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| Redmondguy Review
Posted: 5/3/2005 5:36:26 AM | Hey Red,
Prepare yourself, the doctor is in.
Your headline, this little part of your profile used to catch someones eye, is a bit underwhelming.
Are you asking or stating "Looking for you?"????
Come on guy, get creative and original! I just wonder how many other profiles out there say pretty much the same exact thing as you? Care to guess? Loads of 'em, thats how many!
This is your shot, your one chance to catch the eye of somebody. Tell me, if you came across a lady's profile thats aid the same as yours did, would you stop and read it? I doubt it. Originality! Does a profile good!!!
About your picture: you need another pic. Maybe something with better lighting to start. Thats not to say you yourself within the pic is bad, you're not. Not too shabby dude! BUT, we need to geta picture in there that shows you for you. Do you walk around all day with that unemotioned face? I bet not. I bet you smile from time to time too! ha ha, find yourself a pic with a smile, or just goofing off or whatever. You may be surprised at the response you get.
"Do you do drugs?"
"Prefer not to say" ALWAYS always always equals "YES". So why ya bother with "prefer not to say". This suggests you aren't honest. Just answer the question "yes" or "no".
You answered "no" for the "do you have kids" part, so whats the prob Bob?? Do not let people assume something of you from an answered question. They will ALWAYS go for the worst case scenario. It's human nature! Answer the question.
"Dating Interests"
Only 4 things are listed, one of which is an industry standard (Camping), which means everyone and their mothers have that on their profile.
"Martial Arts", way cool and original! Good.
"Computers", vague, what about them? You fix 'em? Build them? Play on them? Work on them? what what what?
"All kinds of stuff"? THis is what you want people to know of your interests? Try again, and be more specific. Try to be original and uniquely you, like Martial Arts!! List about 6 or 8 things that interests you. The less you list, the less people may find they have something in common with you. And the less likely they'll give you the time of day.
"About me", well, it is bordering, teetering on sucking. But rely on the good doc and I'll pull ya through!
Ok, up in the "looking for, for" section, you put "woman" for "dating".
Yet in this section you have all over the place you seek friends and in a specific (narrow) area. Well, thats fine if thats the way you wanna go.
But this section is not as much about what you seek as it should be about you. What you are like, the kind of attitude you have, and perhaps a further indication of your likes and interests.
Stay away from the negatives of what youdont want or dont like. Stay with the positives, focused on you.
"First Date", yep, it sucks. I hate it with a passion (to say this) but the ladies, they look upon us to take control, to make the decisions on the first date. To make the call. What do you rreeaaallllyyyy wanna do on your first date with someone? Write it in this section. Keep it simple, keep it light.
Overall, this profile is what I call a "blender". It blends in to every other profile out there. You need some spark to it. Add some humor, and a bigger dose of YOU in it. Loosen up, have fun and go with it!!! Let me know how it shakes out for ya! | |
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| Timpommell's review!!! This is a good one!!
Posted: 5/3/2005 5:59:07 AM | Timpommel,
ha haha, you're headline, " I have chocolate", there ya go!!! Thats the way to reel 'em in! ha ha, by the friggin droves I am sure! ha ha ha, KEEP THIS! I just wish I had thought of it first!!
Ok now, about your pictures. Good primary picture. Good selection!
Were you aware that three of your pictures you have the same exact facial expression? How weird. No disrespect intended of course, but dayum! Do you have some pics where you are actually smiling laughing or otherwise having a good time? Try to put one of them bad boys in there too! Keep your primary picture, it is good. Loose the one of your bike (ok ok, kinda optional being that lots of ladies like the bikes but also the "image" a bike rider carries)
Your pics for the most part are alright. If I may however, lose the one with you and your big belly. No offense but between that and the inflatible Jack bottle behind ya, it is not that flattering a pic. I know I know,. you were just being honest.
"Dating Interests"
"Motorcycles", umm, yeah, we got that from the pics! lol
"Pool", ok, thats alright and commonly found.
"cook outs"? Can ya be a bit more specific with this? BBQ's? Family gatherings? One on one picnics? Just a little more detail here, k?
"Weekend getaways"? Definitions are in order. You mean like a bike ride up the coast, or maybe a motorcycle run to Sturgis? Or a B&B in Vermont.... nnnooo, I don't picture you being that type! ha ha.
Seriouosly though, I suspect you like to work with your hands. So why not put more of your interests in about things you like to do. Try to be more original and uniquely you, like motorcycles and home repair. You will not find those two things as rampant throughout POF as you might think.
