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Posted: 9/11/2005 1:25:54 PM | the_brat:
First thing, I don't think your name is conducive to making somebody want to get to know you. I would change the preffer not to say on smoking, you can read why if you check some of my other posts, which is a good thing to do anyway, if you want my advice, because anything I'll say here, I and Jack have probably said 10 times before.
The two blurry picutres of you don't add anything, they might be of you dancing but bascially ther are just blurry pictures.
The interst area needs a lot more interests, make them specific so that they define who you are. People search for the words they are looking for and if they happen to be there they will find you.
I would guess that you enjoy horses, you should have two or three words about that in the writeup and the interests. You should also have anything else you find intersting. The more you say about yourself the more chance somebody will connect and write you a letter. | |
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Posted: 9/11/2005 1:41:29 PM | silvermoondrops :
I would do something with the two dark pictures, you might be able to photo edit them and lighten them, I assume the tongue one is howing that you have a piercing there but can't tell it needs a blow up. If it's not a piercing then I guess your just being silly, a description of photos is often a good thing if the are difficult to figure out.
A grammar check could be used effectively here, how's, I 23, and a few periods and commas might be in order. We always want to give the best impression of intelligence. At least maybe that we can learn how to use grammar and spell check.
Dating interest seem to be used most by people on here to just be interests, ignore the dating part and tell us what you like to do there, use words that highlite, they are common searchable ones that people might use to find and connect with you and things you like to do. | |
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eira30
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| I'll review your profile and give ya some dating advice
Posted: 9/12/2005 7:33:13 AM | AlexanderTHE:
I think you have too many pictures of just your face, get other s of you doing things or of things that you like. Every picture should tell a story, many of yours tell the same one.
I would keep the 1st, 3rd, 4th, and last one.
Interests, misspelling, should be quiet. If you could add a few more words there it might help, I'm sure there is other stuff you like, tinker on what, style of camping, etc.
We need a few spaces in your writeup a150 should be and 150? other than that it looks good. Run it thorugh a grammar checker, learn cut and paste if you don't know how to do that, it's easy. Highlight, Ctrl c and Ctrl v are all you need to know.
I would get rid of the 75 mile thing, put it in the text but don't limit who can talk to you, If I wanted to tell you something I couldn't. Think about messaging limits, that a major problem for everybody, these are hard limits on who can talk to you. What if an old long lost friend found you? Female and male also limits who can send you something. | |
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Posted: 9/12/2005 5:56:04 PM | goodlknmale:
I would change the second picture, the third one is basically the same thing but you are smiling that makes it better. If you have pictures of you doing things that would be good to include some like that. Make the pictures tell a story.
There really isn't much else to comment about, you need a lot more about yourself, I can't write it, only you can. We need as many things in the interests as you can think of that apply to you, and the writeup needs to be much longer. You have to have enough so that a person reading it really gets to know you and hopefully finds things that makes them think you will connect. You have to grab them and make it to where they know you are the one, enough for them to risk embarrasment and possible rejection by sending you an email.
They probably need to find about 10 things that they agree with, so you have to have at least 10 things there. Probably closer to 50 would be a good number. About 20 interests would be good, be specific, for example say action movies, and romances instead of just movies. Talk about your favorite movie of all time and maybe why, Who is your hero, what cartoon caracter are you most like, that kind of stuff, be creative. Maybe ask some questions. Also learn how to use a spell checker and grammar checker, i should be I. | |
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Posted: 9/12/2005 6:11:11 PM | ambex:
I would explain your name, surely there is a story there. Your second picture (cowboy hat?) and the second from the last ( in front of woods) don't do anything for me, the rest are good.
We need a lot more interests, be specific, anything that you like that helps define who you are and when you combine them all it makes you different from everybody else.
Your writeup needs to be a lot longer, read some of the last couple reviews to get some ideas.
 HEY EVERYBODY READ THIS
Read some of the past reviews that will help, no need me saying the same thing over and over.
HEY EVERYBODY READ THIS | |
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Posted: 9/12/2005 6:44:33 PM | Hi. First I want to congratulate you on your degrees.
I am a graduate student at MIT currently. Not the program but taking a course or two in EE.
I hope to work for NASA or do projects some day in the future.
It's very rare I come across a profile like yours here. Very interesting. I'm very scientific too, like you.
Though I'm not really serious about dating through this site, just to hang and have fun on the forums...
But please give me a scientific analysis on my profile. It'll be a honor :-)
-Solak | |
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Posted: 9/13/2005 7:25:35 AM | eira30:
 We have a daily winner here, good job!
The only thing I can say is that your first two pictures don't have enough contrast with the background, the subject is good but they don't jump out and grab you like they should. You should be able to photo edit them and adjust the contrast to make you stand out more in them. The rest of the photos have too much of you and not enough of what you do and like, My oppinion we need one face shot and one full body shot then the rest tell a story of things you like, you have some of that with the animals, but I'm sure you can come up with other ones too.
humour should be humor, maybe it's a french spelling? It really doesn't look bad that way.
Also you might think about your message limits, maybe you do want to talk to somebody that is just looking for talk/email. They can't contact you, but they might have something to say you want to hear.
