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| I'll review your profile and give ya some dating advice
Posted: 4/27/2005 7:43:28 AM | Now now, you should also not be of the mindset to just wait for the fish to bite. Ya gotta bait your hook and you have to cast a few times.
Don't wait, send out a few e-mails yourself.
I am sure you will get your fair share of responses. I may even have a tip or two for you too. I'll e-mail you because I don't want everyone to know my secrets. ha ha | |
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| yeldnileus Review
Posted: 4/27/2005 1:00:22 PM | yeldnileus
"Naughty & Nice - Seattle Sue"
Catchy, halfway original. Careful with the "Seattle Sue" though. SOme may take it in the wrong light.
Ok, about your pictures. How come most of 'em are too dark? Must be from that wickedly bright smile you have! 2 of the pictures suck due to bad lighting. I'll let you guess which.
Your primary pic should be the next to last one, Although with the last one, who is the person with their arm wrapped around you? It would help to have clear, fairly close-out pictures and well lit.
"Dating Interests"
Great listing!!!! Change nothing!
"About me":
Why is it necessary for you, in like your third sentence, to point out you just got out of a serious relationship. Are you bragging or asking for sympathy? Lose it!!
Maybe just start the whole section with the part where you are looking for some friends to hang out with and have fun.
"I'm a sensitive, passionate, experimental person - who enjoys and craves affection in a close relationship"
This doesn't make sense and doesn't belong. Especially after you just said you were looking for new friends to hang out with.
L-o-s-e it!
also to lose, "I'm not into the head games, the drama and the general dancing that takes place in relationships: I like honesty, I like dedication, I like faith and trust in relationships ... and though things might not always work out or be easy,"
Less on what you do not want or what you do not seek, MORE of what you do want and of what you do seek.
Saying you do not want game players is a waste of time. Do you really think game plaers and the such will avoid you just because you said you didn't want to give 'em the time of day? Thats like asking someone dishonest to be honest about their dishonesty for the sake of honesty.
Again, more about you and what you want, less of what you don't want. Keep positive!
I'd also put the "mother of three" near the end of the profile. You definitely should have it in the profile however.
Your first date:
I'd suggest keeping it simple like
" can go for almost anything - from a long drive listening to music, to a night on the town out dancing, to musical theater and dinner or coffee or maybe a drink." Keep it simple & short.
Just my opinion | |
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| A Review
Posted: 4/27/2005 1:02:33 PM | | i am a woman and here is my perpective on jacks ass-essment of your profile....if you are separated, and yet, you put divorced or single, and the woman finds out your are STILL LEGALLY MARRIED, you can kiss her goodbye right then, for the simple fact that you LIED on your profile, and since you already look like you are lying about your age at present, i would suggest you do not follow his foolish advice..... | |
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| A Review
Posted: 4/27/2005 2:00:02 PM | Hello all. I am new to the forum(s).
I saw this, and I would really like some input as well.
Thanks,
Melissa  | |
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| Susand533 Review
Posted: 4/27/2005 3:58:20 PM | Susand533
WTF, who are you?
I give my opinions, whether you or anyone else like is not my problem.
So if your little posting is your lame attempt to ask me to look at your profile, well, I did.
Can it be anymore "average"? Looks like every other profile out there.
No originality.
You have a cute smile in one of your pics, lose the other two.
Wouldn't kill you to put in a few more "dating Interests", as the ones you have are pretty much "industry standards". Every other profile has "cooking", "reading" and either "sports" or "exercise".
Your "About me" section, welp, it blows. There is nothing there to invite any guy to e-mail you. Not a bit about you other than you think of yourself as an "All American girl". More details about you and what you seek, stay away from the negative. Doesn't suite you too well.
Your "First Date" looks pretty good though.
Take from it what you will. MY OPINION! You wanna slam folks? Start your own thread and do it. | |
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| Onlyoneman review
Posted: 4/27/2005 4:05:52 PM | "onlyoneman"
A fairly good headline ya got, can you spice it up a little though?
Not too fond of your SN, "Onlyoneman". Kinda fishy.
Very cute pic! Great job there! And that smile!
Of course thats my opinion, some folks may not take kindly to that. ha ha
Your dating interests, good. "Live Theatre"?
"Fishing" & "Laughing" is good. I'd lose camping though. Every other profile says that. Can you think of about 4 or 5 more unique interests you can add? You can never have too much.
In your "about me", you didn't put anything about you. ha ha, whats up with that? You put what you are looking for, but nothing about you.
So lose all of that stuff of what you seek, add in more things about you. Avoid the negatives of like what you don't want or what you are not like. Concentrate on positive and on details about yourself.
Your "First Date"
The first part is good.
"drink on an out side patio where you go on and on about how great I am and I listen and compliment you on your choice!!! thats a perfect date."
Keep it there, short and simple. Forget the rest. Save it for later. | |
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| hhheeeerrreee Kitykity
Posted: 4/27/2005 4:11:39 PM | hhheeeerrreee Kitykity
Nice pic. Lose it if you are serious. Keep it if you really don't care.
Your Interests:
Camping, music, cooking & reading?
Lose lose lose lose.