"About me"
YOU have a sense of humor! I suspected as much with your headline! Good that you try to apply more of your wqit to your profile. It suggests you dont take this nor yourself too seriously and that you know how to kick back.
All that I can really suggest is to lose "Sometimes you get kicked in the teeth, but even then you can hold your head high knowing that you have the respect of friends, family and coworkers."
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"average looking"
Get rid of 'em both.
And lose this "I desperately want to quit smoking, and even tried the patch... but I couldn’t get it to stay lit."
Most of these things can be saved for an e-mail or two down the line.
The first half of this section I liked a lot. Ya done good. Very original!!! and funny as hell!
The second half, however. wweeeelllll, it is quite negative in regards to conveys what you do not want, nor like nor will put up with. A bit on the "soap box" of sorts too and may be put-offish to many many a'lady.
Perhaps you can boil the finer points down to a few sentences, and save the rest for later (much later) because I think you are hitting on a few points you really would like to put out there from the start.
Such as (as I shall suggest here):
HONESTY is extremely important to me and is the first thing that plays into a relationship AFTER physical chemistry and intellectual attraction. I feel that the chemistry test is important.
Finding your certain someone is a lot like shopping for shoes… It’s difficult to find someone that fits perfectly and is comfortable for any occasion.
(This is funny to imagine, a guy like you using a "shopping" metaphor. It is great and will work for ya)
I prefer girly-girls, but I also like the ones that can throw on a baseball cap and jeans and go for a road trip in the car with the top down, or cruise with me on my motorcycle.
"First Date"
I generally advise folks to keep it simple. Makes for less ramblings and misunderstandings. In your case, I want to say keep it as it is for it is original enough and funny.
However, what if a lady finds your profile and wants to meet up with you and really likes a moonlit walk along the beach with you. You stated its a snore. Does this mean you are not open to such a thing? If these responses mean you are not open to 'em, lose them entirely and have "Cookouts in the back yard with the neighbors and friends" and leave it at that. Keeping it simple.
Thats it, good luck. Good profile though. Definite originality in there! I had a few good laughs too! | |
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| I refuse to say do me There just isn't a way to make it sound hetrosexual
Posted: 5/3/2005 6:06:32 AM | Hey Chrisjc
You are a mind reader dude. I was just thinking that perhaps you could add a few Tupac's lyrics, he was a true poet (in my opinion) and it will impress upon people how ymuch you respected him for his works.
You did just that, good job. Maybe got a little too much on there though. Overkill is a bad thing. Cut it down to six or 8. I think the first half dozen is perfect, leave the rest out or perhaps use one in each e-mail you may send out to an interested party, ya know?
Good headline, but it is kind of a "blender".
Your profile does spell out who you are better though, so mad props to ya dude!! You are on the right track! | |
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| This - that
Posted: 5/3/2005 6:20:04 AM | @ keeley and Dr Jack: Concerning pictures; I don't agree with loose the picture where she was doing something. Not every picture has to show a pretty face. There is more to people than a pretty face. For instance, I just got my mail, there are 10 pics above that show the last people to get their mail, 9 face shots and me on top of a mountain, can't see my face but, if your a woman and you like the mountians, which one are you going to click on?
I think your off base on this one. I admit that the picture we are talking about was dark and it wasn't clear what was going on but it did show an overall body, which to me is just as important if not more so then a pretty face. I'll take an active person in good shape with an average face over an out of shape pretty face anyday. My view, and I suspect others would agree.
Good job on the pics keeley, I saw the new one and clicked on it before I knew it was you. See, I'll go for a pretty face too, that's because I haven't found the woman's pic on top of a mountain yet. Still looking. What I'd give for a pic of a woman on top a mountain with a backpack baby carrier. Lust at first sight!!!!   | |
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| This - that
Posted: 5/3/2005 6:25:46 AM | My oopinion, your opinion, we all gots one. Thanks for expressing yours. I never claimed to have the corner market.
I do, however, stand by my original thought that the pic with Keeley doing something with the carpet in her kitchen is a bit off and should be replaced with something else.
I do agree with you however that action pictures are ok too. So if Keeley has one in a bathing suit, jumping into the pool ;o) or perhaps a nive v'ball shot, or maybe even running towards the endzone... ha ha. Kidding of course.
