| I'll review your profile and give ya some dating advice
Posted: 8/25/2005 6:20:13 PM | johnnysocco:
See the thing about jokes and pics a couple reviews ago. You need a bigger grin on your picture to go with the headline. You could use a couple more pics too, see a couple reviews back.
Your interests are all over the map, you might try to get more standard things in there, if they highlinght they are standard.
Other than that it looks good, as always more writeup is better but you've got the bases covered. | |
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JasonB
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Joined: 8/21/2005
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| I'll review your profile and give ya some dating advice
Posted: 8/27/2005 3:54:48 PM | I just added a new pic and deleted a couple older one. the lighting is still too much.
I had also used PSP (Paint Shop Pro) to crop the picture to basically include me and a few of my plants. or else it would be a picture showing mostly the wall of the house and a window. I tried to correct the lighting with the PSP program but it didn't work that way. I also look like Im squinting again, had the sun in my eyes. I am still trying to get some good pics. | |
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| I'll review your profile and give ya some dating advice
Posted: 8/29/2005 5:52:47 PM | beaverhuntress:
I have trouble trying to review this one, too much humor for my taste, Not being in touch with the group that your trying to attract I can't say what's good and what's not. Sorry, I'll have to pass on this one.
I know how I would react to a profile like this but can't say how somebody your looking for would. Anybody else care to comment? | |
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Posted: 8/29/2005 6:03:32 PM | fun_and_flirty:
First thing I noticed is that your pictures are way too dark, you can probably fix them with a photo editor program. I think the 2nd photo might be taken from too far awy to know what the point of it is. I certainly can't tell. The flower is good, if it's in your garden then you should say so. Even though you don't have pictures of your face, I assume the tats are you, your pictures can still tell a little bit about who you are, pictures of flowers are better than no pictures at all. Pictures of stuff you like is good, I have a couple of those myself.
I would explain the type of dancing that you like, there's a big difference between round dancing and dirty dancing. I would also expand the much much more, that's one of the way people will know who you are and what you like. You have to give them something to connect with for them to bother to write you a note. One doesn't need to stand out from the crowd, we just need to know more of what part of the crowd you are in. | |
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Posted: 8/29/2005 6:11:02 PM | tuhracy:
Not much to go on here, you need to tell us a lot more about who you are, what you like, what you do, want, need, maybe a couple pics of you or things you like. Read some of the other profiles, learn from them, and read my other and Jacks reviews to get some ideas.
Tell us what you think you would like to do on a fun date, that'll give us an idea of what you like, what you have is too open ended. | |
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| I'll review your profile and give ya some dating advice
Posted: 8/29/2005 6:21:16 PM | Queenbrunette:
If you could retake and get the 2nd picture in focus that looks like a good one. Big smile, you might have somebody take some pics while your doing stuff you like. Don't try to force a smile, try to be laughing, have somebody tell you a joke, or learn one yourself and tell it to the camera person. Diffuse light outside is probably best, strong sun will make you squint and you'll have dark shadows, shade somewhere near a whitish building works great. | |
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| I'll review your profile and give ya some dating advice
Posted: 8/29/2005 6:27:23 PM | | irishangel72: Sounds like we might have a couple winners? Funny I saw Kansas in your future when I looked into the crystal ball? I guess I'll climb down out of my tree now, since your not going to shake it. Good luck. | |
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Posted: 8/29/2005 6:41:48 PM | kypharmgirl:
First your pictures aren't that bad, I'd say they are average to good. They show a lot about who you are. They could be clearer but they aren't that bad. I everybody had pictures like that we wouldn't have to say anything about pictures anymore. I found one spelling mistake, the last word, flexible.
I would try to come up with a better more catchy headline. You need to expand the interests a lot. Tell us who you are by telling us what you like to do. That's where people most often find their match in the interests. Your write up should then fill in the gaps of your interests, that's where you tell what you like to sing, do you do it in the shower or at church. Is it Beatles, top 40, Waylon Jennings or Cher? | |
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| I'll review your profile and give ya some dating advice
Posted: 8/29/2005 6:52:21 PM | | Thanks for your input. You wouldn't believe how many times I've changed my headline!! Everything just sounded so over used! I did have "not perfect but maybe perfect for you!" (I thought it might be a little dorky) and "I want to spoil and be spoiled" (but that made me sound like expired milk!) By the way...I like singing things like Mariah Cary type stuff, I used to sing in talent shows alot but I haven't in a while (since kids) Now, I debut daily in my car!! | |
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| I'll review your profile and give ya some dating advice
Posted: 8/30/2005 9:13:02 AM | towertycoon:
Your headline: "looking for a girl i can hold all night," might be a little too truthful, granted it's what you want, I've got varied oppinions on it. It might scare some away. In any case I should be capitalized.
Your pictures are good, you might add a couple with you doing things you like other than just standing around getting a picture taken.
Add some more interests, I'm sure you've got a lot more, tell us what kinds of cars, music, and movies. What about sports, you look like you could enjoy some sports.
I'm in your write up, you left out the apostrophe. Spell check is our friend, everybody needs to learn how to use it, when we are presenting things for all to see and they will judge us by what they see. Intelligence or the appearance of intelligence is almost always good. We don't need to know how to spell, (it's great if you do) but knowing how to get a machine to do it for us is a good thing. Again I should be capitalized, lonely, etc. Learn too cut and paste, ctrl C, crtl V and insert into a word processing program, run the spelling program, do a cut and paste back into here.
"want to meat new people," I had to laugh here, should be meet, but it might be true the other way too. :-) Thanks for the laugh, sorry it's on you. Fix up these things add a lot more to the write up, tell us a lot more about yourself, but most of all learn to use a spelling program. Unfortunately most would not find the meat problem. some would with a grammar checker though.
Good luck, try again and let us see the improved version for round two. | |
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