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| I'll review your profile and give ya some dating advice
Posted: 8/19/2005 9:21:26 AM | grneyeskcs:
Good profile, I'd add a few outdoor pictures of you if you have them since you enjoy camping and such. Now that your toe is wet maybe you should jump all the way in and start contacting people that have profiles you find interesting. Don't be alarmed when most of them don't answer back, it seems most people think that is ok. I certainly don't, but nobody said I was in charge of that department. You always could add more to the write up but it seems to cover everything well, a little about who you are, what you are looking for and what you will not put up with.
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| I'll review your profile and give ya some dating advice
Posted: 8/19/2005 9:34:41 AM | SweetTLC:
If Jack were doing this he'd have you do something with your head line, I don't think that is as important but it is the first or second thing somebody sees so a great one definitely helps. For me the picture is the grabber that's number one, most important. Your first one is good, the 2nd could use some work, the high angle from the camera on top of the computer is very rarely flattering, and the background is often cluttered with stuff you would rather not share with everybody. I like the humor in the writeup about the car wash accidental hosing and wrestling. | |
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| I'll review your profile and give ya some dating advice
Posted: 8/19/2005 9:52:18 AM | celticgal04:
First under dating interests "other stuff" just doesn't cut it, you need to flesh that out, that's one of the ways people find you on here. If you don't tell people who you are they aren't going to take an interest. If your pictures are old, you probably ought to update them, old pictures are better than none, but new is best, try to get one of you doing things you enjoy, let the pictures tell part of your story, that's the first thing people look at when they view your profile, oftentimes the only thing, they can make it or break it. The rest of the writeup seems ok to me, again in my book more is better. anytime somebody asks a good question, consider putting the answer in the write up. The more you tell up front the less surprises later. I guess it depends on wether you want to play the game or fast foward to the rest of your life, I'm all for the fast forward approach. | |
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| I'll review your profile and give ya some dating advice
Posted: 8/19/2005 9:59:02 AM | Rwolf
I'd add a picture, actually I'd add about 5 pictures, how about some of your art too.
The writeup is good. I'd change to alternative music, and rock music so it highlights and is searchable, and flesh out the outdoor and indoor activities.
Hey you owe me a cookie and I want to collect. Macadamia nut white chocolate please | |
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| I'll review your profile and give ya some dating advice
Posted: 8/19/2005 10:06:54 AM | Dave
We need a lot more about who you are and what you want out of life, who you are looking for, a couple more pictures wouldn't hurt. More interests, give us the whole picture, spend some time on the profile, make people think you are really serious about finding somebody. If you don't have much in your profile, they might think it's not worth the effort to contact you because you didn't bother to spent the time on it.
Whatever I can get away with on a first date does not sound good to me, might be the truth but I would change that. | |
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| I'll review your profile and give ya some dating advice
Posted: 8/19/2005 1:35:49 PM | sugarpie:
Your pictures are ok, I'd add a few more of you doing things you enjoy.
The prefer not to say on the drug question stands out to me, I wish they wouldn't ask that question, I feel there isn't a good answer for that, since a lot of the no answers should be yes but they don't want to answer it, the only answer your pretty sure you can trust is yes, but not many will answer it that way. Prefer not to say, to me means yes but affraid to say it. Again in my book not good, We are are supposed to be open and honest here, right? Bad question. I would much rather see the space dedicated to a question on education, that would do a lot more to separate people, and thats what this site is all about, separating people to help you find the right one. They must have been on drugs when they choose that question. (my oppinion)
A little more write up wouldn't hurt but you have the bases covered. | |
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Posted: 8/19/2005 1:42:31 PM | phamilyplotr
I would put more in the write up about what you like, want and what you do, the favorite movie and song is good for people that know those but means nothing to those that don't.
You also should fill in the dating interests with lots of activities you enjoy, that's a way that people can search and find your smiling face.
Your first date is a rather non answer, except for compromise. I think so specifics go over much better there. Like ice cream in the park, or beer at the pub, that tells who you are and what you like to do on a date. | |
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| I'll review your profile and give ya some dating advice
Posted: 8/20/2005 8:52:59 AM | | Was reviewed by Spiderwoman and Master Bart, have made changes and would like your advice. Any criticism or comments welcomed. Thanks in advance and keep it up. A lot of us appreciate your efforts......... | |
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| Review mine please
Posted: 8/20/2005 2:26:40 PM | fungirlinnh:
What you have is all good, I would add more to your write up about things that you like to do, how do you spend your free time. Maybe add a few of those things to the dating interests if you have them. A couple more pictures wouldn't hurt, a full body shot is always good, and pics doing things you like or just of things you like.
For everybody wanting to improve their profile: Look at some other profiles and compare them to yours. See what you like and dislike and adjust yours accordingly. | |
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| I'll review your profile and give ya some dating advice
Posted: 8/21/2005 2:37:00 PM | bettyboopNga:
I would spice up the headline a little try to make it grab attention. On your dating interests I don't understand what you mean by everyday beauty, you might want to explain that or use some other words. Your first picture is washed out, too bright, it looks like a great picture, super smile, you might try to fix it with a photo editor to reduce the brightness and re submit it. The second picture is OK, I would add a few more of you doing the things you like. In your write up I would refrain from using number for words and I would give more detail about a first date, what would you really like to do? | |
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| pappy-40 review
Posted: 8/22/2005 5:38:43 PM | Hey Pappy,
Jheld has been a pretty darn good poster and his opinions mirror a great majority of time my very own.
