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| I'll review your profile and give ya some dating advice
Posted: 6/9/2005 3:47:31 PM | S'up Jack Mack?
Thanks for the critique, kind sir. I totally agree with the majority of what you said, and I'll be making some changes in the near future. To answer your question about the animal pics...they're both paintings I did. I figured I'd put them up so people can see I'm an artist instead of just hearing me say it :) Take 'er easy and thanks again for the advice on my profile!
All the best;
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| A Review
Posted: 6/11/2005 8:32:16 PM | | hey jack you can do mine if you want iam always up for change for the better | |
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| A Review
Posted: 6/11/2005 9:35:46 PM | Mr. Jack sir
It seems that you are perhaps a tad behind in your profile reviews. Given the number of requests you have recieved, this is quite commendable. I wish to add my request to the list. Although I would not be so assinine as to ask to cut in line, I assure you that mine may prove a most unique review.
To save you time:
- I know I'm too longwinded... I had to cut out a third of my profile because it wouldn't fit
- I have no smiling pics... ok I do but haven't scanned 'em yet
- I had few interests listed in the interest box... I never thought it was an important box, correct me if I'm wrong.
- I haven't described myself in a way many people can relate to... but that was part of the theme or something
All I really want is to quit seeing "read / deleted" when I send out msg.'s. Thought this might give ppl something urging them to respond; that's step one. Houstonian to ground control, is the mission likely to get accomplished?
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| A Review
Posted: 6/12/2005 12:10:30 AM | | Yes, you have very real you on the net. There must be a flood of messages. What you think of mine, by the way. Honest comments/advice also invited from others of the forum please -- mangalkrishna | |
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| I'll review your profile and give ya some dating advice
Posted: 6/14/2005 8:05:51 AM | @PositivePisces: Hey looks good to me, I found a spelling error in the date section, spare should be spur. Also I couldn't email this direct because you don't want males to talk to you, you might reconsider that, there might be a great guy that just wants to be a friend, or tell you something such as this.
Message limitations are in my opinion the biggest mistakes people make on this site. Most all of us are looking for that special someone of the opposite sex, but I would bet we would probably be open to meeting a great friend of the same sex too. Life is great with more friends, can’t have too many of those. It’s called networking, probably the best way to meet that special someone, through a mutual friend.
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| The Doctor has returned!!!!
Posted: 6/14/2005 9:20:39 AM | Holy strawberries Batman, aren't I in a jam! ha ha, looks like my week or so hiatus has resulted in a massive backup on this thread. So I better get 'ta moving, ya think?!!
So the review doc is in. Before I get going, as I did before, I wish to state that I hate repeating myself and it seems a lot of profiles in the past have just been the same old mistakes folks seem to make.
So with this said, I offer you this. Tips on how to give your profile some extra umph! Of course keep in mind also that a good profile is only gets ya half way there. It takes a good opening e-mail to whomever that'll either sink ya or keep you floating!
First, it would really help you out tremendously if you looked at other profiles as you may very well pick up lots of helpful hints and suggestions.
I ususally have a set criteria in which I use in constructing or even review profiles.
Here are some tips for ya .....
1) Your headline:
Please consider this: Your headline is designed to catch peoples attention.
None of this "Nice guy/gal seeks..." boring stuff either. Its a snoozer!! Get creative, get crazy! Have fun with it. Try to think of what would catch YOUR eye, to hold your attention enough for you to get to reading further of someones profile.
2) Pictures: A definite must have. I hate it, I really really do, but it is a must. Most (a generalization) people will not even bother with a profile unless there is a pic. Rude and Crude, I know. But it is as it is.
So getcha a picture or two and put it up in your profile. Be sure:
a) it is well lit or good lighting,
b) NOT a group picture orhas more than one (YOU) person in it,
c) Dont feature your kid, cars or pets.
d) Wouldn't kill ya to smile!
3) "Do you do Drugs?", this is a question asked in the profile. If you answer anything other than "Yes" or "No", people will automatically assume "Yes" and more than likely turn away and go to the next profile. It may not be so much you do drugs (which I suspect mostly would be pot... but thats my own suspicions) but its that you were holding back and or some may even equate it to lying. Not a good first impression to put forth.
