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Posted: 10/7/2005 1:36:03 PM | Alright man, have at it with a fellow eng. grad.
On a side note, how does one research fiberglass bridges (my brother actually did his masters on a similar topic - frp bridge piles) and teaches *electrical* courses? | |
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Posted: 10/10/2005 5:00:44 PM | reddrose1000: Personally I don't like the pictures of body parts, those things shouldn't be important to a relationship based on good solid things, my oppinion, put up a face shot and a full body shot and some other pictures that show you doing things that you like, or just of the things that you like. I don't see any use for a picture of an eye, maybe it's art but it's not art that I appreciate.
Married?? Why do you care what you profile looks like? Oh I'll read farther, it's my job. Dating... too old? never too old for that.... So your just looking for friends, it''s not clear to me, m aybe you need to be clearer on your motivations for being here, I'm not quite sure after reading. I think you need to explain your situation a little better.
You really haven't given us much to really get to know what you like and dislike. I'm at a loss for what to say becasue I don't know where you want to go with this. | |
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Posted: 10/10/2005 5:10:35 PM | NeverObsolete: I like the coordinates for the city, keep that, it's unique, haven't seen that on here except for you. That's one of things we should strive for uniqueness. I don't like the preffer not to say on having children, that's a black and white thing, either you do or you don't, I guess it could be a don't know, but that's not good.
I don't like preffer not to say answers anywhere, one of the things to building a good relationship is openess and honesty, preffer not to say shoots that right in the foot. It's not a good way start to a relationship.
Interests are good.
About me is excellent in my oppinon, you've done good, get rid of the preffer not to say, and we have a winner. Maybe add a full body picture and couple pictures of you doing the polar bear thing or other stuff. Any picnic table pics that you can publish????? Been there done that, no pics either. | |
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Posted: 10/10/2005 5:20:16 PM | cogito: Hey I bought my boat in Avon lake, my dad lived there before I was born, both my older brothers born there.
Good pictures. you should have a couple more things in the interest category, skydiving for instance, so people searching for those words can find you that way. Put everything that you can think of that applies there.
I can't say anything about waht you have written, maybe there could be more about you, but what you have is good. I added stuff to mine everytime somebody asked a good question, I put the answer into the profile. | |
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Posted: 10/10/2005 5:30:46 PM | EngStang: A lot of scorpios lately, are people looking for a date for the birthday thing, good time to get lucky???? Just wishfull thinking but I'm a scorpio too, keep that in mind all you potential women out there.
Any way back to work here..... Pictures are a OK, they don't really grab me, If a picture doesn't really show something new and different about you it probably doesn't need to be there. Try to get some pictures of you doing things you like to do.
I'm not finding any major mistakes, I would try to work some of your humor into the writeup. Again a longer write up is always better. You never really tell us about your area in school. Maybe some history about some of the favorite things you've done or places you have traveled too. There needs to be something that the women can grab hold of and connect with. the more connections the better chances you've got. | |
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Posted: 10/10/2005 5:48:24 PM | Br34kMyH34rt: I tried to figure this out it was a little to criptic for me, maybe others too, an explantion of your POF name might be in order.
Aside I've talked about how I like Kansas because of the people, I first came out here when I was younger than you 17, because it was cheaper to go to school here, In Kansas room and board plus tuition was cheaper then a live at home just pay tuition school in NJ. You mentioned college when you can afford it, you might look around for some bargains. I fell in love with Kansas my sophmore year, I would have left if it wasn't for a D in English, wouldn't transfer and I wasn't going to take it over. Writing was not my forte, the only B Ii got was when I forgot a paper was due till that last minute. I threw something together and got a B, talked to the teacher, she said I must start out good and then I make it worse and worse trying to improve it.
back to the review.... Your pictures tell that you are an artsy person that likes tattos, I would add a whole body shot, I'm sure you can design a whole body artsy pic. Lets see what you can come up with to fulfill that assignment I'm not seeing any problems, more is always better. | |
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Posted: 10/20/2005 10:45:25 AM | bueandwhite:
Been busy and forgot about this stuff for a while, sorry for the delay.
First thing I see is some preffer not to says, I think that's a big mistake, either you are or you aren't or you didn't decide yet, that in my oppinion should be spelled out. We aren't here to hide we post a profile to let people learn about us and hopefully they like what they see. Preffer not to say, says to me I'm not proud of what I do on this subject. If your not proud of it, do something to fix it, or explain the situation.
