| I don't beat around the bush if you want it straight?
Posted: 5/3/2007 6:13:59 AM | Well Adam,
Your pictures are lovely and your profile is both informative and presented well just there is 26 mentions of "I" which does by the end make one feel like there is no room for "us". even when looking for friends you should tone down the use of I and allow the reader the chance to imagine them self doing, sharing and wanting those things you do and enjoy. We know its you when we read it who found a great coffee house unless of course your a cheeky monkey and have a profile all about someone else!
It is a great profile though and I did enjoy reading it and its presentation so just recommend you revise it and use less "I".  | |
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| I don't beat around the bush if you want it straight?
Posted: 5/3/2007 6:38:26 AM | Ok cetral man you said it best you need more pics up!
Havin one very chopped off head shot and average as body type raises suspission as to having something to hide or not be proud of!
Love what you say though very open and truthful without being to much and you mention what your looking for so all round great but again too many "I" in there can deter a reader. Well an intelligent one at least    | |
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| I don't beat around the bush if you want it straight?
Posted: 5/3/2007 6:46:13 AM | | OK - How about these pics? They are somewhat old, so I do still need to get current pics, and better pics. What do you recommend for type of pic? Full body casual/formal shots, smiling, dorky, how about me on a quad, or mudding in my jeep, or one with me in a mud fight? | |
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| I don't beat around the bush if you want it straight?
Posted: 5/3/2007 6:59:18 AM | LOL CM sounds like when it comes to picture contents you got some great ideas of your own there!! 
Long as a woman can see you in a fairly recent picture being happy then its enough, those you added are ample for impressions
Just make sure they are genuine to who you are and show the real you and you can't go wrong!
You will never be able to please everyone its a fact but you can certainly show that your pleased in yourself, know what I mean? (no that doesn't mean we like bigheads LOL just confidence in who you are) | |
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| I dont beat around the bush if you want it straight?
Posted: 5/3/2007 1:20:15 PM | Martok20!!!!!
Will you marry me
Seriously great pictures, great to read, just wanted to keep scrolling and reading more and more but then it stopped
I want a man like you Some lovely woman will snap you up and you will make each other very very happy!
What else can I say Good Luck not that you need it but it's the thought that counts! | |
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| I dont beat around the bush if you want it straight?
Posted: 5/3/2007 2:41:48 PM | Hello DietDrPepperDave, can I call you Dave?
Not too sure if this is harsh but it was a bit boring?
No interests are visible at first glance and I'm not sure those mentioned within your profile will grab someones attention, you may come across as more on the giving up side of the fence and you have loads more years of excitement in you yet!!!
More pictures maybe showing you in your garden doing what you enjoy?
Talk about what area you educate in etc give us more excitement and stop sounding like your past it heck 43 is ripe! | |
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| I dont beat around the bush if you want it straight?
Posted: 5/3/2007 3:46:10 PM | yamahababe you got great pictures and nice overall profile, I wouldn't suggest telling men you lost confidence as confidence is usually a very sought after attribute so maybe reword that bit and just mention your bike has got some cobwebs due to study taking priority and your looking for someone to help you blast them off on the road?
Maybe space out your profile rather than one clump as you mention several things and each one deserves to stand out proud.
One other thing you have a lot of restriction as to who contacts you and Mr special might be unsure what to put he is lookin for and cant contact you? I find that guys who want to hassle women dont put the obvious as their choice coz they know they get blocked! Plus someone on the forums may wish to chat with you but cant due to such a tight list.
Other than that you seem like most guys dream babe so hope that helps | |
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Posted: 5/3/2007 3:59:36 PM | | That Sam you are, Not much to report you have presentation, character, great gallery and bundles of your personality oozing from every line! Your honest in what you want and seem sure of that too so go for it hope that great effort pays off for you and you make many friends and have oodles of fun | |
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Posted: 5/3/2007 4:05:31 PM | Naughtical Top marks from Me for that profile!
Honestly you come across as a really great woman with the ability to be humble and classy while maintaining her fantastic humor! Go for it! Hope you   Catch a good one! | |
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| I dont beat around the bush if you want it straight?
Posted: 5/3/2007 4:50:21 PM | Thanks so much for the very nice review.
If you haven't read 'redairsxybig's profile, you should. You can learn a lot from it, it's what a profile should be.......interesting, entertaining and informative. (and I would have said that even if she had said something bad about mine) | |
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Posted: 5/3/2007 8:31:34 PM | | Martok20 if I tell you in this thread another woman may read it and pretend to be your dream girl! THGTTG is the only clue I can say to show I know the answer!(mail me for the rest) | |
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| I dont beat around the bush if you want it straight?
Posted: 5/3/2007 9:10:35 PM | Now now Naughtical was no need to make me blush lol but thanks for saying that, was just being honest its the only way for Me to be!
OH P.S. DietDrPepperDave Just took a peek and soooooooo much better well done you certainly sound more fun and interesting (hugs) hope you read this little edit and smile! | |
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| I dont beat around the bush if you want it straight?
Posted: 5/4/2007 6:29:35 AM | EclecticRomantic
Each profile should show a persons true self and yours doesn't fail in that area, what I did however find upon reading it was that I came away having no real clue as to who your really looking for?
Yes I got that you don't want a nutter and you want someone real not into head games but hell who here is really looking for those attributes anyway? It only declares you got some history and a woman is going to stand a chance at what? Being compared to a previous wrong choice?
Try speaking of the positive qualities you seek in a LT partner, a reader wants to know what you admire in a person and if they can provide it?
Otherwise nowt wrong with it well presented and informative as well as very honest. | |
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