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| valentinoagain reviewed
Posted: 5/6/2005 12:11:02 PM | Valentino, Val, dude!
So here is a more specific review 'fer ya!
Your headline, "Wonder if???"
WTF???? lol
This is supposed to grab someones attention?
"Wonder if?"
"Who cares?"
TRY AGAIN!
Your Pictures, way overboard. Keep the first, second, seventh and eight. Lose the rest. They work against ya!!
Dating Interests:
"Reading"? No, be more specific or lose it totally.
"Travelling"? NO, it's "traveling". Watch the spelling. And be more specific. What about traveling?
"romance (to be with just you caring and looking at your eyes and knowing how soft smooth sweet perso"
Get rid of this BS, come on dude. THINK!!!!!!
"adventures?? dont mean sex" Lose the "?? dont mean sex" and add specifics. What kind of adventure?
"shopping sometimes if it is mine means my shopping" LOSE LOSE LOSE.
"About me"
No, not gonna work. Lose all of it. Instead, I suggest you put in more about you. How is your general outlook, maybe expand a little as to how you like to have fun. Focus on the positive things of what you are about and what you seek, stay far far away from the things you do not want.
"First Date"
I gotta be honest with you bud. It sounds awfully.... well, how can I put this without being so crude.
It sounds awfully AWFUL. Whipped almost, to a point of being balls-less. OMG dude, let's get some spine in that there First Date!
Keep it simple and decisive.
"Dinner and conversation". That'll work best for you. I know I know, not very original. But if you can come up with something better, PLEASE do! | |
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| ItsGary's turn!
Posted: 5/6/2005 12:20:47 PM | ItsGary's turn!
Your headline, "tired of head games? me to.."
This gives the impression that you once were a participant. You really wanna go that way?
You are close to something, but not quite there. Try again, I think you might get it on yoru next try. Just relax, think and be creative. Remember, you wanna catch someones attention and pique their curiosity!
Your pictures, good first and second pic. Lose the rest, they work against ya!
Dating Interests, Good mix. Lose "movies" or be more specific.
Drop "music" as well or be more specific.
"Cottage life"????
"About me"
LOSE THIS "OK some of you obviously didnt really get the gist of my profile - soooo lemme clear it up fer ya - if by chance you are a mutation or just want a discrete encounter - beat it - dont message me - it just wastes both of our time) Ok description time >> "
Too negative and bad to start a profile on this note. The chicks will be dropping off of your profile in droves.
Start your profile here "Im always in a good mood and I am described by my friends as a fit athletic extrovert that is a bit of a risk taker soooooo...."
I would tweak this a little and either say for certain you believe you are fit athletic extrovert that is a bit of a risk taker or don't put it in there at all. You sound too tenative. Thats a bad thang!
Suggestion: Stay away from anything negative, either about yourself, or what you DONT want and such. It never works, so dont waste the space and time. Just keep focused on what you ARE like and what you DO want.
Spelling, "what yer spellin' boy!". lol
"r nuttin " is this supposed to be "are nothing"?
Don't be lazy with the words or otherwise the ladies will pick up on that and drop you thusly.
Re-read your profile and check the spelling as well as the negativity. Lose the negativity.
"First date", funny! You DO have a sense of humor. Kinda warped around the edges too I bet! You should use more of it throughout your profile.
It's close enough to original that I have to say "Good going dude!". Keep it as is!!
Thats it for now.
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| ItsGary's turn!
Posted: 5/6/2005 12:26:55 PM | Hi there!
I updated my profile can you check it out? What do you think about the new pics?
D | |
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| Skip1701 review
Posted: 5/6/2005 12:27:10 PM | Skip1701
Headline "Sincere Ontario Male"
This equates to "nice guy" which also equates to "boring".
Spice it up some. Add some dashes of humor and just a tad of outrageousness. Have fun with this. You want to catch peoples attention in the headline, not lull 'em to sleep!!