Another question: "Marital Status", be truthful. What is the deal currently as you fill out your profile. If you are dating somebody, well? If you have been divorced for years and years... well? And if "separated", state such and then in your "about me" section, just briefly address how long ya been separated and when the divorce should be final.
4) "Dating Interests"
This, I think, is the one biggest boo boo most people make. This is where you really show your stuff or really fumble and make the person lose interest.!
What are you interested in?
It's that simple really.
For example, Perhaps you like reading.
DONT PUT READING! Be more specific as "reading" is too friggin general. Anything so general and broad is open to interpretation and more than likely backfires on ya every time.
Example #2: let's say you actually put in there, "Movies".
Another general and very broad interest.
Think a moment, will ya? How many movies do you suppose has been made since turn of the century? Now of all those movies, how many different variations and genre do you think there are?
If you think about it, the different varieties are staggeringly high. Do you really like all of those differences and varieties? I am gonna bet "no". So be specific. You like horror over comedy? Maybe chick flicks versus guy movies of shoot-emn-up bang bang movies. Whatever the case, be specific. This is a very important key that may unlock your future happiness should you meet someone!
Generally, there are a few "industry standards" to avoid. Well, maybe not avoid, just be more specific.
TV/Movies
Dinner/cooking
Camping
Music
Reading/books
Computers
Always ask yourself, "what about 'em". Then fill it in some as to what you like about them, or what variety or what have you do you enjoy.
Another idea is to be sure to have lots of things listed.
8 or 10 is what I would go with. Why?
Its the shotgun theory. You see, a shotgun shell has many tiny little pellets generally called "buckshot". When the gun is fired, these buckshot spread out as they fly through the air towards the target, ensuring larger coverage and thus, better chance at hitting something.
You are the gun. Your interests are the buckshot. And the more you list (and specify) of interests, the better chance you have of having something in common with someone else that will, thusly, create a hit! Then an e-mail is sent and before long, you are at the beginning of a nice relationship.
"About me"
This section is where you can tie in all in. This is THE place you want to express yourself as to who you are. What your attitude on life is like. Maybe expand some more on your interests too. The first sentence is the most important. Start it negative in any way, and it's a turn off for those you seek.
Tell about yourself, stay positive.
The Don'ts:
1) Don't go referring to the exes or what they were like or how they treated ya.
2) Don't be tentative. "I think", "Maybe", "Should".
3) Be assertive. "My friends tell me that I am funny." No no, Take control of it. Make it your own. Either believe it and write "I am funny" or leave it out entirely.
4) Avoid listing who you DONT want. "I don't want liars, or those who play games."
Do you rreeaaallllyyy believe those people will not respond to you just because you said so?
5) Dont be negative. "I hate how my hair looks", or "I may not be all that but....."
Always always always makes you look worse.
Remain focused on yourself and what you want. End this section with who you seek. What kind of person. Again, stay away from the negatives of who you do NOT want and so forth. Stay positive!
And finally, the :First Date" section.
Ladies, turn away for a second, I gotta talk to 'da guys.
Dudes, guys and gents. Here's the deal. Whether we like it or hate it, this is where we can either seal the deal or seal our fate.
We HAVE to take charge here, and indicate what we would like to do on the first date. We have to take control, it is expected. None of this "maybe", or "might" stuff, no no. Don't be tentative. And don't write "whatever the lady would like". No no. Oh sure, sweet thought and nice gesture sure. But guys, let's have a contingency plan at the very least. Because odds are she will be expecting you to take control and will invariably say "I don't know, what would you like to do?"
Save time and save face here! Take control, make the call!
Just don't go writing "sex" or some BS like that. First date mentality! Let's keep it gentlemanly, ya know?
Ok ladies, you can read from here on.
Ladies, if I may take a second here. Ladies, Us guys really do appreciate you writing in the "first date" section of your profile how you'd leave it up to us guys or maybe even put "whatever" in this section but you know, it really helps us out a lot if you give us a clue what you might consider. You see, it would be dreadful for all involved if you were the type who expected a nice dinner and maybe some dancing, but we took you skydiving instead because all you said was "whatever he wants".
That may make for a bad first date especially for someone who is terrified of heights. ha ha.