Personally I think the three or four pictures of her, and with the very nice smile, is all she'll need with regards to pictures. But I understand she may have some more on the way that will shock and awe us, so let's keep a lookout. | |
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Posted: 5/3/2005 6:37:45 AM | see how nice ol jack is when he gives advice...thats how EVERYONE should do it keep up the good work jack | |
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| I'll review your profile and give ya some dating advice
Posted: 5/3/2005 7:05:41 AM | Hey ChrisMU2004,
Mind if I call ya "Chris" for short? lol
Ok, so now comes the review.
About your headline. Fix it.
It comes up short a little, we're missing something. Its trying to be original but it sputters out.
For headlines, originality, uniqueness is key. Thats the thing that will catch someones eye and drag 'em (often kicking and screaming) to view your profile more.
If you saw a lady's profile with the same headline, woul dyou be interested in giving it a looksie? I would doubt it.
How 'bout something like "seeks blue jean wearing fallen angel"?
I never said I was perfect at writing headlines. ha ha, just throwing an idea your way.
Use those creative juices and come up with something, or tweak whatcha got.
About your pics, I have to ask. Your primary pic.... well the expression on your face. What was going on when this pic was taken? What was happening around you??
Your third pic is of a car. A real babe magnet (my sarcasm knows no bounds). Please let this picture go. Drop it and do so now.
You also have a pic of your truck. wwwhhhyyyyy? I get it, you're in Iowa. Its probably the state vehicle or something. But atleast your primary picture has a small part of your truck in it with YOU in the picture.
Lose the truck and car, add a few more pictures of you, maybe in your surroundings. Tilling the fields, baling the hay, whatever you get to do normally out there in cornfield country.
"Dating Interests"
9 interests are listed, and a few are actually original enough to incite questions and possibly conversation. Good job.... but needs work. Just a little though.
Fixated on cars and trucks are ya? YOu have "Cars" listed, well... what about 'em?
you like to race 'em? Build them? Distroy them? Steal them? Too broad, open to vast amount of interpretation. Dont do that.
Same can be said for "trucks". What about 'em?
Now you also have "restoring my '84 pickup", ok thats original and uniquely you. Great!
"SNL"? As in the show or the sex games thing? ha ha, 'splain yourself!
Add a few more interests would ya? The more interests you list, the more chances somebody will find something in common with you and send you an e-mail.
"About me",
Not too shabby here, just a little minor nips and tucks needed, thats all.
Lose "and still don't know that many people"
Lose "I'm not looking for anything that isn't going to last"
That is quite presumptious. How do you know you are getting into something that "wont last"? You have to play it out, see where it goes, get a good impression thats how. And you can only do that by participation, not observation.
"When it comes to dating, I practice the golden rule and I'd like to find a girl who does the same."
We need a little more explanation here, as not many live by "the golden rule". So you will have to educate the masses.
Overall, in this section, you need a little more of you and your attitude and what you like and about, less of what you seek.
"First Date"
Keep it simple.
"Romantic stroll around town, then going to a nice restaurant and maybe a little slow dancing afterwards". Thats it, nothing more nothing less.
Now I got a question or two for you. Your "addendums" you listed for me, why didn't you put that in your profile? This would be original and very honest! Everyone appreciates such honesty! There are some great points in that that will translate well into the "about me" section of your profile. Give it a thought, ok?
Now go out there and catch ya a fishie!!!!!! | |
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| Seekinsoulmate, your turn!
Posted: 5/3/2005 7:32:43 AM | seekinsoulmate
Your turn :o)
About your headline, its nice and cute enough. "Dont be shy .. say hi"
Question though, do you think it is original enough to catch someones attention? To flag down their curiosity and their eye long enough to encite them to read more about you?
About your pictures:
You have a nice set of pictures, sure.
Your primary pic, with you and the huge flower, nice. Personally I like your second or fifth pic the best.
Irregardless, all of your pictures are nice, well lit and shows your face nicely.But really, do you have any "everyday" pictures? Any just in jeans tooling around the back yard or something? These pictures of yours looks almost nice enough to be professional or otherwise taken by non-amateurs of some type form or variety. If these were done by like your sister or someone, dayum!!
Ok, so now comes the Q&A part of the profile.
"Do you drink?Prefer Not To Say" This indicates to a majority of people that the answer may indeed be yes, and frequently. Whats the harm in answering Yes or No?
"Do you do drugs?Prefer Not To Say"This indicates to a majority of people that the answer may indeed be yes. Whats the harm in answering Yes or No?