Go on now, have fun with it. Be original!!
"Dating Interests"
Good variations but would it kill ya to be a little more specific on some of these?
Such as "Books", & "TV".
Good job avoiding the same with Music and Movies! A definite gold star there!
"About me"
Oh for pity's sake PLEASE lose the word "average". It sucks and women may equate that to ""Sincere Ontario Male"
Watch your spelling.
"...so I have quiet the few stories..." should be "...so I have QUITE the few stories..."
"..expencive..." should be "...expensive..."
Put more about you and what you seek. Keep positive, stay away from the negatives.
"First date" original somewhat and funny. Keep it!!!
Thats it for now.
JM | |
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| ItsGary's turn!
Posted: 5/6/2005 12:29:50 PM | Ginger,
Your "Dating Interests" are a bit busy and crowded. List something then place a comma (,) between it and should space it out some.
Great pics! Your headline is about as good as you can go for!! Good job. Tweaks still needed. But you are definitely on the right track!!!!! | |
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| SarGasm review
Posted: 5/6/2005 12:35:25 PM | SarGasm,
Interesting SN there bud.
About your headline, "I'm Baaaaaack..."
Nice to know and all, but ummm. This gonna catch folks attention ya think? I doubt it. Use more of your creativity and humor and come up with something more outrageous and original!
About your pictures:
Keep the first, second and fifth, chuck the rest, they work against ya.
I personally would use the second pic as your primary.
"Dating Interests"
Good job!! Lots os interesting and unique things listed.Good way you did that, a gold star for ya today!
"About me"
You have a great start and your humor kinda is just there waiving at the reader. Good job here too,
"First Date" is pretty good too. Overall you have one of the better profileson POF! Good use of words, terrible use of punctuation yet you addressed it too. Definitely original for the most part!!
Good job! | |
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| JSmooth review.... the humanity!!
Posted: 5/6/2005 12:40:19 PM | JSmooth,
Your headline, "Beautiful Brunette Baby"
uummm, what about it? That supposed to be you or who you seek?
Too confusing and vague. Come up with something more unique and original, something to catch some peoples eye.
"Dating Interests",
Ok ok, I get it now. You are not really looking for someone persey, just maybe a few buds to chat with. So why dont you put that down? And while you're at it, put down in this section the many things that interests you. The more you put, the more chance someone will find a similarity and drop you an e-mail if you dont send them one first.
"About me"
It both sucks and blows. Try again. Tell about yourself, what you're like. Keep on the positive side too, don't focus on negative sh*t like "Things are going that bad. Change my luck and drop me a line". WTF you thinking??! Going for the pity vote, is that it?
"First date"
Lose it, come up with something better, and original. | |
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| Ladydi, 'da reviews are in!!
Posted: 5/6/2005 12:44:52 PM | Ladydi,
Yep, I make all this look so easy. Wish I could do this for a living! ha ha.
So about your profile.
I like your headline, original enough. KEEP IT!!
Your pictures, 1st, 3rd, 5th, & 7th are keepers. Lose the rest, they do not work for you!
"Dating Interests"
Great variety!! With exception of "movies" (be more specific) I'd definitely say these have originality and uniquely you written all over 'em! Great job!!
Very good "About me" & "First date" sections too. Original, I will give ya that!;o) | |
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| Reviews
Posted: 5/6/2005 12:47:29 PM | wow, only 15 reviews left before all caught up! I figure this time next week I'll have 'em done! ha ha 
Stay tuned folks, the good doctor is just getting started!   | |
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| Thanks Jack
Posted: 5/6/2005 2:07:45 PM | thanks for the input there Jack...i should be putting up a few different photos in the next little while!
keep on keepin' on! | |
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| Thanks Jack
Posted: 5/6/2005 3:06:42 PM | | Asks where he takes a number to get in line for the review? | |
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| Thanks Jack
Posted: 5/6/2005 3:21:10 PM | wow thanks jack...i am off to review my pics..i bet you wanted me to keep the bass kissin one cuz ya liked my shirt, right?
but i appreciate you takin the time to give me a tweak today!!  muuuaahhh!!! | |
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| Thanks Jack
Posted: 5/6/2005 3:21:53 PM | | I'm afraid to ask.... | |
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| More this-n-thats
Posted: 5/6/2005 4:47:32 PM | @ SarGasm,
You're welcome, glad to help.Lemme know how it goes fer ya!
