| Happy Father's Day... Posted: 6/18/2007 5:57:00 AM | | Thanks trev...nice of you to visit. Nice write. Feel free to post anytime. | |
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| Nice to see..... Posted: 6/18/2007 6:33:23 AM | | Amazing poetry here, i am inspired! x | |
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| Nice to see..... Posted: 6/18/2007 6:35:28 AM | | Awwww...thank you Shelli...feel free to add your writes here anytime you like. | |
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| RANDOM Posted: 6/18/2007 7:02:43 AM | Moments, stolen glances entrances, my being.
Washing over me, I see your face.
Instantly, I knew, it was you always. | |
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| RANDOM Posted: 6/18/2007 7:50:55 AM | I likes ta writ a pome agin, jus soon I drink my gin, oops! Hic! jus a minit, I gits back in it.
Ok, where I was? haha, gots a buzz, weeee...bes not rite, I mus be a site!
I goes to da bafroom I gots ta pee, if I falls down jus let me be. | |
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| RANDOM Posted: 6/18/2007 8:50:15 AM | Hiya Mandrake,
This last one sounds like me Friday night at the drive-in, lmao!!!
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| RANDOM Posted: 6/18/2007 9:22:54 AM | Thanks Mandrake :) I have a thread called The End of All Things where I post my poetry. I invite you to come and write what you wish there anytime ;) Trevor | |
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| RANDOM Posted: 6/18/2007 11:03:51 AM |
A river does not run, it flows, through the valleys of my heart, it grows, separating the chambers of you and me, like the final parting of the Red Sea, Giving, in it's tranquil tunnel a portal, where only our sacred love is immortal.
I read back a few pages and i must say this one stood out a lot. Love your work and will be reading more. As always thank you for your comments and taking the time to read mine.  | |
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| RANDOM Posted: 6/18/2007 11:06:03 AM | Hiya Sam....lovely to see you. Thanks for dropping by. So what were you up to the other night???
Trev...thanks for the visit. I will surely drop by your thread soon. Thanks for the invite. | |
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| RANDOM Posted: 6/18/2007 11:08:12 AM | | Freckled....I am honored by your presence, and humbled by your words. Thank you. Feel free to add to this thread anytime. | |
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| RANDOM Posted: 6/18/2007 1:11:32 PM | Hiya Mandrake,
Went to the drive-in Had a few beers A no kids weekend We toasted our cheers
Saw the Fantastic Four And half of Oceans 13 See we were so tuckered out We could hardly see the screen
So does that mean We’re getting old Or as parents Our lives are on hold
Anyway, I was feeling No worries or pain It was a few hours of sanity For the parental insane…..
Sam | |
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| RANDOM Posted: 6/18/2007 5:57:30 PM | Songs of sirens hear me, hear me sing, to you I bring the covenant of love.
Sing siren sing, loud, louder still, raise the shrill, as mariners flee thy hypnotic love. | |
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| RANDOM Posted: 6/18/2007 6:39:41 PM | In hopes she'd love the new self better than she did before She worked diligently to remind herself not to let people be the source of her happiness she needs to find joy within or without but to find it no matter the cost. When giving of yourself to make others happy, to see their smile, brings you happiness... It's hard not to look to others to bring you yours. She fights this fight daily. She is winning. Smiling. Just because. She is happy within. | |
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| RANDOM Posted: 6/18/2007 6:49:36 PM | | Wow! That was lovely Anna, and I understand where it came from. It sounds like you, through and through. | |
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| RANDOM Posted: 6/18/2007 6:53:19 PM | hear my silent echo cry as pages slip to white tears that never seem to fall drown me through the night a hollow painful lump resides cast within my heart of death I wish so soon to come and healing soon to start
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| RANDOM Posted: 6/18/2007 6:56:05 PM | | Shadowriter....great write...thanks for adding it to this thread. | |
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| RANDOM Posted: 6/18/2007 7:06:53 PM | carry my body hold tight to the agony within as it shall guide the heart to the river side where cast me into the darkened pool and set my bitter heart free away from any reflections of the world that took away my dreams in the darkness my mind shall find escape in epoch of eternal silence cast away from the hellish rage of mankinds glorious comming say not praises for life not sad words of death for in eternal passage lies the truths of existence that man cannot face in life for life has no face that exists in the eyes of man
shadowriter | |
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| RANDOM Posted: 6/18/2007 7:10:55 PM | And truth is hard to bear, therefore the masks become the truths of false prophets.
thanks shadowriter. | |
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| RANDOM Posted: 6/18/2007 7:35:49 PM | :) thank you mandrake...i love knowing you recognized me there.
great writes guys...good stuff shadow! | |
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| Random Posted: 6/18/2007 7:59:46 PM | My tears inside stabbing me Frozen in time Tears drowing me Numb Alone is what i am But its ok i am used to it Tired so tired Scars Dig them My wounds are open Bare for you Pour salt into them You do it so well Drink my fears Touch yourself to my pain Me alone amongst these solitary walls....
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| Random Posted: 6/18/2007 8:04:58 PM | | Thank you freckled....love the write...dark but passionate. I appreciate you visiting here. I have been trying to write tonight, but it's just not there. Hope you visit more often. | |
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| Random Posted: 6/18/2007 8:05:21 PM | There are knives hanging from my spine. Trapped door spiders webbing me nightly. This is a pensive existence. But the pain has Become my joy, and the joy has become my pain. | |
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| Random Posted: 6/18/2007 8:07:33 PM | | Hi NW...thanks friend...it is sometimes the pain that lets us know we are alive! | |
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| Random Posted: 6/18/2007 8:08:49 PM | a quiet place a place to rest silent darkness cast in midnight damnation bound feed of the poison of the profets plate gorge thy soul in his blackness wine and agonize in the truth that dwells in his lies behold a life meant for dying and daeth that comes with life and understand in prophets lie the profits and understand his doctrine well feast at this supper drink of this wine and feel the darkness that resides in my religion and the death that comes in my name
shadowriter | |
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| Random Posted: 6/18/2007 8:09:40 PM | The Philippine deep is home for me. Albeit, this deep presence is the Newgate of Insanity for some. But I wish not to climb Mount Olympus, neither do I wish to comfort the many gods. I only wish to become the relic of my soul, the son of My first birth. | |
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