Both unanswered would suggest hiding something. It seems like such minor questions, but if unable or unwilling to answer those, what about bigger questions, "will she fudge or decline to answer those too??"
"Dating Interests"
You indicate "cuddling family friends music romance"
So you commonly cuddle with your family and friends while playing music and romancing? GROSS!! lol
Heres a tip or two for ya.
1) After each interest, insert a comma (,)
2) The more interests you list, the more likely someone will have something in common with you and in turn will e-mail you.
3) Be specific. "Music" is too vague and too broad. What about music? Writing it? Singing it? Listening to it? And what kind?
"About me"
"Let me start by saying..."
No, uh uh, let me start by saying the start of this section is not good at all. A bit confrontational to be honest with ya. Is that how you really want to start? I bet not.
If I may suggest,
"32 yr old mother of one, with a fun outlook on life and love, seeks someone who enjoys romance, adventure, affection, appreciate the little things, being unique, just like me."
Please, lose anything and everything that is negative, that addresses what you dont want or what you aren't looking for. It is one huge waste of your time when it can be better spent explaining more about you and what you're about.
You hate lies? Well gosh, who loves 'em? Lose that and the thing about head games, not cyberring, and whether or not people believe you when you say there are not a lot of guys knocking on your door. I believe you, know why? For one (no offense intended... honest) you have a son. A kid. A lot of guys aren't ready or wish to be ready to handle such a responsibility. You yourself should be commended for pulling off that job each and everday!
But a lot of guys will shy away from women with kids. Either they aren't ready or some will not want ot be involved with a woman with another guys kid where they will have to share her time with her former lover who in turn had a kid. Its a territorial thing I suppose.
But I digress, I am going off topic.
Good list of things you like in your "about me" section, but how about clean it up a little. I mean organize some, make the flow better. Something like this:
"Amongst the many things that I enjoy, my favorites are spending time with my son, being uniquely me, spending time with family and friends, camping, laughing, and when with thats pecial someone, wherever he may be, I enjoy affection, appreciate the little things, cuddling, long kisses, intimacy, massages and romance as a whole.
"First Date"
Well, I have to say, it stunk. Why?
Simple.
You have to give us guys a heads up, clue us in on what you really like to do. You gave us some good impressions with sunsets and casual strolls and such, but what would you really like to do? Keep it simple, spell it out for us and that will be great! We need a clue ya know, otherwise we may take you skydiving when all you wanted was a stroll along the banks of the local river and maybe a nice picnic. ha ha | |
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| FoxDemonGirl Review
Posted: 5/3/2005 10:39:35 AM | FoxDemonGirl
Hmmm, interesting SN, based on your pic, perhaps you meant to be FoxYDemonGirl.
Ok, so about your headline. Boring and what I call a "blender". This simply means that your headline blends into all the others. Come on now, get creative. Imaginative. Think of something that'll grab someones attention. What would really grab your attention?
About your pics: They are ok, just barely.So tell me, do you smile? Is it possible to crack a smile and show them pearly whites? Find you a picture or two that'll show off that smile.
Your second pic, you almost are showing off your profile. Try to stand totally sideways then take the pic. Show off that figure, guys will respond!!!!!
Before I get into the meat and potatoes of your profile, I offer this one tiny suggestion. Watch the spelling. Oh sure, we all have that problem, so do not take it to heart. Just watch some of the misspellings, such as "Sales Associete", which should be "Sales Associate".
There is a few more examples, just re-read and edit where necessary. Might not hurt to copy and paste onto a Word doc, use spell checker. That'll clear up the easy faux pas, such as "becuase" and so forth.
Ok, on with the "Dating Interests" section.
You have a few really good things. Karaoke is good and you explained dancing slightly.
The biggest problem I see here is that you picked pretty much most of the "industry standards", which means you will find them on most every profile (guy or gal) out there. Unless of course they took my advice :o)
It's all about the specifics here!....
"Camping", well, what about it? What specifically do you like about it?
"Fishing", what about it? What specifically do you like about it?
"Movies", well, what about it? What specifically do you like about it?
"Video Games", what about it? What specifically do you like about it?
Got the point? Besides, technically, shouldn't fishing and hiking go under the guise of "campping"??
Put in about 4 or 5 more of your interests. And remember, specific!
In your "About me" section, there is some good stuff.
Your first line is good because, well, us guys rarely believe when a girl says that she is a good girl. Somewhere in our minds, we don't buy it. Whether true or not. So it always pays to follow it with some reference to being a devil or having a wild side or something. It only further feeds the theory! ha ha
LOSE THIS "...so much so that I have been really burned in the past."