@ pouyqwert_nd, consider your number assigned and you are in line!
@ Ladydi, yep you are correct 'bout the pic! ha ha.You are welcome for the suggestions.
@ Domeroth, not be 'fraid to ask thangs of 'ol Doc JM. Profile review coming up soon. | |
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| Organs review
Posted: 5/6/2005 5:00:00 PM | Organs,
Not sure if I'd say yours suck in totality, so chill dude.
Well now, thats an original Sn for ya, so good job on that!
Your headline, "Who's up for a laugh at 3am?", kinda oddball. Not entirely creative but definitely unique. May catch some attention and a few replies.
Your Picture, kinda grainy and dark. Can you find one or make one thats a bit lighter and shows your face better? It would help.
"Dating Interests"
Before I go any further, I'd suggest you checking out previous posts and suggestions. It'll give you some excellent ideas, of which you are badly in need of.
Keep the guitar interests though. Its original enough!
In your "About me" section, it's kinda bare. You need more about you, what you're like and who or what you seek. And dont go for the negatives of what you don't want or what you dont like. Thats a waste of time and space.
Again, look at past posts for ideas.
You need to use more of that sense of humor you have. Its just itchin to be used! So go with it. Loosen up and have fun!
Good and original First date too, good job on that! | |
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| travelgirl75459 Review
Posted: 5/6/2005 5:06:28 PM | travelgirl75459
Your headline, not very original. YOu wanna catch some attention here, enough so as to entice folks to read further onto your profile and not just to read on beyond your profile. Try again.
Think unique, think creative and think FUN!!
Pictures,
I like your first and third pic. Lose the rest of em as they are too distant or what have you and totally work against you.
"Dating Interests"
You actaully put "almost anything".
BAD MOVE!!!
This, I think, is the one biggest boo boo most people make. This is where you really show your stuff! What are you interested in? Its that simple really.
Perhaps you like reading. DONT PUT READING! Be more specific as "reading" is too friggin general. Anything general i sopen to interpretation and more than likely backfires on ya.
For example, let's say you actually put in there, "Movies".
Another general and very broad interest.
Think a moment, will ya? How many movies do you suppose has been made since turn of the century? Now of all those movies, how many different variations and genre do you think there are?
If you think about it, the different varieties are staggeringly high. Do you really like all of those differences and varieties? I am gonna bet "no". So be specific. You like horror over comedy? Maybe chick flicks versus guy movies of shoot-emn-up bang bang movies. Whatever the case, be specific. This is a very important key that may unlock your future happiness should you meet someone!
"Dinner". Yeah, there is a real specific interest too. Wanna even start to imagine how many different types of dinners and foods and scenarios there are? One would geta headache just trying. Again, specifics!!!
Generally, there are a few "industry standards" to avoid. Well, maybe not avoid, just be more specific.
TV/Movies
Dinner/cooking
Camping
Music
Reading/books
Computers
Always ask yourself, "what about 'em". Then fill it in some as to what you like about them, or what variety or what have you.
And my other tip is, be sure to have lots of things listed. 8 or 10 is what I would go with.
Why?
Its the shotgun theory, for those who hunt. You see, a shotgun shell has many tiny little pellets generally called "buckshot". When the gun is fired, these buckshot spread out as they fly through the air towards the target, ensuring larger coverage and thus, better chance at hitting something.
You are the gun. Your interests are the buckshot. And the more you list (and specify) of interests, the better chance you have of having something in common with someone else that will, thusly, create a hit! Then an e-mail is sent and before long, you are at the beginning of a nice relationship.