So who is your favorite Physicist? Since I didn't say that it's not me  | |
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Posted: 9/13/2005 9:12:18 AM | Oldsoul782:
overall real good, it seems like there ought to be more that you can add to the interests and the writeup. The more that you have in both of those the more chances somebody will connect and respond. Your pictures are good, but again if you have more pictures showing you doing thigs you like, or just pictures of things you like that will help. People have to find enough to make them get up off their butt and write you an email. They are risking embarasment, you've got to give them enough to think you really are a real good match for them to take that risk. It seems to takes a lot to get somebody that motivated around here. | |
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Posted: 9/13/2005 9:42:22 AM | STORMYROCK:
Too many pictures of just you, the clowning one is good, I'm not saying any the pictures are bad, but you can use this space to tell a lot more about youself. How about a picture of you on the ATV. The first one is good, anything that makes you different than just a pretty face. You've got to give people something to connect with other than just looks, great eyes and a smile. For example the cold one says you like to hike outdoors at the same time is shows your great smile.
We need some interests, people search for those words, get thinkgs like hiking and ATV and whatever else you can think of that applies.
Your write up can be expanded, tell us what makes you different, things you love, hate, where you've been, where you are going. Music, movies, books, etc. The more stuff you have the more somebody might connect with.
First date; Surprise us, get creative there. | |
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| I'll review your profile and give ya some dating advice
Posted: 9/13/2005 12:10:30 PM | prello:
Basically a very good start, I can't say I see anything wrong except a couple i's that need to be I's. I think you should be able to find a few more interests, and expand that writeup a little. Maybe talk about what kinds of food you like to cook and eat, where do you travel too, what kinds of dancing are you good at or do you enjoy? A few more pictures of you doing things would be good. Any pictures of you on the golf course or fishing. If you get that stuff right up front in the pics, then there's more chance the right woman will know that and maybe read more. | |
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Posted: 9/13/2005 5:31:37 PM | | I redid most of my profile since we last spoke, I hope it's better than it was before. I know I'm not smiling in the pics, they're all I have for pics at this moment and then some comics and sport logos. But still I hope it's much better than when you last reviewed it | |
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Posted: 9/14/2005 4:57:17 PM | Venemous if you want a girls perspective here goes.
Pictures of Calvin and Hobbs no absolutely not. One of you smiling a must. Your profile is the longest on I have read ever and i mean ever darling you leave absolutely nothing for me to learn about you. Shorten it sweetheart. Too short is bad too long is just as bad my profile is not short it details exactly what and don't want. All this is supposed to be is a simple taster of what you are like. Give us girls a little something to wonder about. I t iwll give us a reason to ask you some questions and get to know you as you and not the detailed profile. | |
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Posted: 9/14/2005 5:58:18 PM | | wow, thats the exact opposite that the guy who runs this page said. He emphasised that I should let people know about my comical side through one or more cartoons, and that I needed to lengthen my profile a substancial amount. I'm confused as heck now because you're saying one thing and someone else is saying another that clash entirely. as for the pics, they're all I have at this point because my webcam is busted. | |
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| I'll review your profile and give ya some dating advice
Posted: 9/15/2005 5:41:11 AM | It's good to have other opinions here, I am not or claim to be the expert just give my opinion, many people seem to agree with me, so I do feel like I have a handle on what I say. Everybody looks at things a little differently, I come from the educated side and think everybody wants information to make intelligent choices. There are many people that come from the romantic side and want intrigue and suspense. Personally I think get the info make the proper choice, life is to short to waste intrigue on the wrong person, after you get connected with the right person then start with the romance and hopefully enjoy it for a longer time. I don't want to waste time and email back and forth 5 times with somebody I don't know to later find out that there is a major unsurmountable difference of oppinion on a critical issue. Get as much of that stuff out in the open right up front and get on with life.
The moral: take everything I and anybody else says with a grain of salt and make up your own mind and act accordingly.
I still have a couple reviews waiting here, I'll get to them, I've been busy with apartments, on the good side, yesterday was the first day in my adult life I haven't been a landlord.   | |
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Posted: 9/15/2005 7:50:56 AM | acesolak:
I would add an overall body picture, but since you state you aren't really here to find a match things like this aren't as important, looking for friends is totally different the looking for a lifetime match, little things aren't often as important and a perfect fit is not necessary so general information is probably acceptable. With that said anything goes. If this was a profile seeking long term commitment I would say ad lots more information in all of the three areas, interests, about me, and first date and I would suggest more pictures showing you doing or just about things you like to do.
Thanks for the thumbs up on my life. Now if I could only find the right woman to give me the thumbs up. Have a great day. | |
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| I'll review your profile and give ya some dating advice
Posted: 9/15/2005 8:03:43 AM | ZIM:
Not to bad
I would add a full body picture, and maybe some others doing things you like. Seems like I've said that before.
I got a chuckle reading your about me section, the next line is probably not what you meant but could be, probably not what you intended though.
"I have no real parameters of woman I would like to meat."
I expect it should be meet. Even spell checkers can't catch things like this.
Expand your interests section with specifics. ex, camping and canoing instead of just outdoors | |
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