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| I'll review your profile and give ya some dating advice
Posted: 8/23/2005 3:11:28 PM | Queenbrunette:
No problem with the glasses, that's who you are, honesty is the best policy. Should be the only one in my book, but I didn't write that one. Sometimes we can get by with just not telling all, but when they ask the questions you have to tell it like it is.
Concerning the pics, they all basically are the same pic, only need one of them, but unfortunately I don't see one that is really a keeper. Each one has a problem with either lighting, smile, eyes half closed, etc. Try again, while your at it we could use a whole body pic and ones of you doing things you like.
Interests, good job, RPG doesn't mean anything to me though, might spell that out, but I guess if they know it then they know you do it.
The rest is pretty good, you tell enough about yourself to give an idea who you might like.
I think I just figured out what RPG is, role playing games? | |
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| I'll review your profile and give ya some dating advice
Posted: 8/23/2005 4:34:07 PM | lostwords:
Profile in progess, don't cut the mustard, need work there. Let's see the progress.
I would add a few more interests in the dating interests, the more you have there, the more chances people can find you when they do a search.
Try to laugh or smile bigger when you take your head shot picture, think of a joke. You might explain the Vette picture, at a car show, I assume just a dream but car not yours?
A few more pictures like that with something that you like in the picture would be good.
Drot ??? haven't run into that word yet???? Maybe it's a youth thing?? always meet, introvert, again run your profile through a spellchecker, that 's the best thing everybody can do, learn cut and paste and appear intelligent. Everybody can benifit by appearing just a little more intelligent.
Spelling out a first date is a good idea, again they need to know what you think, if they don't learn enough about you they aren't going to bother responding. You've got to set the hook and reel them in on the first bite, they normally won't come back for a second look if the bait isn't there first time. I've found some lakes up north where a bare gold hook will do the trick, but these fish in this pond don't seem to respond to that. | |
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| I'll review your profile and give ya some dating advice
Posted: 8/23/2005 4:41:15 PM | C.U.T.T.I.E:
We need a lot more about you, a first picture should be just you, most of the time a head shot but doesn't have to be.
You talk about a guy in the pics, I didn't find him, need to keep the writeup up to date with the pics.
looking for kind hearted man, everybody is, that's not creative enough to reel them in. Try again, have some fun with it. | |
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| I'll review your profile and give ya some dating advice
Posted: 8/23/2005 5:28:22 PM | | ok, i do not know if i am doing this right or not. but will some one please take a look at my profile and pic ?? i have gotten letters from some women on here to remove my profile and pic off of here as i am too butt ugly to get any woman to actually date me let alone show any interest in me. what am i doing wrong to get women to show interest in me and am i really that butt ugly ?? i have even cut my hair, i have to wear my glasses when ever i am awake and want to be able to see every thing that there is to see, i have even shaved my mustache off, but i still can not find that special some one. if every body will look at my profile and pic and let me know what you think about it all, i would greatly appreciate it. if in fact i am butt ugly, then i might as well, remove my personal ad. | |
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| I'll review your profile and give ya some dating advice
Posted: 8/24/2005 9:21:30 AM | ghebert:
I would try to come up with a better headline, Nice guy can't find, is negative, try something positive, don't start out with I can't.
I would have the 2nd picture as your first, it shows more of a fun guy, the other one it too stuffy, my opinion. I would get more pictures of you having fun doing things you like.
You don't really look like you have a few extra pounds, maybe offically as medical people think but as the general public uses those words, a few extra tends to mean a lot extra. I'd go with average there. A full body shot would tell the story.
I would expand the writeup a lot more, tell as much about yourself as you can, and get a lot more stuff in you interests, the search engines use those words to find you. What you have is good but more would be much better. | |
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| I'll review your profile and give ya some dating advice
Posted: 8/24/2005 9:54:21 AM | Freeasthewind:
SPOON! ???? Got me, it might work, I'm not sure what your aiming at but I have some ideas. I'd change it, but that's me.
Jack doesn't like pictures with the opposite sex, I have one on my profile but if you do I think you got some splainin to do. Seeing none in your text you got some splainin or lose that pic. Get some others of you doing things you like. A full body shot would help, maybe a kayaking pic too, and skydiving.
List your adventure sports one at a time so the POF search engine can find them. Get Kayaking to highlight.
Spend more time on the write up, I like what you got, a little humor, a little word play, but I think more is better. | |
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| I'll review your profile and give ya some dating advice
Posted: 8/25/2005 11:48:28 AM | 2findafriend:
First thing your second picture, It's got two women talking to each other ignoring you, your just standing in the middle and smiling. I don't like it and don't think it's a good one, Jack hates pics with the opposite sex. Get some other pictures of you doing things you like.
The rest is OK, nothing stands out and grabs me though, it's just OK. | |
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Posted: 8/25/2005 11:57:16 AM | Jack: where there's smoke say thanks (she's having trouble posting)
Where there's smoke: I'd post the pic, Nothing to be ashamed of.
sumthinreal:
Headline, "take a glance" is pretty tame, spice it up.
I would change few extra pounds to Average if your pics are accurate.
Your fourth pic is blurry, the camera focused on the pipe, take another and replace it. Bad pictures indicate maybe you don't really care. I would change the 2nd pic for something else, can't really tell what your doing there. Get one of you doing something you like.
Add a lot more interests so that searches can find you. Get a picture when you make an effort.
I would add a lot more to the write up, when you say take a glance, give them something to glance at. If you don't tell all, show all they will not connect and not bother to email you. They have to know you are who they are looking for for them to go the extra mile (or Km :-), to email and risk rejection. They probably aren't going to risk it on not much info. | |
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| Bring on the beatings!
