for that one girl, so we can both get on
with enjoying life together..
I am NOT A PLAYER..
BUT A STEADY RELIABLE AFFECTIONATE ROMANTIC! | |
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Posted: 3/23/2007 5:18:33 AM | OK ARIES
HEADLINE: Funny-Talented_reliable
ABOUT ME:
that describes me!
I promise I will keep you laughing
and happy..
I have a great job and a more promising future
Lets meet and see..
I cant wait to meet you..... | |
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Posted: 3/23/2007 5:31:12 AM | INDIAN KNIGHT
Keep main pix and one in shades drop the rest
new headline: pilot looking to fly you away!
get rid of the comedy routine use the 1st paragraph from your last reviewer
(the serious one) drop the last paragrah and that should do it..
be funny in person.. It isnt working here
you smart good looking and ambitious dont kill it with comedy
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Posted: 3/23/2007 3:41:09 PM | INDIAN KNIGHT Keep main pix and one in shades drop the rest new headline: pilot looking to fly you away! get rid of the comedy routine use the 1st paragraph from your last reviewer (the serious one) drop the last paragrah and that should do it.. be funny in person.. It isnt working here you smart good looking and ambitious dont kill it with comedy
Ok, I got rid of the comedy bit. I like your suggestion for a header so I am going to steal it. Now you said drop the last serious paragraph. Do you mean the "What I am looking for" para?
Cheers,
Sidd.
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Posted: 3/23/2007 5:01:18 PM | Sidd
in the looking for dept
you will know it when you find it
and all the preconceived ideas will go out the window
just keep your options open and a smile | |
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Posted: 3/23/2007 7:36:09 PM | zocker
I think for a start get new pix
try to dress up a little for them
take the cancer ribbon out of your profile
not appropriate on here
change your headline
to
"Karoke singer looking for
a gal to harmonize with" | |
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Posted: 3/23/2007 9:26:10 PM | Truffles, you are a genius!
My profile is working much better now.
Thank you!
PS: POFers: Pay attention! She knows what she is doing! | |
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Posted: 3/24/2007 12:27:36 AM | | Well, let me tell you. I do not use this much and that is a great idea. I am a 28 year old male. I am a musician have been pro at that since I was six. I am in sales. I like to go out and explore need some interesting person to see whats out there. elp me out maybe I will get more use out of this. Thanks for caring | |
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