| maxisalexis review
Posted: 5/11/2005 8:21:26 AM | maxisalexis
"enjoy life !! no strings"
Not entirely sure what you mean by this? Are you one who "enjoys life, without strings"? Or seek one who does? The headline, or the thought behind it, is original, just not the wording. Try it again and see what you might come up with.
Your picture, looks good enough. Keep it. Maybe add one or two more, a little closer to the camera and maybe in different settings. But for now, your pic'll do.
Dating Interests
"Canoeing Reading Travel Volleyball"
With exception of Volleyball and possibly canoeing, it's not good here. You need more specifics in travel and reading, and add more interests that hold your attention. The more interests you put, the more likely someone will have similar interests and thus begins the e-mail wars! lol
"About me"
You started off great in the first sentence or two, but then crashed and burned afterwards with the negativity of "i cannot stand someone with an attitude problem whoever she may be !!!!"
Oh buddy, lose this crap. You are way better than putting that in and mucking up a potentially awesome section!
Instead, I suggest you focus more of telling about yourself. You rgeneral outlook, your take on things and the qualities of yourself that make you y-o-u. Maybe even expand a little on one or two of your interests, like travel.
And near the end, go ahead and put what you seek. Not what you DONT seek, but what you do. Stay positive.
"First Date"
Fairly good, may I suggest this (or something like it)?:
"Fun has no limits !!
go to a club after a nice dinner, and depending on the time we're having, maybe even sit on a beachfront or hilltop and enjoy the scenery"
That rocks dude!!
Ok, thats it for now. I am outta here | |
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| I'll review your profile and give ya some dating advice
Posted: 5/11/2005 8:33:43 AM | Ok Jack Mack here is that Girls profile
that included her adult website which couldnt post
but Im Sure any Men on Here are familiar with.
she says hasnt spoken to me in long time,That was A Week Agos Response to her
because jack mack and others said us men need to approach writing to the ladies
in which I DID.~LOL~
shorty22
I am Seeking a Man For Talk/E-mail
Do you drink?Socially
Marital StatusSingle
Profession college softball player
Do you want children?yes Do you do drugs?No Drink Socially Do you have children?No
Dating Interests love to play softball
About Me
I am an independent, confident, and classy lady. I am career-driven and desire and expect the best from myself and the people in my life. I am a terribly witty and sarcastic person who is able to talk intellectually and express my cogent thoughts, but much prefer to keep it light and bubbly. Most of my life is about humor and enjoying those around me. I love to entertain and tend to be the social butterfly that introduces people within a group to engage everyone. The greatest compliments someone can afford tome are those of being perseverant, respected, demure, rational, intelligent, and a good friend. I consider myself to be driven, open-minded, able to empathize with multiples sides of an issue and an overall moral person. I can’t wait to meet you!
First DateI am seeking someone who is also outgoing and one who has an open mind. Very intelligent, humorus and kool individual is who I'm looking 4. | |
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| I'll review your profile and give ya some dating advice
Posted: 5/11/2005 8:54:09 AM | Hey Jack,
I read your advice column and thought I could get some good advice from a person who knows th right words to say. I will tell you some of the things i wrote and maybe you
can redefine them. I'm a graduate from Va.-Tech in Veterinary Medicine. I ha a BA in
Science and pretty good person to hang around with. I like going out having dinner,
movie's and what ever or what ever she wants to do that evening. I'm very honest and sincere and would really like to meet a really nice girl. I like alot of things so I'm not going to waste your time on righting them down. but if you could give some pointers I would appreciate it.
Regards,
Valentino | |
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Tazz™
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Joined: 3/19/2005
Msg: 456 | |
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| vahn7ca review
Posted: 5/11/2005 1:34:03 PM | | Thanks man im gonna revamp it right now, check it out later and review it again plz | |
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100%me
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Joined: 5/1/2005
Msg: 459 | |
| I'll review your profile and give ya some dating advice
Posted: 5/11/2005 7:42:17 PM | DEAR DANCEINPANTS:
Just a thought, but maybe you should take some of your own advice on the profile thing. I've seen yours. Holy grammar issues. You tell people to fix their own typos, yet, lo and behold, you've got them yourself! Improper use of words, incorrect spelling.......i could go on. Why give advice to others, when you can't follow it yourself!