Posted: 8/25/2005 12:58:23 PM | xc_ski_dude:
I would put your city where you are from instead of somewhere, it's like you have something to hide. Even if you just ues an area, it's better than somewhere.
Your pictures are good, They tell a story of who you are and what you do.
Interests, need to add a lot more there, outdoors is not good enough, need to spell them all out that's how people find you and it lets them know eactly what you enjoy.
Two typing errors need to be fixed, old nintendo and dancing is.
Your profile covers you pretty well, but I'm sure there is a lot more to add, the more the better. | |
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Posted: 8/25/2005 1:07:15 PM | paulf1968:
Not Butt ugly, but I'm a guy, so who knows. I'm lonely too.
I'd add a couple more pictures, some that show the whole body and also show you enjoying things you like.
The headline is negative, try something positive, And not " I'm positive I'm lonely" 
The headline should be something that makes people want to find out more. Something catch, maybe something that shows you've got some humor. Or something that tells who you are, so that those people that want that will look further.
You need to expand the body of the profile a lot more, tell some funny stories about your life, tell us more about who you are, what you like, what you hate, what you want, etc.
No date for 4 year, again that's negative, loose that, just describe what you think a nice date would be. Get creative, have some fun with it. | |
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Posted: 8/25/2005 1:36:02 PM | Jack, I got you caught up, at least we're on the same page now.
For those that didn't get reviewed about 5 pages back, please resubmit if you still want a review. Sorry if we missed you but, no sense reviewing all those if only a few are going to be read.
For everybody, read a half dozen reviews, learn from other people, everybody makes the same mistakes.
Have lots of interests, write a bunch in the about me section, (cover present, past, future, what you like, hate, want, expect, etc) try to have some humor, come up with a catchy headline. Leave out the negative stuff, put something real in the first date section and spend the time to do a cut and paste spell check. Get some good pictures, one face shot, one whole body, and a couple showing you having fun. If you've got more then just you, you need to explain who else is there. If you do a sub standard job it'll show and you'll get sub standard results.
good luck,
Women; you can search and contact men, it's the 21st century. We all are here for one reason, we want to connect in some way with somebody else to fill a whole in our lives.
Everybody: On all contacts expect rejection most of the time, and take the time to reply to all that contact you with a sincere letter. It's only polite, they took the time and got the nerve to contact you, please be good enough to tell them "thanks, but no thanks". Try to make the world a little nicer place. | |
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Posted: 8/25/2005 4:34:55 PM | gazzoo_2003:
I don't think much is going to happen with your headline, not very catchy. Who Knows?
I would have as closeup picture of you sort of like the horse picture, that's a good one, good expression, sort of "Who me, I didn't do nothin, what ya talkin bout".
Is the black and tan, a Kelpie? I used to raise and train Kelpies. One more thing I could add to my profile but it's full, yours needs to be too. Not enough there. There's got to be a lot of interesting and funny things with animals.
We need a ton of more interests.
You probably need to explain other relationship. | |
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Posted: 8/25/2005 4:44:12 PM | cuteness99:
Hey show us your cuteness, there's more to you then just eyes. I would suggest a couple more pictures.
I would loose the 75 mile stipulation, that's to restrictive.
I think you could talk about your life a little more, tell us some things about your interests, what kinds of movies, and tell use about the culture you seek. Put a space after hockey so it highlights. tell us about some of your travels.
You've done a good job, but always room for improvement.
Oh yeah get out and shake the tree yourself, nobody says it's all the guys job to find you, you can find him. | |
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Posted: 8/25/2005 4:48:44 PM | anhwolf :
Get wordy, the right one will read it and that's what you want. Not wordy, they don't know enough to respond.
Get a few more pics, and try to come up with a better headline. We need a lot more interests.
Loose the 75 mile stipulation. Read back about a page to find out why. | |
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Posted: 8/25/2005 5:34:41 PM | irishangel72 :
You've done a good job. 
I'd say expand the outdoor activites in the interests. Put everything in there you can think of. There's always more you can add to the writeup. The more you say up front the less weeding you have to do later.
Only other suggestions, prepare to move to Kansas, stop smoking and shake my tree.  | |
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Posted: 8/25/2005 5:46:38 PM | Jason:
We need to work on that headline, got to come up with something catchy there.
Try to tell yourself a joke when you take a picture of yourself. That's another thing for all you men that have a hard time walking up to a women and talking, learn some jokes, practice them. That works wonders for breaking the ice. Start with learning a new joke every day for a week. Eventually you'll have 50 or more, might need a little black book, with three word reminders so that you can remember what you know. I used to carry a sheet in my wallet with 100 3-5 word joke reminders to myself. Then after that you're on your own, but if they laugh that's a good start, then it's time to converse, but at least you've got up to talk to them. Next in the bag of tricks is learn to dance.
You've done a good job. Spelling, one place in the writeup should be I'm. | |
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Posted: 8/25/2005 6:12:59 PM | d4rk4ngel13:
This is another good approach to the headline, much like my own, have it say alot about what you have to say. (much like mine) That works, the people that are looking for that will read further.
We probably should add a lot more interests, tell us what kind of music and outdoor sports or whatevery you like about the outdoors, that a big place out there.
Your writeup says a lot in not so many words but a lot more about who you are, what you want, expect etc. would be great. Tell us about your past, pressent and future, what really ticks you off and what turns you on. Be an open book, then the reader will know if they like what they see. | |
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