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Posted: 3/24/2007 1:42:57 PM | | Yea love to get help and words of wisdom and attraction.............. butt my facts are true and I am married ( state of mind ............other kids at home for now so I dont pull punches good bad or ugly )............ would love to get more reply form Fem attraction............... any advice ? and your e mail TRUFFLES6 blocks me for private chat ..................... hmmmmmmmmmm ???? | |
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Posted: 3/25/2007 1:55:39 AM | Thanks Truffles. Looking for someone to do new pics, will see what develops...{Yes, sorry for the pun...:D} Others I can change now, though....
Many Thanks,
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Posted: 3/25/2007 3:18:11 AM | ok MATT
I WOULD KEEP MAIN PIC AND LAST ONE AND DUMP THE REST
NEW HEADLINE:
"LETS MOVE ON TOGETHER"
ABOUT ME
read it to yourself a couple times
make the format easier to read (think billboard NOT BOOK)
keep it short (which you have and you are good to go)
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Posted: 3/28/2007 12:26:07 AM | | could you give my profile a look over please? I think it needs a make over--or perhaps an overhauling | |
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Posted: 3/28/2007 3:13:12 AM | OK GUMBY
thought I already answered it
I like pic 2 and 4 dump the rest
as for headline
perhaps
'SHY COUNTRY BOY LOOKING FOR SWEET COUNTRY GAL"
ABOUT ME
HONEST, PLAYFUL, SINCERE, AND MORE
LOOKING FOR HIS ONE AND ONLY
LETS MEET WHERE WE CAN TALK AND GET TO
KNOW EACH OTHER..AND SEE WHERE IT LEADS
I AM LOOKING FOR MISS RIGHT NOT MISS RIGHT NOW!
I think its a good idea to save the life story for when you will meet in person
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Posted: 3/28/2007 3:26:47 AM | SOON2BSOLDIER
are you in the Army or
are you going to join up?
are you shipping out?
profile isnt clear about that..
one thing is for sure you seem not to be looking for a girlfriend but
just buddys to chat with...
I will be frank with you Idont understand why anyone would get on a dating
site looking to chat and email..(unless they were married)I think myspace works better for the younger crowd..not sure about here..for someone your age.
if you are not a soldier change your name. I would think a girl would not like to get involved with someone who was going to Iraq ...unless she already was involved..how can you start a friendship like that?
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Posted: 3/28/2007 10:22:41 PM |
OK GUMBY thought I already answered it I like pic 2 and 4 dump the rest as for headline perhaps 'SHY COUNTRY BOY LOOKING FOR SWEET COUNTRY GAL" ABOUT ME HONEST, PLAYFUL, SINCERE, AND MORE LOOKING FOR HIS ONE AND ONLY LETS MEET WHERE WE CAN TALK AND GET TO KNOW EACH OTHER..AND SEE WHERE IT LEADS I AM LOOKING FOR MISS RIGHT NOT MISS RIGHT NOW! I think its a good idea to save the life story for when you will meet in person so you will have something to discuss.
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Posted: 3/28/2007 11:36:20 PM | Hi,
Would you give my profile a look see. I am not good at this. I try to be honest and to the point. I can't write to you because your blocking me because I didn't say no to drug usage. If your ever in Miami I can return the favor with a nice massage.
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Posted: 3/29/2007 2:36:23 AM | Good Morning Gilram
I LIKED YOUR PROFILE
it was easy to read, got right to the point, and you seem like a nice person
HOWEVER, I suspect the drug thing might discourage some people..
as you have seen I block drug users to begin with ..
I also suspect that isnt a very flattering picture of you..
it looks like a mug shot..why not take your own if you have a camera cel
(take several pick out the best and post it)
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Posted: 3/29/2007 7:42:06 AM | Hi Truffles6,
Would yoju look at my profile I`ve changed it s few times now I am lost not sure about it and my heading I know stinks.
Thank You
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Posted: 3/30/2007 4:50:50 AM | soon2bsoldier:
I already did! | |
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Posted: 3/30/2007 4:55:00 AM | hi can u help me with my profile? it looks awfully boring and i havnt got a clue how to jazz it up!!!!!. i get very little intrest in my profile so i must be doing somwething wrong can u have a look please ? any tips ect??? james | |
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Posted: 3/30/2007 5:02:31 AM | here goes WANNA-DANCE!!
YOU TALK TOO MUCH ....BLAH BLAH BLAH BLAH --BORING
JUST POST THE LAST PARAGRAPH AND PICK OUT 2 OF THOSE PICTURES AND THATS IT
save the comedy routine for someone who wants to hear it!
and just say lets meet for coffee and see what develops..
OH AND LEARN TO READ MY NAME IS ------T-R-U-F-F-L-E-S | |
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Posted: 3/30/2007 5:09:31 AM | FLYINGACE:
ANOTHER BORING PROFILE
if you cant say it in 8 lines ..you loose THEM
DUMP THE WHOLE THING AND START AGAIN THIS IS A
BILLBOARD NOT A BOOK..
SAVE THE LIFE STORY AND THE DOG STORIES FOR ANOTHER TIME,
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Posted: 3/30/2007 5:17:11 AM | HI SPARTUS
I have no idea why you wouldnt get responses
from your profile..pix are ok,
its short and sweet.
I would guess the girls in the age group you are looking in just get
too many emails..and you just get lost in the crowd.
perhaps a new headline would help
"SUPER-MAN LOOKING FOR WONDER-WOMAN"
or
"LET ME LEAVE YOU BREATHLESS"---OR
"HAVE I FOUND YOU ?"
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