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Posted: 11/5/2005 12:46:58 AM | | Thats the last thing in the world I need, dating advice from an internet cyber-dater. The fact that you are on this site tells me you don't know a freakin thing about dating, any more than I do! | |
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| I'll review your profile and give ya some dating advice
Posted: 11/5/2005 7:40:17 AM | | I am new and need help meeting women online Iv'e got I/M and play guitar over the internet most girls seem to like it, but its getting them to answer in the first place. thats the problem. does my picture suck or what? | |
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| I'll review your profile and give ya some dating advice
Posted: 11/5/2005 4:30:24 PM | Jack,
I need some advice here, I am not getting any men that want to date me. I am over weight and the men that respond to me are just wanting to chat.
I do not want to talk about sex nor do I want sex for the first while.
The last guy hurt me physically and I just do not want to go there again. How do I get a gentleman to email me?
Thank you for your help. | |
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| I'll review your profile and give ya some dating advice
Posted: 11/13/2005 9:02:41 AM | Hi jheldatksuedu...I've changed the profile a few times..just read what is up there now if you have a chance...I just thought posting it for you might have made it easier! Silly me what was I thinking!
so I shall go and tread water now !!haha
sweetest day dreams You All!!   | |
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| I'll review your profile and give ya some dating advice
Posted: 11/27/2005 2:33:31 PM | | I've been on the road, so busy with other things, I'll get to it in a couple days. I bought a 38 foot sailboat on ebay in Mobile, Alabama and am now at my brothers in Connecticut, back home in a couple days. | |
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| I'll review your profile and give ya some dating advice
Posted: 12/3/2005 7:09:11 AM | | 1honestbabe: I would have more interests listed, surely you have them, you need to give some words to let somebody know what you like to do so that they can connect with something. I don't see anything wrong with anything that you have, just not enough stuff there for somebody to say, "yeah, you're the one" | |
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| I'll review your profile and give ya some dating advice
Posted: 12/3/2005 7:21:03 AM | SelfClarity: Hey Winnipeg, great place, one of my pictures, the one in the foldup kayak is taken on the Rice river, east side of Lake Winnipeg, as far up on the east side as you can drive. Just before I headed out across the Lake, yep I kayaked across Lake Winnipeg, one of my claims to fame LOL.
Anyway, on with the review. What you have is good, just not enough of it, I'm sure you have more interests and can expand the writeup a lot more, tell us something great you learned in Austrailia, tell us a little more about the SelfClarity thing. One has provide enough so that someone can really connect with you. They have to get the idea that yeah, you're the one, not just I wonder if, maybe, you're asking them to take a chance to write you a letter and face possible rejection, that's tough to do. Give them more info so that it's not such a stretch. | |
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| I'll review your profile and give ya some dating advice
Posted: 12/3/2005 7:27:11 AM | | raylane: Bald? I assume it's meant as a joke, but I don't think things like that go over well. Need some explanation on that one, the pics don't show that. I think anything that seems obviously not true needs to be explained, you're trying to get people to think your honest and worth contacting but little things like that can often kill any hope you have. Like all the rest of the profiles we are looking at today you need a lot more info. More pics doing different things would also be good. | |
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Posted: 12/3/2005 7:35:11 AM | | crazyscousebird: Looks good, more would be better but you've got all the bases covered, maybe an inkling into the profession might help, a blank always stands out and people wonder "why is that blank", instead of wonderring "why don't I contact this person." Maybe an explanation about your name would help, it doesn't mean nothing to this Yank. | |
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| I'll review your profile and give ya some dating advice
Posted: 12/3/2005 7:43:13 AM | | amanda490: First don't worry about the weight that much, your not gross, you've got a great smile. If you're unhappy about the weight work on slowly loosing it but don't obsese about it. You are who you are. I'm not seeing any mistakes, I would just have more of everything. More interests, more life stories, you never know what's going to catch the eye of Mr. Right. My oppinion is the more bait the better your chances. | |
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Posted: 12/3/2005 7:48:48 AM | | heywood14: I think you need more, Maybe more pics, more interests, more writeup, more dating ideas. I'm not sure about the all caps thing, personally I don't like it, maybe others might not too, anything that's out of the ordinary and that can be judged negatively is risky. But then again we are all individuals, so who knows what's right or wrong. | |
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Posted: 12/3/2005 8:03:43 AM | SimmahDahnNah~: You think you've got pressure with the headline, what do you think that little crustacian is thinking in your hands. That pic is a keeper, it says a lot about you and it's different, that what we're talking about everybody, listen up and have a look, something that makes you stand out from the crowd.