"About me"
This section is where you can tie in all in. This is THE place you want to express yourself as to who you are. What your attitude on life is like. Maybe expand some more on your interests too.
Tell about yourself, stay positive. Don't go referring to the ex or please do not go on and on about what you do not want from a person or what you do not like. This is a bigas* turnoff and it can be best left for later, after the first contact e-mail.
Remain focused on yourself and what you want. End this section with who you seek. What kind of person. Again, stay away from the negatives of who you do NOT want and so forth. Stay positive! | |
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| Cuddleee Review
Posted: 5/6/2005 5:15:03 PM | Cuddleee,
Your headline, "looking 4 1 of a kind" looiks too much like you seek 41 flavors or something. It may catch an eye alright, but perhaps not the kind of attention you seek. Redo the headline. Just think creatively and uniquely you.
About your pics.... well I gotta say that they are two of the more lovely photos. The lighting is just about right and we can see your face. If I may suggest, how 'bout one with that killer smile I am sure you posess!
"Dating Interests"
This, I think, is the one biggest boo boo most people make. This is where you really show your stuff! What are you interested in? Its that simple really.
Perhaps you like reading. DONT PUT READING! Be more specific as "reading" is too friggin general. Anything general i sopen to interpretation and more than likely backfires on ya.
For example, let's say you actually put in there, "Movies".
Another general and very broad interest.
Think a moment, will ya? How many movies do you suppose has been made since turn of the century? Now of all those movies, how many different variations and genre do you think there are?
If you think about it, the different varieties are staggeringly high. Do you really like all of those differences and varieties? I am gonna bet "no". So be specific. You like horror over comedy? Maybe chick flicks versus guy movies of shoot-emn-up bang bang movies. Whatever the case, be specific. This is a very important key that may unlock your future happiness should you meet someone!
"Dinner". Yeah, there is a real specific interest too. Wanna even start to imagine how many different types of dinners and foods and scenarios there are? One would geta headache just trying. Again, specifics!!!
Generally, there are a few "industry standards" to avoid. Well, maybe not avoid, just be more specific.
TV/Movies
Dinner/cooking
Camping
Music
Reading/books
Computers
Always ask yourself, "what about 'em". Then fill it in some as to what you like about them, or what variety or what have you.
And my other tip is, be sure to have lots of things listed. 8 or 10 is what I would go with.
Why?
Its the shotgun theory, for those who hunt. You see, a shotgun shell has many tiny little pellets generally called "buckshot". When the gun is fired, these buckshot spread out as they fly through the air towards the target, ensuring larger coverage and thus, better chance at hitting something.
You are the gun. Your interests are the buckshot. And the more you list (and specify) of interests, the better chance you have of having something in common with someone else that will, thusly, create a hit! Then an e-mail is sent and before long, you are at the beginning of a nice relationship.
"About me"
This section is where you can tie in all in. This is THE place you want to express yourself as to who you are. What your attitude on life is like. Maybe expand some more on your interests too.
Tell about yourself, stay positive. Don't go referring to the ex or please do not go on and on about what you do not want from a person or what you do not like. This is a bigas* turnoff and it can be best left for later, after the first contact e-mail.
Remain focused on yourself and what you want. End this section with who you seek. What kind of person. Again, stay away from the negatives of who you do NOT want and so forth. Stay positive!
And finally, the "First Date"
If I may take a second here. Ladies, We appreciate you writing in the "first date" section how you'd leave it up to us guys or maybe even just "whatever" in this section but you know, it really helps us out a lot if you give us a clue what you might consider. You see, it would be dreadful for all involved if you were the type who expected a nice dinner and maybe some dancing, but we took you skydiving instead because all you said was "whatever he wants".
That may make for a bad first date especially for someone who is terrified of heights. ha ha.