Later on you say you want kids and have kids in the write up why not say that instead of preffer not to say. Major mistake in my book. I hate that answer. Others might too, and you don't want to turn off the right person whom ever they might be.
I would also fill out the interests area, people can serach for whatever you like and find you that way, nothing there they can't find you.
Other than that I don't see any problems, the write up is short in my oppinion. The more the better. | |
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Posted: 10/20/2005 10:53:05 AM | dontdodat :
It looks good, I'm sure you have more interests you can put in that area, you obviously like the water or spend some time around it.
I would capitalize all your I's. A spell checker is a very good thing, it helps us keep up the appearance of intelligence, capitalizing I's is not necessarily a sign but anything that can be deemed negative should be eliminated from a profile. It's called advertising, don't try to turn anybody off needlessly. | |
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Posted: 10/26/2005 5:00:47 PM | Hey there...I thought I would just cut and past this here!does that work for ya!
I'll take some advice! and any feed back you all want to give..thanks for your time!
Have the wickedest daydreams!
Sense of humour required!! If you know me you know...I'm in NO Way a "**t**"...suffer from terminal cute-itis! and to freakin' nice...dang... . Now where did I put that freakin' can of worms!!! These are some of the awesome ladies I've gotten to meet through the fish site!!
I'm on alot of favorites because I've made some great friends here!! Many of them female..please don't let this alarm you!@!!!! Just looking for friends..but If your really Prince Charmless and think you can keep up!..please be real and feel free to contact me..if your someone still not sure what the heck you want...keep moving on ....I have letters of reference lol I'm almost perfect!!
Having a blast in the forums!!
LOOKING FOR PRINCE CHARMING!!
* He rides a white horse/car
* He opens doors and brings me roses ( I really only want one)
* Tall,Dark and Handsome..okay any hair color!
* One kiss and all my dreams come true!
IF YOU SEE HIM , HAVE HIM CALL ME!!
I am as down to earth as you can find!...Totally unique...I know what I want and I know what it is I have to offer. The missing piece to the puzzle is past all the games....be a friend first and you shall fit!Compassion and understanding. I never judge anyone. I have so much to offer for the right partner. I know he is out there. Growing old and defining a wonderous relationship is my desire.
I've met some really nice people here. Some of you we have connected as friends. I just want to say THank YOu. I always have room for more friends!!in the purest form of course!
We are all seekers of a certain destiny.....perhaps...my Prince Charmless is lost!...I've left a trail of Pink Smarties...one, by one..he will find the pieces and put them in the puzzle....
Why Don't You and I Get Together!! Look up Carlos Santana and Chad Kroeger!!
If you can get it or groove to it!! You've got the right idea!!
I've only come back cuz some of my friends missed me!!... I think as the song goes...I just want someone to stare at in aww and have them feel the same!!! Avril Lavigne!!
All I really want is a KIND, CARING MAN...someone who I can talk to..someone I can laugh with/ cry with....to fall asleep in his arms...to sit around and do nothing and still love every second of the boredom because I'm with him... I want to find someone who can steal my heart without me even knowing that he took it...I want someone to GIVE MY LOVE TO!!....haha thats bout it!! Not much is it...? Truly just a SMILE EVERYDAY would suffice...help each other with our journey through life.....
I used to live in the far North..so I don't know many people in the south. I'm trying to reconnect and also seek friends. 
Don't let my "look" make you think I'm high maintenance...it is part of the "hairstylist persona" .I recently asked a male friend if I should change it! Well he said "NO" it's suits my "bubbly personality!!" I'm polite,playful,thoughtful and romantic. I am kind, caring,love to smile and laugh,down to earth, passionate and articulate. I've MOXIE AND VITALITY !!
People always say "why are you I single"!!I think cuz...the right one hasn't opened the Smartie box yet.....
I am looking for that one great guy...who will "rock my world"..not just in bed either!! sheesh....and he is the parts that equal me and more...if you can fix things and cook even better!! Life shouldn't be travelled alone...I want someone to share my Smarties with.....My needs are simple...I am not a material girl, nor a girl with attitude!
YOU need to be KIND! ROMANTIC.You need to know what it means to be a LOVER and a FRIEND. YOU should be passionate about Life and ME!! You need to like to be touched!