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| I'll review your profile and give ya some dating advice
Posted: 5/12/2005 4:01:40 AM | to 100%me
A) This coming from a computer generated pic in a profile less than stellar?
B) You more worried about spelling or content?
C) When you go fishing, are you often this anal as to how shiney your hook is as opposed to actually whats on the hook?
D) Typos are a way of cyberlife. Deal with it or not, your own choice. If you choose to have a more narrow mind to look at the words instead of what they are saying, more power to ya.
E) I have a few more choice words I'll be happy to misspell for you if you call me DANCEINPANTS. But then again, perhaps you were confused and meant it for her. Sorry, she ain't here! | |
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| I'll review your profile and give ya some dating advice
Posted: 5/12/2005 7:40:57 AM | @Jack: You missed on the dancinpants and 100%me one totally, look back in the thread, it wasn't aimed at you.
I agree on the typos, you should do everything to get rid of them if you want to appear more intelligent on here. Most of us do want to appear intelligent I believe. I sure make my share, I try to go back a reread what I've typed and fix them if I've got the chance. A cleanly typed and well thought out post also lets people know a little about yourself, that you are one that takes the time and effort to do things right, a detail person. Details aren't important to everybody, to each his own, that's what makes this dating thing and match finding such a challenge. Your doing a great job here.  | |
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| torturedgardener, your turn!
Posted: 5/12/2005 9:46:33 AM | @ endogoddess
Great pic of a car.
@ Kemikal, somewhat improved site. Good job there dude! Just dont forget about them two pics. Get rid of 'em.
@ Sopay, in your profile you write "i don't give a rats a$$ about what other people think of me."
Your profile says that and in that light, why ya even curious as to what I gots ta say dude? | |
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| Have a boo
Posted: 5/12/2005 9:58:13 AM | | Ok i made some changes so maybe u can have a look again....thanks | |
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| Have a boo
Posted: 5/12/2005 10:09:47 AM | @ isachicky,
Question: What is the purpose of pointing out you have two kids over the age of 12? It's not the "pointing you have kids" thats the question moreso than "over the age of 12". You know, some could say, "40 years old is over the age of 12"! ha ha. Why not just say "two boys in their early teens" or something, ya know?
Still standing firm on the headline eh? Well, your choice.
Much better "interests", good job. Can ya add just a couple more? Just wondering.
Definitely an improvement. Bravo!
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| How long is this line-up?
Posted: 5/12/2005 10:15:05 AM | Jack Mack,
When can i expect your analysis:)? I need some feedback on my profile.
Patrick, | |
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| How long is this line-up?
Posted: 5/12/2005 10:35:54 AM | | @ no-nonsense. Dude, you are in my line of sight. Patience, I'll get to your profile shortly. Today or tomorrow to be absolutely specific. Thanks. | |
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| How long is this line-up?
Posted: 5/12/2005 11:38:48 AM | How about moi??? I asked a while ago but I think you may have missed it. No worries though. Hopefully you will get to me soon.
Cheers! | |
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100%me
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Joined: 5/1/2005
Msg: 474 | |
| I'll review your profile and give ya some dating advice
Posted: 5/13/2005 12:49:05 AM | jack mack
Sorry if you thought I was referring to you. Just to let you know I was referring to something previously said in the thread. Good to know you think my profile is '' less than stellar '' though. Any suggestions? I'm just being real. I'm just being me......100% | |
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RozeUP
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Joined: 1/17/2005
Msg: 475 | |
| torturedgardener, your turn!
Posted: 5/13/2005 1:26:08 AM | | i wanted an opinion of my profile, not me, and you were offering. how can you formulate an accurate opinion of me based on my profile? it's only a glimpse of me. i just wanted a opinion of what i wrote. when i say that quote i mean people who are actually involved in my life gossipin about this and that, not some person way over where ever. | |
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