So all I am saying here is help us out just a bit. Give us a direction in which to go. Clue us in on what you would really like to do on the first date. We'll take it from there, I think we'll be able to handle things from that point!
Ok, so there ya have it. My points and helpful hints. | |
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| travelgirl75459 Review
Posted: 5/6/2005 5:15:19 PM | K Dr. , lol
Just give me aweek , i'm so busy now, work, exams, certificates , but then you can give me another chance ?????
At least it is the way it worked here in my country lol | |
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| Dulcet review
Posted: 5/6/2005 5:20:14 PM | Ok Dulcet, you're next under the microscope.
About your headline, "Why Not Me?"
Please consider this: Your headline is designated to catch peoples attention.
None of this "Nice guy/gal seeks..." stuff. Boring!! Get creative, get crazy! Have fun with it. Try to think of what would catch YOUR eye, to hold your attention enough for you to go reading further of someones profile.
Do you really believe "Why Not Me?" is gonna do that? What would catch your attention?
Your pictures, nice scenery but obviously none of you. But being taht all you seek is friends and nothing else, whats it matter?
"Dating Interests" (I really hate repeating myself time and time again. Thank God for Cut and Paste! ha ha ha)
This, I think, is the one biggest boo boo most people make. This is where you really show your stuff! What are you interested in? Its that simple really.
Perhaps you like reading. DONT PUT READING or movies or music! Be more specific as "reading" is too friggin general. Anything general is open to interpretation and more than likely backfires on ya.
For example, let's say you actually put in there, "Movies".
Another general and very broad interest.
Think a moment, will ya? How many movies do you suppose has been made since turn of the century? Now of all those movies, how many different variations and genre do you think there are?
If you think about it, the different varieties are staggeringly high. Do you really like all of those differences and varieties? I am gonna bet "no". So be specific. You like horror over comedy? Maybe chick flicks versus guy movies of shoot-emn-up bang bang movies. Whatever the case, be specific. This is a very important key that may unlock your future happiness should you meet someone!
"Dinner". Yeah, there is a real specific interest too. Wanna even start to imagine how many different types of dinners and foods and scenarios there are? One would geta headache just trying. Again, specifics!!!
Generally, there are a few "industry standards" to avoid. Well, maybe not avoid, just be more specific.
TV/Movies
Dinner/cooking
Camping
Music
Reading/books
Computers
Always ask yourself, "what about 'em". Then fill it in some as to what you like about them, or what variety or what have you.
And my other tip is, be sure to have lots of things listed. 8 or 10 is what I would go with.
Why?
Its the shotgun theory, for those who hunt. You see, a shotgun shell has many tiny little pellets generally called "buckshot". When the gun is fired, these buckshot spread out as they fly through the air towards the target, ensuring larger coverage and thus, better chance at hitting something.
You are the gun. Your interests are the buckshot. And the more you list (and specify) of interests, the better chance you have of having something in common with someone else that will, thusly, create a hit! Then an e-mail is sent and before long, you are at the beginning of a nice relationship.
"About me"
This section is where you can tie in all in. This is THE place you want to express yourself as to who you are. What your attitude on life is like. Maybe expand some more on your interests too.
Tell about yourself, stay positive. Don't go referring to the ex or please do not go on and on about what you do not want from a person or what you do not like. This is a bigas* turnoff and it can be best left for later, after the first contact e-mail.
Remain focused on yourself and what you want. End this section with who you seek. What kind of person. Again, stay away from the negatives of who you do NOT want and so forth. Stay positive!
Thats about it. See? Painless. | |
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| travelgirl75459 Review
Posted: 5/6/2005 5:26:50 PM | Okay, I made some updates to my ad. I think it's a lot better now. I can't think of a better headline, though, unless I try to be out and whacked about it (like "Ow! OOH! THAT BURNS!!").