Muskegon, know it well, spent 3 weeks there last summer. If you see a little yellow Stearns inflateable kayak around there let me know. Somebody decided that they needed it more then me and I had to swim out to my boat one night after dancing at the Longhorn.
Back to the profile, I don't like prefer not to say answers, to me it says I'm trying to hiding something and not proud of it. That's not a good answer in my book. Again all I can add is more, more, more. The more you have in your profile the more chance somebody will find something to connect with. | |
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Posted: 12/3/2005 8:22:54 AM | smartie girl: Hey another Winnepeg, two in one day. The little yellow kayak I lost in the last review went up and then back down the rapids of the Rice river before I headed across the lake in the Russian foldup kayak. (if I lost you here read the couple previous posts above) No problem on being silly, we've all done those kinds of things. Sort of like me expecting to be able to trust the downtown fisherman of Muskegon to not steal my little Kayak. Everybody take notice, look at all those pictures and every one has a big smile, that's what we need, that says HAPPY, FUN ( BTW that's how the all caps should be used, previous post take note)
Good job. I think it's a great profile. If I was a little closer I'd contact you, I've even got a go cart in one of my sheds full of things I haven't used for a long time.
Caught up again, Soon I'm off on the new boat, Mobile to South Florida, then combine the stuff from the old boat with the new, sell the old and off to the Bahamas for a couple months, got room for a companion, anybody game? After the Bahamas maybe up the east coast, across the pond and maybe start on a round the world. I need a mate, that's why most of us are here on POF. | |
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| I'll review your profile and give ya some dating advice
Posted: 12/4/2005 12:48:16 PM | MerryXmas25 : First thing I notice, You are squinting in your all Xmas pictures, they are obviously professional or at least you paid for them I would imagine, I'd say don't go back to that photographer, the light were too bright, should have got free replacements, other than that they are OK, I like some of the other pictures, they show you well, I'd dance with ya. As for the write up, there isn't much about you there, it's all jokes, people want to know who you are, surely there's more to you than jokes. Let us know more about you, it's OK to have a joke or two in the profile but not that many or that long. If you want to share the long jokes have a link to another place and put them there.
Separated, is not good if you are looking for long term, if you have that and you should have that if that's what you are, you probably ought to have an explanation telling the situation in detail. People don't want to get involved with somebody that might dump them to go back to the EX. Also I noticed some spelling errors, if you don't know how, learn cut and paste and run the text through a spell checker. We have to keep those errors out of the text, nobody wants to be with a dummy, we all make those mistakes, but anything that can be deemed negative needs to be eliminated from a profile if possible.
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Posted: 12/4/2005 1:01:01 PM | | chevygrl69: We need a lot more, you say there are "too many intersts to mention", nope mention them, the more the better. Give the people reading the profile something to connect with. They probably have to find 4 or 5 things they agree with to get them off their butt and email you. The profile needs to tell the whole story about you, who you are, where you came from (physcially and mentally) and where you think you are going or where you want to go. For example read mine. Your pictures are OK, they show enough to know about you physically, and give a couple ideas about things you like, an explanation about them would be good, then people don't have to guess what they mean. I assume the raccoon is an indood pet, but I had to guess, people shouldn't have to conclude about things, they need to be sure for them to risk sending an email and oppenning themselves up to possible rejection. | |
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| I'll review your profile and give ya some dating advice
Posted: 12/4/2005 1:10:50 PM | | snwangel: Read the previous post, absolutely everything I wrote there applies, infact read a bunch of the previous posts, look at some of the good profiles and look at some of the bad ones. Checking out the competition is always a good way to improve. I would say your profile is slightly better than the last one but both suffer from not enough to connect with, tell us the whole story, with all the details. Your pictures are good, I'd go hiking with ya. Want to sail around the world? I know of a boat with a crew position open. | |
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