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| I dont beat around the bush if you want it straight?
Posted: 5/4/2007 12:16:40 PM | | HELP! Please review my profile and tell me what you think. Ultimately I would like to find a long term relationship, although I am leery to say that as I think starting as friends is best. Advice please! | |
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| I dont beat around the bush if you want it straight?
Posted: 5/4/2007 5:07:20 PM | Hi soulbaby,
Nice pics but they don't show much about who you are, just that your apparent claim to be proud of who you are isn't visible, only in one pic where your hair is so different it first off appears as someone else?
Your header is a bit harsh and you don't mention anywhere what kind of guy would make a good friend?
If you want long term be honest about it but mention that you want that to develop from a friendship.
Again regarding your self image and obvious acceptance of it try not to come off sounding like you got a gripe about anyone who doesn't accept you show more humility and you should be successful in your ultimate quest. | |
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| I dont beat around the bush if you want it straight?
Posted: 5/4/2007 6:03:02 PM | Certainly Blue,
It has lovely photos and catchy humor with plenty of interest for something so compact but nowhere do you really give a clue to what you want? which kind of attributes does a female needs to have to message you? Some women will be fearful of rejection so help us out and give us some clue other than your voting history!
Great though and sure you wont have any problems reeling someone right in  | |
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| I dont beat around the bush if you want it straight?
Posted: 5/6/2007 5:39:28 AM | Hey BT Ive nowt to beat you with I thoroughly enjoyed reading your profile much like you would a writers biography it really shone through who you are and who you seek!
Top notch marks from me nothing to report no need for improvement!!  | |
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| I don't beat around the bush if you want it straight?
Posted: 5/6/2007 5:56:57 AM | Hey diddle Julia,
You got some wonderful pictures and a sweet short yet entertaining profile no need to change it unless its not bringing you much success which in that case maybe add some more about who you would like and more about yourself.
Maybe don't say you've had some bad internet dates but rather say your still looking for that truly exciting date!
Still loverly profile no obvious negatives for something small and catchy! | |
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| I don't beat around the bush if you want it straight?
Posted: 5/6/2007 1:10:30 PM | Thank Redair
I changed my headline- I thought it was funny but you're right, it may come off wrong to some. And I added some stuff about the kind of man I am looking for. Also I clarified that the blonde pic is me, just with a different haircolor. I will work on a few more pics soon. | |
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| I dont beat around the bush if you want it straight?
Posted: 5/7/2007 3:47:07 PM | Sazular?
What should I say to that other than I guess you must really be seeking intimate encounters because reading what little you said and lookin at you gallery thats the only impression I got??
If thats not what your lookin for then I suggest you give your profile a major revamp and try to be less in your face heres my assets and more "here is the person I am and this who I would like to meet"!!
Sorry just nothing positive came from lookin at it unless thats all you want, a guy to msg you and hope for a leg over? | |
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| I dont beat around the bush if you want it straight?
Posted: 5/8/2007 4:17:30 PM | You asked for it fired right at chef8471,
Well here it is...
I want to say what I want LOL how about less of the "I want's" and show that a special woman has room to come into your life and provide some equal input in the what you want area?
I just didn't even want to read it all because I felt so put off with so much "I" but did read it and there is some very good information in your profile just maybe you need to rethink how you present it in order for it to stand out a bit better?
More pictures are always a bonus too they help to show your genuine and show more personality than your entire profile could explain. | |
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| I dont beat around the bush if you want it straight?
Posted: 5/9/2007 4:34:48 PM | Certainly Stef,
I like the overall information but must say, personally I found it a bit straggled and erratic. Maybe try and put similar things together within the same paragraph and that way you wont confuse and baffle your reader. Obviously more pictures would improve it further but you come across as honest which is the main thing.
Also you say your non-religious but in first date start off with mentioning Jesus which could either offend some who do believe or give the wrong impression of you? Just a thought | |
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| I dont beat around the bush if you want it straight?
Posted: 5/9/2007 6:56:09 PM | | I would very much like a profile review. Actually, I'm not even sure if the profile exists. Whenever I tryt to view my own profile, all the text dissapears. I think I have a lot of great stuff, but am not sure if anyone else can see it. Thanks. | |
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