This is a negative, and gives a bad impression. Let it go!
"Any guy that is willing to do the things that I love to do with me..." but you have spent nearly zero time up to this point explaining more about yourself. What you are like, your general attitude, and perhaps even expand more on things you like.
Spend more time on you, less on those you seek. If you do not say much about you, how will anyone know if they have anything in common with you much less be enticed to e-mail you?? The more you share, the better!
"First Date"
"I am a really layed(LAID) back person..."
Best to say "Easy-going".
Whats wrong with keeping it simple and writing, "Dinner at the local Denny's followed by a crazy night of Karaoke"?
Just keep in mind, you must give us guys a clue. We need a direction in which to go. Otherwise, as I have said until I am getting tired of saying it and will come up with a better line, "We may take you skydiving when all you really wanted was a nice dinner and some coffee"
So there ya are, my thoughts. | |
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| Rowdycowboy review
Posted: 5/3/2005 10:57:18 AM | Yo Rowdy Cowboy
"You know you wanna".
uummm, what?
You are close, soveryclose to having a good headline with that. Try just a wee harder with it, something is there!
Remember, be crazy, unique and creative. This should guarantee you to get noticed, to get someones attention enough to read more of your profile.
About your pictures,
The primary one is good, personally I'd have used your fifth one (red shirt, by a door)as my primary. But the one you used is a good second best.
You have one that would probably look killer, if it weren't so flippin dark. You have a hat on, cool hat from what I can see. Is there a way you can brighten it up some?
Keep the cat pic simply so that you convey to the ladies that you have a cat.
Lose the photo of you and your buddies. I disapprove, the doctor has spoken! ha ha
Seriously though, I advise everyone to not use pictures with more than one person (they themselves) in it. Too easy for people to misconstrue or otherwise misstake one of your buddies for you or maybe even scope them out instead of you. That would be a kicker, wouldn't it?
"Do you do drugs?Prefer Not To Say"
So the answer is "Yes", why dont you just answer it? Whenever someone does not answer it, invariably people believe the worst. If you do, admit it. If you do not, better change that quickly so people wont think that you do.
"Profession: Laughter"? Hey, thats great!
So on to your "Dating Interests"
Lose (or expand and be wwaaayyy more specific) the following:
Reading
Movies,
Music,
Dancing,
The great outdoors,
Walking,
Friends,
Great Friends.
I made the suggestion to lose 'em or expand on them because simply as they are, they are too vague and general. Be specific.
What about reading? You eat the books? Maybe actually read them? What kind of books?
What about movies? You shoot 'em? Be in 'em? Watch them? What kinds?
You get the point.
"About me"
Lose the first three sentences without hesitation. I would move the second sentence, "To meet some interesting women over coffee, drinks or any type of liquid beverage" possibly down to "First Date" if not just end this section with that. But not to start.
You were going along just fine until you hit a bump.
"John Wayne wanna be", what does this mean? Many many people might not get that. John Wayne is usually regarded as a gung ho, highly**** and forthwith kinda guy. Is that what you mean? But then you follow it with some BS about waking up in some cottage and such. You planning on kidnapping people there Dutch? I wouldn't believe so.
I liked most of the rest of what you wrote, except "Most things don't bother me, accept rude and ignorant people"
A) It's "Except" not "Accept"
B) Too negative. Stay away from that, keep focus on your and the positivity. You were doing good!!
Also suggest to lose:
"...wear my heart on my sleeve" (may indicate weakness and a floormat)
The rest, definitely keeper material! Good job!!
"First Date":
"You'll never know what I am going to do next..."
Save this for later, perhaps in a second or third e-mail. And thank you for ripping me off of my own saying! lol
Keep this part simple, direct and to the point.
Go with most of this, "I'd rather throw fallen leaves at you, dance under the stars with a boom box, take you to the zoo and tell you what animal you look like, get dressed up to the 9's and go see The Monsters Trucks, laying down in bed at an Ikea's Bedroom Display."
Although most may not get this "...laying down in bed at an Ikea's Bedroom Display" thing.
Don't forget also to use somewhere "To meet some interesting women over coffee, drinks or any type of liquid beverage." Thats good.
Ok, thats it.
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| Onemoretime review
Posted: 5/3/2005 11:32:44 AM | Onemoretime
About your headline, "looking for someone I can trust",
now perhaps you wer enot entirely sure what the deal was here or what the intention was with this, so please allow me, the goodest doctor, 'splain it for ya.