I'll work on my picture, though. Getting a better picture will involve the hope of seeing my brother again, asking him to take my picture, and then asking that he e-mails it to me. I'll make the effort, though. | |
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| Drutort Review
Posted: 5/6/2005 5:30:23 PM | Drutort, or is it Val?
Your headline, "DIY Drummer looking 4 the special"
Welp, thats original enough. Not many will know what DIY is and is open for interpretation. Might result ina few e-mailing you to ask just WTF DIY is, others may just cruise right past ya.
Your pics, Keep the 1st, 4th and 7th. Lose the rest. They are either too dark or whatever. They work against ya!
You have no dating interests listed. None at all.
This, I think, is the one biggest boo boo most people make. This is where you really show your stuff! What are you interested in? Its that simple really. You put nothing, no one will respond as it will seem you have no interests and therefore b-o-r-i-n-g!
Perhaps you like reading. DONT PUT READING! Be more specific as "reading" is too friggin general. Anything general i sopen to interpretation and more than likely backfires on ya.
For example, let's say you actually put in there, "Movies".
Another general and very broad interest.
Think a moment, will ya? How many movies do you suppose has been made since turn of the century? Now of all those movies, how many different variations and genre do you think there are?
If you think about it, the different varieties are staggeringly high. Do you really like all of those differences and varieties? I am gonna bet "no". So be specific. You like horror over comedy? Maybe chick flicks versus guy movies of shoot-emn-up bang bang movies. Whatever the case, be specific. This is a very important key that may unlock your future happiness should you meet someone!
"Dinner". Yeah, there is a real specific interest too. Wanna even start to imagine how many different types of dinners and foods and scenarios there are? One would geta headache just trying. Again, specifics!!!
Generally, there are a few "industry standards" to avoid. Well, maybe not avoid, just be more specific.
TV/Movies
Dinner/cooking
Camping
Music
Reading/books
Computers
Always ask yourself, "what about 'em". Then fill it in some as to what you like about them, or what variety or what have you.
And my other tip is, be sure to have lots of things listed. 8 or 10 is what I would go with.
Why?
Its the shotgun theory, for those who hunt. You see, a shotgun shell has many tiny little pellets generally called "buckshot". When the gun is fired, these buckshot spread out as they fly through the air towards the target, ensuring larger coverage and thus, better chance at hitting something.
You are the gun. Your interests are the buckshot. And the more you list (and specify) of interests, the better chance you have of having something in common with someone else that will, thusly, create a hit! Then an e-mail is sent and before long, you are at the beginning of a nice relationship.
I like your "About me" section. Reallu thought out and personal. Good job here!!
"First Date"
Nope, its too vague and tentative.
Dude, guy, Val. Here's the deal. Whether we like it or hate it, this is where we can either seal the deal or seal our fate.
We HAVE to take charge here, and indicate what we would like to do on the first date and be specific as possible. We have to take control, it is expected. None of this "maybe", or "might" stuff, no no. Don't be tentative. And don't write "whatever the lady would like". No no. Oh sure, sweet thought and nice gesture sure. But guys, let's have a contingency plan at the very least. Because odds are she will be expecting you to take control and will invariably say "I don't know, what would you like to do?"
Save time and save face here, buddy! Take control, make the call!
Just don't go writing "sex" or some BS like that. First date dude! Let's keep it gentlemanly, ya know? | |
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| travelgirl75459 Review
Posted: 5/6/2005 5:33:50 PM | | Oops, I didn't mean the title of my last post to imply I was referring to travelgirl's. My bad. | |
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| Organ & Valentino
Posted: 5/6/2005 5:35:23 PM | @ Organ,
I definitely see a marked improvement in your 'About Me' section. GOOD job!!!!
The "Interests" section however, still need some work
Remember, be as specific as you can as often as you can.
Music? Movies?Cooking? Too general and vague.
Overall, good improvement. Tweak a little more and take care of the picture issue when you can and you will have a happenin' profile dude!!
@ Valentino,
Ok, you got 10 days! ha ha, get it together dude! | |
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