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| What is wrong with the persons profile above you in this thread?
Posted: 10/9/2007 10:31:07 PM | I thought it might be fun to get some criticism on my profile, so I took a look at neaseyis' profile.
Overall, I think you described yourself and the type of man you'd like to meet well. I do have a few criticisms, though.
I think you could use a catchier headline. "Live, Love, Laugh" seems too common. Everyone wants those three things in their life.
Under "has children," you put "Prefer Not To Say," but your profile clearly indicates that your children are very important to you. I can understand if you had a reason for doing that, but you may consider being more upfront about that. A good guy isn't going to care if you have children. He will simply accept them.
I like your main profile pic since it shows off your smile well. You certainly seem to be doing something with your life by going to nursing school. That's great that you like dancing, too. All of those things will certainly work in your favor.
The part where you say you'd like a man who is like this, but not like that seems to go on a bit too long. Also, POF is blocking out some of your text, so I don't know what "strong, but not****" means. I have an idea of what it is, but I can't be sure.
You have a pretty good profile that could become great with a few minor tweaks. 
I could certainly use some criticism on mine. It's very rare that I get messages from women with whom I'd actually like to speak. | |
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| What is wrong with the persons profile above you in this thread?
Posted: 10/9/2007 10:38:47 PM | The only thing wrong with Drew is that he doesn't live in Canada!
This guy is a catch, girls!
He knows his music, knows how to cook and he even knows how to decorate a room (don't ask me how hahaha!).
If only I were single...
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Love you, hun!
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| What is wrong with the persons profile above you in this thread?
Posted: 10/9/2007 11:38:49 PM | | Hmm, the problem with "Getoutofmygalley" is that she does live in Canada! Well, that and the fact that she is married, too young for me and a Packer's fan. To be a bit more on topic though, my only comment on her profile, is that while it says a great deal about who she is, it says little to nothing about what she is looking for. I assume that since she is married and looking for friends that is all that she is looking for. If so, it might be best to say that directly. I'm not so sure that men will bother to read that far, but if it was there, then perhaps it would cut down on the unwanted mail (and males) that I am sure a woman of her beauty must attract. | |
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| What is wrong with the persons profile above you in this thread?
Posted: 10/10/2007 9:21:45 PM | Hehehe............feel like a schoolkid writing mean notes about a classmate.
OK. all in all I feel Flex is probably a nice guy.
He appears to have his buisness life in check and has done quite well for himself.
His photos show he has taken care of himself and is a handsome man.
On the downside.
Update your age you are looking for flex.
As you say yourself...a "man your age" does not need a 25 year old.
Im 39 and would struggle with a 25 yr old. (trust me)
What exactly are you looking for?
Your wording makes me feel you are after a friends with benefits, or a sugarbaby.
(In which case the 25 yr old would work)
You dont need to stress the religion thing either.
In todays society there are not a whole lot of strict religious ladies running around.
Your tourism photo shows you do get out of the office, and house.
Maybe a shot of you really being off work. | |
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| What is wrong with the persons profile above you in this thread?
Posted: 5/28/2008 10:42:16 PM | 
I was thinking the photos are great.....nice pretty head shot then the biker chick outfit was pretty kewl..................btw...................biker babes usually don't wear jeans under the chaps.........lol.......and you would also need a smaller shirt.............. jmho......
I would enjoy a nice meal, nice glass of wine and good conversation. I would then like to go for a cup of coffee and more conversation and maybe some quite music.
I was thinking with the biker outfit we could go for some really loud music...........but then....I see
(The biker costume was from Halloween so I do have a sense of humor!)
I am ready to give up here. ...............but it seems that men just have one thing on there mind on this site. I want to be able to talk with someone and spend time with that person before the ideal of jumping into bed with them.
Don't go negative.......keep your you head up..........and don't ever give up..........!!!
Overall great profile........ ......probably need to break up the about me section in several paragraphs to make it......easier....to read.....on the eyes...........good luck and take care........ | |
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