So all I am saying here is help us out just a bit. Give us a direction in which to go. Clue us in on what you would really like to do on the first date. We'll take it from there, I think we'll be able to handle things from that point!
Ok, so there ya have it. My points and helpful hints. Now on with the reviews.......... | |
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| I'll review your profile and give ya some dating advice
Posted: 6/14/2005 9:26:20 AM | Catsmeow....
Nice headline, I can definitely dig that!
Your pic, way to go. But no need to have pics 1-5. Pick one and lose the others. They look practically the same.
Definitely keep the one with your great smile!
To BhamScientist:
Your headline, so whats the deal? You asking or you looking? Try again, be more original.
Not too crazy about your pics as they do not really show you. One of you walking somewhere, and two dark pics. Nope, find some others. I know I know, you're working on it.
Dating interests.... needs more and specifics.
The rest of the profile is alright, just watch for spelling. | |
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| I'll review your profile and give ya some dating advice
Posted: 6/14/2005 9:28:58 AM | JT, you're still a nut! But your profile is honest and obviously comes across as such. So hey, go with it dude!!
I like most of your pics.... still trying to figure out the pink get up though.
You have way too many "prefer not to say" answers. This invariably mean to people "YES". Best to just answer the buggers and be done with it.
Great (and funny as heck) interests as well as the "about me" section. | |
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| I'll review your profile and give ya some dating advice
Posted: 6/14/2005 9:32:06 AM | Tigress,
Good headline!!
Nice pics too, did you draw them?
Great collection of interests, great job there!
I liked your "about me" and found some humor in it. I am not sure if it was meant that way, but it was enough to make me laugh a little and be tempted to e-mail ya if I were 'da average guy who could carry on a conversation.
"First Date", well, I made suggestions about two or three posts ago. Go read up on it, some helpful hints there!
Overall, a few tweaks, nips and tucks but otherwise a nice profile!! Good going! | |
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| I'll review your profile and give ya some dating advice
Posted: 6/14/2005 9:34:13 AM | Mattchue
Your headline just doesn't work. Nothing original or creative there. Try again. PLEASE!!
Your pic, eh, it could be better. Find something, but for now it'll keep.
Ggoooooooodddd interests, tres kewl! Good!
Your "about me" has some pangs of depression and such in it. Can ya brighten the picture up a little? | |
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| I'll review your profile and give ya some dating advice
Posted: 6/14/2005 9:34:53 AM | Hows my profile dude...... I already tweaked it a little after the last guy gave me some advice..... im still waiting on that chick to review it too- to get a girls perspective- but- just figured id keep you busy too........ and how bout some dating advice... nothing in particular- just an in general type of thing
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| ezzee review
Posted: 6/14/2005 9:38:12 AM | Your headline, not exactly sure where you were going with it. Its original though, I will give ya that! lol
Your pics, I like the second one (with your pooch) better. Make that your primary pic, lose the other entirely.
"Interests"
Well, I gotta say. You have a good amount of things listed, but they are too general. Get specific. Read up the thread just a few postings and you'll get what I mean.
"About me"
Well, it was nice enough to start, good job there!
Good follow-through and overall I'd give it a B+! Good work!
First Date, this is where you drop the ball just a tad. Again, read up the thread a few postings and see what I mean. First dates, us guys have to take control and make the call. Be specific!
So there ya go! B+ dude!! | |
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| BuddyG review
Posted: 6/14/2005 9:44:21 AM | BuddyG
Ok, your headline. Can you find a soul mate without finding a friend? lol, it's rhetorical.
Seriously though, lose the soulmate biz. Look for a friend and then what happens from there happens.
Your pics, I gotta be honest. There are two maybe three keepers there. The rest can be lost!
I'd keep pic 4 (tattoo), 5 (only if you drew it)and 6. 6 needs to be your primary one. Lose the rest!!
"Profession", an air of hiding something comes through. Either leave it blank or fess up as to what you do.
Interests: GREAT selection and variety!! Good possibilities of conversation starters too! Good job there!
"About me"
OMG, LOSE "oK These Days" I know I am not wearing a smile much , Although I am Happy , Maybe a little lonely at times but eY? life has it's pecks and valleys"
What were ya thinking??
"First Date", keep it simple dude. Look a few posts up from here and see more tips I posted.
As for the poem, nice touch!! | |
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