I'm not looking for Brad Pitt...but hey if you can get his number for me!! I'd prefer a non smoker and I'm allergic to cats!! I get to be the only feline in the house that way!! Always remember there must always be some sort of physical attraction factor!! Not everyone can share my smarties!!
I believe it is the SIMPLES LITTLE DETAIL that can make a relationship soar.
I have so much to offer..if your just smart enough to see ....
I want to grow old and still feel silly and giddy with the person who shares my heart and life.It is possible !I have seen it . It does take time to grow that kind of relationship....
Thanks for reading have the sweetest day!! | |
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Posted: 11/1/2005 7:25:06 AM | Been busy lately, need to get to traveling but just can't get away. Trips to Toronto got canceled, NJ is still on hold, I guess I can get back to doing a couple reviews, sorry for the wait.
Kimmaranclh
I'm not seeing any thing wrong, I would get the whole body picture, where did all those head shots come from, why can't one of those be a body shot? People might ask this question. Me thinks you might be hiding behind a lame excuse. If you don't want the shot don't talk about it and make excuses. I might be totally all wet here but that's how I read it and call it.
It's not a big deal, but you might consider it.
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Posted: 11/1/2005 7:47:36 AM | Infraction: I would get rid of the prefer not to say, I also suggest a cut and paste into a word processor and do a spell check, get the apostrophe in every I'm, etc. They shouldn't be important but could be considered negative by some, you don't want anything to turn off anybody that could be a possible right one, better to be safe then sorry. Another opinion is to leave them there figuring that it's you and your not going to change, you need to make the call but be aware of the ramifications.
I would get some activities that you like in the interest area. Gold medal red rover is great. The character picture doesn't do anything for me, it at first was not clear what it was, ( not positive even after a while) I'm sure if you know what it is it's perfectly clear, but if you don't it's just a bunch of characters. I don't think it adds much. People should be looking and reading about you not trying to figure out a character picture. | |
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Posted: 11/1/2005 7:53:57 AM | smartie girl: ???????????
I'm not sure what you want here, this is different than your profile, is this what you want to change it too, or is it what you used to have, or just putting stuff out here for potential reader to peruse? Let me know what I should review. | |
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Posted: 11/3/2005 5:03:07 PM | kate3eb : I'm not seeing anything that really stands out, no mistakes (other than not liking country music, LOL). I would maybe consider a full body picture, I don't think you have anything to hide in that respect. You can always add more interests, I'm sure you have them if you just think about it, the more words the more chances somebody will find a connection. In order to spice it up you might consider some humor, look back at some of the profiles that got rave reviews, if you see something you agree with, modify it and add it to yours.
A profile should be an ever changing thing for maybe a year or two, after that it should pretty much say what you want it to say. I wonder how many (percentage) people really find the person of their dreams on the net, I would suspect not many. So don't get your hopes up, but still it's probably the best thing going for many of us. | |
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Posted: 11/3/2005 5:19:09 PM | sarahc83: Ok you asked for it..... The "about me" section, a lot of lofty ideals there, I don't know if that's you or just who you want to be. There are some grammar mistakes, i's that should be I's and apostrophes missing in wasn't a couple times. To me those things are important, to others it might not be.
Overall I don't think you really shared enough about the real you, where you want to go in life, why you're here and who your want to find. Your basically saying I want to meet you if you think like me and have a picture. I don't think you have narrowed down the field enough.
Your pictures are good, and everything else is complete, I would do more explaining in the write up, it's a little to cryptic for me. | |
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Joined: 10/27/2005
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Posted: 11/4/2005 11:00:17 AM | Le_MOO: First, I would get a picture of you smiling, have somebody tell you a joke right before they take the picture. Your pictures are OK but smiling would be better.
I would get rid of the 75 mile limit, unless you are absolutely opposed to talking to somebody that might be perfect and live 76 miles away. I think that is a big mistake, sure we would like to find somebody local but don't put hard limits on it.
I would get more things in the interest area, surely there's a lot more things that you like, get them in there, the more the better.
There also has to be a lot more about you, if you are lost for what to say, read some other profiles, and if you find something that you like and it fits, then include a version of that in your profile. If somebody asks a good question, put the answer in the profile. If they want to know probably a lot of others do too. Again the more the better. Somebody has to find a lot of connect with to get them to get off there butt and email you, they have to know you are the right one, not just hope all the unknown things might be good. The only way they can know is if you tell them. Open up, make yourself an open book. | |
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