So he gave yours a li'l review... on my behalf.
But hey, you want it straight from the jackasses finga... no prob. here ya are.
Just remember, I ain't as polite and PC as my bud Jheld. lol
First up is your pics. I like the 1st (main) 2nd and fourth. The rest suck, lose 'em. For future consideration, never use a picture with more than one person (you) in it. Cuts down on confusion and the possibility a lady may see someone in the pic she may think is better than you. It's called shooting yourself in 'da foot. Dont do it!!
Your headline, "Let's chat(I need practice typing)!! "
Nope, not good enough. Your headline is where you wanna catch someones attention. To grab 'em by the scruff of the neck and haul their prying eyes over to read more of your profile. Do you really think your headline is creative enough to do the job?
Try again. Get creative, original. And have fun with it. Be funny, or goofy, but definitely original.
Dang, this profile review is going on long. I better shore it up.
"Dating Interests"
Need more things, list a total of 8 or ten things. The more you list, the more chances you have something in common with somebody.
And be specific. What about "Cooking" and "tinkering with things" do you like? lol
"About me"
ok ok, I gotta ask.
"The Assiniboine river", is that a real river? ha ha ha. Seriously?? And more importantly, been fishing in it?
back to the review. You spent the first sentence front in this section writing about what you seek. Lose this!!! Spend the first few paragraphs in this section telling more about yourself. What you're like. Just move up what you have written, and put it in the first part of this section. It should do nicely.
"First Date', eh its alright. Keep it as is.
Thats all I gots for ya bud. Now make the profile truly your own.
PS, do you have a sense of humor? Or perhaps some of that Canadian Charm? Use it in this profile, the chicks will eat it up!! You need a few laughs in it, your profile seems a bit wooden. Just my opinion. | |
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| Where there is smoke....??
Posted: 8/22/2005 5:54:43 PM | Where There's Smoke
ok girly girl, time for a review from 'der jackmeister.
God help ya! lol
About your profile.
Your headline, doesn't make sense to me. "Where theres smoke.... sparking interest"? What?? Try again. Be original. Be creative. Read up this thread about 4 or 5 pages. You will get a good idea of what you should or shouldn't do. Trust me, you'll thank me.
"Dating Interests"
Wow, great work! Excellent variety!
"About me"
Just a few tweaks I'd suggest.
"(Neandrathal Man where are you?? lol)" I realize it's a joke.... but really now. Careful what you seek!
"I am a sucker..." lose it. How about instead put, I get weak in the knees from a great smile", or something to that eggect.
"First date" a bit over done. Slow your roll and please be more specific. Read up this thread a few pages to geta better understanding. But we guys need specifics. Dont leave anything for us to presume. You may well regret that! | |
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| pappy-40 review
Posted: 8/22/2005 10:55:10 PM | Hey jack mack,I appreciate the comments and will work on the changes.
Yes the Assiniboine river is real,it runs through Winnipeg,Manitoba,Can. and I do fish in it(although I wouldn't keep the fish out of it).  | |
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| Bring on the beatings!
Posted: 8/23/2005 6:48:25 AM | Hey Jack,
It looks like you've got a following here. You must be doing something right in your reviews. GIve me your best shot, but nothingbelow the beslt, as I still need those while in university.
Cheers man. | |
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| pappy-40 review
Posted: 8/23/2005 7:14:22 AM | | Hey jack mack,since I'm new to this computer thing how do I change my name on my profile? | |
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| I'll review your profile and give ya some dating advice
Posted: 8/23/2005 2:35:02 PM | milkbone:
There just is not much there to review, we need more in almost every category, pics, interests and about me. read some of the other reviews to get some ideas. I don't understand "feed my puppy?" but it is different and might make people say What? and look further. Unfortunately when you look further there not much to see. And yes it is spelled wrong, might give people the idea you don't care to look it up but at least you know you are falable, we all are, and yes I've probably got a few misspellings here too, half due to typing to fast and half due to stupidity. Your first date stuff is OK. So time get back to the drawing board. | |
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| I'll review your profile and give ya some dating advice
Posted: 8/23/2005 2:42:02 PM | nickygismo:
I like your first and third pictures. I would replace the other two, try to find some that have you doing something you like, have your pictures tell a story about who you are.
Mispellings: peoples, sense, independent, I'm
This goes to everybody, cut and paste your profile into a spellchecker and fix all these things. You don't have to be smart to spell, the computer can do it for you.
We need more about you, and who you are looking for, you've got a good start just need to flesh it out a bit more. | |
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| I'll review your profile and give ya some dating advice
Posted: 8/23/2005 2:58:48 PM | ms_nomer:
I love your name, good job.
I make it...I spend it!!!!!!!! Will that make somebody look further??? how about adding "On You???? then maybe they would look to see if it's possible. Get the idea.
The rest is OK, I would like to see more, but not bad.
I would get rid of the 75 miles thou, everybody would like to find within 75, but is 100 too much? They can't contact you. I think POF needs a few more milage options, say 150, 300, 600, etc. Then people could really choose. Personally, I choose no limits. Don't shoot yourself in the foot, maybe a gal knows a great guy for you. Maybe a gal would make a great friend.
The problem this is a hard limit and people treat it as a desire. Sometimes people need to be saved from themselves, often they just don't think. | |
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