Check out other profiles of 'da ladies and you will see that this is an industry standard. Get original. Get unique.
Add more interests too, you cant have too many. Use that creative spirit that lurks beneath the surface.
"About Me":
More about you, less about what or whom you seek. Expand on one of your interests, or maybe tell of a quality about yourself, like humor, or smart. Can you tie a cherry stem with your tongue? lol, just throwing some ideas out there for ya.
Your "First Date" is ok, I'd spice it up justa tad as it is kind of a standard reply. Coffee and a walk is not that appealing to most guys.
What would you rreeeaaallllyyy like to do on your first date? Roller skate? Mountain climbing? Watch the sub races? | |
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| A Review
Posted: 4/27/2005 4:21:37 PM | Ms. January, Melissa,
First up, great pic!! Lose all the rest of 'em, not sure why ya even bothered with the others. Your primary one could not possibly be better!!!
Ok, 'nuf with the gushing on the pic.
Your headline, "Looking for a down to earth individual"
Why? "Individual"?? As opposed to a GUY, a man, a male of the species? lol
I like your lists of "interests", can you think of about 4 more? Remember, try to be unique. Avoid the commonalities of "reading, exercise," etc
In your "About me", you say you have a sense of humor. Use it more!! And watch your spelling. We all have our spelling errors though.
Good you mentioned your daughters, and the sentence that followed. Good.
Lose the "divorced for 10 years". That can be saved for later, perhaps in your first contact e-mail.
Share a little more about you, what makes you y-o-u. Show off that sense of humor!
"...no games please"
LOSE LOSE LOSE.
See my previous reviews of folks who put this in their profile. Why bother putting something like that in your profile. Its like asking a dishonest person to be honest just because you asked. Will game players not contact you simply 'cuz you said not to?
"I am here, and waiting for YOU! :O)"
Lose it, a tad overboard.
Why not "catch me if you can" or something to that effect. Just a thought.
Oh yeah, why "Ms January"??
Thats my thoughts anyway....... | |
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| A Review
Posted: 4/27/2005 5:03:51 PM | Well, thank you, thank you. Great Advice! You are absolutely RIGHT!
Why msjanuary you ask? ms - ((my first and last initials)) January - ((the month I was born. It works, doesn't it?? | |
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| A Review
Posted: 4/27/2005 5:04:58 PM | You really think I should loose the rest of the pics??
hmmm. | |
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| bunsenhoneydew2004 review
Posted: 4/27/2005 5:08:58 PM | ok bunsenburnerboy! lol
Your headline, "looking for intellect", not too sure about that on. See what else you can come up with. Something that'll reflect your humor, your likes and such.
Maybe "Skywalker seeks a Leia"
I dunno, you figure it out.
Your interests, great listing and fine assortment. A little on the cerebral and well, geeky side. If thats the way you see yourself or the image you wish to convey, ya done good then. Thats cool.
The "About me" section:
Whew, you got a lot unloaded there bud. You did good telling about yourself alright. I do think some of it could have been held back, maybe for the first contact e-mail.
Lose "I was born and raised in Guelph, Ontario. I moved to Toronto in June '98. Since '98, I've been a Software Analyst at an engineering company, and I've never been married. I'm a trustworthy dependable independent thinker who values, aptitude, justice, a sense of morality, and intelligent conversation."
Lose the whole part about "A bonus would be someone who can"
Few will go to the link and take a test.
I think it's an ok profile as a whole. I would suggest getting another picture or two though. The one you have up looks like you are ready to jump through the screen. Got one a little less "in your face"?? | |
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| A Review
Posted: 4/27/2005 5:10:59 PM | "You really think I should loose the rest of the pics??"
Do I? Tell ya what I am gonna do. I am gonna ask all the guys on this thread to check out your profiles' pics and let them tell ya themselves.
For me, my vote is "hell yeah!"
Umm guys, check it out and tell her. Should she even bother with the other pics or lose em? | |
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| A Review
Posted: 4/27/2005 11:05:23 PM | | review mine...plz..i know it's not that great but some I'd like to hear sme constructive criticism. | |
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| A Review
Posted: 4/27/2005 11:18:58 PM | | Yeah i could use some advice too | |
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| I'll review your profile and give ya some dating advice
Posted: 4/28/2005 1:09:28 AM | Hello Everybody,Jack Mack
I have been on PoF for Two- Weeks now and was wondering why I havent got any replys from women Back.somebody please help...
I truely Believe there is Somebody out there For Everybody
I'm not predjudiced Age is not a barrior to me 10 years young or 10 years older
For those to understand why I have chosen a dating site is mainly because three women associates take me out,I'm sitting there by myself lonely,while they are dancing and not offering" hey ya wanna dance?" why? because simply the fact they tell me all the time "Sorry we are just friends"
I am here because I want More than just an Online Friendship/Friendship
I want a Everlasting Long Term Relationship if those still ever exist...
Yes,I have chosen "Long Term" on profile
Maybe somebody knows what gives with my profile,I am temporary bald in my last photo yes,was a bet beween friends but Being bald shouldnt be a Big Reason for Not Responding... | |
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