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Posted: 8/16/2005 9:20:34 AM | Thanks "J"
Just stepped out for a bit, took a breather. Hung out with my girl, took a mini-vacation and the sort such as that. Thanks bud, 'preciate the concern. But all goes well here. Now time to do some more of them thar reviews. Feel free to join in with 'da reviews too if ya have the temptation. | |
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| cheekemonkey and jack
Posted: 8/16/2005 10:56:50 AM | Hey Jack, I've been busy but I just read a couple here and I'll put in my 2 cents.
cheekemonkey, It looks great to me, they only thing I'd say are two things and this goes to everybody else out there too. Great pictures, my oppinion.
#1, By reading your profile at least twice I found things where your indicating that it's the guys job to find you. Welcome to the modern world, women can search and contact men that they find attractive just as well. There are much better chances of finding that special someone if both people do the searching. Don't wait for him to find you.
#2, Loose the 75 mile radius contact limit. Sure you would like to find him within 75 miles, but maybe he's 100 miles away and can't contact you and he gives up. Is that what you really want to happen? To have him not find you because he's a couple miles farther away. It's real tough to find that right person when we get older, don't miss him because of that. Maybe he's even in Kansas :-)
My story: I started out just looking in Kansas, then I added Missouri, soon I was looking in the whole US, then Canada, now the world. Who knows where you'll find a match. I even studied some Russian in addition to other languages I can understand. | |
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| I'll review your profile and give ya some dating advice
Posted: 8/16/2005 11:56:14 AM | Im just trying to navigate this site..this would be my second day on it.and i have had numerous emails already...im not sure i want your advice on my profile but what the hell everyone has an opinion..and ive heard most of them on line..so go ahead but make it original  | |
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| cheekemonkey and jack
Posted: 8/16/2005 7:28:55 PM | Thanks for the insight sunhine....advice taken....You're a doll.
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| I'll review your profile and give ya some dating advice
Posted: 8/16/2005 8:14:37 PM | Please look over my profile, I did get advise from the female, hearing ideas from a male would help too.
I have edited my profile and changed my pics for recent ones (those taken within 60 days).
Sorry, not able to keep the glasses off the face, need them. At least Im not wearing the prescription shades I drive with.
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Posted: 8/17/2005 10:09:59 AM | hollandgirl
There is not much to comment about your profile since there isn't much there. Read the reviews of the other profiles. Only you can fill up your profile, Jack or I or anybody can only comment and learn something about who you are if there is something there. Nothing wrong just not much there. My profile grew and grew to where it is, by adding to it constantly, everytime somebody asked a good question, I included the answer in my profile. Surely you can expand the camping and animals into a couple sentences, favorite places etc. What about books, games, what did you do last weekend that was fun, etc? Where's your favorite place in the world, what would you like to learn, do or see? Answer these questions and anything else you can think of and that'll be a step in the right direction. Who are you looking for, what qualities and activities should they have? | |
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Posted: 8/17/2005 10:17:39 AM | xcanadiansteel
Your profile looks good to me, I would expand the writeup a little more. Surely you can find more stuff to say about who you are and who you are looking for. You want enough stuff in your profile that makes the women that read your profile want to take that exptra step and do something that they normally don't do, contact us. She needs to know that your the one, not just a maybe. My idea (some probably don't agree, that's ok) is that a profile should tell all, show all. Leave little to wonder about. I'm not interested in playing the dating game, I want to meet, find or have the right one find me and get on with living life. Life is not a game it's the real thing and every day spent alone is somewhat wasted (again my opininion) | |
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| I'll review your profile and give ya some dating advice
Posted: 8/17/2005 1:16:22 PM | pappy-40
For a minute there I thought the last guy grew some hair real fast. :-)
Looking for a match is a pretty much non headline, find something that's unique to you.
Comment about ugly women is probably not a good idea, try to leave out anything negative in a profile. It doesn't go over well.
A couple pictures of you doing something else that you enjoy would be good. | |
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Posted: 8/17/2005 1:16:43 PM | bitsy
My first thing that I saw is that you prefer not to say on smoking, to that says you smoke but are not proud of it. I think questions like this are either black or white, either you do or you don't, if your not proud of it then it should be mentioned in the writeup, (maybe this is just my view on the subject, I welcome other views on this, let us know) I personally don't like it, seems like you want to hide something.
Overall I like the humor that you put in your profile. That's good. There needs to be whole lot more about who you are and what you do. There are a couple of English language problems, we all make them but we need to try and reduce them to give the impression we are intelligent, Lord knows I make my share. For example it should be "somewhere that is not crowded". We all need to reread what we write and fix things like this, it's tough to read what you actually wrote instead of what you wanted to write.
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| I'll review your profile and give ya some dating advice
Posted: 8/17/2005 1:25:39 PM | Jack, thanks for your time in reviewing mine and for your words, most all of them kind by the way, lol. I will ponder what you said and then decide but I certainly wanted to thank you for your time. If you get down, over, up whatever my way the  is on me  | |
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Posted: 8/17/2005 3:01:27 PM | ladypilot68
Sorry I think you fell through the cracks here. Must have had some IFR conditions for a while.
Good catchy headline. Good pictures, that's what I like to see, one face shot and 4 or 5 shots of you doing things that you enjoy, some with a little humor thrown in.
I think it's about as good as it gets, everyone can always add more text about other things they like or want but haven't discussed yet but not knowing much about you I can't offer any suggestions. Maybe a few more interests because people use them to find other people that meet what they look for. Maybe some variations on the words, people searching for avaiation might search for flying or airplanes instead.
That brings up something I haven't mentioned in a while ( EVERYBODY pay attention here)
the key words in Dating Interests are searchable the more you have the more chances the right somebody will find you.
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| cheekemonkey
Posted: 8/17/2005 3:11:15 PM | cheekemonkey
I was looking at your dating interests and noticed they aren't higlighted and therefore I think aren't searchable. I would remove the semicolons after your words and that might help people search for you and to find you.
Hope that helps
For your info, I'm not a doll, I'm a real live walking, talking person looking for may of the same things everybody else is on here. :-) Now sunshine that's a little closer, yep pretty bright. :-) If we can't have some fun with words on here we might as well call it a day. In fact I think I will. later all. good luck. | |
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