You see, Headlines can be thought of as a hook. A nice, razor sharp hook to catch many peoples attention, to snag their eye and entice them to look further on yoru profile.
You hook 'em you see, you can then reel them in with the rest of your profile.
So you need to be creative and imaginative. What would catch your attention??
About your pictures, you have a great smile! Definitely keep the pics you have! Great job!
I noticed that you skipped over the "Dating Interests" section.
Why'd ya do that?
Generally, this section is for you to list what interests you. What do you like to do for fun, for hobbies and so forth. This is the place to put that. Just remember to be specific. Dont put "reading", put what you like to read.
Dont put "music", but rather what kinds of music. You get the point.
Now in the "About me" section, you want to tell more about yourself. What you are like, the general attitude you of yours (are you a pessimist or optimist?) as well as maybe add in a few more things you like to do or perhaps as to why.
Also, be sure to remain focused on positive stuff and stay away from negatives. Do not write about what you dont want, or who you wouldlike to avoid or problems from previous experiences. This is the time to put on the best face possible. The rest of the stuff can be saved for much later.
"First Date"
Perfection! Great job!!
Thats it. See, that did't hurt much now did it?
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| I'll review your profile and give ya some dating advice
Posted: 5/3/2005 2:09:25 PM | Here Dr. J... take time to sit back once in awhile...you're my favorite Doctor...only second to Dr. Phil!!! I do understand the thing about the pic, and as I already told you oh wise one--more are going to be made...so keep watch...plus..i have another idea for a thread...hopin you'll help me with it...? Will tell you more later...hugzzzzzzzz kelly | |
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| Wyldranger review
Posted: 5/3/2005 3:37:11 PM | Ok wyldone, er um I mean ranger. Wyldranger! ha ha
Your headline, "Cowboy love".
You really believe this is going to catch ahold of someones attention and entice them to read your profile? If you saw a profile that started "Cowgirl love", would you look? The answer is No, not really.
Get creative and original. What would catch your attention? What do you think will catch someones eye and get em to read further? Go with it, have fun with it!
About your pics:
The third is good, perhaps consider using this as your primary pic?
The second is of a truck and just a truck.Are you maybe IN the truck? ha ha, lose it.
The first pic, in fatigues by a cop car, that will be good. Ladies like guys in uniform!
On to the "Dating Interests" section:
"One word FUN doesnt matter"?
Watch how you write things, this makes it sound like you dont like fun. Fun doesn't matter. That true? Bet not. ha ha, lose that. Its too general anyway. Specifics, thats the key!
Good listing of outside things, such as canoeing, hiking, surfing and so forth. But what do you do at night? ha ha, wouldn't hurt to add a few more interests that are unique, like "historic Sites" you have. THAT is unique and you will not find it in most other profiles! Good job on that one! Museums too, not a lot of guys will write it.
"About me":
Lose "outgoing but reserved"
Choose either or, OR explain yourself a bit as to why you are this way.
Also I would suggest to lose, "im constantly thinking even though you wont find out what it is im thinkin of." Makes no sense and out of place.
This has no place here, perhaps in a first or second e-mail.
"the movie legends of back in the day in heaven", huh? Needs a little something something here bud, perhaps an example. Greta? Maybe Audrey in her day?
Keep focused on about you, and being positive. Stay away from the "what I want" and not want. Negativity is not going to be a selling point.
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he heals the broken hearted and bandages their wounds Psalm 147:3"
You religious? Is that a main center in your life? If so, you need to stress it a bit more than just one little quote from the bible. Otherwise, drop it and sace it for later.
"First date"
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| Keeley and Kitykity profile updates!
Posted: 5/3/2005 3:42:00 PM | @ Keeley,
Well now, a few new pics to add to the list! Nice, good job!
Whats the deal with the fifth pic, looks like some photoshoppin' was going on. ha ha.
@ Kitykity,
Holy S**t Batman, she has some killer eyes!! Tres cool Kitykity
Now all you need to do is expand your interests some and you will have the premier profile I think!
Great job with the pics!! | |
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| Keeley and Kitykity profile updates!
Posted: 5/3/2005 4:29:22 PM | | fixed a few things; however im a country boy and i was raised to be truthful, if a woman runs from seein my truck or the farm i live on then so be it, i did remove some things you were right about, review this profile---motorman449 hes overseas and requested i have it done | |
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